Tera Mera Rishta-AR Part 16 Pg.80

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Jia

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Posted: 17 years ago

#451

Wowwwww...Anita 👏 u left me stunned!!! That was an outstanding one seriously!!

My favourite scene has to be the one after the confession ...Armaan reassuring her...it was simply brilliant, the dialogs, ur excellent way with words....i mean the pace and flow of emotions was great Anita.....👏

Ok and after that...him carrying her and all...gosh u have me smitten by ur Armaan..which is no surprise....😆

Its going simply amazingly. So she will talk to him about her past huh...ahh want to see him being understanding and kind...am sure whatever you pen will be fab.⭐️

Waiting for moree. Keep it rolling
Jia🤗
PS: Thankyou so very very much for the pm.😳

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nuts123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#452

WOW!!! Stunning update Anita... this part was simply great...oooh, love AR chemistry as always, and that Ridz isn't the 'shy' one now that they have confessed... loved how you portrait each of their emotions, twas simply beautiful....omg armaan'sa words were damn sweet...haiii, if only his 'jadoo' works on the 'real' Ridz in dmg...lol.... good 2 know ridz wants 2 tell him everything about her past, rather than it coming out by someone else, and he misunderstanding her- though i doubt thr's a chance of tht...lol... LOL it had to be 'ridz' who had to fall, lol, and armi carrying her....

thanks so much 4 the pm, and once again sorry 4 being being a late lateef and commenting so late...

continue soon...xx

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unknown cute

@yogzz

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Posted: 17 years ago

#453

wow yaar very nice part...............

it was tooo gud

thanx for pm

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Mini

@cool_pisces

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Posted: 17 years ago

#454

Hey lovely part yaar, loved the way u explained and handled the emotions, waiting for the next part to find out abt Riddhima's past and this Karan guy, update soon, thanks for the PM

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harshadislove

@harshadislove

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Posted: 17 years ago

#455

gr8 part

plzzzzzzzzz update soon

n thanx for pm

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Rimli

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Posted: 17 years ago

#456

amazing part anita its so romantic and emotional too

loved it so much

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prerna

@prernawaghray

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Posted: 17 years ago

#457

hey
awesome dear
loved it it was chooo chweet
actually my net was not working for a fortnite
running out of time now willl comment later on in detail from the next part onwards
plz pm me

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aarora

@aarora

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Posted: 17 years ago

#458

hey amazing ff..i was a silent reader..bt cudnt cntrl nw 2 comment..whn finally AR r togthr..😊

plzzzzz add me 2 ur PM list..

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Anita Malik

@anitamalik

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Posted: 17 years ago

#459

NOTE

Im so sorry guys that I haven't been able to update...

but this time its definitely not my fault...I was going to update this weekend, but then the stupid hurricane had to come and mess up my weekend..I was left with no power for three days...I just got my power back tonight...I will update as soon as I can..Please be patient...I hope you all understand

Thank You

Anita