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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 5 ~

At Mishty's house.

Angad (angrily): Gosh, I feel so suffocated in that house, and that woman...that woman...she has made my life a living hell.

Mishty ( trying to calm Angad down ): Now, now Angad, that woman...oops... I mean Kripa is your wife so you have to treat her with atleast some respect.

Mishty: Angad, why don't you stay here for tonight, I mean you're always welcome here.

Angad: Thanks Mishty but I think I should go home as that witch is probably waiting for me.

Mishty: oh ok Angad but remember you can always phone me at anytime if you need me.

Angad: Thanks Mishty.

He give Mishty a kiss on the cheek and headed outside towards his car.

Meanwhile at the Khanna house, Kripa is waiting for Angad as everyone else had headed off for bed. She had fallen asleep on the sofa and looked really stiff. Angad walked in and saw Kripa like that. However much he hated her, he could not stop himself feeling sorry for her. Angad didn't want to disturb Kripa so he carried her upstairs in his arms. As he put her on the bed and wanted to leave, she grabbed on to his hand really hard and he could not escape from her grip. He decided to sit on the bed for a while until Kripa let go or softened her grip. Angad could not help but stare at how innocent and beautiful Kripa looked at that moment. His eyes filled with tear as he realised how mean he was being but what about the pain she was causing him?

Please comment and what are your predictions of what is gonna happen.

Edited by *cute_princess* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice concept......i think Angad need to be soft towards kripa.....i mean everytime he insulted her.....and kripa, ......she need to answer him back...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Pls comment ppl cos I'm thinkin of stoppin this ff due 2 lack of readers.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i like the story so far
cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 6 ~

2 weeks later:

Angad and Kripa were standing in the airport ready to be boarding a flight to California.

Angad: Oh gosh this is gonna be the worst 2 months of my life.

Kripa (sarcastically): I'm sorry Angad, it's my fault, I booked the flight, your mum didn't have anything to do with it.

Angad: Yeah whatever, I'm still stuck with you.

Angad: And Kripa what the hell are you wearing???

Kripa: What? I'm wearing a churidaar, whats wrong with that?

Angad: Kripa, we're going to California not India.

Kripa ( upset ): Just because I have been brought up in London, doesn't mean I forget my culture and where I'm from.

Angad: Forget it, I don't even know why I'm even in this mess, first of all I don't want to be here and secondly I'm here with you which makes it even worse.

Kripa ( very angry ): Well if you don't wanna be here with me then why don't you go with that slut Mishty, I'm sure that she doesn't mind wearing mini skirts to impress you.

Angad was shocked and angry that he didn't even stop to think about what he was about to do, he slapped Kripa hard across the face. Kripa felt embarrased and shocked as everyone stared at them. She heard two ladies say ' Poor girl, I feel sorry for her, what must she be going through.' Hearing this she ran out of the airport and cried her eyes out. Never had Kripa gotten slapped by her parents never mind her husband.How could he humiliate her like this especially in front of everyone. Angad ran after her and was about to put his hand on her shoulder so she would turn around when Kripa suddenly turned around and screamed her head off ' Who the hell do you think you are Mr Khanna? I'm fed up of you treating me like this so why don't you do me a favour and get lost.'

Angad: It would be my pleasure oh and by the way Kripa I would rather be on a honeymoon with Mishty than with you, atleast she doesn't still live in the 10th century, I mean even with a churidaar she looks better than you. Thank god you don't wear mini skirts because everyone would die of laughter.

Why was this even happening to her? 3 years ago Kripa Sharma would have answered back but now she did not have the strength to fight with Angad and just walked away. Mishty wasn't a slut and Kripa knew it just aswell as Angad did, afterall she used to be like her aswell. That was back in her college days when guys used to die to be with her and girls were envious of her natural beauty. She would wear shorter skirts than Mishty and would be out partying every night till dawn. The only thing that would bother her was the fact that the hottest guy in school ( Angad ) wouldn't even glance her way. Angad was the richest guy in the whole of college, he was also the smartest and the hottest, it was every girl's dream to be in his arms but he would change girls everyday like he would change his clothes. He was a flirt and eventhough Kripa knew this she wanted to be with him. Everyday Kripa would try and talk to him but one way or another he was always busy with his mates or girlfriend.

Kripa smiled as she remembered her college days and wondered whether Angad was worth all the effort. Just then her phone rang and she picked up, it was her mother's doctor and he sounded very worried.

Doctor: Mrs Khanna, please come at one as your mother's condition is fatal.

Kripa ran towards the hospital where her mother was admitted, her heart beats got louder and uneven and her eyes were filling up with tears. As she reached reception the nurse said in a very low voice 'I'm sorry but you mother has passed away Mrs Khanna' Kripa could not believe her ears and thought her mind was playing a trick on her. She asked again for her mother and the nurse repeated that her mother was now no longer alive. Kripa fell to her knees and cried her heart out. The mother that she had sacrificed her happiness for, the mother she married Angad for had now left her. Kripa thought...how could God have been so cruel to her?

Edited by *cute_princess* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys, I am stoppin this ff cos I dunt have many readers, sorry 2 the people who wanted me to carry on 😭 If there are people who want me to carry on then I will but I need atleast 10 comments 2 be able to carry on.
Edited by *cute_princess* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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grt part OMG cant believe angad slapped her in front of everyone lol and bles her she has not mother anymore i bet angad will feel sorry for her. luks lik no honeyoon for them at the moment. grt fanfic uve pickedup quite quickly and got straight in to the story it is better that way anyway cant wait for angads reaction towards this horrendous news lol!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: *cute_princess*

Hey guys, I am stoppin this ff cos I dunt have many readers, sorry 2 the people who wanted me to carry on 😭 If there are people who want me to carry on then I will but I need atleast 10 comments 2 be able to carry on.

hey hun dont do that der arent many readers becos uve ust started it today and it takes time for people to read and also most readers are silent hu do not comment plus its saturday and most people do not come on ecause they are busy but they do on the weekdays so ur gana hav to give it time lol but plz dont stop will be waiting for next part

luv zain

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow..i just started reading your fan fic...seems pretty interesting but sad as well. poor kripa has to go through so much...well..hope u can cont soon so then we can figure out the whole mystery..nd can u update the title so that we know wen u update ur fan fic? thanks 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: *cute_princess*

Hey guys, I am stoppin this ff cos I dunt have many readers, sorry 2 the people who wanted me to carry on 😭 If there are people who want me to carry on then I will but I need atleast 10 comments 2 be able to carry on.

Hey hun...i just read ur story.....i like the concept...it's going good so far.... Don't stop this ff cause many ppl didn't comment. I'm pretty sure there are alot of silent readers, and ontop of that u just started writing today, and u have more then 700 views. So don't lose hope 😊

and i can't believe Angad slapped her😲...that was shocking..... and its sad that her mom passed away on the same day. keep up the good work hun

Nida

Edited by kneeduh2000 - 17 years ago

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