~*Adhuri Kahaani....*~{AK} part 5, pg 7 - Page 3

amazing part
i feel really sorry 4 kripa she cant even tell her true feelings 2any one
cant wait 4 angad and kripa 2 meet
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wonder whether raj really likes kripa or not? so lakshya is angad's brother. can't wait for AK to meet. and eager to c angad's reaction or whether he still loves her or not. gr8 part.


~Sana~

[Quote=iamsmart]wonder whether raj really likes kripa or not? so lakshya is angad's brother. can't wait for AK to meet. and eager to c angad's reaction or whether he still loves her or not. gr8 part.
thnx for the comment...we'll see if Raj is a negative or pasitive character or if he really loves her or not...yup Lakshya and Aaliya are Angad's younger siblings....let's see if Angad still lokes her...HINT: he more likely still does 😉

[Quote=Iqbal Neha1] amazing part
i feel really sorry 4 kripa she cant even tell her true feelings 2any one
cant wait 4 angad and kripa 2 meet
👏
thnx for the comment....Kripa has all her emotion bottled up from 3 years and she needs to spill it before she bursts....don't worry Angad and Kripa will meet soon

fab part
just loved it
finally kripa is enjoying her life...
waiting 4 mystery between AK to b disclosed
angad's reaction on seeing kripa sounds to b like a million dollars...
raj seemes to like kripa...
continue soon

[Quote=sujalangad_rock]fab part
just loved it
finally kripa is enjoying her life...
waiting 4 mystery between AK to b disclosed
angad's reaction on seeing kripa sounds to b like a million dollars...
raj seemes to like kripa...
continue soonthnx, yea kripa is finaaly trying to forget the past but she can't since she carries it around with her ring.....i won't stretch the parst so much so you'll see Angad and Kripa is the next two parts....<3

great part
lukin forward for ak meet

gr8 part
wonder what is AK's story...
who is playing the part of Raj??? is he good guy or is he going to b a bad angle in AK relationship.
continue soon

Hey guys,

So, I have the next part ready. I am really sorry for making you wait long. I'm really busy with my Regents preps going on and other finals. Hope you like the next part.

Adhuri Kahaani…

Part 4

I was introduced to Lakshya's friends as his friend Kripa. It was funny how I flinched because back then he used to tease me by calling me his Bhabi, I missed it even though I hadn't heard it for three years. Well, I guess those days are over but wasn't it me who broke it up? Hey, don't get me wrong since I never meant for it to happen, ever but I had my reasons. He did everything first. It was his fault that we lost our baby. I gasped at the memory when Lakshya pulled me out of my state. "Krips, ye hain Rahul, Natasha, Nikhil, and Amber" he said pointing out the group of good-looking, well dressed people. I was called a lot of nicknames and Lucky especially called me Krips. Everyone had different names for me from our group. Our gang consisted of Josh, who was now 26 my older brother, Aaliya, 25, Angad's sister, Angad, 26, Lakshya, turning 25, and me 25. I had missed all of their birthday for the past three years now but I never forgot to wish them somehow.

All of them were here to celebrate some new contract and they worked together. I had never seen them back in the office so they were probably new. Oh S***, I forgot about Dawn and everybody. "Sorry guys we'll be back" I mumbled, pulling Lakshya with me. Dawn was probably worried by now. "Kripa, what happened?" he asked at my tensed face. I explained to him that I was here with friends and most importantly to only call me Tanya. He did not question much, to my surprise. When I saw Raj and Dawn sitting together, rather Dawn was busy flirting with the guy next to her and Raj watched the scene exasperated. Raj saw me and got up "Tanya, thank god you're here, I was getting worried." A look of shock then hurt crossed his face when he saw Lakshya right beside me, his arm around my shoulders. I saw Raj analyze Lakshya, looking him up and down with an annoyed look. Maybe he really liked me, but I did not reciprocate his feelings. I needed to tell him that, including my past but I wasn't sure. "Sorry Raj, I got held. Meet Lakshya Khanna." I am guessing that wasn't too good a introduction since everybody gathered around us including Armaan and Kaavya.

I had explained to them that Lakshya was almost like a brother to me and he was here for business purposes. Dawn probably guessed who he was but I didn't say anything about Angad being here. Luckily we soon got engrossed in a conversation but I felt a pair of eyes watching me. I turned and it was Raj looking at me but he repositioned himself when he saw me. I wasn't sure what to think of the look in his eyes. I didn't realize he was that serious until I saw his eyes. It was filled with something I assume was Rage, but why? I just shrugged and pulled my shawl up closer covering my back and my arms. I avoided mentioning or asking any questions at all about back home. He was his same old self again, flirting with every girl he saw. He was a charmer, with this baby blue eyes and dark hair, he was a handsome guy.

We all sat in a large circle around a table, surrounded with retro couches. Everyone was there, including Lakshya's colleagues. "Guys, this is getting boring. Let's do something fun." Lakshya got piled up at once and moved forward. Everyone agreed, including me, I mean I was ready for anything that would get my mind off of the sad memories. "I have an idea. How about Tanya sings a song for us." He grinned. "Lucky, noooo" I screamed at him, horrified. "Come on Baby. For me. You have an amazing voice." He turned his full puppy dog eyes look on me. No, he knew that I couldn't resist that. The puppy dog eyes ran in the family, I mean even Angad and Aaliya would get me to do anything with that. I wasn't going to sing at any cost, I was gazillion percent sure. Reluctantly I agreed. Not, so much as having everyone push me next to the stage. First everyone was shocked to hear that I used to perform during collage days but they all accepted and encouraged me. Lakshya talked to the DJ and cleared everything up. I was nervous, more like scared. I wanted to cry, I hadn't sung for almost 4 years now. It reminded me of Angad, maybe because he used to sing during collage days a lot, it was his hobby. He should have been a singer instead of a businessperson. I was pushed to the stage and I consciously pulled up my shawl. Ironic, wasn't it? The same day I felt that energy was when I meet Lakshya and I was about to sing, alone. I wasn't sure what to sing. I stood in the middle of the stage, a spotlight on me and everyone in the club listened quietly. I took a deep breath and surprisingly, the words came easily.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8s6nMYaWmao

(Zindagi mein koyi kabhi aaye na rabbaAaye jo koyi toh phir jaaye na rabbaDene ho gar mujhe baad mein aansoo'Toh pehele koyi hasaaye na rabba) -2Toh pehele koyi hasaaye na rabba (Jaate jaate koyi meri khushiyon ko le gayaSuni suni akhiyon ko gham, koyi de gaya) -2Aas jo lagaayi hai, aankh bhar aayi hai -2Itna bhi koyi, sataaye na rabbaZindagi mein koyi kabhi aaye na rabbaAaye jo koyi toh phir jaaye na rabbaDene ho gar mujhe baad mein aansoo'Toh pehele koyi hasaaye na rabba -2 (Dil lene waale pe zor nahin chaltaPyaar ka ye sikka, kahin aur nahin chalta) -2Yaad teri aayi hai, tu harjaai hai -2Itna bhi koyi tadpaaye na rabbaZindagi mein koyi kabhi aaye na rabbaAaye jo koyi toh phir jaaye na rabbaDene ho gar mujhe baad mein aansoo'Toh pehele koyi hasaaye na rabba -2

{Rabba from the film Musafir}

I was shocked out of my wits when I carried it out without breaking down. I mean I agree that my voice cracked a little at the end but I was surprised at my self. I realized that my eyes were misty so I looked around to wipe them. I looked at my friends' teary eyes. The people around the room looked on with heavy emotions. Even if they didn't understand the words, the love filled meaning was clear. I walked down, a little unstable but instead of going to sit down I walked out to the lot. The cool air felt like a slap to my cheeks, but it was way more bearable than the pain it caused me. I wrapped her arms around my abdomen and pressed tightly as the tears flew. I felt a hand on my shoulders and I immediately turned around and threw myself in the person's arms. I cried my eyes out and after what seemed like to be hours, I separated from Lakshya's arms. I was used to crying in his arms, he was like a little brother to me. He helped me to my car and he drove me through my directions. Right now I could be less worried about everybody else but Dawn probably explained it to them.

I was seated in the passenger seat of my Porsche with my face turned to the window. The light mist stayed on my eyes and I did not try to wipe it either. I went through some happy memories in my head. Once we stopped for a red light, his chain of questions started. "Ok, finally answer me, why are they calling you Tanya?" he looked at me with his eyebrows raised, just like angad. I swallowed the tears that were forming in the back of my throat. I was crying quite a lot these days, then again I was always a sentimental person. "Acha thik hain, main sab bata ti hoon lekin pehle ghar chalo. We'll sit down and talk." He agreed and in a few minutes, I was seated on my living room couch with a coffee cup in my hand and an eager Lakshya sitting in front of me. "Ok, so I left London three years ago, I then came here and started working as an assistant buyer for a fashion brand. I didn't want to use my credit cards because well I didn't want to guys to find out where I was. So, then I registered myself with the name Tanya. I mean, it is my middle name so there was no harm right."

It was almost around 2:30 when I finished narrating my story to him. He was sorry for me and I could see it. It was late so I told him to crash on my second bedroom. As we headed to our own rooms, he turned around and said "hey, Krips can I ask you some thing." I nodded. "Why did you really leave?" he asked with a soft but sad smile. "Lucky, ab yeh beet hue baato ka kya matlab? Unhe bhool jao" I smiled at him and locked my bedroom door. I tightened my abdomen with my arms like every time I go through this. It was painful for me, both physical and emotional. I had held onto one question all night long. How was Angad? Was he fine, happy? Had he moved on? I didn't ask noting and neither did he say anything about it.

Hey everyone, I am sorry for making you guys wait so long but I was really busy with my life. I hope you enjoy this part b/c it'll be a while till I post the next part. So what do you think????? Comments Please...