AR FF: Fervour- part 12 - 11/5 - Page 13

Originally posted by: Ravishing_gal

Hey Natasha... sorry 4 the really late comment, but thanks for the pm...lol

omg that was a great part, to start with...... looks like ridz is falling for armaan, slowly but gradually...lol... aw yaar, i thought he would have admitted he 'loved' her...lol... and ridz dreaming about him was so cute......lol...and their small fights are f course reli sweet...

loved the use of the song, 'hum tum ek kamre mai band ho'...lol... but i thought armaan wouldn've 'done' something, i mean, they were alone in a dark closet!!!!!...lmao....haha yeh, gappu does eat alot😆😆...lol...

do continue soon this time...lol

Love,
Irsa

Originally posted by: me and just me

Wow! That was Aweosme 👏Aww Armaan is soo much in love!! And ridz dreaming about him was very cute! looks like she's falling for him!

Continue soon 😊

Originally posted by: jia..

wowwwww darling!! As usual superbbb!!!!

hum tum.....😆 cracked me up sweets!! awesome awesome awesome.....ahhh Armaan too much in luv??

And the lady in question is gradually falling too....their tit-bits are so very cute and awesomely penned!! Cant wait to see them in love.....😆

Brilliant one....loving the pace. will be waiting for the next eagerly......

love
Jia

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

heyy natasha

amazing ff...

poor armi... ridzi has to fall in love sooner or later...

:P

gr8 part...

plz cont sooon

can u plz send me a pm next time?? thanks!!

Sonia

Originally posted by: swansea

sorry natasha

for the late comment

but an amazing part

loved ti laodsss

tooooo goood

amazing sweey

Originally posted by: Gotta_luv_KYPH

Natasha....I LOVED it...hehe soo sweet they were stuck together in an attic...ridz was def loving it just too stubborn to admit it lol.
Omg did armaan just say I love you....hehe for sure he's seen ridz before the whoe marriage proposal thing....prolly the guy from the cruise? hehe i can't wait till you continue. I'm like hooked on your fan fic sweety,
Thanks soo much for hte pm...and sorry for hte late comment😳

Originally posted by: pink_09

Sowii sweets fo da late reply. I kept forgetting.

im so stupid. Forgetting to komment such a unique grand FF.

What can i say. You left me speechless.
Armaan and ridhima are so cute. Armaan is so much in love.
Ahhhhhh i love him. Awwwhh Ridhima thinkin bout him.

i like.


love part 7. Very cute.

Continue soon and thnx fo pm all this time..

Sowii fo da late komment again babes x

nats great part hun....loved it totally....wow this fic is simple n straight yet so many complicated fun turns......loving the pace n expression...n waiting for the next part as alwaz!!!

ps: my fav scene....forgot to mention....when shes talking to jhanvi on phone...awsome convo...wlks around half naked like its his domain....yeh right like the vain lady doesnt love him exactly that way!!!!buff n all!!!

Heyyy
I just read your last part,
aww soo cute guppu and minnie hehe
and I loved the dance floor scene...but of course ridz had to runaway lolz
ooo wonderland? been there...lol. I bet armaan gonna end up there somehow!
Thanks sooo much for the pm =)

wow. gr8 update. continue soon.