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vini

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Posted: 17 years ago

#371

Originally posted by: sweet=me
Hey!!! Soooo sorry for the late comment!!!! It was an absolutely fantastic.....I looooved this part....poor Ridz though,must've been very very hurt....Your promo sounds fabulous!!!! Do update soon..I'm loving every moment of it..Thanks soooo much for the pm..

PS.hey this is the last part I'm going to be able to read be4 I leave for my holiday but I'll be back on Monday so please please please please could u still pm me whenever u update so that I can read all of it together on Monday n not miss ne part....I'd really appreciate it....If it's a problem then it's absolutely ok.....will catch up with ur ff neway 😃 Thanks...
Love,
Ananya

no problem... i can do it! not really busy!!!

Oh and have a safe n happy journey...

love vini...

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bollywoodqueen5

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Posted: 17 years ago

#372

awesome part and interesting promo... hope you continue soon

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vini

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Part 24
sorry cant PM any one ryte now.... SORRY .....

" Armaan tum aise nahi kar sakte...yaar...."

"Armaan!! c'mon... be real...Your letting your college down."Rahul said

"well... you guys let me down!! i made up my mind.. not gonna play!" Arman said just as muskaan came over.

"kya hua?" muskaan asked looking at thier tense faces.

"dekho na muskaan... Armaan khelne ke liye tyaar nahi hai..." Atul said sounding like a kid.

"what?? par kyon?" Muskaan exclaimed.. as though she had a heartattack

"Atul ne armaan ko phone par baat karte hue suna... He misunderstood Armaan... and thought he deosnt want Rids ... phir hum dono usse kah diya.... and now... woh khelne ke liye tyaar nahi hai!!

"Oh no!! ill get rids....!!! phir khelega??"

Armaan nodded his head... "fine.. be back.."

Muskaan ran to the campus.... trying to find rids... She saw her sitting in the library...

"Rids .." Muskaan said panting" b-been looking fo-for y-you...come on... game dekhne chale...."
Rids wiped her tears before muskaan could notice them.

"nahi... i cant come"

"rids . look... mujhe pata hai.... kya hua tha.... it was all a misunderstanding..." muskaan said leaning over.

"misunderstandin?? yeah ryte! dekho muskaan.. i donno why ur doing this... par.. i no th truth." rids said trying to sound comfortable and not bothered.

"han... ek badi misunderstanding hai..... Atul ne Armaan ko phone par baat karte hue suna... Armaan ne kuch kaha tha...... Atul ne socha kiArmaan didnt want her there.... par he didnt even talk bout you...please Rids believe me... its the truth."

Lagta hai muskaan sach keh rahi hai.... Lekin... why is she telling me this... so urgently... it deosnt even matter so much. rids though

"oh.. lekin aise ko kah rahi ho?? jaise mein marne ke liye tyaar hu...?? i dont realy care muskaan."

"kyon ki.. Armaan khelna nahi chahta... jab tak you come to the match!!"

"kya???" Rids was half light hearted.. smiling within.She couldnt believe it... Arman woh bhi... oh my god... mere liye????

"haa... so.. jaldi se ao...please... we'll lose widout him...!!" Muskaan said pulling riddima's hand

Muskaan and Rids arrived first as the jump ball was about to start... As soon as Armaan saw her ... he smiled ...
he walked over to the court.

"woh aa gayi!!!" Atul shouted!!

"kaun??" sahil shouted.. very confused..

"hoy... chup beth .. aur game par dhyaan dho.."
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As the game started ... everyone was screaming this was the most exciting match because both the teams were equally mtched... the other team had an advantage of height while L.U had an advantage of skill.

"over here...Armaan." Armaan passed the ball and Rahul shot.

"wooohoo... Rahul.. you rock!!!" muskaan yelled.... ... rahul turned around and winked at muskaan... just as he was about to give Atul a high five.

Muskaan fell...
"muskaan are you alright?" rids said looking down...

"Rids i think she fainted!!"

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Announcer.."6 all!!! 3 Minutes till half tme"

"wow.. go atul..!!" the cheerleaders shouted.

"muskaan they'll win ryte??" Rids sai biting her nails.

" please Babaji!!!! please... boys ko jeetne do!!! please!!" Muskaan said praying wid he eyes closed.

"haa haan.... definelty..."

"babaji???????????" Muskaan said looking up in wonder.

"nahi... mein..." Sahil said " we'll win... "

"hope so..." rids muttered

"Hey gurls Armaan's got the ball!! lets Cheer him on.." muskaan said winking at the gurls..
winking??? rids thought...
"1..2....3...G-"

Riddhima finished...."GO ARMAAN!!!!"yelling at the top of her voice... suddenly she closed her mouth!!She just realised tht she was the only one who screamed.

Muskaan and the other girls giggled.

Oh SHIT!!!!! everyones looking at me...CRAP!!!Rids thought as she melted in her seat wid embaressment!

Armaan had just slam dunked the ball inside the basket when suddenly he heard Riddhima scream.. he turned around to look at her blushing.. completely red in the face...Armaan smiled..

Just then... the referee blew his whistle... "half time!"

Everyone pounced on armaan... he had given them a lead by two pooints.
But armaan ddint hear nor see anyone.. his eyes were fixed on riddhima...

He watched Muskaan hug riddhima after he got the bsket... she was still re in the face.

The girls jumped down from the bleachers handing the guys water and energy drinks.
even muskaan and riddhima got down to help them out.

Arman walked over as the gurls thrusted thier drinks to armaan... but he couldnt get his ees off of her..

Rids hadnt even seen Armaan.. she couldnt.. not after tht solo shout of hers.

Rids took out a bottle of gatorade.. just then she saw Armaan approaching her. she made eye contact wid him.. and for some reason again.. she couldnt break it... she didnt really want to... armaan came closer to her.. and held the gatorade botle she held out... as his hands brushed against hers... her stomach did a flip...

Armaan opened the bottle.. and took a sip.. Rids watched him drin... he looke really cute..

rids was checking him out.. she turned around and got a towel lying near her...

"umm Armaan" Rids said holding out the towel.... she tried to avoid his gaze.. it was very captivating...

"thankz " armaan said taking the towel from her hand.

Just then... the boys came up to him...

" soooo cap?? wat next?"

Oh hey guys.." armaan said coming back to reality.." ummm yeah.. alright... listen up.." Armaan said as the boys gathered around him..
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"another basket??? WOW!!! 3 baskets in a row!!!itni josh??? and he seems so much happier... kya piya ridsy ke haatho se?? Muskaan nudged riddhima.. as she watched him score another basket..

Riddhima bluhed... she couldnt help wonder wheather she was really responsible for armaan's brilliant playing.

" oh my god! Armaan fell... woh!!! .. ouch!!" muskaan jumped up..

Rids looked up.. Armaan was on the floor... he had been knowcked over..
" is he ok?????? is he alright.... did he get hurt????" Ridsy jumped down near the court.

"Armaan you alright???" ridsy called out to him.

" Armaan looked up... to see riddhima outside the court line looking very worried.
"yeah im fine.... " armaan said as he smiled and stod up.

"penalty shot... armaan malik..... 2 shots" the referee called out...
Entire stadium started to cheer....

"peice of cake...." Rahul said as he helped armaan up.

"yeah..." Atul said giving Chirag a highfive.

The St joseph boys frowned.. last thing they wanted was armaan to shoot!

As armaan stood up... the referee passed him the ball..
"this ones fer L.U" Armaan said in an audible voice as he got a clear shot..
" and this ones fer all the beautiful girls..." Armaan winked at riddhima.. who was now joined by a few more girls...

after his basket the refereee blew the whistel..
match was over...
L.U won by 6 points ...

Edited by muzic_chick247 - 17 years ago

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vini

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Posted: 17 years ago

#374

ill Pm a bit later....bit busy ryte now... ill pm later
sorry

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Kashish

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Posted: 17 years ago

#375

hey...wonderful aprt...they won...lol...keep up the good work..will be waiting to see what will happen next!

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bollywoodqueen5

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Posted: 17 years ago

#376

cool part and your doing an awesome job... hope you continue soon

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sana

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Posted: 17 years ago

#377

wooooooooooooooooooooo soooooooooooo cute & gr8 part.......... dont stop............ plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont......... & thnx 4 pm......... do pm me if u will cont

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sea_nyx

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Posted: 17 years ago

#378

hey dear,
sooo sorry i took so long to reply 🤢
but i was sleeping, the weekend and all u knw
and just got up 😛
anyway just logged in to the forum
and saw ur post
just fab 👏 👏 👏
the way the girls got ridz to cheer alone for armaan 😆

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Shruti

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Posted: 17 years ago

#379

very cool part! ur doing a gr8 job!!

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-SH-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#380

yayyyyyyy......THEY WON!!! 👏
lucky me to read 2 parts together.......after u left the last one at such deadly cliffhanger......
awesome part.........cont soooooooooooon.......

- shivani