Fate or Fantasy AK Note Pg 9 - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks for the lovely ff Rhea 👏 👏. Take your time!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 3- Romance or Destruction

"Angu baby where are we going?" "Were going to Paris." "What really I love you." "Love you too." "Okay then I don't need to pack too much." "Why?" "Because we will go shopping too." "Oh No, I thought our two weeks would be in bed just you and me." Angad said naughtily. "No way, I need to shop and go sight seeing." said Kripa excitedly. "Kripa we need some alone time." "I don't care." she said sternly.

Now Angad and Kripa are in Paris for their Honeymoon. "Finally were in our room." "Come on Angad I am tired let's sleep." "Why me?" "I can't sleep unless I cuddle you." Kripa replied mischievously. "Let's do something better." "Like?" "Let's have some fun, just you and me and fun on the bed." Angad said naughtily. "No Angad I am tired." "Don't worry this will make you feel untired." "Well you can't do it if you can't catch me." "Who says I need to?" "What?!" Angad grabs Kripa and picks her up. "Now where were we?" "Angad!" she blushes. He throws her on the bed and jumps on top of her. Scene blurs………..

Tanya is pacing in her room thinking of a way to get Angad. "Hey Tanya if you want I can help." She looks up to see Prithivi. – pause

Prithivi Bose- An actor. Not as famous as Angad but famous. Met Kripa at a fashion show and developed feelings for her, is he good or bad you decide. – back to story

"Hey Prithivi!" "Hi Tanu, I can help you get Angad." "Really?" "Yeah but I have a condition." "What is it?" "I want Kripa." "Okay they're on their honeymoon." "Where?" "I don't know but I will find out."

"Angad it is so cozy out here on the beach." "You know that the bikini you are wearing is sexy, it's to tempting." "Angad Khanna learn to shut up." "No Mrs. Khanna." And he starts to tickle her and they laugh.

Prithivi meets Tanya and says "I found out where they are for Honeymoon." "Really?!" "Yes!" "Then where?" "Paris!" "Okay we have to keep an eye on them." She laughs evilly and Prithivi laughs with her.

Back in Paris, Angad and Kripa are sitting in bed with a white satin sheet wrapped around them; they are playing with each other in the sheet. "I can't believe we are going back tomorrow Angad." "Not any more." "But why two weeks are over?" "I extended our 2 week honeymoon to a one month honeymoon." "Thanks Angad!" "We will have so much fun." Angad replied naughtily.

Their one month honeymoon is over. They are back home and the servant comes and say "Kripa Madam a Prithivi Sir came to meet you." "Why?" "I don't know he said it is personal." "Okay thanks!" servant leaves. "Kripa who is Prithivi?" "An actor I met at one of your fashion shows." "Oh Okay!" Kripa's thoughts *Why does Prithivi want to see me?*

Hey guys im back with the next part, and thanks for those who missed me. I forgot to post the part yesterday but here it is. I might not post the next part till next Saturday cause I have to start writing part 4 still. Plz do comment I am looking forward to them. And yes I did make up a title for my ff finally it's called Fate or Fantasy now. And thanks to Horia for giving me suggestions, I was typing this part up on Friday and this name came to mind and it went with my ff.

Love Ya All

Rhea😛

Edited by superstar15 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
prithvi and tanya need to get a life!! they belong together!!

godd angad is naughty! lol!! and he extended his two week honeymoon to a month!! haha!! the guy surely loves kripa a lot!!

cute part!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 I love angad he is tooo naughty awesome dear. 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
fab part
finally AK r together
i want to kick the prithvi & Tanya...
contineu soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
hey great part..continue soon.. 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Everybody, I have some bad news for you my exams are coming so my new part wont be till June 16 sorry but i have exams to study for and they are importan for me i really want to do good and thanx to those who are stil reading this ff and i have something else to say from my other note to the new part i only got 7 comments is that seriously how many ppl read my ff i feel really bad i feel as if im not a good writer so i am thinking about stopping this ff cuz now my silent readers are not even commenting and those who comment i really apperciate i hope u understand for my exams.

Thanx
Rhea 😊

Edited by superstar15 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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That's It guys it seems as if you don't care now i think i might just stop writing i fee very upset it makes me feel really bad that no one cares about what i post.

Edited by superstar15 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
hey juz caught ur FF!!
gud work gurl!!
👏
do continue soon n pm me if possible 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys Im back from exams and now i will cont my ffs but im still writing the part for this ff but i am not going to post a part till i get 3 comments so u need to comment for me to post parts im not going to post them if ur going to act like this.

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