ff luv shuv and other stuff updt 23 may

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hey guys this is a update frm me.........

next morning karan shilpa are ready to go to their school/college

in the college

karan and shilpa in their campus

karan-hii guys

shilpa-hiii

all frnds-hi karanshilpa

all-yaar aj hamari projects partners decide hone wale hain pata nahi miss mehra kiske sath pairs banaengi❓

thn just karan's gf maya enters

maya- hi honey

karan-hi sweetie

shilpa feels jealous of her as she knows that maya was not a good girl

shilpa-karan class shuru hone wali hai chalen😊

thn maya interupts

maya-hey tumhe kya problem hai hum khud aa jaenge tum jao😡

just thn shilpa was going and karan call her frm back

karan-shilpa wait i m coming wid u😊

she feels happy😃

thn maya thinks-is shilpa ka kuch karna padega😡

in the class

karan is sitting wid shilpa as usual

thn miss mehra enters

miss mehra-good morning class

all-good morning miss

miss mehra-so ready for ur project so i m now going to announce the pairs

she was announcng the pairs and she announces karan kapoor-shilpa😳

karan{to shilpa}-yeeeeeeeee thank god ki meri partner tum ho .......ab to mujhe ye project karne main koi problem nahi hai😳

bcoz u r wid me😉

she feels happy😛

thn the class is over

shilpa-karan chalen

karan-han lets go

but thn maya enters

maya-hey miss shilpa i think tumhe ajj akele jana hoga bcoz main karan ke sath ja rahi hoon😡

karan wants to say smething but before that shilpa says-koi baat nahi main chali jaongi😕

u enjoy

karan doesn't say anything but he doesn't feel good😕

thn karan and maya leaves

thn shilpa walking through corridoor notices karan's lucky chain lying there in the corridoor

she picks it up and thinks"mujhe ye karan ko de dena chaiye kyonki vo to iske bina kahi bhi nahi jata"

thn she goes to the tennis court and there karan and maya are already present

shilpa widout noticing anything

shilpa-karan ye lo tumhari lucky chain corridoor main mili mujhko

maya didn't lyk this and bursted out😡

maya-that is a limit

wht do u think of urself? "silly girl"😡

kya tumhe kisi ne manners nahi sikhaye

shilpa starts crying😭

maya-bas ro kar sabki sympathy pati ho aur sab ko lagta hai ki shilpa kitni bholi hai😈

she cries even more😭

karan can't tolerate this more and he spoke

karan-shut up maya!u know ki tum kya bol rahi ho😡

maya-han main janti hun.....aur ab ise bhi {to shilpa}sab sikha dungi ki ye hai kya...........apne aap ko bahut smart samajhti ho na tum....but listen i m maya sexena aur mujhse panga lekar tumne acha nahi kiya ............u idiot.are hai kya tumme....na shakal hai na akal hai..........bas sirf itna janti ho ki logon ka mood kaise spoil karte hain

u stupid...............................😡

karan can't tolerate this

he burst out wid anger and slaps tightly on maya's face👏

karan-u deserve this only.......i was mad ki maine tumse pyar kiya.sab ne mujhe roka par maine kisi ki na suni par ab mujhe sab samaj aa gaya hai

maya-but karan plz meri baat to suno

karan-its enough.......now its all over miss maya sexena......tumhari himmat kaise hui shilpa ko ye sab bolne ki.......😡

maya-i m ur girlfrnd ....main tumhari life main zyada important hun ya ye shilpa

on the other side shilpa is crying badly😭

karan-first of all u r not my girlfrnd.....and secondly shilpa is more more more important to me than u.....she is important to me than my own life....now u have got ur answer and i think now u should leave😃

maya leaves saying-i will see u mr.karan kapoor and u miss shilpa😡

nnow karan and shilpa are alone in the tennis court

karan-ab tum rona band karo

she is crying badly😭

karan consoles her by saying -hey shilpa why are u crying u should feel happy ki mera us chipkali se picha choot gaya😆

shilpa smiles a little but is very disturbed

karan takes her inside the court and make her sit on the bench and sits next to her

karan{wiping her tears}-acha ab ye rona band karo .mujhe acha nahi lagta.....nahi to main bhi ro dunga😳

he kisses her forehead😳

she hugs him saying -i m really very sorry karan😉

karan{hugging her back}-sorry ??but for what😳

shilpa-mere vajah se tumhara break up ho gaya😕

karan-to han iske liye to mujhe tumse thanx bolna chaiye us pagal se mera picha chudvane ke liye😆

she smiles and says -but mujhe really bahut bura lag raha hai i mean tumhari girlfrnd chali gayi meri vajah se😕😕

karan-to kya hua tumto nahi gayi na😉

she smiles but confused

karan-are nothing is important in my life than u.....he kisses her forehead again.......jab tum mere sath ho mujhe kisi maya ,tina ,rita,etc.etc. ki zarurat nahi😉

bcoz u r my best frnd and my everything😊

han aur rahi baat girlfrnd ki to tum ho na tum ban jana meri girl frnd😉

kyonki girl to tum ho hi aur meri frnd bhi ho aur vo bhi best frnd .to tum hui meri best girlfrnd😆v

she laughs and says acha ye lo tumhari lucky chain

karan-tum hi pehna do na......vo kya hai na mere hath us maya ki skin se touch hokar gande ho gaye hain😉

she laughs and put his chain in his neck

she rest her head on his shoulder😳

and says -promise ki hum hamesha ese hi rahenge😃

karan-oyeeee dufus ye bhi koi kehne ki baat hai......are karanshilpa sath hain ye baat sab ko pata hi........afterall u r my best girlfrnd😃

they sat there for sme tym thn shilpa says

shilpa-karan tumne apne project ke bare main socha??????/

karan-sochna kya hai tum ho na i m sure u will handle😉

shilpa-han han vo to main hi handle karungi hamesha ki tarah......but tumhe help to karni hogi na meri!!!!!!!😃

karan-vo to main karunga hi na hamesha ki tarah😉

and they laughed😆

karan-acha suno hume 3 din baad project submit karvana hai to ajj se hi shuru kar de

shilpa-ya u r right par kahan .i mean tumhare ghar ya mere ghar

karan-ajj bhaiya bhi 1 month ke liye USA chale gaye hain business ke liye

shilpa-oh!! mere mom dad bhi ENGLAND main hain....papa ki seminar ke liye unhe bhi 2 weeks lag jaenge ane main

karan-so don't worry hum tumhare ghar bana lenge project bcoz mere ghar main to already kaka{his servent frm thn whn he was a child} hain

shilpa-ok thn ajj phir sham ko mere ghar...........ok....i will wait for u......😃

karan -ok.ab chale

shilpa noded her head and says- yes

they both go hand in hand ❤️

i hope u will lyk this

plz do comment

this was my first try

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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 nicely done hun..do continue soon.. 😛
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like i tol u hw i read it... sorry but its nice update soon... 😃 😃
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😉Its 7:00 at evening

Karan enters to shilpa's place

He rings the bell

Shilpa{opens the door}-hi main tumhara hi wait kar rahi thi😃😃😃

Karan enters and both goes to shilpa's room

Karan-hey shilpa tum apna room kitna saf rakhti ho😳

Shilpa –aur tumhara bhi 😳

Karan –han vo to hai and thanx for that

Shilpa-thanx??????????but why?????

I mean I m ur best frnd so tumhe thanx kehne ki koi zarurat nahi hai😃

Karan-tumhe kisne keh diya ki tum meri best frnd ho?????????❓

Shilpa-{really very tensed}-😕-karan ye tum kya keh rahe ho……..😕😕😕 I mean ajj subah tak to main hi tumhari best frnd thi😕

Karan-han maine kab kaha ki tum meri subah tak best frnd nahi thi😉

Par sirf subah tak

Shilpa{all upset}😕-to matlab ab main tumhari best frnd nahi hoon

Karan-nahi🤢

Shilpa thn starts crying😭

Karan-tum ro kyon rahi ho

Shilpa-kyoki ab main tumhari best frnd nahi rahi na😭

Karan{very naughtly}-han kyonki ab to tum meri best girlfrnd ho na

She starts hitting him playfully and they both laughed😆

Shilpa-acha suno tumne socha hai ki humare project ka topic kya hoga???????

Karan-han socha hai……..and its very nice😳

Shilpa-to jaldi bolo na

Karan-humare project ka topic hoga ROMEO AND JULIET😉

Shilpa-wht??????????😡 Tum pagal ho gaye ho kya hum miss mehra ko kya kahenge ki mam we have researched on ROMEO AND JULIET😡

Karan-are mam ne hi to bola ki jis topic main hume zyada interest ho usi par proect banana chahiye to mera interest to isi main hai😉

Shilpa-han but ye nahi chalega…think smething more

Karan-nahi pehle mujhe 1 cup coffee bana kar do 😉……………..tumhe pata hai na mujhe tumhare hath ki coffee kitni pasand hai😉

Shilpa-ok wait😃

Karan-no wait and no late …jaldiiiiiii😳

Shilpa just ran downstairs and just thn she slipes

Shilpa{in a very loud voice}-ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ………😭KARANNNNNNNNNNNNN

Karan{listening her voice becomes scared and runs towards stairs}😕

And sees her lying over there on the stairs and is in pain

Karan just picked her up in his arms and took her to her bed😳

😳

He takes first aid box and starts apllying spray on her foot😳

Karan-kya zaroorat thi itni jaldi karne ki .aram se nahi ja sakti thi kya?????😡

Shilpa-tumhi ne to kaha tha ki no wait and no late …😕

jaldiiiiiii to main kya karti

Karan-tum poori ki poori pagal ho🤔

Shilpa{making puppy face}-ek to tumhari vajah se main itni jaldi kar ke gayi aur tum mujhe dant rahe ho😕

Karan- are yaar main to mazak kar raha tha😃

Shilpa-karan bahut dard ho raha hai😭

Karan-mujhe pata hai lekin thodi der to sehna padega na😊

Shilpa-karan 😊

Karan-hmmmmmmmm😛

Shilpa- I want coffee😉

Karan-kya??????????😕

Shilpa-kyon mere liye 1 cup coffee nahi bana sakte

Karan-nahi aisi baat nahi hai.,……….acha ruko main aata hun

Thn he goes to kitchen …..he does n't know abt how to light up the stove thn also he makes coffee for shilpa😊

Karan-tan tana !!!!!!!here is ur coffee mam😊

Shilpa-thank u

Karan-pi ke batao na kaisi hai

Shilpa{takes a sip}-😊

mmmmmmmm bahut tasty hai ..tumne pehli baar banai hai

Karan –han sirf tumhare liye😊

She feels herself so special😳

Karan-1 sip mujhe bhi do na

Shilpa-nahi ye meri jhooti hai

Karan-keh to aise rahi ho ki jaise ajj tak maine tumhara jhoota khaya nahi…..mujhe nahi pata mujhe chaiye bas

Shilpa-nahi main nahi dungi

Karan-grabs cup frm her hand and takes a sip

And the coffee came out of his mouth

Karan-chiiiiiiiiiiii kitni gandi coffee hai😵

Tum ise kaise pi rahi thi ..r u mad……aur upper se kaha ki ye yummy hai

Shilpa-vo karan tum itne pyar se bana kar laye the ki main kya karti.i don't want to break ur heart

Karan feels so nice to have her in his life😃

Karan-chalo ajj ye to pata chal gaya ki mujhe kitchen main kabhi nahi ghusna chiye

Varna kitchen store ban jaega😆

They both lauged

Shilpa{thinking}-"aur mujhe ye pata chal gay ki tum mere liye kuch bhi kar sakte ho"😳

Oh god!!!!!!1thanx for giving a frnd lyk karan to me😳

Thn she just slept on his lap

Karan on seeing this memorized her beauty and says

Tum kitni pyari ho!!!!!creases her hair and says sote hue ek dum choti si bachi lagti hai

Thn he kissed her forehead and says hamesha mere sath hi rehna zindgi bhar 😳

Thn he thinks{am I in luv wid shilpa}😳

And thinking this all he also slept there and his head lies on her head😳

They both slept

NEXT MORNING

SHILPA WAKES UP FIRST

Shilpa sees karan sleeping lyk this and says

Sote hue kitna cute lagta hai ek dum bachon ki tara bahut hi bhola sa😳

Aur vaise shaitan no.1 and laughs😆

She thinks of all there past moments and one thing come to her mind

M I IN LOVE WID KARAN😃

GUYS THIS WAS MY NEXT UPDATE

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Posted: 17 years ago
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plz yaar read and comment
if u not like it thn also comment so that i can improove myself
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😳 wah bhai wah kya baat hain kina vadia likha hain ,,,,,,,,,,,keep it up.. 😍 😃 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😳 awwwwwww so cute karan making coffeee n alll great n dnt worry ur doing great update soon n pm me 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: rihanaa

😳 awwwwwww so cute karan making coffeee n alll great n dnt worry ur doing great update soon n pm me 😊

THANX

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awesme ya...!!! love it... mke them fall in love soo...hehehe... love it hun... pme me whn u update if u can... othrwise ill frgt to check so... thx alot... 😃

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