MY DMG (imagenary story)PART 32 on pg 14

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Nruti

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Posted: 17 years ago

#11

thnxs guys for apreceating my work this was writen well befor but i never had guts to post it but then i got very gud response from other forums so thought that i shud put it on here i will defenatly continue but i have final so after the final like by tonight i wil post another part once agine thanxs a ton for ur luvly comesnt
sory cud not apereceat ur coment one by one coz i m out of time g2g 4 exame c ya later

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shalini jain

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: arluver15
thnxs guys for apreceating my work this was writen well befor but i never had guts to post it but then i got very gud response from other forums so thought that i shud put it on here i will defenatly continue but i have final so after the final like by tonight i wil post another part once agine thanxs a ton for ur luvly comesnt
sory cud not apereceat ur coment one by one coz i m out of time g2g 4 exame c ya later

hey no pro yaar do ur studies r more imp nd ALL D BST FR UR EXAMS......nd wow u'll post tonight wow eagrly waitng fr ur prt.......
tccc
lu yachu😃

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Nirali

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Posted: 17 years ago

#13

its awesme UPDATE soon...!!! 😃

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Nruti

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Posted: 17 years ago

#14

PART 24
kirti n shubhanker goes to kirti's house kirti cahng in to her yellow sari 4 shubhanker n she comes out after seein kirti shubhanker is lost in her buty n kirti is blushing
kirti: chala
shubhanker: ha chalo
they both leaves n goes to blue water n al the intern also goes there to spy on them they al r looking @ them n making fun of them coz shubhanker is keep on swating n kirti is soooooooooooooooo blushing then they al desided to go to them surprise them
ridz: nahi huma nahi jana chahiya ager hum chala gay to bahut problem ho jayagi aur washa bhi who dono kuch bol to nahi raha hai
anji: ya ridz is rit
armaan: no she is not rit just look @ them they r not even looking @ each other i think v shud help them what say
atul & rahul agrees n they start going in so girls also joint them
they al go to kirti n shubhanker after seeing them both of them get shoked n shubhanker gets very nerves n spills water on kirti
kirti goes to wash room to celean her sari
armaan: sir ya ap kya kar raha ho ap log to kuch bol hi mahi raha ho ager ap nahi bolanga to koi aur dr kirti ko lajayaga
shubhanker : lakin use dekha ta hi mara to pasina chut jata hai
rahul: dekho main bhi to muskan se bat karta hun muje to kuvh nahi hota hai
armaan: exactly
shubhanker: u mean that u luv dr mushkan???????
rahul n mushakan shar a look
rahul: hai hum dono ek dusra se pyaa kara tahai
shubhnker is shoked to here this
shubhanker: lakin ap log to.....
rahul: ap hum log ko chodo aur dr kirti ko pakdo aure unse bat karo na lo who yaha pa hi arahai hai ager apna unse bat nah iki na to main kisi aur ko ap ki love story bigad na min bhej dunga
shubhanker thik hai main bat karta hun lakin plz mari love soty mat bigad na
kirti comes there n sits besid shubhanker
shubhanker: i m sorry kirti who mara hat lag gaya tha
kirti: koi bat nahi
shubhnker: kirit do u want to dace????
kirti: sure
they both goes to dance floor n dance
every1 is shoked after seeing shubhnker's behaver no sweeting no aaaaaaaaa n no who main
armaan: rahul kya bat tu to bad expert lagta hai is mamla main
rahul: kya kare mushkna se pyaar jo karta hun
they al laugh
then they al leves them alone n they al go to their own house
@ armaan's house
armaan goes insid his house his dad was reading some medical journals
armaan: dad muje apse kuch bat karni hai
dad: hai kya bat hai
armaan: dad main ek ladki se pyaar karata hun
dad: dr ridhim sashnk gupta se rit
armaan was shoked: dad ap ko kasa pata
dad: main tumhara bap hun armaan aur muje tara kamra min se ya tasvir mili
armaan: ohhhhh to dad
dad: hai to kab chala dr shshnk se bat karna ka liya
armaan gets al exited n hugs his fater : abhi isi waqt chala
dad: nahi
armaan: kyun???????
dad: rat main ya bat karna nahi ja sakta
armaan lookes @ the clock n it was late
armaan: ok then kya hum kal.............
dad: thik hai hum kal hi chalanga
@ ridz house
ridz cant sleep she is keep on thinking about armaan
then she think about al the cut moments of their n start blushing
then ridz get a SMS from armaan
" ridz dad nahi mana mana unko bahut samja naki kosis ki lakin who to man hi nahi raha hai unka kahna hai ki tum mar alaya k nahi ho"
after reading this ridz get shoked n start crying n reply to SMS
" kyun muje mai nashi kya kami hai"
armaan reads this n get that she might b crying so he calles her
armaan: hello
ridz: armaan tum bat o na muje mai nashi kya kami hai jo tumha ra dad mar abar amin asa bol raha hai she is still crying
armaan: ridz plz stop crying i was just joking dad mane gaya hai aur hum log kal tumhara ghar ana wala hia
ridz get angrey: kya armaan i will kill u asa koi mazak karta hai
armaaan: who to ap na pehla hi kardiya hai aur kitni bar apna ashik ko marangi ap
ridz start blusing n hang up the phone
next morning
armaan n his dad goes to gupta house
ever1 is there shashnk, nani, padma, anji, armaan, ridz, n dr rahul(armaan's dad)
ridz was hiding behind the cortain n trying to leasin to the conversation
dr rahul: dr shashnk ap ko to pata hi hoga ki armaan aur ridhima ek dusra se pyaar karta hai
shashnk: ya
dr rahul: to main soch raha tha ki koi acha sa mahurat dekha kar inki engagment kar dani chahiya
shashnk: ya u r rit abhi anjli ki bhi shadi baki hai isi liya shadi abhi nahi ho sakti lakin hum unki sagay kardata hai
they call the pandit to give them a date n pandit gives them a date that is 1 week away from now
every1 gets very happy espacily armaan n ridz is jumping in her room
then padma comes in to her room to bring her out side
then ridz comes to n armaan n every1 gets up n make a plce 4 her to sit then ridz dr rahul ka ashirwad laki hai then dr rahul gives her muh dekhaya n fix the engagment
in the hospital
in the locker
atul is waiting 4 anji n rahul n musakn r staring @ each other
armaan, anji, n ridz enters
atul: thnk god tum log agaya werna muje hart attack ana wala tha
armaan: kyun
atul: dekh na tu in do no ko kab se asha khada hai
armaan n every1 start making fun of them n they both come back to reality
armaan: kya yaar rahul tu bhi na use dekh taraha ta hi aho bhi itni dur se ja uska pas ja kuch pyaar bhari bat kar use
mushkan start blushing
armaan: are ya to blush kar rahi hai lakin aj to koi aur bhi blusah karna wali hai
atul: kon dr kirti na
armaan: nahi basket
atul: basket basket kyun blush karaga who koi ladki thodina hai
armaan: aba champ main rid zki bat kar araha hun
rahul: ohhhhhhhhh kyun tum do no shadi kara raha ho kya??
ridz: nah ihamari engagment fix ho gay hai
muskan: kya kab hai
anji: ek week ka bad hai
rahul: wow congrates yaar n he hugs armaan
atul: ab mari bari n then atul huges armaan
then atul try to hug ridz but armaan comes in between
armaan: aba champ kuch to sharam kar ya mari hai tu kyun chance mar araha hai
atul: are lakin ya mari dost hai
armaan: aba to anji abhi mari dost hai mai nuse hug karu kya n he try to hugs anji but atul stopes him
atul: acha main samj gaya tuje dikhana ki zarorat nahi hai
musakn: ap log bhi na comgrats ridz n then she hugs ridz
anouncement: sara intern dr kirti ko report kara
they al go to nurse station
dr kirti: kya bat hai aj ap log nahut khus lag rahai ho aje pahli bar mana ap logo ko itna kush dekha duty pa kabhi nah idekha tha
armaan: who dr kirti mari aur ridz i mean dr ridhimaki sagay paki ho gay hai
dr kirti: are ya ko sach main kushiki bat hai congrtulation dr armaan aur dr ridhima god bless u.
then they al start chatering
dr kirti yells @ them: iska ya mat ala b nahi hai ki ap log ki duty nahi hai
then she alotes duty to every1
dr armaan aur dr ridhima ap log canser ward mian rahanga, dr rahul ap aur dr mushkan genral ward main aur dr atul ap path lab main aur dr anjali ap muje mara case main assist karanagi
they al r happy except atul his face is very sad
dr kirti: kya hua dr atul back to work
they al leave
then she stopes ridz n armaan tell them to come to her cabin
they both go to her cabin
armaan& ridz: can v come in
kirti: ya aya
armaan: apna humko bulaya
kirti: hai ya puchana ka liya bulaya ki apki sagay kabh hai
ridz: who next week saturday ko hai
kirti: gud ager ap log ko kabhi bhi chuti ki zarorat ho to ap muje bata dana
armaan: thnk u dr kirti
then they both leave
in the canser ward AR r working very well
armaan gets a page n it says that ur gf is here to see u
ridz ask him waht's the matter
armaan: muje mare gf milna ayi hai
ridz: kya????????
armaan: ridz asa kuch bhi nahi hai muje khud ko pata nahi kon hai
armaan levase to see who has come
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Edited by arluver15 - 17 years ago

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hydrogurl001

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Posted: 17 years ago

#15

aww cuute part!! sagai pakki!! wooo!! gf? 😕 is it bhi?.or his aunt or something? 😕

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Nidha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#16

nice one please update it soon

"KitnA Pyaar Karte hain tumse
Kaash TumkO bhi yeH ehsaaS ho JayE
Magar AisA na Ho Ke
Woh hosH mein tab Aaaye
Jab HuM gehri neenD mein so JaayE"

Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago

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shalini jain

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Posted: 17 years ago

#17

hey wow yaar brilliant prt shub hamesha sweat karta rehta hai wow rahuuul ne himmat di wow grt yaar thy wre spyng ovr thm guuuuuud himmat de rahe the koi or uda ke le jayga hmmmmmmmmmmmm nd wow rahul ar dad pata tha gud nd wow armaan bhi na mazak kare bina reh nahi sakta aw rula diya bt i am soooooooooooo happy their engangmnt wre fxd aftr 1 week wow excitng...............................bth wre jumpmg...........nd keerti congratulat thm........vryyyyyyyyyyyy guuuuuuuuuuuuuuud............wonderful prt...........dyng 2 read nxt prt
cont soooooooooooon
luv yachu

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Nruti

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Posted: 17 years ago

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PART 25
armaan goes to the nurse station n ask sis lovely who has came.
sis lovely: who rahi n some one comes from behind n hugs armaan
its none other then our sweet lil minnie
armaan is very happy to see her
armaan: are tum yaha kasa agay
rahul, anji, atul, muskan ya to tum hari sgay ki gift hai
minnie: bf tum to muje bhul gaya tha na
armaan: nahi bilkul nahi bhula tha
minnie: to kya hua suna ha ki tumhari dr ridhima se sagay ho rahi hai
armaan play full: ya to kya
armaan tells every1 that ridz is very angry coz the pager said that it was one of my gf
minnie : to jak unko iretat karta hai
they al go to locker room armaan uses some lipstic on his chick
n comes out when he comes out he sees ridz
ridz comes to him n lookes @ the lipstick
ridz: armaan tumhara chik pa ya lipstck kasa ayi mana to tumko kiss nahi kiya
armaan: ya...... ya to sayna ni di wahi mujse milna ayi thi how nice of her itna saal ka bad bhi muje milna ayi thi
ridz gets very angry n try to hit him but se looses he control n slipes n armaan holds her n they both r lost in each other
every1 comes in and start pratending that they did not saw that but still make some noices
atul says this at top of his voice: ARE RAHUL TUNA ARMAAN KO DEKHA ??????
rahu does the same: NHI PAT NHI KAHA CHALA GAYA
but AR r still lost in each other
musakn muje try karnada
muskan @ her top of voice like a loud speaker: ANJI TUNA RIDZ KO KHI DEKHA HAI KYA????
then AR get their sence n armaan let go of her n then ridz wipes the lipstick with her dupatha
armaan: ridz ya to mana kiya tha ya sif mazak tha muje ya pa milna.......
minnie cuts armaan n says : main aya hun
ridz gets very happy to her n runs to her n hugs her very tight
ridz: kashi ho tum
minnie: main to thik hun lakin tumna mara bf ko kyun laliya mujse
ridz: koi bat nahi ager tum chaho to mai nuse chod dati hun
armaan gets lil angery but every1 laugh @ it n so does armaan
[ok guys now i have t oskip fat coz i want them to get engaded n i have a big things in my mind]
so its the engagment day
armaan, rahul n atul al r getting ready
armaan: ara yaar ya mari engagment hai aur tum log itna kyun saj rahai ho
rahul: tara kya jata hai
atul: aur was abhi hum log who item karna wala hai to uska liya to hamin taya hona hi padaga
then they al go to gupta resedence al the rituls r done n AR r final engaged
then sudenly lights goes away
armaan, ridz, atul, anji, rahul, muskan r desapered then they come back with new colthes
armaan - wearing jense red t-shart n black jacket
ridz - wering light pink dress(short gown up to her nee)
anji - wearing skirt which low back less top
atul - jense n green sport t-shirt
rahul - wears a jense a bule shits n a jacket
muskan - minnie skirt n top
then ther is a music
tana tana tana tana
tana tana tana tana
armaan:
HOS UDA DAT HAI MARA NURA MUJASIM ASA TERA
tana tana tana tana
tana tana tana tana
tana tana tana tana
tana tana tana tana
armaan: armaan goes near ridz n dace around her
TERA SARAFA KASHA HAI HUMDAM
TERA SARAFA KASHA HAI HUMDAM [DUM DUM]
JASA CHAMKA DHUP MAIN SHABNAM [NUM NUM]
JAB SE HUM HAI TUMSE MILA KASAM HUM RAHA NHI HUM
OHHHHHHHHHH
KIYA KIYA KYA KIYA HAI SANAM
KIYA KIYA KYA KIYA HAI SANAM
tana tana tana tana
tana tana tana tana
tana tana tana tana
tana tana tana tana
tana tana tana tana
tana tana tana tana
rahul: staring rit ti musakn sings this
CHAHRA PA TERA HAI ROSAN SAVERA
ZULFO MA TERE HAI DILKAS ANDHER
muskan: comes to rahul sings standing near him
JAN JAO MARI JAN MIAN TUJ PA JAN DADUN
DIL KASHI SE HAI DILKA SAR ARMMAN VAN DADUN
armaan:
CHAHRA PA TERA HAI ROSAN SAVERA
ZULFO MA TERE HAI DILKAS ANDHER
ridz: walkes around armaan singing this
MARI NAZAR MAIN TU ASHA HAI JANU
RAB JANA MERA SACHI AUR MAHI JANU
atul: atul stares @ anji n sings
KIYA KAH DIYA HAI TUMNA YA JANME
KIYA KAH DIYA HAI TUMNA YA JANME
OHH
JAB SE HUM HAI TUMSE MILA KASAM HUM RAHA NHI HUM
OHHHHHHHHHHH
KIYA KIYA KYA KIYA HAI SANAM
KIYA KIYA KYA KIYA HAI SANAM
anji: anji is just dancing n atul was al shoked n think that anji is singin this only 4 him
UR MY LOVE UR MY LIFE I CANT GO WITHOUT U BY MA SIDE
DO U R BELONG UHNNNNNNNNNNNN
OOHHHHHHHHHHHH YHAAAAAAAAAAA
tana tana tana tana
tana tana tana tana
tana tana tana tana
tana tana tana tana
rahul: rahul get hold of muskan n singes this
TARI ADAYA HUMA BAKHUD BNAYA
JADO CHALAYA KOI JADU CHALAYA
muskan: muskan trying get out of his greab n with blusinh she sings
DIL KI BAT MARA DIL KI BAT JO TUMNA JAN LI HAI
TUM KO KYA KHABER TUM NA JAN TUM NA MARE JAN LI HAI
armaan: goes near ridz n holdes her hand
TARI ADAYA HUMA BAKHUD BNAYA
JADO CHALAYA KOI JADU CHALAYA
ridz: putes his hand on armaan's hand n sings while looking @ his eyes
MARA KHYA LO MAIN DIN RAT HO TUM
MARI WAFA AUR MARA SAATH HO TUM
arman: pulles ridz toward him n start dancing with her while singing
KIYA KAH DIYA HAI TUMNA YA JANME
KIYA KAH DIYA HAI TUMNA YA JANME
OHH
JAB SE HUM HAI TUMSE MILA KASAM HUM RAHA NHI HUM
OHHHHHHHHHHHH
KIYA KIYA KYA KIYA HAI SANAM
KIYA KIYA KYA KIYA HAI SANAM
tana tana tana tana they do a lil salsa
tana tana tana tanaon this music
tana tana tana tana
tana tana tana tana
tana tana tana tana
tana tana tana tana
all the boyzzzzzzzz: doind al the hot moves in fron of their ladies
TERA SARAFA KASHA HAI HUMDAM
TERA SARAFA KASHA HAI HUMDAM [DUM DUM]
JASA CHAMKA DHUP MAIN SHABNAM [NUM NUM]
JAB SE HUM HAI TUMSE MILA KASAM HUM RAHA NHI HUM
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
KIYA KIYA KYA KIYA HAI SANAM
KIYA KIYA KYA KIYA HAI SANAM
KIYA KIYA KYA KIYA HAI SANAM
KIYA KIYA KYA KIYA HAI SANAM
KIYA KIYA KYA KIYA HAI SANAM
KIYA KIYA KYA KIYA HAI SANAM
________________________EPISOD ENDS_______________________
Sorry guys i dont know how to make this colorful so can any one plz plz plz tell me how can i do it

Edited by arluver15 - 17 years ago

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Nidha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#19

really a nice one thank u for updateing please continue soon

Jalate hai hum apne dil ko diye ki tarah
Teri Zindagi main khushiyon ki roshni lane ke liye
Seh jate hai har chubhan ko apne pairon tale
Teri Rahon main phool bhichane ke liye

Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago

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shalini jain

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Posted: 17 years ago

#20

hey omg yaar it ws outstandng prt yaar vryyyyyyyyyyyy vryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
wonderful wow minnie is bck wow sooooooooooo happpppppppy nd ridz wre angry on him abt tht lipstick mrk heeeeeeee nd aftr saw minnie she ws sooooo happpppppppppppppy.............yaar koi baat nahi main use chod du heeeeeeee nd i lvd tht momnt whre bth holdng ech othr nd all wre shoutng ..........jst lvd it nd lst their engangemnt scene ws rckd yaar totaly superb..........all wre sngng nd dncng wth their partners hayeeeeeeeeeeee soooooooooooooooooo luvly prt............
cont sooooooooooon
luv yachu.... 😃

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