Shaadi Ka Ladoo - 5

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afreen

@Afreen22

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Posted: 17 years ago

#761

mindblowing part rukz.....it was awesome...ur a gr8888888 writer yaar....jaldi continue karna 😛

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lakshmi

@meow23

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Posted: 17 years ago

#762

Originally posted by: rukz
thanks guys...and a big one to you meow23...sorry i think i dont knw or might have forgotten ur name....thankyou...this part would not have been great without ur brilliant ideaa.... 😉

d prt is brilliant becoz u wrote it amzngly well.....................well my name is lakshmi........ dat was an amzng prt.... waitng 4 d nxt prt

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kunjan

@choco_girl

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Posted: 17 years ago

#763

hey it was a mindblowing part.... 😛
great... 😃 superb.... 😉 faboulous... 😳

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@R1U2K3

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Posted: 17 years ago

#764

HELLO everyone...thanx a lot for ur comments...i know kafi logo ke exams chal rahey hai...thats okay...its good to see many people's comment and thank God ke ab ek din mein 2 pages to bhar hi jatey hai....alright...i am going to continue tab tak...aur ekrti rahun gey...aur app sab ke yehi merzi hai ke ridhima should give the test...to ab dekho...ridhima test zaroor dege..... 😉

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Posted: 17 years ago

#765

Armaan opened his eyes*
(usne sab suna tha jo ridhima keh rahi thi)

Armaan to himself
A:kyun kerti ho tum aisa ridhima....hamesha mujhey ghalat sabit ker deti ho...mein kitna bewakoof hun...tumahre poori baat bhi nahi suni...aur tum per gussa ho gaya...mein kyun

bhool gaya tha ke ab meri ek beti bhi hai aur mujhey...humien uska khayal bhi rakhna chahiye...aisey mein.........mujhey maaf kerdo ridhima...i am sorry...
Ridhima till then comes out of the bathroom and is wearing a white silk night gown..she is actually kind of surprised of not seeing armaan in the room...she comes out and searches

for armaan everywhere...
Finally her search ends when she sees armaan sitting next to arima's cot in her room...
Armaan is now talking to arima who is sleeping in her cot..
A:arima...daddy is very bad...u should hate him....ajj unho ne apney matlab ke liye appko bhula diya...mein ye kaisey bhool gaya ke app ab meri zindagi ka ek hissa ho aur app ka

khayal rakhna mera farz hai...chii...aj mujhey apney app pe sharam a rahi hai...pleaase ager ho sakey to apney daddy ko maaf ker dena..
he leaned forward and kissed her forehead..and said i am sorry Angel...please forgive me*
Armaan's eyes were filled with tears...
As soon as he turned he found ridhima standing in the corner and sobbing..
Armaan usse dekh ker bohat sharminda tha issi liye without saying anything just looked at ridhima for a minute or so and then left...
Armaan went outside in the balcony and sat on the swing there...
He cried...cried out loud..
Ridhima came over there and sat next to him..
R:armaan kia hua....armaan...
A:he hugged her tight and said i am sorry ridhima...mujhey maaf ker do...still crying...mein bohat bura hun...mein ne tumhara dil dukhaya hai...i am sorry....
R:armaan aisa mat kaho...
A:kyun nahi ridhima..kyun..her baar mein hi ghalat hota hun aur tum mujhey meri ghalati ko manney bhi nahi deti...i dont deserve to be ur husband..i am not a good father either....lekin ho sakey to mujhey maaf ker dena....
He then left from there aswell leaving ridhima in tears..

Ridhima again followed him but then stopped when found armaan in his bed turned the face the other way trying to sleep...
she dint bother to disturb him as he was already very upset..
instead she went ahead and lifted the quilt on top of armaan...
Armaan still sobbing...
ridhima turned off the lights...

*next morning*
Armaan's alarm.....Trinnn Trinnnn Trinnnn Trinnnn
R:armaan utho....6 baj gaye hai...utho humien deir ho rahi hai...ajj test bhi hai
A:kia hai ridhima.....yawning....soney do
R:uffo armaan...ajj test hai...late nahi hona humien atleast mujhey to late nahi hona!
Armaan was surprised...
A:kkia!
R:kia?
A:kia kaha tumne?
R:kia kaha mein ney
A:ridhima....tum test de rahi ho???
R:haan!
A:lekin tumne to.....
ridhima went closer to armaan...held his hand and sat on the bed
R:mein ney kal raat ko bohat socha..aur is nateje per pohanchi ke test dene mein kia hai...arima ke liye mein test dunge..aur shaid doctor bhi ban jaoge lekin doctor baney ka baad mein leave manglo ge..u know..kuch salon ke liye...fiqr mat kero..itni asaani se pecha nahi choro ge...beech beech mein aonge sanjeevani...apney patients se milney..
Armaan's eyes were filled with tears...
He hugged ridhima tight...
A:i love u ridhima....i love u....mujhey maaf kerdo...
R:armaan...ab ager tumne ek aur baar mafi mangi na to mein tumse naraz ho jao ge...
A:theek hai baba nahi kerta...he kissed her cheek tight...
R:ab tyaar ho jao humien late ho raha hai...
A:per arima???
R:uska intezam bhi hai.....nani bus ati hi honge....
A:smart hun*
R:janti hun...woh to mein hun....
Armaan again headed forwrd to kiss her but she ran away...
R:shouted...jaldi se nahalo mein arima ko tyar kerke tumhara breakfast bana deti hun...
Armaan shouted back...
A: I LOVE YOU.....