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Posted: 16 years ago
adi that was a stupendous part.. i loved the part from the bottom of my heart.. finally things are going good between sujal-kashish & angad-kripa... sujal-kashish ne apni saare differences ke baare mein baat kii...it is good to know that.. kehthe hai kii bat karne se aadhe se zyada problems, misunderstandings clear ho jaathi hai.... commuunication is the key... and sujal-kashish talked everything out.. aur dekho unke beech kii har ghalatfaimi udanchu ho gayi hai... the way they express their care for each other... the love they feel for each other.. all of this was just awesome.. the romance between sujal-kashish was tooooooooo gooddddddddddd... i'am was blushing like hell... absolutely romantic.... dusari taraf angad ka kripa ko sambhal na.. that was good to see kii kripa is leaning on to angad for support.. and may be she has also understood that angad's shoulders are protective of her & she can cry on them.. the scene jahaan kripa wants to sleep close to angad.. how sweet... i really liked that scene...indeed very cute.. the story is progressing too well.. keep up the good work going.....👏 adi please continue soon..i'am waiting for the next part eagerly..😊
Edited by sun_423 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice part
liked the way angad comforted kripa...dat was very sweet
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetchick786

hey great part!!thanks im really really glad ak are finally getting closer hopefully they will become one soon and forget the bad times!wait & watch im also glad the misunderstandings are clear btwn sk!! me 2n*e ways continue soon!!i will

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Originally posted by: sun_423

adi that was a stupendous part.. thanks i loved the part from the bottom of my heart.. finally things are going good between sujal-kashish & angad-kripa...yep they r sujal-kashish ne apni saare differences ke baare mein baat kii...thye sure did it is good to know that.. kehthe hai kii bat karne se aadhe se zyada problems, misunderstandings clear ho jaathi hai.... thats y they talked to clear everythign out commuunication is the key... i am a strong believer in that and sujal-kashish talked everything out.. aur dekho unke beech kii har ghalatfaimi udanchu ho gayi hai... the way they express their care for each other... the love they feel for each other.. all of this was just awesome.. glad u liked it the romance between sujal-kashish was tooooooooo gooddddddddddd... i'am was blushing like hell...some1 once told me that girls look beautiful when they blush so keep on blushing absolutely romantic.... dusari taraf angad ka kripa ko sambhal na.. that was good to see kii kripa is leaning on to angad for support.. and may be she has also understood that angad's shoulders are protective of her & she can cry on them..hope so...keep ur fingers crossed the scene jahaan kripa wants to sleep close to angad.. how sweet... i really liked that scene...indeed very cute.. thanks the story is progressing too well.. keep up the good work going.....👏 thanks adi please continue soon..i'am waiting for the next part eagerly..😊

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Originally posted by: deeya123

nice part thanks

liked the way angad comforted kripa...me 2 dat was very sweet it sure was

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey adi..Wish you a Very Happy Holi...😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Adi,
Thx foa the pm... Just finished readin the last 3/4 parts as was outta town so didnt got time earlier...
Realli great parts... Good tht SK problem is solved n they have united..
N Kirpa is trustin Angad slowli slowli.. Thtz real good...
Continue soon......
Love Jess
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Posted: 16 years ago

MORNING:

Kripa woke up early in the morning with a beautiful smile on her face. She was content… no longer afraid to face the world now… Angad was by her side… he wouldn't let any1 hurt her. He had been up most of the night becoz of her… she knew that as she felt him stroking her hair so that she could sleep soundly… till the time she was in deep slumber. She felt hom close to her even her deep slumber. Just thinking abt him brought a bigger smile on her face & she snuggled closer to him for comfort. He had been good to her from the day thye got married. He didn't give her much to complaint abt. She could clearly see that he loved her which was evident in his eyes but she was afraid to acknowledge it. She didn't want another heartbreak… she would die this time. But he had been good to her… he had helped her to get Sujal & Kashish together… he made her believe that there could b misunderstanding between the people who love each other a lot… she wanted to b 1 of them… she wanted to believe that her & Angad were also 1 of those people & they were separated becoz of a misunderstanding.

But she knew it was not… at 1 moment she wanted to just forget everything & move on with Angad… let him know that she loved him very much… but at the other moment she was afraid as to what if he didn't love her back… what if all this was just one of his jewels in his belt… what better way to let the world know that he could conquer his own broken heart. She knew in the heart of her heart that it was no true… that he loved her equally if not more…

All that debating was not good… as it would surely give her a bad headache… she knew it better than any1 else. Slowly she got out of his hold… taking care that he doesn't wake-up Kripa went to take her shower… with certain questions still playing in her mind.

Angad got up after a few mins to notice that Kripa was no longer beside him. He wanted to wake up with her still in his arms. He wanted to cherish her feeling close to him but that was not the case. He checked the bathroom but it was wet & devoid of her… which meant that she has had her shower & has gone down to help in the kitchen work.. she may not have been his wife… but she was the perfect Daughter-in-law for this house & a perfect business partner at work. Angad felt it was the perfect time to force his parents to not to send them to London… not at this time of the year… he didn't want to feel weak… but London… at this time of the year… brought out the emotional Angad Khanna… which had died 8yrs ago…

HOTEL RIZWAN:

Sujal woke up with a smile on his face… after a long time. He knew … he felt Kashish close to him… which clearly stated that everything would b good now. He knew that with by his side he could tackle everything in life. He looked at her with her face pressed closer to him seeking comfort. She looked so pure & innocent at this time… he just wished he could wake her up right now & make love with her right now… sweet & soft … like last night. He tries to get up but Kashish's Arms r around him. Slowly he separates from her & brushes his lips with her making her smile even in sleep. He picks up his shirt from the floor & goes to the wadrobe. As soon as he opens it he remembers that he hadnrt gotten anything with him… but he is surprised to find himself a few shirts & a few dresses for Kashish along with a note. "if u want u can stay here for many days… v will not tell any1."

This brings a smile on his face & he thinks… "both Kripa & Jess r devils… but in a good sweet way." He picks up a shirt & goes to freshen up after ordering breakfast for himself & Kashish.

Kashsih wakes up patting the bed for Sujal. But her hand reaches the warm bedsheet… stating that Sujal has just left her side. She opens her eyes with a frown but with a smile on her lips. The events of last night were still fresh in her mind… & she was happy abt them. It had gotten her & Sujal more close than ever. She could still feel Sujal's lips over hers… his hands playing a havoc on her sences by touching her… stroking her… all over her body. He knew that she was his forever… there was no barrier in between them… there was no1 in the world who could stop them for declaring their love for each other.

She was still lost in her thoughts when she felt Sujal's arms around her & his lips kissing her neck.

KA: when did u get out??

S: when u were lost in ur thoughts… (he makes her lie flat on her back with his lips tracing patter on her face) what were u thinking???

KA: that life is so beautiful with u…

S: that sure is…

KA: Sujal… stop it… u r playing a havoc on my sences…

S: that's the idea…

KA: but I am hungry… I have no energy in me…

S: well the food is on its way… till then v can enjoy…

KA: may be…

S: what do u want to do today???

KA: go to the office…

S: that's boring… as it is u can take a break for few days…

KA: (lifts herself up to stop his lips from roaming around more) what do u want???

S: I want to stay with u in this room forever…

KA: that's boring…

S: well… let me complete… I want to make love with u in here…

KA: (blushes)stop it…

S: u r still blusing like u did before v got married…

KA: well u leave no way out for me…

S: (kisses her forhead & slips his hand on her shoulders) back to the main point… what do v do today?

KA: y not go & shop for the baby???

S: good idea… but before that v need to get back home. Did u tell mom & dad abt it??

KA: no… v still need to tell every1.

S: ok… v will freshen up & then go to home & tell mom dad abt it…

KA: they will b really happy…

S: yep they will be… r u happy Kashish?

KA: (kisses his lips) more than happy… I feel like I am in a paradise.

S: well I am going to keep it that way…

KA: I love u Sujal…

S: love u 2…3… 4…

KA: no1 can win from u…

S: very true… now 1st a few ground rules…

KA: (with a frown) for???

S: so that u & the little 1 here (kisses her stomach) get the best in the world.

KA: ok… start.

S: u will take proper rest…

KA: ok…

S: u will not take any tension… b it professional or personal… give them 2 me…

KA: ok…

S: u will always keep a smile on ur face.

KA: (with a big smile)ok.

S: give me a kiss daily.

KA: (kisses his lips)agreed.

S: have everything healty to eat on time.

KA: ok.

S: take a bath with me.

KA: ok… (realizes what she has just said) no… Sujal that's not fair…u tricked me…

S: (picks her up in his arms & kisses her cheeks)b everything is fair in love, love.

He takes her to the bathroom inspite of her attemps to stop him & closes the bathroom door with a click… & overcoming all her complaints with the flow of water.

COMING UP NEXT: Romance in Rome.

hey every1,
& happy holi to all of u... hope all of u enjoyed it.
well here's the next part with AK & SK. the next part will b for my AR lovers... hope all of u like it.
do leave ur comments.
i have started a new thread... do read....
LOVE
ADI
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: j44a

Hey Adi, hi

Thx foa the pm... u r welcomeJust finished readin the last 3/4 parts as was outta town so didnt got time earlier... its ok...
Realli great parts...glad u liked it Good tht SK problem is solved n they have united..yep
N Kirpa is trustin Angad slowli slowli.. Thtz real good... glad u liked it
Continue soon...... i just have
Love Jess

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey great part
Yay I'm th first one
I hope Kripa forgets the past and moves on
Sujal and Kashish were so cute
Javeria
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Posted: 16 years ago
it is really gud plz contd soon

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