Hiii friends…..😊
After reading all the wonderful FFs in this forum….I am simply overwhelmed…..
So, I just wanted to try my hand in writing also…..😃😃
I'm sure it won't be soooo good as the existing ones….but still I'll try my level best…..😳
Kindly co-operate with me friends…..😊
Starting with the character sketches…..
An out-going, fun-loving, vibrant girl…she's an intern in Sanjeevani…
Unlike the Ridz of DMG, she is talkative and mischievous…In short, she is like our Armi of DMG….😳
He is also an intern in Sanjeevani….But he is quiet, reserved and more of an introvert….
In short, he is like Ridz of DMG….😳
The other characters are more or less the same as in the serial…..They will be introduced gradually as and when required..
So friends….if you want to read such an FF…..plzzzzzzz comment so that I can go about with the updates…
If not…then also it's well and good….
Here comes Part 1:
'DR ARMAAAAAN' yelled Dr. Keerti…..
It was the third time she called out his name....but he was busy staring at Ridz and so did not pay attention to her...
"Duty k pehle din hi itni laaparwahi????? I won't tolerate this kind of behavior from my interns….U understand that??"😡
"I..I…" Armi stammered…..😕
"Ye I…I kya laga rakkha hai??? Seedha seedha boliye aapko jo bolna hai" Keerti was fuming with anger…
"I'm sorry sir…..I mean ma'm" uttered out Armi after gathering a considerable amount of courage…..
On the other hand, Ridz, Anji and Muski were busy giggling at his condition….😆
At this point, let me tell you something….
Ridz, Anji and Muski had joined Sanjeevani a month earlier….Raoool was also with them. Armaan and Atul joined just today…so they were kind of freshers to the hospital compared to the other four…..
Muski slowly told Ridz…"Dekh yaar…bechaare ki kya haalat ho gayi hai….aur wo bhi teri wajah se…"…
To that she replied…" Wo to hona hi tha….aaj tak Riddhima Gupta ke attraction aur charm se koi bach paaya hai kya??" Saying this both went on for a quick high 5….👍🏼
"Aap logo ko bahut hansi aa rahi hai kya???" Boomed Keerti's voice….
"Sorry ma'm" said Muski…but Ridz just stood firm with loads of attitude…..
Keerti continued…" So, interns…let me introduce you to our two new joinees….Dr. Armaan Malik and Dr. Atul Joshi"
All shook hands with each other…..Armi held Ridz's hand and was not ready to leave it….😉
She told in a low but sarcastic tone…."Kabhi ladki dekha nahi kya???" This immediately broke his gaze and he left her hand…..
"So now I shall assign you your duties….."
"Dr Anjali….you will work with Dr. Atul in the General ward…remember…it's his first day here…so..help him out"..
"Dr. Muskaan and Dr. Rahul….aap dono cardiac ward mein"
"Dr. Riddhima and Dr. Armaan…aap dono aaj pathlab mein…." Ridz made a face at the mention of path lab….Armi was happy to be able to work with her….
"So interns….get working…and enjoy your day" smiled Keerti and went off…
"Kya enjoy karenge??? Path lab…aur wo bhi us chipku ke saath….." muttered Ridz….
"Chalein????" Armi said in a low voice...to which she just glared at him and moved on reluctantly..
Hope you like it....I am open for comments and suggestions....😊
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Here comes Part 2:
In the General ward:
Our own Anji ….was completely bowled over by Atul…😳
On his first day itself, the way he was handling the cases left Anji totally dumbstruck….
She had never seen such a gentle yet determined soul in her lifetime….
The way he spoke to his patients reminded Anji of her dad……
Oops!!! Sorry….forgot to mention…..
Anji and Ridz are sisters(as if we don't know)….
Their father was a very able Obstetrician and gynaecologist…Dr. Shashank Gupta…who died in an accident 3 years ago (rilli sorry to kill him…) 😭
He was the dean of Sanjeevani……
He was one of the best obstetricians in India….but could not save his wife Padma during Riddhima's birth….This was the pain he carried throughout his life…
Now Sanjeevani is headed by Dr. Shubhankar…he is a very able Cardiac surgeon….and a gentleman with a heart of gold…
"Ermmm…..excuse me Dr. Atul…."blurted out Anji….. Atul interrupted her …."You don't need to call me Dr. Atul….I am one amongst you….you can just call me Atul"..smiling warmly at her….which made her heart melt more….Unknowingly, she gave him back a huge smile….😃😃
Now let's take a look at the Path lab:
"Hmmmm…so Dr. Armaan….ready to work?" asked Ridz in an excited tone….
"Anytime Dr. R…Riddhima" stammered Armi….😆
"Good..So…since you are new here and you have already lost one precious month from your Internship in Sanjeevani, you shud try to catch up really fast…." Saying this she grinned mischievously at Armi…."That's why, out of the 10 exams today, you are going to perform 8 and the rest 2 I will manage….Any issues Dr. Armaan??"
"Not at all" he nodded…
"That's good….So…keep going…If you have any problems, ("I hope you don't have any…" she muttered under her breath), you can take my advice"….
She sat on the table dangling her legs....and silently watched him work on the tests....Since it was his first day, he was quite clumsy and nervous….While pouring one of the chemicals, it almost fell from his hands…."Arre re sambhaalke" she jumped to get a hold of it…..and fortunately caught it before it could spill…
She thought…."I think I've given him too much for his first day….."
"Errr…. Armaan…lemme show you how to go about with the test….then it will be easier for you to follow…." He allowed her… 😳
He watched her work at it…..
She was a perfectionist…..he watched her keenly….she mixed the solutions in perfect proportions….she did not even have to look up to any chart for the exact proportions and percentages….it was all in her brain….
"Wowww…she's damn good at her work" he thought….👏👏
"So Armaan….i've shown you one….go ahead with the others….I think now you should be able to finish the other 9 by yourself….can't you honey???" saying this she winked at him….This made him blush and quickly lowered his gaze😳
Again she made her way on the table and sat there dangling her legs and giving instructions to Armi…every now and then saying…"How long are you taking??? Hurry up…Ek test karne k liye kitna time chahiye yaar?? Poora din nikal jayega….jaldi karo….hurry up…" 😈
Her bak-bak went on non stop…..Armi was not at all irritated….in fact he was enjoying it…quietly smiling to himself….
"DR. RIDDHIMAAAA…." There was a shout from outside 😡
Part 2 updated friends.....please comment....
Suggestions and comments are always welcome....
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Here comes Part 3:
"DR. RIDDHIMAAAA……." Ridz was startled….She immediately got down from the table…..🤢
"Eh…eh…he he he….." That similar grunting sound was heard…..😆😆
"Muski ki bachchi…..u scared the hell out me girl….stupid idiot donkey….ruk…aaj main tujhe nahi chhodungi…." Saying this she ran after Muski with a small beaker with water in it….😛
Muski stuck out her tongue and went and hid behind Armi making him her shield…"Ab pakad mujhe….ab to mera shield bhi hai…..(To Armaan) tu hatna mat yahaan se…samjha na??"
Ridz shouted…"Armaan…hat jao saamne se…"
Armi was like an obedient student...so he tried to move from there...but Muski was also fast....she too moved away with him as a result of which SPLASH...the whole water landed safely on Armaan's shirt....😉😉
"I...I'm so sorry...You know I didn't mean it....Sorry"...she stuck out her tongue sweetly and apologized in a very flirting way.....This melted Armi completely....
He just said softly..."It's ok R..Riddhima..."Saying this, he went off from there....😳
Ridz winked at Muski and gave her one of her devilish grins...."Ridz...you are so mean yaar....bechare pe paani gira diya...aur abhi daant nikaal ke has rahi hai..." 😉
"Arre Muski darling...you forgot something else also...10 mein se 9 test bhi maine usse karvaya....hee heee haaa haa haaa" she gave a triumphant laugh like the hindi movie villains....
"O God!!! Sachchi???" Muski now gave her a hi 5...."But you are mean..."...
"I know...." Ridz grinned at her...."OK chal....lunch time...let's move"
The girls did not know...but their conversation was heard by someone else also.....
At lunch…moving towards the Cafeteria…
Ridz and Muski walking together…..Anji walked with Atul…they were talking very sweetly with each other….seeing this Ridzi's devil nature arose again…..she grinned like satan….and started in a loud voice so as to make herself audible to Anji…."Arre yaar Muski….aaj apni hospital mein kuch naya dekhne ko mil raha hai…hai na??? Phool khile hai gulshan gulshan…" Muski gave her typical horse-like laugh….😆
To this Anji turned round and replied…"O shut up Ridzi…"
"Maine aapse to kuch kahaai nahi di….hai na Atul 😳???" she replied smiling widely…..
Atul just nodded his head and smiled at her mischief…
Entering the cafeteria, they heard Raoool shouting…."Pleeeease yaar Armaan….humaare saath baith jaao….in ladkiyon ke saath reh reh ke main tang aa chukka hoon….their endless discussion of shopping, jewellery, clothes and such things make me mad… yaar…. pleeeeeeeeeeeeeese… main tumhaare aage haath jodta hoon….pair padta hoon……"😭😭
"Arre thik hai…thik hai….pair padne ki zaroorat nahi hai….main aap logo k saath hi baithunga…"
"Thanks Armaan....you saved me from these 'teen deviyaan'"…he smirked 😆
" Kyun re Raoool ka bachcha…humlog tujhe tang karte hai???" Muski was her usual self….. "Shukar manaa ki aaj tak sirf shopping ki baat ki…kabhi tujhe shopping pe leke nahi gaye…."
"Arre mujhe aana bhi nahi tumlogo ke saath shopping pe…" Raoool also started….
"Oye chupp kar chhachundar…."
"Tu chupp kar chipkali"…
"Chal"
"Phut"
And it would go on and on……if it had not been for Ridz and Anji to cut in between…
"Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh…..dono chup"
"Lunch time hai yaar….abhi to jhagra mat karo….Chalo let's have something…" said Anji…
Something was going on in Ridzi's mind….she said…"Guys..guys….aaj to kuch special hona chahiye…." Everybody looked at her questioningly…
"Arre baba…tumlog ekdum duffers ho….aaj apne hospital ke liye bahut bada din hai…bhool gaye kya??" Everybody still confused….😕
"Yaar…tumlogo ko har baat kya spoon-feed karke dena padega kya??? Aaj humare hospital mein do bahut hi kaabil doctors aaye hai….so don't we deserve a treat from them???" She beamed… 😃
"O yessss…" Anji, Muski and Raoool agreed with her…."So…Dr. Atul and Dr. Armaan…aaj aap dono humlogo ko treat dene waale hai…"…To this Ridz again interrupted….."Atul lunch and Armaan dinner…"
"Yayyyyyyyyyy" everybody clapped….👏👏 👏
"OK" Atul and Armi replied simultaneously
So each of them started stuffing themselves.....each of them ate more than they usually do...(kisi aur ka treat tha lol)
Burgers, pizzas, juice, sandwiches.....whatever was available in that small cafeteria was visible on their table....Atul muttered under his breath..."Doosro ke liye bhi kuch khaana chhodoge ya phir poori cafeteria nigal jaane ka iraada hai..." 😕
"Eh...he...he...he..." Muski as usual...
"Oye chupp kar ghodi....sorry gadhi..." blurted out Raoool....
"O God..I'm full" said Ridzi patting her stomach and licking her lips....
She is sooo sweet....thought Armi....bas thodi badmaash hai...that's not a problem with me...he chuckled to himself.... 😳
A bit of mayonnaise was still remnant beside her lips....she was unaware of that....Armi stared at her..."Kya hai???" she yelled....
"Wo...m..mayonnaise..."
"Ohhh..I'm sorry" she was a bit embarrassed and lowered her eyes.... 😳
"It's ok" smiled Armi....to which she also found herself smiling....
"OK guys let get back to work….."announced Anji…..
Just then….there was an announcement…."All interns are requested to gather at the Nurse station immediately……"
"Ye Hitler ne abhi kyun bulaaya????" everybody was confused....Dr. Keerti usually did not call them in the middle of the day unless there was an emergency....
They reached the Nurse station....Keerti was already there....
"Interns....actually this meeting is for one of you....but I want it to be a lesson for all..." she said it in a low voice but the interns understood that it was just the atmosphere before a storm.....she can burst out at any moment of time....All looked questioningly at her....
"DR. RIDDHIMA....aap apne aapko samajhte kya hai??? 😡You think you can get away without doing any work???" she was fuming.... "Dr. Armaan ne kal saare tests kiye and you were just sitting on the table giving him instructions... Do you think this is a college where you can rag your juniors....infact Dr Armaan is not your junior....all of you are equal..." she was fuming with anger…😡😡
Now we know who had overheard Ridz and Muski's convo….
Ridz was stunned and so were the others….They had never seen Dr. Keerti soooo angry on anybody…She was strict to them..but they had never seen her like this…
"I am noticing of late that you are becoming more and more mischievous…..don't forget…aap ek doctor hai…aur ek doctor hoke aap apni zimmedari kaise bhool sakti hai??? I am very disappointed with you Dr. Riddhima….Isliye, aaj se poora ek mahina aap night duty karenge…." 😡😡
Ridz was shocked…😭
"Lekin ma'm…."she tried to mutter…
"I don't want any excuse or explanation…you understand that??? And as I already told you earlier….it should be a lesson to all of you….taaki aap log kabhi bhi apne zimmedario se bhaag na sakey…is that clear???"
No answer…
"IS THAT CLEAR INTERNS????"
"Yes ma'm" everybody replied meekly…
"So…get back to work everybody"…..All started leaving silently….
Ridz gave a piercing look to Armaan…..Armi did not know what to do...he looked at her helplessly....while Ridz just stormed away...
That was part 3 friends...plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz comment.......😳😳
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