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sonali

@IsabellaCullen

Dazzler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#71

Awesome work tiya didi...didnt tell me..

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Tiya

@freezinme

Rocker

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Posted: 17 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: rabo0
btw..forgot to thank u for da PM.. 😳
n weneva next u update...do lemme knoe...looking forward for it.. 😊

lotsa luv
rabia..

hey rabia.. thnx once again!!😃
will surely pm u

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Tiya

@freezinme

Rocker

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Posted: 17 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: magicgirlankita
heya tiya cont soon huns

hey anku.. sorry will nt be able to update today..but tomorrow..pakka i wil update..at ny cost 😳😳

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Tiya

@freezinme

Rocker

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Posted: 17 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: sumitwadhwa
Awesome work tiya didi...didnt tell me..

soooooo sorrryyyy sonu.. plzzz maaf kar de.. give me 4-5 slaps also.. but plz dont get angry
i luv u soooooo much!!! plzzzzz😭

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Nruti

@arshluver_15

Inactive

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Posted: 17 years ago

#75

Hey wats up u rock man u r soooooooooooooooooooooo awsom i cant belive that u r new plz plz plz plz cont soon i cant wait any more

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Edited by arluver15 - 17 years ago

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Tiya

@freezinme

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Posted: 17 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: arluver15
Hey wats up u rock man u r soooooooooooooooooooooo awsom i cant belive that u r new plz plz plz plz cont soon i cant wait any more

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awwwww..nruti.. thnx alooooot yaarrr..
really really glad u liked it 😃
n will surely update the next part today!! 😳😳😳
luv
tiya.

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#77

please continue it soon please

Aakho ke saamne hardam aapko paya hai... Dil mein bhi aapko hi basaya hai... Aapke bina hum jiyenge kaise... Dost Bina bhi koi jee paya hai....

Yaad aaye kabhi to aankhe band mat karna, hum na bhi mile to gam na karna, ye zaroori to nahi ki hum hamesha saath rahe par DOSTI ka ahsas kam mat karna.

Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago

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hunme

@hunme

Explorer

Posted: 17 years ago

#78

wow. u are a very good writer 👏
please update soon

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..Mira..

@..Mira..

Rocker

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Posted: 17 years ago

#79

Heyyy Tiya! I just read the two parts. They were amazing..i could seriously imagine all of this happening! Hehe the rain scene was sooo good.....seriously I could imagine ridz in the rain dancing and Armaan watching from the phone booth. Aww how sweet his stare made her feel uncomfortable but in a good way...sigh his stare does that to girls. 😆
OMG he said oyye hoyye...i lvoe it when he says that..seriously it always makes me smile. Shubs having nightmares abt Kirti... 😆...how funny! "KKKKK Keerti" 😆 Aww and that sher was seriously perfect for that part! Hehe i keep going back to that scene..you can tell i'm in lvoe with it..it all seemed soo real..i could seriously imagine it! No joke!
Shashank is just a loving father...how sweeet, wow Anjali caught them romancing hehe...i'm sure they felt embarrassed. Lol.
Hehe your taking an ekta leap? 😆 Ekta leaps can be very dangerous...she makes even young men turn into old ones 😆 lol jkk.
I'll be waiting for you to write your next part. I seriously can't believe this is your first fan fic. You really are an amazing writer. Keep it up..your doing a great job. Hehe wow i wrote alot...srry lol. I'll be waiting for the next part..i'm sure it'll be good 😛

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