Tujhe Yaad Na Meri Aayi Prt 6-Pg 1 (13/07 - Page 9

hey naina,
gr8 post,
i loved the way armaan comforts ridz, especially the way he takes her to the children's ward to how her life goes on 😊 👏 ,but i feel sorry for the poor guy, imagine having to have to deal with ur gilfrnd's entire family on a daily basis 😆

wot 2 say
jus d best 😛
update soooon

hey naina,

very touchy and emotional part.......BRILLIANT....
u r a fab writer....
I m loving the old couple's chemistry very much....

thanx for d pm..

cont soooooooooooooooon....

luv,
shivani 😳

wow that was sooooo good! poor ridz, thats so sad that her patient died. it helped armaan realize he likes her tho! awwww so cute! haha and he asked her out! omg i hope she says yes! please continue soon!

wow amazing yaar naina
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now what to say naina its just awesome loved it a lot
👏

its amazing finally arman felled totally for ridhima great

and ridz doesnt she have any feelings towards arman

and the way u explained was superb

arman asked ridz for date wow amazing now what will she do?????

hope she accepts it

and thanks a lot for ur pm

plssssssssss update it super soon

hey naina
reseved
sorry for late comments but im having an imp exam coming up so im a bit busy with its prep so ill coment in detail later on but ill be reading the updates
sorry
😭 😭 😭

Hey, Again an excellent part! Loved the way he asked her out! Plzzzzz update soon.

Hey Bakri (Nainu Bacchu),

Gosh..... this part was just brilliant... What to say just amazing...i loved Riddhima and Mr Ntini's little relationship... that was soooo cute...Popsie and Puppy.. loving the cute names... Some medical info... nice.... u did ur research i see....good good!!!😆

I liked Armaan and Ridzi's interaction.. Armaan has such an understanding nature.. and i think that's what i like about him in this FF... he's mature and at the same time very childish...😳 I loved the way he pacified and wiped her tear... that was very appropriate for that moment.. subtle and simple.. just brilliant😳

The cantene scene was so written marvellously.. simple always does the trick... and Armaan's joke truly was tacky😆😆😆 , i whole heartedly agree with Ridz here!!! The emergency scene was really nicely written....👏👏.. and i the old couple part was just sooo cute... i love the way old man is descrbing the story... and Lola gardens...nice name and such a beautiful pic of the garden...as a sanctuary... i can so imagine just sitting there reading a book... 😳

The Garden scene- 😳 This scene was just so beautifully written... i love the way you describe it... it was soooooooooooooooo simply written and so mesmerising...i loved this scene... so wonderfully written..not much was said.. but yet soo much was heard!!!😳

I loved the present scene after the garden scene, even more... i love your lines... they are just so elegant and perfect for the situations... the comparison of seasons changing with feelings was just so apt..

The children scene-Uffff u have left me speechless with this part... i can't find enough words to describe this scene... the comparison of children with adults was amazing... and yea childrens do have a better perception than adults...👏
"No smile is as beautiful as the one that struggles through the tears" Wow... what a mesmerising line... This scene was just wow!!!

Ur soooo funny bakri.. bechara Armaan ko Ridzi ki family ke beech main phasa ke rakh diya... Anjali Joshi.. she seems nice though... uff Armaan's line "Tum kya woh types hau" cracked me up...😆.. He is sho cute... he was so nervous to ask her out...😳, bless him..Yasir is chooo shweet... he knows ke 'kuch tau gadbad hai'.. . i wonder what she's gonna say????😳

Wud be interesting to read the next part!!! Loved this part!!!😳😳Thanks for the PM.

Luv
Sweety Di
XxX