ff~Timeless Passion 11/19p38 The Story ha - Page 3

yay...
finally the list is up...
well done sara...
ppl tell us what you think?

great intro 👏 .....so many diff charcters ....cont soon.... 😊

guys... sara is jus being modest...

i just had to make the update brilliant so as to keep up with the vm... and besides if it wasn't for sara's scene shifting bits this update would have never gone up... so applause for Sara as well....

and like sara said... pls pls comment... and maybe the next update will be longer....

yyaaar i luv da part...
its confusing at times coz thers so many ppz....but loved it anyhow..!

hhmmmmm.... can't wait to find out wat happened to ranbir..
kc...and u-know...wiked!

plz update sooon!

great part
continue soon 😊

my space..... Wow! It was wondeful!

*speechless* 😲Thanx for putting the glasses scene their... Xiah is such a sweetheart! I was falling in love with him😳... as I was reading my scene. And it's true I can't see anything without my glasses...😆😆

Kudos to Sara & Fatemah baji..!
this fan-fic is 50 trillion times hotter than mine!

Originally posted by: Perfangel5655

oye!!😡 good job toh bad mein pehle meri naam ka spelling thik karo!! It's jouty! some places it's spelled correctly some places the u and o is switched!!

Now wow! that was cool!!! So many characters! It's ok I am sure in a part or 2 people would have a grasp over the characters. But awwwwwwww your story is in Scotland!!! I love scotland!!! with my full heart!

I loved the character intro too!! awesome job both of you! ::a hugh from me::

ps: only ambition is to make me fall in love with him??? ohh hai!! only if this was real life. But then if that was the case Sara would be after a Bhoot!<--how romantic!!

sorry yaar... i'll try and remember to type your name right....

soo many characters... it gets a bit confuzin but over all i luveeed ittt

By the way I love my last name.... and that I write poetry! 😃 Because I doo write poetry! & Ku-rana .... hhehehehe