FF- Kuch to Hua Hai- *p.39*update 30/05 - Page 10

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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwww!! I like Rannu. God how can she not fall in love with him? poor girl. She is helpless!! Cont soon! Hope your exam was ok!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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CCCCCCCHHHHHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CCCCCCCCCCHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWTTTT
cant tell ya how much i luv ur ff
plz cont soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#93
that was awsome, brilliant and so sweet...
pls continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#94
great update! thx for making it long! 👏 👏 👏
i wonder...whats gonna happen if ayaan finds out?
or will kanya tell ranbir the truth 😲
plz continue soon 😆 😆 😆
Edited by pinkfly716 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#95
awww 😍 😍 😍
howww cuteeee 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#96
hey i dint read it yet but i wil later but i know it wil be good.as always.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks so much for the comments everyone 😊

I'll update soon!

Edited by punjabi.princes - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Heres the next part! 😊

Part 9:

After he gets the fire started, he walks over with a few blankets

R: here take some. I found them over there.

He puts them next to her and takes one and drapes it around her.

He then walks across to the other side of the fire and sits down leaning on the wall on another blanket

K thinking: he's so sweet and has so much respect for women since he kept his distance. But do I want him to keep this distance

She remembers there kiss by the lake before. It was so passionate yet so sweet.

As shes sitting there lost in the thought, Ranbir shuts his eyes remembering having Kanya in his arms

R thinking: only is that moment could have frozen. Shes such a nice girl and I would never do anything to hurt her

All of a sudden theres a lot of thunder and lightning outside. Kanya jerks up and runs across to where he's sitting and sits right next to him and grabs his arm

He opens his eyes and feels like he's dreaming.

Kanya is sitting right next to him with her eyes closed and shes shaking slightly

R: kanya whats wrong

He sits up now and she puts her arms around him and rests her head on his chest

K: I'm scared of thunder

R smiles: I told you don't be scared of anything. Your with me

Thunder strikes again! Her grip gets tighter around his waist

R: kanya. Its okay relax

He takes his hand and removes her hair away from her face.

Ranbir thinks she looks even more beautiful in the dim light

He then takes her face in his hands and puts it towards his

R: kanya its okay I'm here

But kanya can't hear a thing he's saying. She's just gazing into his eyes. The eyes that she just wants to drown in to

The barn door flies open due to the wind and this breaks their eye lock and their attention goes to the door

R: let me just go close that

He gets up, leaving her alone

She just watches him as he puts stuff infront of the door so it won't open

Thunder strikes again. And kanya realizes that shes all alone and ranbir is busy doing something.

She gets up and runs towards him. She has no control over what shes doing and she runs into his arms

K: you said you wouldn't leave me

R: I'm sorry.

K: promise you won't leave me all night

He doesn't say anything. She breaks out of his hug and looks up at him

K: promise?

R smiles: yeah I promise

They gaze into each others eyes. There hands go closer and closer and there now holding hands

Ranbir puts his other arm around her waist and pulls her closer

She slowly shuts her eyes and moves her face toward his

He leans in and kisses her on her forehead.

Then moves down to her closed eyes

Then moves down to her cheeks, kisses them, and then backs off and stares at her

At that moment it hit him that she is the girl he wants forever and wants to spend the rest of his life with her.

She stood there awaiting for him to kiss her on the lips. He finally leaned in towards her lips and pecked them gently.

After she responded to the kiss, it deepened further and further and they made out. He slowly backed her towards the fire area

He moved his lips from hers to her neck

When he kissed her neck so lovingly she got goosebumps and shivers. A feeling that she never got before from anything or anyone

His hands made there way to her back and he started to unzip her top

But then he stopped and zipped it back up. He just lowered his hands back towards her waist

This made Kanya think: why did he stop? She wanted this to happen. She wanted to be his. She wanted him to make love to her

K: Ranbir, I love you

This made ranbir stop kissing her neck and he looked at her closed eyes

R: open your eyes kanya

She slowly opened them

R: I love you too

He hugged her tightly and kept saying: I love you. I love you so much

K: really. Show me how much you love me

He now slowly unzipped her top and gently touched her naked back.

He lay her down on the hay and they made love for the first time to each other. So sweet, so tender, so passionately.

That night was the best night of their lives and they really cherished it because it made them one.

The next morning Ranbir woke up first. The sun was just rising and its rays reflected kanya's beauty even more.

He couldn't believe that he spent the night with her. It was like a dream or a fantasy come true.

He leaned over and kissed her shoulder, then her neck and then her lips. They were soft as ever

She opened her eyes and saw Ranbir over her. She hugged him tightly, not ever wanting to let go

After they made out for a while, they both got dressed and left the barn.

Kanya just held his hand the whole way back to the car. She didn't say anything to him and he didn't say anything to her

They just felt the love between them and that was all they needed.

When they got to the road they saw a taxi and went back to the hotel.
The whole ride back Kanya just slept in his arms. A peaceful sleep that she hadn't had for so many restless nights. He secured her in his strong arms and every now and then he would whisper in her ear: "Kanya I love you so much"

She would smile and kiss him and say: I love you too

It was 9 in the morning when they got there so everyone they knew was still in their rooms

They went in the elevator and up to her room.

K: you want to come in

He stepped in but pulled her back towards the door

R: kanya I love you soo much

K: I know

R: please don't ever leave me

K: I won't

R: promise

K: I promise

She hugged him one last time and then he left to his room to get dressed

He had a meeting that day but kanya was off that day

She decided to stay in her room until the evening and wait for Ranbir to come back. She lay on her bed just remembering everything from last night and replaying it in her head. And slowly she fell asleep

She woke up with the sound of the bell at her door. It was around 1 pm

K: hmm I wonder who it could be. Everyone usually calls me before coming

She opened the door and just saw a big bouquet of red roses infront of her

K: who is it?

The person still wasn't coming forward. But finally lowered the bouquet

K: tum?!?




It was Ranbir! (lol scared you guys!!)

K: Ranbir tum? What are you doing here now?

He enters the room and just picks her up in his arms and kisses her

K giggling: stop it. Don't you have a meeting to be at

R: I do but I got some people to cover for me, saying I wasn't feeling well

K: oh so your not feeling well

She gets out of his arms

K: you should go to YOUR own room and rest. Bye

R: kanya why are you being like this. I came especially for you

He picks her up in his arms and puts her on the bed and jumps on top of her

He leans in and starts kissing her. She closes her eyes and takes in the warm sensational feeling

After making out for a while, he sits up

Kanya gets up as well and is blushing like crazy

R: come on get ready. I want to take you somewhere

K: where

R: it's a surprise

So kanya quickly gets ready and is dying to know what surprise Ranbir could have planned

He takes her out to the lake and by the deck theres a beautiful little boat. Its decorated with flowers and red balloons. Something that would be perfect for Valentines Day

K: for me?

R: no I just wanted to show it to you because its for my girlfriend

K annoyed: ranbir!!

R: just joking love. Obviously its for you. Come on lets go

They go into the boat and have a wonderful lunch

He then takes her to the inside part of the boat. It's a small little room decorated like its someones suhaag raat

K: oh so is this for your girlfriend too

R: yeah. I thought I would just test it out with you first

K: ranbir!

She hits him on his arm but he grabs her and takes her to the bed

R: kanya I really love you. I don't want you to think I'm only with you for the physical part. I truly love you, desire you, and respect you.

He gently kissed her

Kanya knew that every single word that came out of his mouth was the truth and he really did love her.

They then fell asleep in each others arms.

The next 2 days went by like this. Ranbir would go for his quick meetings and then spend the rest of the day with her. They were inseparable but they didn't want anyone to know about their relationship yet because they were suppose to be there for business

On the third day, they went out for lunch. Kanya told Ranbir about how she did some really dumb things in her past and because of that her Dad doesn't talk to her. And shes not allowed to live with her family.

He assures her that he will help her fix everything and doesn't question her about why her Dad doesn't talk to her.

As they enter the hotel again after lunch, Kanya freezes

R: hey whats wrong?

She still didn't move and had an icy look in her eyes

R: kanya, sweetheart are you okay

K: papa

R: what? Where

He looked around and saw a group of older business men standing in the lobby

R: come on Kanya. Just go over there and talk to him. He'll be so proud of you being here for this big conference.

K: are you sure?

R: yeah you go over. I'll just wait and watch from here. I think its best if you don't tell your Dad about me yet. Let him get alright with you first and then I'll meet him.

K: why are you so sweet and considerate

R: because I love you so much

He squeezes her hand lovingly: now go before he leaves

Kanya slowly walks up to her dad. She hadn't seen him for a whole year. He looked older but there was still a sparkle in his eyes

Ranbir sat down on a bench in the lobby and picked up a newpaper. He couldn't read it but used it to cover his face a little

Kanya finally reached her Dad and put her hand on his shoulder to get his attention

He turned around and looked at kanya

K was almost in tears: I'm sorry papa. Please forgive me

Kanya thought her Dad would just turn around and ignore her but his straight face soon turned into a smile

Anand: come here beta

He opened his arms for her to come hug him and kanya ran and hugged her Dad so tight

K: I'm so sorry papa. I hurt you so much. I should have never went against you

An: shhh its okay kanya. I'm not mad at you anymore

K: really

An: yeah beta

Kanya was soo happy. Her Dad had finally forgiven her

An: you want to know why I forgave you

K: why?

An: because of him

He points to somewhere behind Kanya. She turns around and sees Ranbir still sitting on the bench with a confused smile and a questioning smile wondering if everything is okay

She smiled back at him. BUT then her eyes fell on the figure approaching past Ranbir and coming towards her.

It was none other than Ayan!


~Please comment and let me know how you like it 😊
Edited by punjabi.princes - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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whoa!! the 1st person?? yay! That was like awww...Yay Aayan is here!! now the fun starts!! dying to know what comes next!!!

Edited by Perfangel5655 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
😲 -- this is so sad 😆 😆 how did ayan turn nice againn 😆 😆

neways
very cuteeee update 😳 😳
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