(FF-What If) Updt.*part b.*pg.127 - Page 93

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Posted: 16 years ago
wow its amazing i love it had of you so sweet
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Posted: 16 years ago
THAT WAS A GR88 PRT.. WAITNGG 2 READ N OTHER HALF... EVEN PADMA FOLLWED DEM
THNXX, 4 D PM.. UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 16 years ago
very well wrote yaar
superb
awesome part😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
omg really tense moment!! wonder wat the plan was...plz plz cont. soon!! dying to know what''ll happen! :)
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey friends...here I am updating the next part...than for ur comments...hope u will lyk this update too..😉..

Note : Part A on pg. 124😉
WHAT IF...PADMA n RAHUL SAVES A-R???
Recap : Anji n gang reach the hotel followed by padma...she comes to know that riddhima loves armaan and makes a plan with rahul to save them from others...😳
Here I go [part b.] :
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey i read da update (part a) n it was realy nyc...cont asap
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hiiiiiii........very sorrrrrrryyyyyyyy for the late reply......was very busy.......this part was gr888........loved it a lot............thankssssssss a lot for the pm........waiting eagerly for the next part............😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Heya friedns🤗...howz all of you...I hope u all enjoyed ur diwali🥳...anyways thanx a lotfor ur lovely comments...i didnt expext to c all my previous readers commenting🤪..!!!!..tahnx a tonn friends...anyways, here is my new updt., i hope u'll appretiate it as much as u apretiated my previous update...anyways, for all those who didnt read my preaious part, here is the link : Part a.

WHAT IF...PADMA n RAHUL SAVES A-R???
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Recap : Padma comes to know about A-R, she and rahul plans to stop the interns frm knowing the truth...will they suceed???😉
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Here I go..[part b.] :
Padma narrates the whole plan to rahul..meanwhile muskaan n all come s findng rahul...
M : ye raha kaan khajura...ise to mein abhi batati hun...
An : arre muskaan ruk..[sholding her]..usese baad mein lad lena..pehele we hav to get in..
M : thik hain...RAHUL..she shouts..
Ra : haan haan..aa raha hu..chilla mat...
Then rahul goes with her...atul & anji were waiting for him..
An : Rahul...kaha chale gaye the tum, we were worried...
M : pata nahi anji, akele mein baat kar raha tha ye--
Ra : oye, tere kaan baaj rahe honge, mein koi akele mein baat nahi kar raha tha...😡😡
M : accha, oye kaankhajure, mere kaan kyun bajne lage???...kya bartan[utensil] hain kya???😡..
Both of them started fighting...
An : BAS KARO TUM DONO...she shouted...
At : Anji..plz chillao mat, tumhara BP high ho jayega...
An : shut up atul, yaha pe hum apne liye nahi aaye hain, balki riddhima ke liye aaye hain...so guys plzz...control..
Ra & M : Sorri anji...
An : Better, aacha chalo ab chale, dekhe to ki andar kya ho raha hain???..
At : Haan..chalo...
Meanwhile inside the room :
As soon as riddhima entered the room, she was shocked to see no one in there..
R : ar..arm..armaan..u de..dere???
Just then, a light focused her....she hid her face frm her hand to bear the irritation, & then walked furthur in the room...
Just then, she found armaan standing at some distance...she was really happy to c him and ran towards him as fast as she could...and hugged hum tightly..☺️☺️..
A : Ri..riddhima...kya hua tumhe???
R[crying] : shhh...armaan kuch mat bolo, bas aaise hi raho thodi der, plzzz...
A[tensed] : Riddhima, roo kyun rahi ho??..ab to mein vaapas aa gaya hun na...plz dont cry, he said kissing his hair...
Both of them were in the moment for 5 mins...
R [straighting up] : I missed you soo much armaan, kaha the tum???..
A : awww jaanu, even i miseed you a lott...
Just then the clock striked 12:00...
A : Happy Birthday Riddhima..🥳..said armaan kissing her forehead..
R : Thanx a lott armaan...this is my best b'day ever..she said hugging him tightly..🤗☺️
A : arre baba, ab yahi khadi rahogi ya cake bhi cut karogi???..said armaan taking her in his arms...riddhima blushed..
R : ar..armaan..kaha le jaa raho ho mujhe???..mein khud bhi to chal sakti hun na...
A : Ya riddhima, but aaj ka din meri princesses ka hain, so mein uske liye wo sab karunga jo wo chahati hain..[after a puase]..lekin tab jab wo meri baahon mein mere saath jayegi...Riddhima blushed again..."OYE HOYE"...
Then armaan took riddhima to the corner of the hall, which had a round table lid beautifully with candles...it had a beautifully decorated cake on it...something of this type :
R : Wow armaan...CHOCLATE..!!!..yummmyyy...!!!!...tumhe kaise pata ki choclate mera fav. flavour hain???
A : kyunki wo mera bhi fav. flavour hain...Riddhima blushed...
R : accha armaan, ab mujhe to neeche utare do, or else how will i cut this cake..??
A : Nahi, aaj to tum cake meri baahon mein rehekar hi katogi...
Riddhima then blew the candels, made a wish and then cut the cake, then both armaan-riddhima fed each other...
R : hmmm...yummmyyy...!!!!...wow armaan, ye cake to bahut hi accha hain, kaha se laye??
A : excuse me madam!!..ye cake mein kahin se laya nahi hun, balki mein khud tumhare liye banaya hain, onli n onli for U...
R[realli happy] : ARMAAN..., tum jhoot nahi bol rahe na...
A : nahi baba...
Riddhima was realli happy to hear what armaan just said, and without thinking she just gave a small peck on armaan's lips..armaan was shocked on her sudden reaction & stood dere totally awstruck, on the other hand, when riddhima realised what had just happened, she just hid her face and turned her back towards armaan and started moving slowly...☺️☺️☺️
Armaan then caught hold of her dupatta...
A[teasing her] : kaha jaa rahi ho basket...???
Riddhima did'nt answer, then armaan went close to her, she had goosebumps in her stomach...she tried to run but now armaan caught hold of her wrist, she was really embarrased but just loved the moment...armaan came more closer to her...and then, hugegd her frm back & kissed her neck twice...riddhima was realli helpless, she could'nt do anytthing, actually she didnt want to do anything...then after 2 mins armaan left riddhima, but she was standing in the same postition, still lost in her own world...and then suddenly TAP..!!!..armaan claped once...
A : kaha kho gaye thi riddhima??
R : wo..wo arm..armaan..ku..kuc...kuch nahi..wo..wo to..tho bas aii..aiise hi...accha...btw..mere gifts kaha hain???...she said trying to change the topic..
A : arre haan, mein to bhul hi gaya tha, acche ye rahe tumhare gifts, se hain taking out the gifts frm under the table, Riddhima counted them up, as armaan piled them on the table,1,2,3,4,5...10...20..she counted till 25...
R : Armaan, ye sab kya hain???...itne saare gifts???..
A : Riddhima, ye sab to tumhare saamne kuch bhi nahi hai, you are more special to me then anyone else...
R : aww armaan..tahnx a lott..!!!..
A : accha ab kholke to dekho ki in gifts mein hain kya???..
R : haan...haa...and she opens all the gifts...
Now lets have a look wats going outside :
The whole gang was finding a way to get inside the hall, but could'nt find any..
At : arre yaar, ye kya baat hain, andar jaane ka sirf ek darwaza...very bad..!!!
An : atul..shhh..
Rahul by mistake stepped on muskaan's feet...
M : OYE RAHUL KE BACCHE, DEKH KE NAHI CHAL SAKTA HAIN KYA???
R : OYE, TO TU CHILLA KYUN RAHI HAIN, JAAN BHUJKE TO NAHI RAKHA HAIN NAA PAWW..
M : OYE KAANKHAJUURE--
An : MUSKAAN AND RAHUL....SHHHHHHHHHH....guys plz yaar, plzzzzzzzzzzz....chup ho jao...phir ghar pe jaake aaram se lad lena..
Just then rahul's phone rang...
R : ex..excuse me...and he went far frm them...
R : haan padma aunty, boliye...
P : rahul beta,...mujhe andar jaane ka ek darwaza mila hai, tum kaha ho..plz jaldi se enterance pe aajao...
R : thik hain aunty..aata hun...
Then he went to anji...
R : I am realli sorri guys, hospital mein emergency hai...will hav to rush..!!!..
An : okh rahul, you leave..byee..
and he went...then suddenly..
At : Arre lekin guys, hum to dr.keerti se permission leke aaye the ki hum raat ko duty nahi kar sakte, phir rahul kahan gaya??
M : haan yaar, aur dr.keerti ne to hame permit bhi kar diya tha, zarror wo hame buddhu bana kar chala gaya...
An : arre guys, so why are we waisting time, chalo...
Meanwhile, rahul met padma..
R : pheww...kisi tarah bahana banake aaya hun...so kaha hai wo gate..
P : Chalo, tumhe dikhati hun...and padma took Rahul to a back door, it was locked but Rahul managed to open it...
R : chalo, andar chalte hain...
Meanwhile, anji n all were trying to find rahul...but there was no trace of him...
M : kaha jaa sakta hain...
At[realli sad] : Rahul, tune mujhe dhoka diya...mujhe to bata sakta tha kaha jaa raha hain...
An : Atul...plzzz...
Just then Muskaan , anji n atul herd a voice...
An : Arre..aaisa laga ki kisi ne kuch toda hain, maybe a lock or something, lets go and see...
Meanwhile, what was happening inside :
Riddhima was busy opening the gifts just when rahul showed up..
R : ARMAAN-RIDDHIMA...
A[shocked] : Rahul, tu yaha???...kaise???
R : Guys, sirf mein hi nahi, puri gang hain yaha pe...
A : What???
R : Mein tumhe baad mein sab kuch bata dunga, abhi armaan tu chal...
A : Aur riddhima???..
P : RIDDHIMA KO MEIN SAMBHAL LUNGI...
Both A-R were shocked...
R[realli shocked and scared too] : Maa...aa..aap...ya...yaaha...ka..kaaise???
P : Wo sab baadmein, rahul, anji aur sab yahi aa rahe hain, plz tum armaan ko le jaao...
AFTER 5 MINS.
Anji, Atul n Muskaan showed up....they saw riddhima hugging some1...
At : Oh no!..yani ki hamaa shak yahkeein mein badal gaya...riddhima--
An : RIDDHIMA...TUM KYA KAR RAHI HO YAHA PAR???
Shouting, she went near her & just pulled...without watching the face of the person riddhima was hugging, she sharted shouting on her...
An : RIDDHIMA...TUMHE KYA LAGA, AGAR TUM MUJHE KUCH NAHI BATAOGI, TO KYA MUJHE PATA NAHI CHALEGA, I KNOW EVERYTHING, MEIN JAANTI HUN TUM YAHA KISI SE MILNE AAI HO...AUR ITNI BADI BAAT TUMNE MUJHSE CHUPAI...????...BUT Y???--
R : lekin di...aap me..meri baat to suno..
An : KYA SUNU MEIN...I DONT NO, TELL ME HU THE PERSON IS..I KNOW KAUN HAIN WO..
Just then padma showed up...
P : mein hun wo...
An[confused] : mo--mom aap...ya--yaha??...aaiise???..
P : Haane beta..mein riddhima ko surprise dena chahati thi, isliye ye sab kiya...aur tumhe apni behen pe itna bhi bharosa nahi hain???
An : wo..wo..ac..actu...actually...ridzi..i am realli sorri mein itna stupid tareeke se behave kiay...i...i...am soo...sooorry....
R : its ok di...plz dont say sorri...
Then atul and muskaan also showed up...
At & M : hame maaf kardo riddhima..we are realli sorri..
R : its ok yaar...chalo mera b'day celebrate kartein hain...
Then anji saw all the gifts..
An : mom..aapne riddhima ko ye gifts diye???
P : gifts??...accha...haan...wo sab mein hi diye hain??..
Then she slowly whispered in riddhima's ears...
P : hmmm...lagta hain mera daamad puri tayyari ke saath aaya tha..!!!😳😳.
Phew..!!!!..Finally...!!!!...I hope u guys will enjoy this part...hope u all will lyk it..i know it is not that gr8 part, but i tried my best..!!!..anyways love all of u loadss...keep reading my FF and giving ur suggestions and comments...😃
Edited by ksdbstjodi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey ridz u said u'll update soooooon nd ths is ur soooooon wowwwwwwwwwwww bt nywys it ws superb chooooo chweeeeet sare hath dhoke piche padgaye arridz ke hehehehe lvd it a lot yaar........wow arridz spndng thir momnt wth ech othr how cute nd romantic ar nw bck wowwwwwwwwwwww ridz mssd him sooooooo mch awwwwwwwwwwwww choooooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeet..............omgggggggg yaar paddy to toooooogud hai omggg arridz scenes wre soooooooo romantic ar to pura pagal hai uske pyar mein omggg 25gifts how cute yaar nd paddy nd rahul mde thm run wowwwwwwwwwwwwww kitni sch a sweatheart cnt wait fr d nxt prt......
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna


Edited by yachna - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
gr8 update riddhima...rahul n paddy made fool of angie-atul-muski lolz....wonderful plan or rather full proof plan...coming 2 AR, i must say armaan gave a beautiful suprise 2 ridz...1st sending the car with the dress, then the cake n 25 gifts gosh that was really very sweeet of him...and u had witten it beautifully...really loved it...cont soon n thanks 4 the pm


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