A night in Lonavala (FF)updated 3pt pg 8 - Page 3

really nice i don't elieve its your first ff... hmm so ridz got to know its armi when he gently hugged her in garden.. hmm ... didn't she laugh at him for dressing like that 😆 😉 .. what was her reaction? me is so eager to knwo it what say 😛

ok jokes apart.... your both parts were just awesome and you have shown their emotions really well 👏👏please do continue sooon 😳

Originally posted by: pari0706

really nice i don't elieve its your first ff... hmm so ridz got to know its armi when he gently hugged her in garden.. hmm ... didn't she laugh at him for dressing like that 😆 😉 .. what was her reaction? me is so eager to knwo it what say 😛

Yaar seriously all my energy at the moment is to get them together and more than words i want their actions to speak for them. in batton ke liye to sari zindagi padi hai aur yeh bhi darr lagta hi ke disguise ko le kar kahi fir se jagda na ho jaye

ok jokes apart.... your both parts were just awesome and you have shown their emotions really well 👏👏please do continue sooon 😳

And thanx for appreciating, was really scared as a first timer.

Originally posted by: mannyz_1

WOW! WOW!! WOW!!! 😛 no...way this in NOT your first FF yaar!!!! 😆

not enough words to describe how fantasticly you write this FF!!! 👏

keep it up!!!! 😉