*.*ONE DAY*.* FF P14 Pg 71 NEW* Note 76 - Page 49

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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 14(:



A small smile appeared on his lips as the warm sunlight reflected on his face. Rolling over he trailed his fingers down. Feeling her soft hair he started slipping his fingers in and out. Coming closer, he wrapped his arms around her waist. Her hair is so hmmmmmm
She moved her head slightly feeling something tickle her. As she turned around she felt his warm breath on her face. Ridhima slowly opened her eyes.

"morning wifey" she lowered her eyes as he kissed her forehead.
"morning" he smiled as she wrapped her arms around him tight, resting her head on his chest she spoke.
"can we stay here forever shona" he grinned as she carried on speaking innocently
"its nice na" Ridhima passed her warm smile feeling his arms around her waist.

"very nice" Armaan closed his eyes as ridhima placed a soft kiss on his nose.

**

"mama where is chachu" Ritu complained as she folded her arms.
"beta papa is trying to get a hold of them" Kriti looked over at
shubankar
"im trying bacha" Ritu smiled as shubankar patted her cheek.

**

"your beautiful" she giggled as she rested her head on armaan's lap.
"you told me that about' he laughed as she started the counting.
"about 304 times" she got up patting her back and flashing her warm smile.
"er 305 times soniye" Ridhima stuck her tongue out as armaan corrected her.

As he sifted himself closer to her he frowned feeling his phone beep in his pocket. Shaking his head he answered it.
"chachu where are you" Armaan smiled hearing her voice.
"aw mere bacha, how are you feeling" Armaan moved his head as ridhima blew in his ear.
"Im fine , but where are you.. with chachi na" He was shocked, he could sense the naughtiness in her tone.

"Badmash.. how do you know" Armaan grabbed hold of ridhima's arm as she tried to trail her fingers down.
"Ritu knows everything, mama and papa and ritu were worried so that why we called you know. Nothing big chachu. You enjoy with chachi. Bye bye" Armaan chuckled as she ended the call.
Ritu, he mouthed as he turned his face to ridhima.
" So madam wants to play games" ridhima moved back as armaan winked.

**

Ridhima looked down smiling while armaan handed his hand forward. Dance? And now. She blinked her eyes as he nodded in a yes. Ok!

He watched her stunned as she started with her chicken moves. Armaan blinked twice as Ridhima pulled him forward. A smile appeared on his lips as she placed his arms around her waist.
"what did you think I was doing" He shakes his head as she threw her arms around him.


**
* beep beep *


A small smile appeared on her lips as the warm sunlight reflected on her beautiful face through her opened curtains, moving her head slightly she tried to ignore her phone beeping. Rolling over she frowned. She trailed her fingers down. "Where is he?" Feeling the soft bed sheets she got up.
"Abhi" her eyes begin their search.
"Where are you?" She gasped feeling his touch, as he wrapped his arms around her waist.

"Mrs Nikita Modi, looking for me" She slightly blushed as he kissed her cheek.
" well Mr. Modi yes, I was missing my dear husband. Have you seen him anywhere" She bite her lip as he turned her around.
"maybe he is right here" she laughed lightly as he took her hand and started twirling her around.
"Abhi" she let out a giggle as he picked her up.

**

"chalo armaan, I think we should leave, its getting late" Ridhima spoke softly as armaan carried on lightly dancing with her.
"nahi" He pulled her in embrace.
"Armaan" ridhima gently pulled away, as she started walking towards her heels she felt her feet swoop off the ground.
"Amraan" She laughed as he spins her around.

**

"You all packed for thursday" Abhi spoke as he filled Nikita's maag.
"Dr. Abhimanyu Modi, I know im not exactly perfect like you but" abhi interrupts her
"Who said my wife isn't perfect" She stared in his eyes as he pulled her closer, his eyes slowly shut seeing her move closer. Nikita grinned as she brushes her cheeks past abhi's and got closer to his ears
"when you talk like this, hai main saad ki jawa" She lowered her gaze as she added
"you make me love you even more" Abhi kisses her hair gently as he wraps his arms around her. Slowly
his fingers trail down her arm, gently kissing her neck, he moves towards her face , placing a soft kiss on her eyelids.
"I love you" she smiles as Abhi places his head against hers.

**

"KYA??" Shubankar jumps up as he hears her voice, his grip around his phone got tighter
"When, and how, omg uncle didn't even tell me" kriti stares at him totally surprise while ritu giggles to herself seeing her dad completely hyper
"Bhaiya, bhaiya calm down, everything happened really fast, we didn't get the chance" She tucks her hair back as shubankar interrupts her
"What chance, Jhoote" Kriti comes closer with a questioned face.
"Who is it shubu" Shubankar smiles as he hand the phone to kriti
"Nikki" Ritu jumps up hearing her name
"Nikki masi" Shubankar picks her up.
"Niki, I cant believe im hearing your voice , its been two year" Kriti happiness reflected in her words clearly.


"toh Miss Nikita" Kriti widen her eyes as Nikita corrected her
"Bhabhi, Mrs Nikita Modi" Nikita smiled as Abhi creped behind her
"Mrs Modi" she repeated as she stared at shubankar
"How did this happened, how come you never" Nikita laughed as Kriti started throwing questions like shubankar
"Bhabhi, calm down, im tell you everything, im coming soon to new york" Kriti smiled brightly
"When and how do u know we are"
"Niki knows everything.. well bhabhi In 2 days , muskaan is always coming with us" Niki playfully pushed abhi as he started kissing her neck.
"Muskaan to" Shubankar shouted the name
Kriti handed the phone to ritu.

"Masi" Niki smiled hearing ritu voice.
" aw mera bacha, how is my princess doing"
"All good, masi when you going to come see me.. please come quick" Nikita smiled as she replied back" coming soon beta"
Ritu smiled as she handed the phone to Shubankar
"Ok bhaiya, now I have to leave for work, you take care of yourself" as nikita was about to cut the call she quicly placed the phone, near her ear again
"aur bhai don't tell armaan about me coming, I want to surprise him" shubankar smiled
"teek ha" Niki looked over at abhi as she ended the call
"Armaan? Who" Niki hugged abhi as she spoke
"Childhood best friend" Abhi smiled as he creased her hair.

**
"Armaan stop making faces now" Ridhima laughed as armaan drove silently
"can you tell me why? WHY? We had to leave so early, its like what...3pm" he placed a light smile as ridhima creased his hair.
"your like a baby, you know shona" She chuckled as she took her hand away, looking out at the window she screamed.
"What?" Armaan stopped the car quickly and face ridhima
"you ok baby" he asked concerned.
"I want ice cream" Armaan stared at her confused, he mouthed her words and looked over through the window. He laughed as he saw a ice cream van.
"chalo"

As they got out, armaan laughed as ridhima rushed and order her ice-cream. As he took his and paid he watched her lovely as she licked her ice cream like a baby. As she turned to took at him, she rubbed some ice cream on her nose unknowingly. Ridhima stared at armaan totally confused as he laughed.

Coming closer to her he kissed the ice cream off. Ridhima blushed while armaan started eating his ice cream.

Preview: " Rahul" Armaan laughed as rahul touched his cheek
"She touched me man" he smiled as he remembered the slap
"touch you? She slapped you man" Armaan threw him a beer can.
"Nahi. she touched me" Armaan placed his arms around him.
"That's what happens when you fall in love" Rahul stared at him shocked.

Promo: *

" DR Modi. This is a hospital, not a romance hall" Nikita chuckled as Abhi started playing with her hair
"Toh, you my wife and I got the licence to romance anywhere"

**

* SLAP *

He stared at her while she walked past annoyed.
**
"She touched me" Armaan stared at him completely shocked
"rahul"

**
"mera bacha, come here" Shubankar smiled as he took them in a hug
"We missed you bhai"




I hope it was long enough and worth the wait. Im really sorry if I have disappointed any of you. Please do feel free to say. Im also sorry for not updating part 15, got loaded with work so only wrote part 14. Will try and update tomorrow, if not soon as possible.

Take care 😳

P.s P.s Sorry if i didnt pm. 😛

Edited by Asthuox - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
ypeee me 1s t🥳

that was a fab prt 👏👏
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Edited by madz786 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
awwwwwwwwwww loved it astha di tooo well written i really missed ur writtin do continue sooon awwwwwwww toooo chweet for AR. loved Abhi and nikki chooooooo cute
thnks for the Pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
good job astha!...continue son, thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 16 years ago
yaaaaaaaaay u finally updted lol
n i luved it reallyt nice part very cute n romantic
n luved the way u introduced da ovrs couples
thx 4 da pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey sweety..dat ws amazing update..luvd it..continue soon..cant wait 2 read more..
thanx fr PM..
luv ya..
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Posted: 16 years ago
woah🤗 its really an awesome one⭐️ mind blowing😳😳😍 what a romantic update❤️☺️ Niki & abhi also in story😊😊 soo sweet😎 plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉

"Ae khat ja unke hatho ko chum le,
wo padhe to unke hotho ko chumle,
khuda na kare wo phar bhi dale,
to girte girte unke kadmo ko chum lay."



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Posted: 16 years ago
I had read the part before you pmed* me .. he he .. it was awesome as always .. in future, please put more or Armaan and Ridhima's scenes .. please and continue soon ...
Rukz

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