Love Story of 6 Part 8 AB~page 72.kisses/ sharini - Page 3

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Very nice 👏
Keep continue it 😃
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Originally posted by: .:.MONA.:.

hey nice intro..well was waiting for the update...wonder who these girls are....do continue soon.thaknc 4 the pm.....
❤️MONA

thanks so much mona di

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Very nice 👏
Keep continue it 😃

thanks soooooooooomuch karan

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hey
wowwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!
new start.........grt start 👏

n tell us soooooooonnnnnnnn who r dese beautifull gurls 😉

cont super sooooooooooonnnnnnnnn
luv ya n tak care
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Originally posted by: mahi4u

hey
wowwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!
new start.........grt start 👏

n tell us soooooooonnnnnnnn who r dese beautifull gurls 😉

cont super sooooooooooonnnnnnnnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru

thanks so much

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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG swancy ki bachi yeh kya kar diya tune 😡



how can u write soooooooo nicely yaar?????????????????????..........i mean when i finished reading i couldn't believe u created a suspense and didn't write any more ... wow can't wait to read more

-Pari 😳
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Originally posted by: pari0706

OMG swancy ki bachi yeh kya kar diya tune 😡



how can u write soooooooo nicely yaar?????????????????????..........i mean when i finished reading i couldn't believe u created a suspense and didn't write any more ... wow can't wait to read more

-Pari 😳

omg di u scared my life first thanks soooooo much i will post the next part tommorow

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As she woke up from the arm chair her back was hurting really badly but she still got up and went inside her room just to find mother sitting there looking at her
'mom u here', she said

'Yeah i wanted to talk to u, about last night' when her mom said about last night her eyes formed tears again, trying to control it

'Mom i don't want to talk about it'

'But i do' said her mom

'Will talk about this later mom, i need to go, or I'm going to get late for high school' saying this she left the bed room

She got her clothes and went in the bathroom to get changed

Her clothes

She came out and went into the dining room, she saw her mom standing there cooking

'Mom i need to go'

'Have breakfast first'

'NO mom i don't want too' she said this with an angry face

'At least listen to me sweetie' her mom tried to explain to her, but there was no change

'I need to go mom' saying this she took an apple from the table and ran out

'Listen to me plzzzzz VANESSA' her mom screamed out

'There's nothing left to listen mom, NOTHING' Vanessa ran out.

Her mom stood there with tears in her eyes.

While all this was going on, a girl is sleeping on bed, her alarm rings, but she throw the alarm on the floor and cover her face with the blanket.

'Ohhhhhhhh my heads spinning' she said while trying to get up

'That what you get for drinking so much last night and partying round' a voice came from outside her room

'MOM' omg she thought how mom came to know about this???

'MUM, how do u know, u know what i did last night?'

'I'm your mother i know about this ASHWARIYA'

'NO mum it's ashly not ASHWARIYA...........'

'Fine fine 'ASHLY' her mom said

'That's like a good mom' ashly said

Just then Ashley's eyes fell on the clock, as soon as her eyes looked at the clock her jaw dropped.

'What happened ashly?'

'Mum, PLEASE tell me that, that's not the right time2 pointing at the clock

'Yes ashly that's the right time' her mom replied

'OMG MOM I'M SOO LATE' she screamed

'OMG mum, I'm gonna be sooo dead meat today' ashly said while going through her closet

Taking out her clothes she ran into her bathroom

'This girl will never change' saying this ashly's mother whose name is AVANTIKA

Ashly came out wearing

Ashly's clothes

'Mom please i need to go I'm getting too late' ashly said running down the stairs

'Sweetie at least have some food to eat' Avantika said while getting ashly her shoes at the same time

'Mum, where's dad' ashly said while looking around the house searching for her dad

'Ash, your dads gone out of town' Avantika said looking into her daughters eyes

'When's he going to come home' ashly said really angrily

'Ashwariya, don't be angry sweetie' Avantika tried to calm her down. 'His only gone there because his got a business meeting'

'NO mum dad's always like that leaving me and going' ashly said really madly

'But he'll be back Na?'

'NO mum I'm going'

'ASHLY PLZ LISTEN TO ME'

Ashly ran out of the house with tears following from her eyes

We see this girl walking down the street; her hair tied back holding 9 dogs in her hands (well their chains)

'This is getting a little too hard'

Saying this she ran to the dog's owner and gave them their dogs back.

'OMG not again' looking at her watch she ran home as quick as possible

She reached home

'MAMA MAMA MAMA' she shouted as she got in her house

'Yes ridhima I'm in here' ridhima's mom padma shouted from the kitchen

Padma's pic

Riddz ran and gave her mama a big hug from the back

'How r u sweetheart'

'Fine mama'

'OMG mama I'm gonna get sooo late' ridhima ran upstairs and changed her clothes and came downstairs

But then she bumped into her papa

'Good morning papa' hugging her papa

'Good morning riddz' getting out of the hug

'So papa u going for work' riddz said

'Yes sweetheart'

'Ok papa I need to go college' riddz said in a hurry

'Ok bye' riddz dad said.

Shashank pic

Ridhima ran into her room to get change

Shashank came down and gave padma a sweet hug and left

Ridhima's clothes

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'Mama I'm leaving'

'Ok riddz'

Riddz left her house and she took out her phone and called someone

Ashly took her phone out and called someone

Vanessa too out her phone and called someone

Vanessa: ashly, riddz

Ashly: baby V, Riddz

Riddz: ashly, baby V

All said this at the same time,(3 way calling)

Ashly: (laughing)

Riddz: ashly stop laughing now

Ashly: hey baby V, where are u

Vanessa: well just left the house, and u riddz

Riddz: same here

Ashly: ok then, i'll get my car and will meet at 'THE BENZ' {CAFE and RESTAURANT}

V and riddz: OK will meet u there

Baby V and riddz walked to the Benz cafe

Riddz and baby v met and they gave each other a sweet hug

Riddz: hey baby V wants wrong

Baby V: nothing riddz

Riddz: hey don't hide anything from me

Vanessa started crying

Riddz: shhhhhhh sit down and tell me what happened

Riddz made Vanessa sit down on the chairs

Just then ashly came

Ashly: hey riddz, Baby V

They both turned around

Riddz and baby V: hey

Ashly: hey baby V what's wrong sweetie

Baby V: nothing guys

Riddz: baby V tell us were your best friends

Baby V: well MOM

Riddz and ashly's head shot right up

Ashly: oh no

Riddz: what did she say?

Baby V: 'VET' 'VET' 'VET'

Ashly: oh no!!!!!!!!!

Baby V: this time she said it sooo clearly

Riddz: hey forget that for now OK

Baby V: ok

Well the talk was going on but then ashly's eyes fell on the watch

Ashly: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Riddz and Vanessa jumped up

Baby V: what happened?

Riddz: and why did u scream?

Ashly: did u guys check the TIME?

Riddz and Vanessa looked at their watch.

Both: OMG

Ashly: were sooooooo late

Riddz: come on

The 3 sweet girls sit in the car and leave for high school

The girls Enter School

Well now u can see a huge school

U can see cheer leaders who are wearing red and white cheerleader uniform (just like in HSM)

Cheerleader uniform

All dancing and singing

Cheerleaders: Wild cats sing along
Yeah, you really got it goin' on
Wild cats in the house
Everybody say it now
Wild cats everywhere
Wave your hands up in the air
That's the way we do it
Let's get to it
Time to show the world

The girls walk in people crowded everywhere

Riddz: omg these people always crowding the place

Baby V: i know

Ashly: come on let's just try to get inside

Baby V: fine

While walking inside every guy was staring at ashly

Riddz: why does everyone have to stare at u?

Ashly: i know, it's so annoying

Baby V: you're so lucky to have guys who look at u

Ashly: (giving Vanessa evils) IT'S NOT FUNNNNNNNNN

Riddz and Vanessa started laughing

Riddz: ok guys will meet at the cafe after are first session

Ashly: so what u guys got first session, ME got art. Which ain't nice?

Riddz: well i have got science

Ashly: what about u Baby V?

Baby V: hmmmmmmmmmm let me check

Vanessa opened her bag and took out her timetable

Riddz: so what have u got WOMEN?

Baby V: Ohhhhhhhh no!!!!!!!!!!!

Ashly: what's wrong?

Baby V: I've got gym aka P.E

Riddz: well good luck

Ashly: bye

Ashly went left

Riddz went right

Vanessa went straight

Ashly was walking up the stairs when she bumped into someone she was sooo close to fall down but she got caught right in time before she fell. She found herself looking into these green hazel eyes. No contacts were made, only their eyes were speaking

Ashly: I'm sooo sorry

He looked into these cat eyes which were sparkling really brightly

Guy: it's OK; i think i saw u somewhere

Ashly: (looked up) yeah I am in your art class

Guy: oh yeah

Ashly: Rith right?

Rith: yeah. Hrithik aka rith

Ashly: it's nice to finalllly talk to u (laughs)

Rith: u too

Ashly: well i need to go art class

Rith: me too

Rith: can we walk together?

Ashly: yes sure

Rith clothes

Ashly and rith walked to class together, ashly really fell heel over him when she first saw him but rith didn't feel anything it was just another girl for him.

While all this was happening to ashly and rith, let's get back to Vanessa

Vanessa was walking down the hallway to gym, but someone stopped her

Mrs Louis: Vanessa could u help me sweetie

Vanessa turned around and saw her dance teacher carrying balls bats all these other stuff

Baby V: omg Mrs.louis do u need help?

Mrs Louis: a lot angel

Vanessa carried the big footballs which covered her face she couldn't see anything, mrs Louis left

Baby V: oh god, how am i supposed to carry all this without seeing anything?

While Vanessa was walking she didn't know that someone was walking towards her and that person was hearing music and looking through his texts that he didn't notice Vanessa

Then a big crash all the balls on the floor, Vanessa face was covered with her hair, so the person couldn't see who it was

Guy: what's wrong with u can't u se where you're going

Vanessa looked up; her face was glowing like angel

Baby V: ohey you're the one who came in my way (shouted)

Guy: hey, how dare u speak to zac like this? (Angrily)

Baby V: i don't care who u are MR Zac or MR gorilla

Zac: how dare u call me a gorilla? (Annoyed)

Baby V: G......O...........R...........I..............L............. .....L..............A (Saying it realllly slowly but annoyingly)

Zac: omg u u u

Baby V: what I yeah go on

Zac: just forget it

Zac left with Vanessa behind

Zac clothes

Baby V: omg what the h**l does this guy think of himself

Vanessa started picking up all the balls

While picking up she cursed zac under her breath

She picked all the balls and went to the gym

When all this stuff was happening to zac and Vanessa let's get a closer look too what riddz has been up too.

She was walking to her science class which was downstairs, well this time destiny was one her side or shall we say luck was there on both their sides, she never knew how her life was gonna change today

She was walking down, when MR perfect was walking up

Riddz: OMG I'm gonna be so late, miss Wilson's gonna kill me

Riddz: I'm gonna have to run to class

Saying this riddz ran down stairs, while MR perfecto was coming up

Riddz ran down and them BOOOM

Riddz: ahhhhhhhhhhhh

Riddz was half way of falling down

Riddz: (to herself) OMG this is gonna be too hurtful

But then she wondered why she didn't hit the ground

Riddz opened her left eye, and she was shocked to see herself staring into 2 light blue eyes

He stood there admiring her face he took note of every single thing even her tiniest spot, she looked like an angel to him, he had seen so many girls in his life and dated tons of girls but he never saw a girl like her before

He slowly brought her up

Riddz was in her own land she had wanted a prince like him for ages

Riddz: I'm sorry (low voice)

Guy: it's ok

Riddz lowered her head, the guy lifted her chin up, and he caressed her cheek as slow as he could. Not letting his sight move from her

Riddz: looked into his lash blue eyes

Guy's clothes

Long%20sleeve%20pink%20stripe%20shirt

Guy: I'm really sorry

Riddz: it's ok

While riddz was leaving her hair got stuck in that guy's button

Riddz: owwwwwww

The guy stopped and looked back

Guy: is everything ok?

Riddz: ouch it really hurts

The guy tried to take off riddz's hair but because riddz was too far away from him, he couldn't take it out

Guy: (to himself) hmmmmmmmmmm what shall i do

Then he got an idea he took hold of riddz's wrist

Riddz gasped at his touch

He pulled her so close that there was no space between them

Riddz crashed into his muscular chest, he was so strong no one like him in the whole world so hot so fit his like a Greek god (riddz thought).

He slowly looked into her eyes; he tried to talk her hair out but was still staring at her

Guy thought: I heard a saying that 'clear as mud' and i always wondered how mud and be so clear because it's not, but for the first time I think mud is much more clear looking into her brown mud looking eyes their so clear, 'clear as mud' so shiny and bright

He came out of his thoughts

He got riddz's hair out of his button

Riddz couldn't stand anymore so close to him her knees were getting too week

Riddz ran down not having the guts to look into his eyes anymore

Guy: wow this is stands out

Smiling to himself

Vanessa carried all the balls and went to gym; well there wasn't a pleasant surprise for her

Baby V: oh no not him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Zac: oh great not her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

They stood there in utter horror

Ashly and rith got into their art class

Ashly: oh great

Rith: NOT him

MR stack: UR LATEEEEEE

Ashly: sorry sir

Rith: were really sorry sir

Ashly: Oh no I HATE THIS TEACHER {she said to rith}

Rith: same here

Mr Stack: ok have a seat

Rith and ashly took their seats

Mr Stack: ok guys your real teacher miss Lindsey has left school, so i will be your teacher from now on

Ashly: oh no

Mr Stack: Do u have a problem miss ashly?

Ashly: no sir

Well Mr Stack is the worst teacher in the whole school, his too strict

And the bad day for ashly has already started

Riddz ran to her class

Miss Wilson: riddz come in

Riddz was Miss Wilson's best student ever

Miss Wilson: riddz i need to talk to u

Riddz: yes Miss

Miss Wilson took riddz outside her class

Miss Wilson: riddz you're my best student and looking at your results for the test u have passed so i have decided to put u in a higher group

Riddz: OMG really

Miss Wilson: yeah u will now be in Mrs Kira's class

Riddz: that's amazing miss

Miss Wilson: ok then u know where Mrs Kira's room is?

Riddz: yeah i do

Miss Wilson: ok then i'll see u later ok?

Riddz: ok miss bye

Riddz left and she went o her knew class

She knocked on the class door

Mrs Kira: oh wow, u must be riddz right

Riddz: yeah

Mrs Kira: come in

Riddz came in

Mrs Kira: (to riddz) ok riddz could u sit next to ammy plz (pointing to the seat next to ammy)

Riddz walked to ammy's seat, she couldn't see ammy's face because he was talking to one of his friends

Riddz: excuse me excuse me

Ammy turned around and was in for a big shock and so was riddz

They stared at each other with utter shock and astonishment

precap

Ashly looking hot, Vanessa looking sexy and riddz looking too amazing, ammy, zac and rith enter all staring at each other. All dancing to samba music in a place with fire coming out and dragons coming out like a big fiesta.

What will happen to Zac and Vanessa will they ever get along well?
Will ashly fall for rith?
And what has ammy and riddz seen that shocked them?

for this u have to wait and read
Love Story Of 6

😊swansea😊

Edited by swansea - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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woow grt part its really good pls continue sooon
thnx 4 the om
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OMG amazing part sweety 👏
the inrto and part 1 both were fab out of words 👏 👏
why such a cliffhanger? 😆 😆
continue soon and thx for pm
take care
love muskaan

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