FF:Back to Newton's Laws-2...part 32 - Page 33

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey

aaawwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!

dat was sweeettttttttt n cuteeeeeeeee 😳

grt prrt
cont suprt sooooooooooonnnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru
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Posted: 17 years ago
Wow ur FF rocks,I loved the twist.Please continue writing 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
Naseem,

very very very well done part!!! Thank god it has all been sorted out...oh,...his concern when he found her was so cute,...and he cud go through all his emotions at bay since she was in deep slumber...

oh,..and how i love Chris,...wonder if anyone really exists as this man,...so composed and poised,..true gentle man!!!

my bets part was armaan got up from his chair in frustration "dad i did not want to....n i know it was inappropriate....but the sight of aryan, when he rushed to her"
even though he loves her, his insecurity is still there with her having a best friend in a guy,...

oh I love u NJ for this part,...absolutely amazing,..
love -Ria

ps: sorry for the late reply,...just got busy with the boring meetings I had to be in all day yesterday:(
Edited by hibos1 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Readthe last 3 parts!!! AMAZING!! Armaan has to believe in his love, just like chris said!!! Update soon Plzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
Well well Buttercups (got it rite na) wat a part!!! 👏

Haha u know i read the entire part like 3 times!! it was so very very adorable
Loved the first scene wen Armaan is busy looking at Ridz. 😳The way he analyzes and reanalyzes.......was like omg.....ur a real star. Leave me stunned everytime huh with ur unmatched talent. 👏

I always expect something and u have each time since perfect imperfection exceeded my expectation. 😳
Loved the father-son convo tooas usual it was beautiful. The way Chris handles him.......wonderful justice there. 👏

Also her eagerness to call him and him cutting her calls!! Just love the way u describe everything!! Its splendid!! Glad Armaan finally knows that Aryaan loves Minnee. phew am relieved!!😆

Waiting for ur another amazing update very very eagerly. Thankyou so much for this NJ, u really make my day. 😳
love
Jia
Edited by jia.. - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome part 👏 !
im so glad chris has told armaan the truth 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey NJ,

Sorry sorry sorry sorry... just been busy with revision, school and blah blah blah... Anyways here I am once again (Sorry I am listening to Kelly Clarkson) with my lamba sa comment....

Part 18: You are just a brilliant writer...seriously I don't know how many times I might have said that to you. Loved their phone conversation...the one thing I like about your FF is that the conversations are so real, I mean not filmy. I hope that makes sense..I loved her gift to him, really thoughtful of her, loved the words...right from the heart.
The clip scene at the mehndi function was just so adorable and sweet. The way you handled the twist in the story was wonderful. The way you weave your thoughts in to words is commendable.👏👏

Part 19: Whilst reading this part...I was literally at the edge of my seat...I loved Ridz and Chris's convo, was just so sweet...just like Father-Daughter. Everytime you seem to amaze me with the way you describe each and every emotions. The way you described Armaan's insecurities after his mother's death was just one word wow...loved that part. Every word you described, his attachment and now his hope in Riddhima...Loved it!!!
My favourite scene of this entire FF is when he calls and talks to his father. When I read that part, the one thing that came to my mind was a very vulnerable child wanting nothing more but to be with his parent, to be in their shadow for protection, to share his pain. It was just so wonderfully written...loved loved loved that scene.

Loved Armaan's thoughts too... this whole part was my fav of this entire FF. Though can't take any credit away from the rest of the parts.

Part 20: Aryan is an amazing friend, just love the way you write and describe each emotions. I know i've said that many times... but I don't know what else to say.

Does love really make people impulsive??? Like the way Armaan and Ridz acted...not thinking or caring of any other possibilities. Just curosity...was just pondering on this thought whilst reading this part.

Anyways coming back to the part...man Muskaan had to give her sleeping pills...well atleast she's safe. Loved the father-son convo...Armaan getting worried for her, the restlessness and uneasiness was very well potrayed.

Part 21: The first scene was just sooo cute, the way he was just staring at her...it was just sooooo adorable. You are a pro, loved the way you wrote his thoughts. You definetly know how to leave ur readers speechless... I loved the way you handled the transition of one Armaan (Who still loved her) to the one (Who felt so betrayed).

Loved the eagerness of Ridz, and her anticipation of seeing Armaan by her bedside. Her constant calls to talk to him, and for him to be with her by her side. Love Chris and his conversation with Armaan... btw Chris is so right, no girl in her right mind would fall for Armaan when he's there.😆

Loved every part. You are just bloody brilliant (Excuse the language). Thank you very much for such lovely updates, and no i don't think you are dragging it, its going at the right pace.

Luv
Nainu
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Posted: 17 years ago
amazing part 👏
do continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
part 22 updated friends enjoy reading!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Acheeeeeeeeeww!! Omg, haha.. she's been sneezing too much.. how oes she manage to open her mouth....

Anyways, that was an adorabely short part Actually ever part feels short 😆 😆 cause of how often you update... Superwoman 😆 😆

i cnt wait till they find out the truth!! Actuallyyyyy... if the truth comes out, then that would be the end of this FF 😆 😆

Anyways.. cant wait for the next update!!

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