***Bheege Pal*** COMPLETED! - Page 7

Originally posted by: sheena_12

be quick!
i can wait more 2 read the next part n this part was like DAMN GUD plzzz continue asap.......!

Originally posted by: sweet-niz

u luv ur wrk already its amazin
very nce n i luved da part wer armi was sayin al dese nce comnts bout ridz bt shub fought it was him LMAO dat was great n da way hes soooo scared of kirti awwww grl u crack me up luvin ur ff already amazin well dne

ccnt wait 2 read mre updte ssooon n thx 4 da pm

luv nizma x

Originally posted by: kvn1983

really a nice one thanks for the pm and please continue it and as i promise u whenever i write new shayari i send it to u so i am going to post here i think u dont hv any problem. tell me otherwise i will send u pm

"Zindgi ke liye jina zaruri hai,
Jine ke liye arman zaruri hai,
Dil mein chahe hazaro gum ho,
Phir bhi tere chehare pe muskan zaruri hai."

"Wada Na Karo Agar Tum Nibha Na Sako,
Chaho Na Usko Jise Tum Pa Na Sako,
Dost To Duniya Me Bahot Hote Hai,
Par Ek Khas Rakho Jiske Bina Tum Muskura Na Sako……" for u😊😊

"Apne pyar ko chupana chaha par chupa na sake,
diwane dil pe kabu hum pa na sake,
aaj itne karib se gujar gaye wo,
phir bhi unka hath hum tham na sake."

"Dur tak tanhai bhara safar hai,
koi sathi na koi humsafar hai,
chale jate hain dil ke sahare teh soch kar,
ki bas agle mod par khushiyon ka shehar hai."

"Barsaat ki har boond me samaye ho tum..
Mere dil me khaas jagah banaye ho tum..
Yun to humdard ki kami nahi..
Par na jane aaj bohot yaad aa rahe ho tum"on shilpa anand (DR. RIDHIMA) 😭😭

"Kar K Aankhe Nam,Kya Dikhana Chahti He Zindgi?
Dekar Itne Gum,Kya Sikhana Chahti He Zindgi?
Pehle Mila Kar Fir Taqdeer Me Likh Deti He Judaai,
Ye Dard-E-Dil Se Hume Kya Mitana Chahti He Zindgi??"

"Har Baar Unki Salamati Ki Dua Karenge,
Unki Aarzo Me Apni Hasti Fanaah Karenge,
Woh Chahe Daaman Bacha le Humse Lekin,
Hum Marte Dum Tak Unse Wafaa Karenge."

Originally posted by: coolvini4u

OMG tiya....itna sweet n emotional part... 😭 😭 ...with a bit traces of romance tooo...i luv ur FF...its too gud n ur writin is amazin...

continue soon...

pm me if poss...

luv
*vini*

Originally posted by: magicgirlankita

hey tiya,
its nothing like that i just encouraged u and the whole lot of credit goes to u and only u ok and stop saying thnx yaar i have not done anything 😳 its often people dont noe wat dey hav done.. 😉
well this part was also awesome man i m stunned 😛yeah stunned i just luved it yaar i dont have words hehehe... i completely understand that... it also happens to me wen i read ur parts 😆 u know its usually when i m reading it i give so many comments verbally but when i sit to write the comments i donno what to write😆anyways luved the 2nd part thanks for the pm and do update soon ok 😊
luv ya
@nkit@

Originally posted by: .:.MONA.:.

HEY GREAT FF.....NICE JOB.............CONTINUE SOON.......AND PM WHEN EVER U UPDAT..
❤️MONA

Originally posted by: robal

amazing work, pls pls pls continue soon

Originally posted by: anitamalik

That was an amazing part Tiya... Im looking forward to the next AR meeting..please continue soon! 😊

Originally posted by: meow23

jus read ur ff... 2222 gud amzng.... waitng 4 ar meetng... update soon.. plzz pm nxt tym u update plzz... waitng 4 d nxt prt 😊 😊

Originally posted by: prity3143

how sweat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

two words sweety
oye hoye!!!!!!!! 😳 kyaaa baat hai!!!😃
i just loved it, especially the way u described armaan's reactions to ridz
and kirti and shub are sooo cute
i loved the way he blushes, what an idiot, but such a cute one 😛
and kirti suspecting the nurse 🤣 glaaad u find it funny.. i also rolled up laughing while i was writing it 🤣
Fabulous part, beautifully written 👏 thanks sweetheart
do continue soon, i can't wait to read about their first meeting hmmm.. everyone is desperate for AR first meeting.. ab to kuch karna padega 😉😉

p.s thanx soo much for the pm no worries, will pm u wenever i update..but u keep on commenitn okie.. really luvd reading it 😃

Originally posted by: hinanaziri

Hey Tiya

Thanks for the PM hun no worries!! (n dont say thnx again!!)
This part was so cute ,romantic and funny yeaa shubhankar was as usual funny 😆 abhi i dont hv much characters so ussi ko bali ka bakra banana padta hai 😆
Kya shayari hai,kya description hai waah!!!awww..thank you thank you 😃
Loving it!
You are surely a talented writer itni saari taareef... ahem ahem..
take it easy hun,this part was perfect the way u wrote thnx sweety
ekta's leap cracked me up hehehe.. kya karien she is a leap queen after all 😆😆
Keep goin hun
great work 👏 👏 👏 thanks sooooooooo much 🤗
Hina