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Posted: 17 years ago
#71
ok i will continue just give me some time and as i promised to priyanka i should continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
#72
here is the part
ridz hugs arman and says i love u and arman also says her i love u
after hugging for 5 min ridz realised that anjali,atul,rahul and muskaan[with some tears] staring at them she departs from the hug and even arman realises the situation and he dont want to get ridz in trouble so he starts to plan some thing
anj[in shock]: ridzie ye tum kya kaha tum arman se pyaar karthe ho
ri just looks down 😳
ar[gets some idea]: he starts laughing and this shocked all including ridzie
atwith look]: why r u laughing arman??
ar: arey champ ye tum logon ne kya socha me aur ridz pyaar omg and starts laugh again
all [except ridz]: kya????
ar: nahi yaar ye tho ek bet that agar me bike race me jheethe tho ridz ko jho me kahoonga wo karna chaahiye aur me tho sab ke saamne propose karne ko kaha aur hug karne ko kaha isiliye wo aise kiya and winks at ridz 😉
ri[little bit relieved]: haa arman is right
ar: by the way ridz i should say u r a great actor u should have choosen acting proffession
ri[just gives him a look]
muskaan goes and hugs arman : tum tho mujhe dara dhiya 😭
now any one continue iam very very sorry if it bores u actually i dont want that all comes to know about them now thats y



Edited by urmila_17 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#73
hey yaar urmi its toooooooooooooo gud its excellent
and its perfectly ok if u dont want anyone to know we will hav some story left then
and it is not at all boring never say that 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#74
thanks for the update please continue soon

roshni ban ke aayi ho tum
zindagi se hamari door hua andhkar hai
aur kisi se dil kya lagayen hum
hame to sanam sirf tumhi se pyar hai.
Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#75
wow.plz continue some1
luv this ff
ishiqa
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76
hey priyanka thanks a lot for ur comments i thought u would kill me as i spoilt it and made a secret confession again
hmmmm priyanka i think this is not fair now i cant continue but i will continue if any others continue again doing promise for it
now u or pragati should continue
where did pragati went she even didnot say how is my part
pragati??????????????????????? where r u?????????????
priyanka if pragati wont continue u should do it i dont know any thing and listen no excuses am i over acting 😕 any how i dont mine now decide who r gonna continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
#77
urmi yaar my grand parents hav come today so i cant cont
sorry plz its isnt a excuse if i cont my internet will be closed for ever rightnow
and pragati where hav u vanished 😕
sorry again
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Posted: 17 years ago
#78
oho its ok priyanka i can understand ur situation i hope ur grand parents go back soon 😆 sorry i dont want to miss u thats y i wont force u now and whenever u get time do the update actually tommorow i have exam after that i will update . and yaar where is this pragati ????????? pragati come back
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Posted: 17 years ago
#79
this is only fr urmi
it is short srry

every one went for their duty bt anjali
on the way of her duty was thinkinng something
she found ridz action very wierd she knew
her sis well and knew tht she wont do some thing
like this
bt then she reached genral ward and left tht
thought there only
scene shifts to corridor
ridz was walking
suddenly she was pulled by some one in
the fire exit ofcourse it was armaan
ar-to aap mujhse pyaar karti hain
r(teasingly)-nahi tumhe yeh kisne kaha
ar-acha (he started pulling her toward him)
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Posted: 17 years ago
#80
omg priyanka thanks a lot for dedicating ur part to me and yaar though it is short its very sweet excellently written priyanka 👏 and anjali started suspecting some change in ridz great and last scene gave a romantic touch excellent i know its very difficult to maintain the time on this site if relatives come to our house but thanks a lot for writing it for my sake iam very grateful to that.
priyanka dont mine i will update tommorow u know about my exam so i think i no need t repeat it
once agin thanks a lot for ur part dedicating to me

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