Pyaar (Ak & KA) (completed) - Page 4

Originally posted by: GuJu_Qt

awww faiza.. i loved this one as well... ur absolutely a awesome writer! 😊

Thanks meha😃 I'm really glad you liked it

hey dear thanks for posting this ff i really loved it it simply awesome but i think u had change some thing in this part i think so anyways it was awesome part

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee continue ur other ff family disorder when r u gonna continue that one

love ya

mittal

Originally posted by: sweet_mittal

hey dear thanks for posting this ff i really loved it it simply awesome but i think u had change some thing in this part i think so anyways it was awesome part

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee continue ur other ff family disorder when r u gonna continue that one

love ya

mittal

Thankyou sweet mittal; yep its all written on english now, before it was mostly hindi and I've added soem scenes here and there. I'll continue family disorder this week, been really busy with personal life; sorry; I've just planned it, now I'm going to start writing it up😳

Originally posted by: Ravishing_gal

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hey Faiza... just caught up with ur fic... i seriously loved it, nd mujst say ur a gr8 writer... hmm, when i started reading this, 2 days ago, ik decided 2 read a couple parts nd continue it after my exams are finished, but i got so caught up with it that i HAD 2 finish it...👏

AK's 1st meeting was, umm... quite memorable, aww, it was cute how he thought she was a theif, iun a weird way... well, a beautiful theif...hmmm, love at first sight?? tht 2 4m Angad... u don't get that often😆

o God... that Raj.. i seriously hate him😡... trying 2 rape his fiance??... well, if he had waited 4 a few days, he wudn't hve been in such a mess... he acted reli cheap🤢... nd he came back 2 kill her, and her baby?? i thought it was too much, he shud have just gotten over it!!!😡😕

i was glad the elders decided 2 get AK married, nd angad was soooo happy... he was such a sweetheart... nd i loved the fact he respected K's privacy, (well, until she confessed😆😳),,and controlled his desire nd stayed withing his limits...
Kripa confessing on his birthday,, was probly the bestest gift he cud've gotten na??... the poor guy had waited enough, he sure deserved a treat!!😆... but i felt bad when she didn't want a physical relationship with him... but i dint blame her, she's gone through alot..

hmmm... o i loved thr suhaag raat scene😳😳... after all, its not evrytym u see Kripa being bold... 😆..he had planned 2 keep her under control 4 the night, so i think he got pretty surprised when she started seducing him, to start with😳😛... after thr confession, the fic got reli romantic.. nd i loved it more... angad was reli naughty nd i loved his mischievious comments...i also thought the part was quite sweet, when every1 was asking abt thr wedding night..

hmmm... manthan changed quite in a sudden, well tht was good, coz AK couldn't afford 2 have another villlain/vamp b/'w thr love story...lol

Kavya nd Anjali's chemistry was also gr8... omg i had thought he loved her when he 1st admitted 2 angad he had fallen 4 some1.. aur mera shak sahi nikla😆😉... it was sweet how they took care of AK nd helped them through tough tyms, nd putting aside ther own wishes 2 be married...


ur seriously a gr88888 writer... omg i was just going 2 write, 'continue soon', then remembered its finished😆😆... but i wudn't have minded reading few more parts😡😆😆


kk... i'll stop typing now, i have tons more stuff 2 write abt.. but i'm probly boring u right???😳...lol... so i'll stop... btw.. can i have links 2 ur othr fics plz...😳
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Irsa

awww; thankyou; lol long comment. lol I'm glad you liked it till addiction. 😆 it was my first try. lol true; I dont like keeping angad in te bad too long😉 I like the sweet person and when I wrote this ff then it would often be the tough flirty guy in other ff's. I thought to show a tough sweet guy😳 love at first sight , i dont know. Yes he liked what he saw and when he got to know her , he loved her, Raj should have got over it but he was obsessed with her; he wanted her and it became a challenge to him which who alays liked to win. His red passport and being the only child of his parents could b the reason. yep; they got married and it was a sweet friend; love should always have friendship. it brings better understanding , I took the steps slowly; she loved him but giving up ur virginity for someone is a hard thing. lol yep; I decided to give kripa some bold colours when it was suhaag raat and it came out very nicely😳 lol well that was angad in this ff, frank with his small mischevious comments. He was asweet guy. I think I sort of forgot that manthan existed in the story at a point but Oh well, I thought to just drop him out🤢 and I think I dropped out the circle of friends after as well. lol yep; kavya loved ajali and whilst giving kavya lessons of love the two fell in love. Its like 2 in one😊 awwwww thankyou; I'd love to write more pats but its finshed and I'll stick to my current one😉 lol thx for the long comment, I enjoyed reading it. I sent you the links through pm😃

Faiza yaar i can't describe urs ff in word gal keep writing such nice ones just love tham baby so cute and symbols of luv really enlighten our moods thanks nce again for such a lovely FF 👏
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Faiza.

this story was completly amazing.
even my sister loved it.
me and her both read it 5 times:$

it was reallly cuuutte
and amazingly written.
mashallah
you have some reallly awesome skills.

ii loved the relationship angad and kripa shared.
their romantic moments and fights.

keep writing more :D


- [Madiiha <3 ] xox

Originally posted by: yamnovbloom

Faiza yaar i can't describe urs ff in word gal keep writing such nice ones just love tham baby so cute and symbols of luv really enlighten our moods thanks nce again for such a lovely FF 👏
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thanks bloom😳 I'm glad u liked it. aww that really made my day; thanks for such a lovely comment

Originally posted by: xoxIqbalxox

Faiza.

this story was completly amazing.
even my sister loved it.
me and her both read it 5 times:$

it was reallly cuuutte
and amazingly written.
mashallah
you have some reallly awesome skills.

ii loved the relationship angad and kripa shared.
their romantic moments and fights.

keep writing more :D


- [Madiiha <3 ] xox

aww thanks madiiha, glad u liked it to the extent of reading it 5 times😳 that really means a lot to me and thankyou to your sister as well, its the comments which encourage me to write so nicel otherwise I would have given up😊

absolutly amazing faiza👏

Originally posted by: stars_shine*

absolutly amazing faiza👏

ur an awesom writer

awww thanks sunshine, I'm overwhelmed😳