pehli barish ff part6 page7 rahul muskaan - Page 6

hey guys heres Part 6

Rahul made his way into Muskaan's room, he was getting bored. This was the first day that she hadn't woken him up, said hello, or come down for breakfast. Something was wrong, and he was going to find out what…

M: Rahul….? What are you doing here, don't you know how to knock!?

R: you're one to talk! Chod do, now tell me…. What's wrong?
Rahul had made it across the room, and was sitting beside her on her bed, and she hadn't screamed, or grabbed her shoe. Something was definitely wrong

M: kya Rahul? Nothings wrong, mein bilkul theek ho….*sniff*

R: hmmm tho tum ro kyu rahe ho?

M: kya? Im not crying

R: so you're not crying and you're absolutely positively fine?

M: ….ye *sniff* yes

With that, Rahul grabbed her hand lightly, and started pulling her off the bed

M: what are you doing? Where…where are you taking me????

R: we are going to have some ice cream and then you are going to tell me what's wrong…if you're done lying that is.

M: ice cream…?



okies
i hoped you all liked it!
(btw rahul is still holding muskis hand 😳 )

peace
sommi

please comment

heyyyyy...u r rt, its very short..will hav 2 wait for d nex part 2 actly kno vats up...infact u shud havh put dis up as a promo, bcz its more lie a promo...u kno he just cums 2 her roon and all dt..

well...so will wait for d nex part 2 kno vats happening!!!..

tc
rubina

ya im sorry i kno it was short

itz basicly the first half of part 6
so im typing the second part now,
just thought u all would want something

im missing rm soooooo much, thought some of u might be too

so the second half will be up soon!

peace
sommi

cute scene, buh yaar it's 22222222222222222 short! can u make longer frm next part? 😳

ok guys
heres a promo
to make u all feel better as it was a really short part!

Oh her eyes, she's trying so hard to keep the tears away…her beautiful eyes fogged with sadness. He had never felt this much pain as he was now, seeing the pain in her eyes. He wanted nothing more in the world to just make her smile…to see her eyes crinkle, and her cheeks rise
He wanted to take away her ache…. And replace it with happiness

Fantastic update
I really really like it.
You written it well
Good job 👏
Keep continue.

thanx ram!

im glad u liked it!

Hey Sommi,

Just caught up with the last 3 parts
Didn't take me very long though
Anyways

Great story
and keep writing more
this ff is growing on me
Again I love the story,the nostalgia rememba
Please cont soon
Love
Hina
Thanx for the pm

Sommi my jaan I'm soooo happy you continued! Lekin it was soooo short. You said you were putting up a second part, but instead you put up a promo??? Anyway, whatever yaar. As for that bio help thing, well, I was in AP BIO at school so if you want any help at all just PM me. I'll check out your Youtube link too. Love you! Aur haan, your hindi's getting better yaar! Minimal mistakes this time! Very good! 👏


Komz