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Chiraiyya... thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
Congo on reaching 100 pages only 50 pages lft till we can ahve Shaadi Ka Ladoo 6
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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey Guys!

Jus gimme a few mins n i'll post it!

N plz no chappal or juta throwings! 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
Marisha im angry wiv u. You said u wud post ur parts yesterday but u didnt and by waitng for u i soon had to get off da computer. So u better hurry up now or da chapals will come flying at you from me 😛

x...Aneesa...x
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"Dheero Chalo!" Armaan's voice echoed in the empty house😆

"Armaan....mujhe choti si hot lagi hain! Tum bhi na! Hato!" Pushing him aside Riddhima attempted to open the house with her keys whist an amused Armaan stood beside her watching in amusement.😆😆

"Ahem...Ho gaya Riddhma jiiii??" he said whispering into the crook of her neck causing her involuntarily freeze..."Aap ke haath mein galat chaabi hain...woh gaari ki chaabi hain" he said stifling a volcano sized giggle.😳

Infuriated by his snide remark....she stepped aside to let her Armaan 'Ji' open the door.😳

***

"Thak gayi hon" he asked her when she collapsed on the sofa after feeding a rather noisy Arima.

"Bahut" she replied... "idhar aoo na" she outstretched her arms for a cuddle.😳😳

Wah Wah Armaan thought.....Bakset ji woh bhi romance ke mood main?!😃 Chal Armaan bhai....aisa mauka bar bar nahi aata😆😆....After his self-congratulatory speech...he sat down close to her taking her in his arms.

The body heat radiating from his body comforted as she dug her face into his neck😳...softly kissing her neck he whispered huskily in her ears "Jaan...kamre mein chale...yeh sofa kaafi uncomfortable hain"😉😳

Turning beetroot red, she nodded positively whislt Armaan, too happy to get his green signal, quickly scooped her into his arms and carried her to their room.😳😳

***

"bas bhi karo Armaan" she whispered as Armaan kissed her neck passionately sending shivers down her spine.😳

Laying her on her back comfortably on the bed, he followed suit, pressing on her delicate body....she moaned as his hands stoked her arms tickling her slightly.😳

Softly kissing her lips....she reciprocated passionately relieving all her tiredness whilst Armaan gladly accepted any form of luv he could receive from her.😳

"I luv u" he whispered amongst the feather light kisses😳

"I know dat" she whispered back....giggling slightly😳😆

***

As the kisses grew passionate and the night unfolded before the stars and the moons...the Malik household descended silently as two lovers surrendered themselves in the pool of love....where 1 drowns to win the battle...😳

....till of course Arima wailed loooudly causing Armaan to groan and Riddhima to run off to her daughter.😆

"Main abhi aayi" she whispered wrapping the satin sheet around her before kissing her sweet hubby on his cheek😳

"Oye Hoye...Luv u jaan" he whispered hoping that his voice make his way into her heart as he saw her receding back😳

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"Kya hua tha use??" he questioned when she returned😊

"Bhook lagi thi" replied a blushing Riddhima as Armaan caressed her cheek😳

"Toh kahan the hum?" he asked with a mischevious glint in her eye😉😳

Kissing him on his lips and stunning him totally...she replied "Kuch yaad aya Dr.Malik ya main kuch aur karo?" she replied bak with an equal mischievous voice😳😉

As the poor moon witnessed the love of these lovers again...the moon whispered to the sun😳

"Mujhe sharam aa rahi hain...Ab tum aa jao"☺️

Laughing his way...the sun climbed the horizon as the moon took off to witness love brewing somewhere else...as a new day rose....😳

"Chanda mama so gayi...sooraj mamu jaage"😉

***

Ok guys....my 1st attempt in dis ff....plz tell me hw gud or bad it was...and n other opinions or suggestions i shud incorporate wen i write since romance isnt my forte as compared to comedy!😆

So do let me know!

Luv u all loadz!🤗

*~* Marisha *~*😳😳

Edited by perfectpiscean - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Guys congrats on reaching 100 pages...👏
Hey Marisha very romantic n cute part 😳 really enjoyed it....Plzz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
^^Thanx swetha!

OMG....100 pgs! Wohoo! 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

😲 hayla! 😉😲😆 aaj phele baar finally marisha di ne cntd kiya! di i cnt beleive ure dis excellent! ure even 10000000 tmes beta den ME! really cute n romantic prt! really naughtty di u r u noe, riddhima ko bhi naughtie kar diya! i cnt belive when she said *kuch karo ya yaad karwavu*(sumfnk lke dat 😆 ) i ws stunned by dat dialoage! i culdn't stop laughin! 😆 😆 mind blowin prt di! i loved it! finally kisike ne toh cntd kiya! thx 4 cntdin di n thank u sooooooooooooo much 4 d pm 2! ab toh aapko mre often cntd karna padenga! *no excuses*, mein aapko phele khediate ho! b4 u brin any excuses 😉 cntd sn sum1!

CONGO EVERY1 4 100 PAGES!

Edited by pwincess kanzi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
marisha dat was such a romntic updte omg 😳
luved da sun and moon thing soo funny lool
really cute updte luved it u r such a romantic
and u didnt even kno lool really nce x
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Posted: 17 years ago

thank god finally marisha di ne continue kiya
wah di aapne kya romantic part ke saath saath bahut naughty part likha jisse hamari bolthi band ho gayi..............hamare paas lafz(words) hi nahi hai aapko
kehne ke liye specially yeh line

As the poor moon witnessed the love of these lovers again...the moon whispered to the sun
"Mujhe sharam aa rahi hain...Ab tum aa jao" wah kya line hai 😆
thanx pm ke liye
abh plz likhna band mat kijiye
aise hi aur bhi romantic aur naughty parts likhte rahiye
love u
yogitha 😃


Edited by cute_unknown_fr - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
gr88888 part marisha...tum tho zabardast writer nikli yaar...continue soon 👏

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