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Posted: 17 years ago
#61
omg nw its truned
into obsessivly addictive
im already addicted to it as it is
n u mkin each part hotter lol
boi u on a role or wot lool
serisouly congrtz once again n
defo lkin 4rwd to readin dis cnt wait 4 da
nxt part updte soooon
luv niz
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62
congo on the newww thread!
im a regular reader of ur ff...i read it every single say without fail! thts cooz i luuuuv it sooo much!!
keeep it up! 👏 👏 👏
cant wait for next part! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63
wowww congo hina-di for starting another thread 😃 and yea u named it right! "obsessively addictive"... mujhe to nasha ho gaya hai tumhare ff ka 😆 😆 😆
and brilliant part again.. loved the romance in the rain 😉 loved the song u picked for shashank-padma 😳 and nana is so funny.... yaar iske dream mein bhi shubhankar ghus jata hai

and the funniest thing was... Beech me do toofano ke
Ye Guptas ka makaan 😆 mann you're too hilarious!!

cant wait to read more 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
congo for another thread hina di!! i hope ur fabulous ff completes 10 more threads! 😉

i luvd the first part!! i'm really liking ur musical touch to every part! and i luvd the proffesional sinners and debutant sinners!! 😆 it cracked me up! awesome job hina di! plz continue soon!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65

Part Two:

The senior doctors now The sinner doctors :

Shubh and Keerti walk hand in hand under the yellow chata

Till they reach the end to the silent and lonely beach

Keerti then says

Shubhankar!

Ab hamey wapis chalna chahiye

And turns around

Shubh stops her and says

Keerti,ruko na

Dekho mausam kitna suhana

Aur phir,aaj hi to hamarey pyaar ko manzoori mili hai

Aaj to hamey is bheegi bheegi raat ko hamare pyaar ki
gawah banakar

Isme apni pehle sawan ki yaadein banani hai

Keerti smiles at his poetic lines

And says

Haan,ye raat hai to badi khoobsurat

Lekin

Aise bohot si raatein ayegi hamari zindagi me

Aaj ke liye itni yaadein kaafi nahi hai?

Shubhankar kal hamari duty hai

Aur phir sabko batana bhi hai hamare bare me

Shubh goes

Kya Keerti ?

Tum bhi kitni boring baatein karne lagi ho

Lets enjoy na

Aur rahi baat sabko bataney ki

Wo sab to pehle se sab jaantey hai

Din me kitney baar to

Isshhhhq hai! kartey hai

Keerti smiles and goes

Tumne hi to shuru kiya tha

Shubh goes

Ye baat thik nahi hai Keerti

Tum apne interns ki kaise side le sakti ho

Ab to tumhe mujhe zyada importance deni chahiye

After all mai

Keerti goes

Uhuh!Shubhankar please

And puts her finger on his lip and says

Plzz, senior doctor hoo mat kehna!

Shubh grins and goes

Okay ,Nahi kahoonga thik hai?

Keerti smiles and goes

Acha chalo ab barish bhi bohot tez ho rahi hai

Shubh stops her and says

Plz Keerti kuch aur der ruk jao?

Is barish ka aur thoda maza lene do na

Keerti smiles and goes

Okay!

Shubh screams in excitement

Yaaaayyyyyyy!

And runs away out of the umbrella

Keerti shouts

Arey Shubhankar bheeg jaoge

And runs to get him under the umbrella again

He looks at her luscious lips and sexy body

And grabs her to romance under the umbrella

They loose themselves in love and

The wind blows hard to blow their umbrella away
exposing their romance

Shubh goes

Arey Arey,mera favourite yellow chata

And runs after it to stop it from flying away

He gets pulled by something clinging onto him

So turns to know what

He finds Keerti's saree tangled in his shirt button

And she stands there half stripped off

She blushes and pulls her saree back

Her sensational wet look drives him nuts

And he dances to her in mischief

And pulls the saree more

She blushes and pulls it back from her end

And he slips in the tug of war

She comes to give him a hand

And he sings

Aaj rapat jaaye to hamey na uthaiyo
Aaaj phisal jaye to hame na uthaiyo
Hamey jo uthaiyo to
Khud bhi phisal jaiyo
Aaj rapat
Aha aaj rapat !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And sings the sizzling sensous in pure Big B style

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l-xpb2ZwFnQ




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Back to the debutantes progressing rapidly:

Atul and Anjali plan their strategies on their payback

They think of how their friends could so such a thing
to them and decide to give them good

Atul directs Anjali towards his house in a sad tone

Even Anjali doesn't want the beautiful evening to end

But all good things have to come to an end they think

And they reach his house eventually

Anjali stops the car in front of his house

And Atul goes

Bye Anjali !

Anjali goes

Bye Atul and makes a puppy face

Atul then stops

Looks at her with all the love

Reaches to her hand and hold it

She feels naughty

He pulls her close

And they kiss

She feels the fear of the unknown

And jumps out of the car

He looks at her with passion

And sings

Ankho se tuney ye kya keh diya
Dil ye diwana dhadakne laga
Tanhayi me hum
Miley is tarah
Baarish me sholaa bhadakne laga

She runs away and sings

Tu tadapne laga
Mai machalne lagi
Boond tan pe giri
Jaan machalne lagi
Cha raha hai ajab sa nasha

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8oHFdMWdi8k&feature=relat ed

And they set the street on fire with their burning hot desire

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The rendezvous with the pioneer sinners in the balcony:

Armaan stops at the door to the balcony

And rests his aching foot

Riddhima gets intimidated with the monsoon

The beautiful attractive rain scenario makes her
forget everything

And she runs out to the open,

She closes her eyes and

Enjoys the teasing drops of rain fall on her

And she sings

Ye saazish hai boondo ki
Koi khwaish hai chup chup si
Dekho Na!
Dekho na…………………..

Looks at Armaan and goes

Dekhona,Dekhonaaaa………………………

And he can't resist to join in

He sings

Hawa kuch haukey hauley
Zubaan se hi kuch boley
Kyu doorie hai ab darmiyan
Dekho naa
Dekho naaaaaaaaaaaa………………………………………………………

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GCN4s6JzsVU



She makes him sit on the terrace stairs

To nurse his wound

Kisses his foot to make it feel better

He feels loved

And goes to return the kiss

She shys and runs away

He limps and tries to get her

She knows he can't

So she runs back to give in

And helps him walk and puts his arm around her shoulder

She takes him to a partially dry corner of the balcony

And makes him sit against the wall

He pulls her to sit with him

She sits next to him

And he lies down in her lap

She looks at him lovingly

Outlines and plays with his face

Brushes his hair

And sings him a lullaby

Dekhonaa,dekhonaa…………………….


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Hey guys
I know this was an unusual short update
Hope u liked it anyway
I will give u a long one tomorrow,hopefully
With the secret out and then
and the payback plan comes into action
I will try and give u as many updates as poss over the weekend
I know its long and hard to wait for Monday
So I'll help u get through it
Thanks for the great response on this new thread
I will try and reply to the replies,sorry if I'm able to
Take care
Love u all
Hina

Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#66
the best part abt ur ff is u update is so quickly....plz add a lllllllllllooooooooonnnnnnnggggggggggg AR scene...nw tht shilpa is leaving,the crave has gone up....so plz if possible add a very long cute Ar scene...aab to sirf ff hi rahen gaye hain unke cute romantyinc scenes dekhne ki liye(thru our imagination we can c them...otherwise in reality it wnt b possible nemre)...wnderful part....update fast....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
hey apu!

just caught up with everything!

omgomgomgomgomg atul and anjie are tooo cute,
and rahul and muskaan, ayayayyayayayayaya!!!!!!!! they are awesome!

continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
reallya nice update please continue it soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69
Congratz on another FF...Ive just finally caught up with the last several parts && I must say that they are all MINDBLOWNG!!!...You truly are a talented && gifted writer...Ill be waiting for the next part!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#70
hey di
congo on da new thread 🥳

awwwwwwwwwwww.............
da prt was relllllllllyyyyyyyyyy AWESOME 😳
cho cho sweeeeeeeeeeetttttttttttt n cuteeeeeeee 😳
cont super soooooooooonnnnnnnnnnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru

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