~ Reth ~ Part 1 - Jia's engagment - Pg 2

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[ Guys....please note the Shubhangi Atre isn't name Kasturi but she is called Jia in my fan-fic]

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Please forgive me if I disappoint anyone with my character choices because it was hard to choose. Anyways to learn more about Reth please view my video mix I made for my fan fic .




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~ Reth - Jia Ka Safar ~


Reth is journey of a sixteen year old girl Jia, who is prefect wife of Prem Prerna Sharma (Vikas), but failed as a girlfriend of Robbie S (Karan Patel), and her family friend (their parents are good friends even her and Robbie but not anymore - if there is ant relationship its hatred and only hatred).

During her tenth wedding anniversary, one event took place and changed her entire life forever and forever.

Kya Hoga Jia ki kismat main? Please read and watch ~ Reth - Jia Ka Safar ~

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Characters

Jia Ka Maayka

Kapoor Family
(Jia's Family and they live in Simla far from her sasural)


Sujal Kapoor (Gurpreet Singh) (Age 49)
- Jia's father
- Married to Aditi
- Successful Business Man
- He can never see a single tear in his daughters' eyes.
- Best friends with Sumit and Anurag


Aditi Sujal Kapoor (Aamna Sharffi) (Age 47)
- Jia's mother
- Married to Sujal
- Only child of Om and Paravti Agarwal
- Full time housewife and mother
- Also can't tolerate any single tear in her daughters' eyes.
- Good friends with Golbole Family


Nisha Wadhwa/Kapoor (Age 33)
- Jia's older sister
- Married to Sharman Wadhwa
- Mother of three kids (two sons and one daughter)
- Lives in London with her husband and kids


Sharman Wadhwa (Age 35)
- Jia's juju
- Married to Nisha
- Father of two sons and one daughter
- And lives in London with his family


Shurti Kapoor (Age 16)
- Jia's twin Sister


Sonu Kapoor (Age 14)
- Jia's younger brother
- And more closer to Jia than anyone else
- Also best friends with Robbie and Prem

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Jia Ka Sasural (Jia's in law and they live in Pancheshwar and their farmhouse is in Banaras built by their fathers (meaning Anurag and Prerna's fathers)

Basu Family


Anurag Basu (Cezzane Khan) (Age 49)
- Biogolical father of Prem and Sneha
- Ex-husband of Prerna Sharma/Bajjaj
- Jia's Father - in - law
- Also known as Dad Basu


Vijay Basu (Sumeet Sachdev) (Age 45)
- Prem's Chachu
- Married to Nisha Virani
- Father of Lakshya and Bhoomi


Nisha Vijay Basu (Riva Bubber) (Age 44)
- Prem's Chachi
- Married to Vijay Basu
- Mother of two kids (one boy and one girl)
- Also best friends with Prerna and Kumkum


Bhoomi Basu (Age 27)
- Complete spolied brat
- Loves her mother and father mostly her Bari-Papa (meaning Anurag)


Lakshya Basu (Age 18)
- Also a complete spoiled brat
- Gets want he wants by Anurag, his Bari Papa
- Since the day Prem got married Lakshya has a sweet relationship with his Bhabhi (meaning Jia)


Ranbir Basu (Akashdeep S.) (Age 44)
- Prem's Chachu and his guidess in life
- Also known as "hate-guru"

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Sharma Family + Bajjaj Family (People who watched Kasauti knows who is Bajjaj so I'm not going to introduce him cause he isn't that main as Prerna or Anurag)


Prerna Sharma/Bajjaj (Shweta Tiwari) (Age 46)
- Jia's mother - in - law
- Ex-wife of Anurag Basu
- Married to Bajjaj
- Mother of Sneha and Prem
- Also known as Mother India


Sneha Virani (Jennifer Vingat) (Age 33)
- Jia's sister in law
- Prem's older sister
- Eldest Child of Anurag Basu and Prerna Sharma
- Married to Sahil Virani
- Three Months Pregnant
- Lives in Mumbai with her husband


Prem Prerna Sharma (Vikas) (Age 19)
- Jia's husband
- Youngest Son of Anurag Basu and Prerna Sharma
- Best friends with Angad and Raunak
- He is closer to his Ranbir Chachu and his wife (who is more like his friend than wife).
- He is second male lead


Jia Prem Prerna Sharma (Shubhangi Atre) (Age 16)
- Prem's wife
- Robbie's ex-grilfriend
- Twin sister of Shurti
- Closer to her brother Sonu and her friends
- Daughter of Sujal and Aditi Kapoor
- She tries her best to make everyone happy even Robbie, her ex-lover, but now if there is anything between them than its hatred and only hatred.
- Main Female Lead

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Jia's Family Friend

Sabharwal Family (lives in Mumbai and their farmhouse is in Banaras)


Sumit Sabharwal (Hussain K.) (Age 49)
- Father of Angad and Robbie
- Married to Kumkum
- Best Friends with Sujal and Prerna
- Also considers Jia as his own daughter because he doesn't have a daughter so he considers Jia as his daughter.

Kumkum Sumit Sabharwal (Juhi Pamar) (Age 47)
- Mother of Angad and Robbie
- Married to Sumit
- Good friends with Golbole Family and Nisha Basu


Angad Sabharwal (Iqbal Khan) (Age 25)
- Robbie's older brother
- Engaged with Kripa P.K Sharma (Not related to Prem or his family)
- Encourage his brother not to give up in life
- Also best friends with Ranbir and Prem


Kripa P.K. Sharma (Neha Bamb) (Age 23) (Not related to Prem or his family)
- Angad's girlfriend and soon they are going to get married


Robbie Sabharwal (Karan Patel) (Age 19)
- Jia's ex-boyfriend
- Main Male Lead
- Also hates Prem for marrying Jia - his life.
(We will learn more about Robbie through out the story)

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Jia only has three guy friends and they are Akash Mehra, Nakul Virani, and Robbie, (who she hates now because of what he did to her cousin Niyati, (who we will learn more about later on too) through out the story of Reth - Jia Ka Safar).

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Hello Friends,
I know you guys might have many questions regarding - why isn't Jia married to Robbie, but don't worry guys at the end Robbie and Kasturi 😆 (I mean Jia even for a sec I forgot Kasturi was named Jia in my fan-fic) will become one - if they don't that mean its not the end of my fan-fic and I would like to thank Cutey55 for encouraging me a-lot. 😃

Bye for now

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Sapna
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great start pl conti soon . 👏
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aw thnXX sapna for including me to ur sincere dedication, im more than happy to help yoou<3
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Originally posted by: monikaseth

great start pl conti soon . 👏



Thank You

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Originally posted by: cutey55

aw thnXX sapna for including me to ur sincere dedication, im more than happy to help yoou<3



Thanks

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Before I post the first part - please forgive me if there is any mistake and also some scenes will be a small video clip cause I thought why don't I make it a little different than other fan-fic and also "don't worry at the Jia aka Kasturi will end uo with Robbie our Karan Patel" I hope you guys have fun reading it and the fan-fic - starts of with Jia's dream.



"First part starts of with Jia's dream of her and Robbie getting married, but realty is something else she is getting engaged to Prem and her wedding with Prem will take up in three days from now."

Part - 1

"Click on the play button to view first scene between Jia and Robbie (also in the background plays Dil Ne Yah Kaha Hai Dil from Dharkan)"


Jia's wakes up by the noise of her cell-phone ringing - Jia picks up her cell-phone without looking at her caller ID.

"Jia...Please don't disconnect the phone

Jia... please listen to me once

Jia...Please 😭"

Jia hangs up the phone again Robbie calls, Jia disconnects the phone again, but the third time she picks up the phone and hears what Robbie has to say....

"Jia, I know in the past I have screwed up many times, but please give me another chance in your live because I can't live without you" Said by Robbie, who was crying on the other hand even Jia was crying because she can't live without Robbie, but she has too live without him because of what he did to her cousin Niyati, (who loved him a-lot, but Robbie played with her emotions) just to get her (meaning Jia).

"Robbie, its too late for us now cause in three days I'm getting married to Prem - My father's best friend's son, who stays with his mother. Anyways Robbie, its too late for us" Said by broken Jia

"Jia, nothing is too late; You have to make the choices in marrying Prem or not; Your parents can't make the choices for you" Said by Robbie

"Indeed its my choices in making the right decision who is prefect for me and you know I made a choice in being part of your life and look what happened by my choices so now its my parents turn to pick the best for me and they have and its not you but its Prem" Said by Jia and hangs up the phone - On the other side Robbie is shattered by Jia's decision in getting married to someone else. Even Jia was hopeless in turning out Robbie her love, but now nothing is the same because of Robbie's one mistake her entire life changed. She never knew that the man she loved would end up breaking her into pieces between her parents and him. Jia wiped her tears off and ran into the bathroom and turned on the shower and cried herself out.

[At Sabharwal Resident>

Robbie sat in his room looking at Jia's picture while his family decides to go and attended Jia's wedding, but due to Sumit's business meeting out of town. On their behalf Angad and Kripa are going to attend Jia's wedding and if Robbie wants to go then he is most welcome.

Angad decides to check on Robbie, who sounded depressed during breakfast so Angad is walking to Robbie's room...

Robbie sat in-front of his drums and starts playing them crazy and sings a sad song from one of his favorite movie.

(Guys I have to stop here cause i'm getting late for bed and plus I have to go work so I'll continue the reminding part tomorrow after work or before going bed.

Good Night)

Sapna
Edited by Sapna_23 - 17 years ago
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Sorry about yesterday my friends, but I was sleepy so I updated halfway of part one so here is the reminding part one and I'll update next somewhere around Wednesday or Thursday.




"Reminding Part One"

Angad decides to check on Robbie, because he sounded depressed during breakfast. Angad was on his way to Robbie's room...... ...... .......

Robbie sat in-front of his drums and starts playing them crazy and also sings one of his favorite sad song from one of his favorite movie. And during his song you can see many flashbacks of him and Jia together during summer school.

At Jia's home in Simla

Jia came down dressed in blue lehnga with matching set and jewelries from her in-laws. Jia looked stunning in her outfit that her mother Aditi placed a small tiny black tikka underneath her ear and said "you look so beautiful beta that no-ones evilness touch you"

Jia bends down and takes her mother's blessing than goes forward and stands beside Prem (her soon to be husband). Prem looked at Jia, with a flake smile cause he wasn't sure that he is ready to tie the knot yet even Jia looked nervous because she wasn't sure that she will be able to forget Robbie (her first love).

During the ceremony, Shurti came up and asked her soon to be Juju to dance with her twin sister Jia. Prem looked nervous cause he can't dance. Even his cousin Lakshya picked on Prem because he knew that Prem can't dance. After awhile, Prem takes Jia to the center and they dance on a slow item called "Maula Mere Maula" from "Anwar".

After their dance was over they carried on with ring ceremony. Prem slipped his ring first on Jia's finger. Jia was so lost that for a second she thought that Robbie had slipped a ring on her finger, but she was wrong it was Prem (the person she was getting married to - within three days from now). Afterwards it was Jia's turn to place a ring on Prem's finger, while she was doing that she thought she was placing the ring on Robbie's finger, but again she was wrong. Jia controlled herself from breaking down in-front her parents and her in-laws.

Soon as the ring ceremony was done, they took blessing from her in-laws and her parents. Afterwards they sat down beside each other while Shurti and Akash perform on "Javeda Zindagi(Tose Naina Lagey)" from "Anwar" and also a fast item from "Partner" than Prem's cousin Bhoomi danced on "Bole Chooriyan" from Kabhi Khush Kabhi Gham".


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I think I'll stop over here and next part again Jia image if Robbie was standing in-front of her singing a song from her favorite movie.

Sapna
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kool ff 😳 nd nyc concept 👏 👏 loved it 😳
sooo sad dat they roka r not 2geva 😭 😭
continue soon 😃
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😛 Wow! Both of all my favorite characters are in one fan-fic..... I'm glad you choose to write this fan-fic 👏

Anyways....keep up the good work 😃

Nisha

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