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Posted: 17 years ago

#141

i'll try to update when i get home from school

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Posted: 17 years ago

#142

okay guys...ab mein kuch parts update ker deti hun....
since nobody updated it abhi tak...mein ne socha mein hi ker deti hun" ....ek aur twist hai story mein...shaid apko pasand aye*

Edited by rukz - 17 years ago

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shalini jain

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Posted: 17 years ago

#143

hey guys me bck only fr few tme.....
rukz ur prt ws awesom as lke alwys no need 2 mention ur a fabulous writr yaar nd salima u jst tooo gooooooooooood yaar..........wow armaan ne jhut bola hmmmmmmm........
waitng fr ur prt.......i'll try 2 cont..bt cnt promise.....
luv yachu

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Madhu

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Posted: 17 years ago

#144

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Awesum updates gals.....U all wrote such beautiful......fantastic....amzin....cute,sweet n romantic prts........I loved them all.......

Rukz: U'r prt was jus tooooooo gooooood....gg8888888........They were superb......as always.........Keep up the g88888888wrk and do cont. sn.........

Salima ji: Masha alla......kya gazab updates the....vry vry gooooood prts.......I loved them......Do cont. sn........

Swansea: U'r prt was soooooo romantic......I loved it.........write more often.......I love u'r prts.......

Kanan: U dare not say sorry warna hum apse baaat nahi karungi......Maine pehle hi apse baat kar li thi......It's not u'r fault......it's coz of every one......Darling cont. sn......

U rock gals........Keep up the g88888888 wrk.....Do cont. sn........
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Love ya alllll...........t.cccccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

#145

recap:
Armaan comes more closer and closer
R :armaan plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

A:kia hua ridhima...tum ghabra kyun rahi ho!
R:armaan...woh...woh...choro...angel ro rahi hai...
A:acha...angel ro rahi hai!
R:ahh..han!
A:lekin tum ne to abhi abhi use feed keraya naa..to phir..
R:hmm...pata nahi shaid koi...
Armaan suddenly leaves her...
He is now a lil bit angry...
By looking at the expressions of armaan ridhima gets to know that lagta hai bura maan gaya...
She goes near him...and hugs him from the back!
R:i am sorry armaan...mujhey pata nahi kia ho gaya tha...
A:ridhima...
(he is angry but he keeps his tone a bit low)
A:ridhima...mein ney tumse kitni baar kaha hai na...angel ka naam beech mei...
R:armaan.....kia hua!
A:ridhima tum ye baat achi tarhan janti ho ke mujhey bilkul acha nahi lagta jab tum angel ka naam iss tarhan use kerti ho...jab bhi mein tumhare kareeb ata hun tum yehi sab kehna shuru ker deti ho...angel bula rahi hai..usse bhook lagi hai...usse khansi ho rahi hai...whatever whatevr!......ager tumhe ye sab nahi acha lagta to tum mujhey saaf saaf kyun nahi keh deti..kyun baar baar angel ka naam...
R:armaan i am sorry....mein ainda...
before she could finish armaan wore his shirt and went outside...
Ridhima is left all sad..
He goes down..
A:bua...angel ko mujhey de do...app ja ker aram kero...
B:theek hai armaan beta...
A:bua sarey bachay kidhar hai...
(slightly swinging as angel is in his arms)
B:beta woh sarey to pichay perhai ker rahi hai...
A:perhai!
B:arey...kia tumhe aur ridhima ko nahi bataya mein ne...
A:nahi
B:abhi 3 mahiney pehle hi sanjeevani ne pichay ek school khola hai...sanjeevani educating complex...to yahan ke saarey bachey waha 7 se 2 baje tak school jatey hai...itni se umar mein jo bemar ho gaye hai..waha in bacho ke liye sanjeevani walo ne ek khaas skool rakha hai jahan ye log perhai ki perhai ker lein aur ek dosrey ke saath thoda khel kod bhi lien...
A:wow....ye to bohat achi baat hai...
B:khair...ab mein chalti hun...apna khayal rakhna..
A:app kahan chali?
B:.mein zara paas mein thodi se sazi le ker ati hun...aur wapsi per mandir bhi to jana hai...theek hai beta...
A:theek hai bua...
She pats on armaan's shoulder and she went..
Now porey ashram mein armaan ridhima aur arima akele hai...
Armaan is stil holding arima in his arms...
he sits in the balcony...
Barish khatam ho gaye hai lekin abhi bhi kuch kuch hai...
She sits on the swinging chair...and talks to arima..
A:so...how is papa's lil princess today...bhooki to nahi lagi kia?
Arima just gives a bg smile...since she has no teeth abhi
Armaan smiles back and played with her fingers..
A:papa sab se zada apni princess se pyaar kertey hai...aur kisi se bhi nahi...haina...
Arima doesnt smile this time...
Armaan understands...
A:acha baba...papa arima aur mama...dono so bohat zada pyaar kertey hai...happy
Arima again laughs..
Ridhima is standing behind the wall and smiling but has tears in her eyes...
Armaan gets to know that ridhima is standing behind...
A:ab kia wahi khari raho ge ya idhar bhi aoge
R:per tume kaise....
*sobs*
sits next to armaan and arima...
A:tumhari payal ki awaz se...aur ye bhi pata hai ke tum kab se khari ho...
R:armaan...i am sorry...
A:its okay jaan...per dehan mein rakhna...ager ainda mujhse door bhagna ho to arima ka istemal mat kerna..
R:hugs him tight...and cries..

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Armaan ridhima and arima are now in their room...
bua comes back home and starts to cook food...
Aur bacho ke ghar aney ka time bhi ho raha hai...
Armaan aur ridhima wahan kamrey mein romantic mood mein hai
Arima is as usual sleeping...akhir yehi to mummy papa ka enjoy kerney ka time hota hai!...
R:jo kaam subh adhoora chor ker gaye they...usse poora nahi kero ge kia?
Means to say that armaan in the morning was going to kiss her jab usne arima ka bahana banaya tha...
A:hehehe....he is slowly slowly coming closer to ridhima...he is just too close to her when suddenly someone knocks at the door...

who is it...
read on*

Edited by rukz - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago

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All of a sudden all the kids run into armaan and ridhima's room...they start to jump on the bed...
The scream...armaan bhaiya armaan bhaiya football...
they scream for lyk 10 minutes....
A:AREY CHUP!....MALOOM NAHI TUM LOGGOON KE ARIMA SO RAHI HAI!
Gappo:armaan bhaiya..please humare saath football khelo naa...
A:MEIN NEY KAHA NA AWAZ NICHI RAKHO...ARIMA SO RAHI HAI
Ridhima then ishara him ke bus kero...bachey hai...mat cheekho in per..
All the kids are sad...
Armaan feels bad...
Sab bachey kamrey se bahar chaley jatey hai...
They freshen up and sit on the dining table..
R:armaan...kia zaroorat thi bacho per cheekney ki...
A:arey..tum ne dekha na...ktini zor zor se...arima jaag jati to...
R:to mein use phir se sula deti...ab chalo...bachey hai wo...unke saath tumhe khelna hi padey gaa...
A:per ridhima....
R:per wer kuch nahi...chalo!
Saarey bachey dining table per armaan aur ridhima ka wwait ker rahey hai lekin zahir he they are angry ke armaan bhaiya ney unhe itna daant jo diya...
Bua serves them food...
Armaan...
A:khana khaney ke baad hum sab football khelein gey/.
All the kids are happy....
YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY...
aRMAAN BHIA MAAN GAYE ARMAAN BHAIYA MAAN GAYE...
a:AHISTA!
all keep quiet...
Ridhima giggles...
the lunch is over...now according to armaan...he has to play football with the kids..
He comes out...
All the kids are playing..they play contniuously for 2hours...armaan bhi kia kere...kaha hai to kerna to pade ga hi naa...
Now he is tired../
Badi mushkil se usne bacho ko manaya ke woh ab thak gaya hai.....
They kids went for a bath and armaan went to his room where ridhima was watching tv...
Armaan entered the room**

catch the next part too...*
coming soon

Edited by rukz - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago

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A:uff...mein to bohat thak gaya...
he then jumps on the bed...
Ridhima gets up and gets a towel from the cupboard and wipes out armaan's sweat...
A:thankyou jaan...
R:arey is mein thankyou ki kiya baat hai!
A:Arima uthi nahi abhi tak kia!
R:uthi thi na...lekin mein ney use feed keraya...thoda sa mere saath kheli aur phir so gaye...
A:oh...
R:Armaan...mere khayal se tumhe naha lena chahiye..bahir to barish ka pani bhi tha..kia tum log use mein khele the...
A:haan...aur ab mein tumhe inhi gandey haathon se ek zor ki kiss kerney wala hun...AO RIDHIMA...MERE PAAS AOO...AO RIDHIMA!
😆 😆 😆
R:nahi armaan...dekho dont touch me...mein abi abhi naha ker aye hun...nahi....
A:HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...MEIN TO KERO GA...
hE RUNS AFTER HER
After soo much off running ridhima is just too tired..
R:bus armaan...mujhse aur nahi bhaga ja raha ...bus!
A:THHEK HAI THEEK HAI..MAAF KIYA..LEKIN MIN TUMHE BAAD MEIN CHORO GA NAHI...DEKH LON GA TUMHE..KISS TO TUMKO ZAROOR KERON GA..EK NAHI DO NAHI TEEN BHI NAHI...10!
R:theek hai baba..lekin abhi naha to lo...
Its 7 pm when armaan comes out of the washroom..
he is all ready...
He is about to kiss ridhima when again someone knocks on the door!

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Posted: 17 years ago

#149

wow rukxi tum toh chaa gayi
kya kamal ke parts likhe yaar hats off 2 u
aur yeh bua kabse bi ban gayi 😆 (just joking)
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Posted: 17 years ago

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A:uff...ab kaun hai...mein to tang a gaya hun...jab bhi tumhe kiss kerney lagta hun..koi na koi hamesha hi tapak perta hai!.....
Ridhima laughs..
Its again...all the kids...
Armaan bhaiya armaan bhaiya...chaliye na..humare saath cards kheliye...
A:arey bacho....(ANGRY).....ABHI NAI NAA!
please armaan bhaiya...
R:armaan...dekho na...kitne pyaar se keh rahey hai..
Bacho app jao....armaan abhi ata hai..
All the kids go!
A:lekin mein to haan nahi kaha!
R:koi baat nahi armaan bachey hai!
He goes...
Ridhima laughs...
Armaan plays cards with the kids for one hour...armaan is well irrited...
Armaan bua ka bohat shukar guzzar hota hai kyunki ager bi khaney le liya awa na marti...to shaid ye bachey armaan ko kabhi na chortey...
They quickly get up for food...
Ridhima also comes down with arima...
They have a great dinner..its 9....
Ridhima arima ko feed keraney kamery mein le jati hai...
All the kids are washing their hands and face..
Armaan runs to his room before the kids get back to him.
He sees ridhima who already has fed the baby...putting arima back in the cot..
Armaan grabbed ridhima from the back...
A:ab nahi choro ga...
Suddenly...someone again knocks on the door...
Armaan is really really angry...
He jumps on the bed and starts to beat the pillows...
I will kill you...i will kill all the kids...all those people who disturb me!Arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

Edited by rukz - 17 years ago

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