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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks for giving the link.
Wonderful part. Lengthy tho cute and detailed.
Loved the kitchen scene between AK . You well picturised and the way they were embarrassed in front of Sanya and Aditya.
Good scene when Angad asked for forgiveness.
The best and unique part is the 'proposal'. Loved the way Angad wrote about his feelings from the beginning in his diary and made kripa write her responses. Well portrayed. Great way of their confession.
The whole scene after proposal and all friends' meet is awesome.
Great ending.
Hope you come up with another wonderful creation. PM me whenever u come back with new one.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awesome part.👏I liked the lengthy part.The way Aditya and his wife found AK kissing in hte kitchen was cute.AK is always the best jodi.Ayush and Abhi are always fun.Angad doesn't remeber thier first meeting but Kripa did😉😆.The way he expressed his feelings for her and the note was simply superb.Everyone realised that Kripa is the main reason for thier unity now.Kripa's uncle accepted Angad even though he had doubts about him.Wondrfull ending.Hope u start another fanfiction.PM me.Waiting for the Epilogue.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetaddiction

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WOWOWWWW--- --- loved it !!!-- esp the kitchen scene and the diary--- twas a wonderful fanfic and am still excited to read the epilogue !!_- update soon !!!!!!!!!!


lol awww thanks😊 lol well kinda weird but yea i went on the net and reserched for best proposing ways! 😳 oh well thanks so much . epilogue will hopefully be soon


Originally posted by: sweet honey

hey....awesome part...awww loved the wai angad proposed to kripa thought it was very cute....awww poor kripa soo embarasd wen aditya n sanya walked in on them kissing.....cnt wait 4 da epilouge cont soon...n mery xmas n happy new yr


thanks honey😃 lol well angad was an angry young man before but now that the love of his life is with him, he's showing his art of romace😛 hope u had a gd christmas and new year!


Originally posted by: Madiha Pardesi

awwwww....such a sweet n romantic part....i can imagine how embarasd krpa may hv been frm da kissin incident....Angads proposal actually made me wonder if guys cud ever be sooo romantic...n about da part where he sed i wanna move on from da kissing i cant say nythin bt 'ahem ahem'...lvd it completely.....dis part was definitely worth all da w8 n don worry faiza if u gt ryt to b lazy if v gt such excellent parts in da end....however i m sad dat such a gr8 fic has ended bt hopin dat ul soon start another 1.....tc


Thanks madiha😊 lol very embarassed sicne she has quite a reputation of an angel for everyone in this ff😉 lol i dnt knw about that but i found an example on the net so tried it out😳 lol the comment was too embarassing for kripa.... lol i'm being too lazy though. i need to start working faster on the ff if I wanna carry which i fully have the intentions of.😃 well this ones finshing because i dont want to drag it like a drama. but dnt worry will be back very soon with a new concept


Originally posted by: sameira-90

hey wow Faiza awsome part..i am glad everything is ok between sanya n angad.. finally he proposed to her..continue soon...


Thanks sameira. 😊 well yea finally devar bhabi are in a peaceful union. lol and yeah finally he proposed


Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

mind blowing ending

i really liked the way u showed the sweet romantic moments between angad and kripa their were really amazing.The scene were aditya and sanya catch AK kissing was really funny poor kripa got embarassed.
I really loved the way angad proposed to kripa it was to good because it was really different and only angad could come up with the idea.Finally angad and sanya sorted out their differences all because of armaan and kripa.I really enjoyed the way u showed how kripa helped the khanna family with their problems and the way she supported angad through his hard times.Cant wait 2 read the epilouge.


thankyou😃 lol totally embarassed. aditya had a good teasing them though😉 lol yh true angad pops out ideas randomly. lol yay yup they solved there problems; thanks to armaan really but kripa helped a lot with the nagging. armaan just had a better understanding and explanation. Thank you so much😊


Originally posted by: Shafoo

i love it plzz contuied soon it was awesome part


Thanks shafoo😊


Originally posted by: Angad-Kripa#1

OMG!! SO ROMANTIC!! I could feel butterflys in my stomach as i read each sentence. Love the way you explain evrything. It touches my heart and its so deep. Im quite surprised...ur an AWESOME writer. Looking forward to more story's from u. Pm me when u start a new one. Plus pm me when u update the epilogue,looking forward to thier suhaag raat. :) Harji


lol thanks harjii😃 awww wow really! thanks, thats really encouraging but everyones a good writer on here. I was really crap when i started writing😳 lol i dont plan to stop writing , i quite enjoy writing. lol I'll pm everyone, hmm suhaag , lets see what the epilogue has for you😉 by the way will catch up with ur fan fic as soon as my exams finish
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: rima791

excellent update
the proposal was just the cutest, it was my fav moment and the entire part rocked
the kiss was just wowwwww
angad is too shameless and naughty lolz
awww kripa was like blushing the whole time
rids became a shameless too, just liek she said, she need to be in order for her to leave with one lolz
armaan was as usual and so was sanjeeda
love the bro talk between angad and aditya
the apology scene was sweeet, glad to knw angad finally did it
ayush and abhi were so cute at the end lolz
do cont soon when you can


awww thanks rima😃 lol i guess the proposal was long awaited😉 sure he is; he's going to show kripa lifetime of romance. lol yup ridz has to be shameless to cope with someone as shamless armaan. I guess people become bold or quiet to meet here partners needs. lol yup finally forgiveness came. angad and aditya share a sweet brothers relationship , it was just angads misunderstanding which had him deprived of it for so long. lol ayush and abi are relaly cute. thankyou🤗


Originally posted by: hi50

excellent update as usual 👏!! I loved every bit of it. 😳.. specially, the proposal part is so unique and cute 👏!! we'll be eagerly waiting for the upcoming part of this ff as well as the new ff, you just mentioned..

and, of course, thanks for the pm..


thanks😳 glad u liked it. lol proposal was kinda different to the usual


Originally posted by: j44a

Awww...... Awesome part................

The diary part was just the best... Such a unique idea to propose ... Just loved it.... It was sso soo soo romantic...
Angad realli is shamless just like Armaan.. Alwaz makin the gurl blush.. The kissing scene in the kitchen was soo cute as well...
The brotherli talk was great.. plus the apology scene.. So glad tht Angad finall realized his mistake and everthing is all good.. All thanks to Kirpa n Armaan.. Such good frds he have.......
N not to forget Sanjeedaz Shahid talks.. Shez real cute and funny..
All in all just loved ur ff....
Waiting foa the Epilogue... Plz post it soon...
Love Jess


Thanks jess! lol unique coouples have unique ideas😉 lol he sure is; he just had his art of romance hidden for a while. lol cute and embarassing😆 thanks, lol angad had really good friends and supporters thats why he could overcome all his problems but many people dont. lol sanjeeda is shahid crazy;lets see what hayaa is😉


Originally posted by: desiqt8806

lovely update!!!! yayy! finally angad proposed! and omg!! the way he did was tooo goooddd!! too romantic!! and tooo cute!! and too sweeet!!
any girl would love to have a proposal like that for sure!!
and like everyone knew about the proposal and everyone was waiting for those to two to come home and welcome them...tooo sweett! and verly lovely!!
and loved all the scenes with angad and kripa! and omg!!! the kitchen scene!! kripa embarrassed to the core!! aww poor girl!! but then again its angad who loves to do all these things haha!
but who knew a stubborn guy like angad could be soo romantic, naughty, and hott! llol!!
abhi and ayush just adorable as usual!!!
finally angad asked for forgiveness as well...could not have had a better ending that this...will be waiting eagerly for the epilogue!!


thanks rima. lol it was romantic and totally sweet of him. lol i think any of us would love a simple proposal from him😉 lol yep; everyone knew and were waiting to surprise them. lol hahaha angads evil; always embarasing kripa. aditya isnt less of a mischevious man😳 lol angads letting his art of romance out. lol thanks, glad u liked the ending, hope u like the epilogue as well.


Originally posted by: angullgrl91

aww..so romantic nd cute!

loved it!!! im relly gonna miss this fan fic!
cant wiat for the epilogue :)


thankyou😃 aww lol well i hope my next fan fic will make up for that


Originally posted by: monikaseth

awesome , mind blowing , thank you for pm swetoo.

Aww angad propose her sooo sweet i love kitchen scene soo much .

awesome FF dear thank you so much .


Thanks monika. lol angads is totally sweet. lol kitchen scene was embarassing😳


Originally posted by: deeya123

thanks for the pm faiza

very sweet and nice ending
luved it
even though m a bit sad that this was the last part but i simply enjoyed readin it


thankyou megha. Well i wouldnt want to destroy the perfect ending so its best i put a fullstop there. but theres always my next fanfic😉

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey faiza !!--
howz it goin ??
where r u ??
still waiting for the ending to ur FFF (Fab Fan Fic) :P
pls do update soon !! =)
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Originally posted by: saridena

hi faiza
thks for the pm dear
mindblowing part sweety
the proposal idea was superb
update the epilogue sooooooooooon
luv soumya


Thanks soumya; lol glad u liked it. lol I've become really bad at updating early. but im updating today😃


Originally posted by: mahi4u

hey

awwwwwwwwwwwww.................

dat was relllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyy a sweeeeeeeeetttttttttttt prt

luveddddddddd it😉

luv ya n tak care
mahru


Thanks mahru 😊


Originally posted by: sujalangad_rock

sweet part....

loved it...
angad surely found a gr8 way to propose Kripa...
conitnue soon


thankyou😃 he sure did...


Originally posted by: sweet_mittal

hey dear thnaks for continuing after such a long time

it was awesome and great and wonderful part
its lovely and romantic b/w angad and kripa
finally angad say sorry to his bhai and bhabhi now they can live as happy family once kripa comes to live in their family
awwwwwww its so cute the way angad proposed kripa and the way he wrote the diary it was so sweet of him
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon this time and now u r gonna end this ff so pleaseeeeeeee write the part in this christmas breaks
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon
love ya
mittal


thanks mittal. lol sure was sweet and romantic; i thought to fill the last parts with romance as it is, thye habvent really had a romance in most of the story😉 lol yup finally angad got the sense to realize and ask forgiveness and it was sweet reunion with an extra person added on😃 it was sure nice of angad. sorry for the long delay again. I guess christmas breaks were too stressful, and now that i finshed with my exams I'm updating today.



Happy holidays to you too😳 well i hope u had a good time😉


Originally posted by: vallanki

Thanks for giving the link.
Wonderful part. Lengthy tho cute and detailed.
Loved the kitchen scene between AK . You well picturised and the way they were embarrassed in front of Sanya and Aditya.
Good scene when Angad asked for forgiveness.
The best and unique part is the 'proposal'. Loved the way Angad wrote about his feelings from the beginning in his diary and made kripa write her responses. Well portrayed. Great way of their confession.
The whole scene after proposal and all friends' meet is awesome.
Great ending.
Hope you come up with another wonderful creation. PM me whenever u come back with new one.


Thanks vallanki di😳 lol im glad my writing could picturisque. lol I kinda searched online just see a different way for the proposal. lol thankyou; there freindship, the spescial bonding and love has brought a diordered family together😊 thankyou, I hope I can. and I sure will when I surely know my brain is free of tension🤢


Originally posted by: teri_susan

Awesome part.👏I liked the lengthy part.The way Aditya and his wife found AK kissing in hte kitchen was cute.AK is always the best jodi.Ayush and Abhi are always fun.Angad doesn't remeber thier first meeting but Kripa did😉😆.The way he expressed his feelings for her and the note was simply superb.Everyone realised that Kripa is the main reason for thier unity now.Kripa's uncle accepted Angad even though he had doubts about him.Wondrfull ending.Hope u start another fanfiction.PM me.Waiting for the Epilogue.


thanks susan😃 lol it was cute although embarassing😳 lol glad u noticed. I was hoping someone would notice that angad didnt remmeber there very first meeting. lol well they want to keep records of their love. its a sweet way and a remmeberance. well she was the one who started it so she is the real source, armaan just helped with more reasonable expalanations. thanks susan. I hope I can start another fan fiction myself, I will as soon as my brains clear enough😉

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Epilogue

Kripa walked into their honeymoon suite stifling a yawn. After the unforgettable proposal Angad and Kripa were engaged for over half a year before they decided to get married. Of course Angad wanted to get married earlier but Kripa wanted to do various tasks before getting married. She had visited her uncle and aunty in Rajasthan twice in those six months with Angad calling her with every chance. She smiled at the memory. Angad had annoyed her so much she had stopped attending his calls for two days.

Besides that Kripa had taken the full responsibility of Ridhimaa till her delivery. Of course Ridhimaa had whined about being big enough to look after herself but Armaan and Kripa pampered her to no end. She had made it a point to not get married till Ridhimaa had delivered and was completely healthy for her marriage. Ridhimaa and Angad protested but Kripa had put an end to that with all but her famous silent treatment.
Sanya was much happier since Angad and Kripa were officially a couple. Whenever Kripa didn't come home, she would visit her instead. She had become more outgoing and joyful with all the wedding arrangements. Kripa was delighted to see the change although bashful at the sudden attention she had got for her wedding.
Kripa sighed walking into the bathroom. She had got married two weeks ago and in these two weeks she had got more than she could ever wish. Abhi and Ayush were delighted with the thought of Kripa living with them forever. Sanya and Aditya were just as cheerful and caring towards her. Angad was the happiest. He couldn't keep his hands to himself from the day they were married. It was the last night of their honeymoon and surely they were the best days she had spent with Angad.
She stepped into their room after changing into her night clothes to find Angad lighting the last of the scented candles "Angad" she called with a sigh.
He turned around with a wide smile "yes sweetheart"
"We have a flight early in the morning and as much I love you, I love my sleep"
He frowned nearing her "but this is our last night"
"No baby" she circled her arms around his neck as his hands held her waist "we have many more nights to come, I don't want to wake up late and find that we missed our flight"
"Wouldn't that be good?" he groaned rubbing his lips to her neck.
She giggled and moved back "no, the kids will be disappointed and it seems like it's been ages I've seen my family"
"It's only been a week" he reminded dryly.
She smiled, leaned up and kissed him "goodnight Angad"
He grimaced and turned around to see her slipping in bed "Kripa don't do this to me. I had special plans for tonight" he complained walking towards her.
"You've had special plans all this week Angad" she reminded "come on, stop complaining and go to sleep" she said rolling to her side.
He sighed walking in the bathroom. He sulked throughout his shower. He loved his wife dearly but when she became stubborn he absolutely hated her. He still remembered how she had emotionally blackmailed him with her silent treatment to delay their wedding for Ridhimaa's delivery. He loved his friends a lot but he had dying to marry Kripa since he had proposed; but she was too busy worrying about Ridhimaa's pregnancy although Ridhimaa had protested herself. He rolled his eyes reaching for the towel. She could be so stubborn at times.
He pulled his pajamas up and walked into the room pulling a t shirt over his head. He caught sight of his petite wife sound asleep. Her wet mouth slightly curved; one hand under her cheek and the other over her hip. The top two buttons of her night shirt had come loose revealing her cleavage to his ever hungry eyes. His mouth watered at the sight.
He heaved a sigh pulling his shirt off again. He was going to seduce her. He hadn't tried that yet; although the idea of her seducing him sounded better but he knew there was no way she would seduce him right now, especially in the sleepy state she was.
He threw his shirt on the soft carpet and walked towards her. He sat beside her nearing his lips to her ear "Kripa" he whispered then blew hot air into her ear.
She groaned "mhmmm" she moaned fidgeting then stilled after finding a comfortable position. His fingers crawled under her chin, cupping her cheek. His lips lowered to her cheek, sucking the delicate skin by her mouth. She moaned pushing his face away "go to sleep Angad" she ordered half asleep.
"Later" he whispered pushing her shoulder so she lay flat beneath him "I have business to care of" his face descended towards her neck, kissing her sensitive skin.
"Mhmmm Angad" she moaned pushing at his chest weakly "I want to sleep"
"Go ahead" he mumbled against her lips "I'm not stopping you" his lips pressed down on hers, forcing her lips apart with the sensuous and rapid movements of his tongue. His tongue played with hers as she pushed against his like her hands pushed against his shoulders.
She pulled away breathing hard "Angad, you can't force me" she growled.
He pressed kisses down her throat "I know I don't have a right on you" he blackmailed.
She frowned "Angad this is not done. You can't blackmail me"
He lifted his head "I'm not" his hands travelled behind her neck "how can I blackmail you when I have no right on you" his lips trailed wet patterns around her face.
She groaned tilting her head back "don't do this to me Angad. It's not fair" she argued holding him around his waist.
His lips traced patterns across her collarbone, moving her shirt aside "you do it to me all the time"
She frowned letting him unbutton her shirt "I always have a valid reason" she reasoned "hmmm Angad" she groaned when he bit into her skin.
He grinned moving upwards "my reasons valid enough" she rolled her eyes in response. He laughed and kissed her full on her mouth then sat up besides her rubbing his shoulder and lay down closing his eyes.
Kripa grimaced "Angad" she called shaking him.
"Hmm" he turned looking at her with a sweet innocent smile.
"What happened to your plans?" she asked moving closer, letting her fingers linger on his chiseled chest.
He caught her hands and kissed them "it was getting too easy for me to seduce you. You gave in too quickly. Why don't you seduce me instead?" he raised his brow mischievously.
"Yeah right" she punched his chest and turned her back to him "dream on"
He laughed hugging her back "you are so sweet"
"Since birth" she quipped.
"Uhmm" Angad's mouth worked on the side of her throat while his hands worked on the last few buttons on her shirt "we don't need this" he said throwing her shirt over his shoulder.
She giggled as Angad nuzzled her softness "Angad, it tickles"
He looked up grinning "where?" his hands fondled her "here?"
"I hate you so much" she retorted while he laughed and kissed her torso. She moaned when his lips reached her tummy, letting his tongue swirl her belly. Soon enough Angad released her of all their clothing and consumed her into a passionate love making session while she moaned and whimpered telling him how much she hated him for loving her so much. He simply chuckled continuing with his task till they both lay sated and tired after hours of love making.


"It's great to see you back" Aditya said hugging Kripa while Angad sulked. Kripa and Aditya laughed at his frown "come on Angad; give your brother a hug. I missed you too"
He smiled and embraced his brother "I missed you too although I wouldn't mind a longer honeymoon" he mumbled glancing at a flushed Kripa.
Aditya laughed "I'd love to send you on your honeymoon alone if that's what you want. Kripa is going stay because the kids have given us a hard time in the last week"
Angad rolled his eyes "I thought so"
Aditya shook his head helping Angad put the luggage in the boot while Kripa sat in the car. Once they were settled Aditya sat in the front while Angad joined his wife at the back "do I look like your driver?" he joked.
"Not my fault you forgot to bring your wife" he teased.
Aditya smirked "I should have bought her so I'd have the kids disturb you at the back" he winked.
Angad frowned snuggling with his wife "Angad" Kripa nudged him "go sit in the front"
"Bro doesn't mind" he replied squeezing her shoulder "so you shouldn't"
She glared at him while he smiled sweetly. Aditya smiled shaking his head as he watched Angad whisper sweet nothings in Kripa's ear, while she continued to nudge him. Days of early marriage were always the most blissful. There was always love in the air.

"I missed you so much" Kripa exclaimed hugging Ayush and Abhi while Angad watched them in envy. Of course he loved his nephews but not when they got Kripa's exceptional attention.
"What did you bring for us?" Abhi demanded "and I want my birthday present as well. You missed my birthday"
"I'm sorry baby. Your presents are in the bag" she said putting him to his feet "we'll open them later" she walked towards Sanya "how are you?"
"I'm great, you tell me? Did you enjoy your honeymoon?"
Kripa smiled shyly in response while Angad grinned sliding his arm around her waist "of course she did"
Sanya laughed "I can see that. Are you hungry?"
"I'm starving" Angad exclaimed rubbing his tummy.
Kripa looked at him with raised brows "but you ate my food with me in the plane"
He grinned sheepishly "it burns off too quickly" he winked and headed towards the kitchen in search of his lunch.
Sanya smiled watching Angad's departing back and caught Kripa's hand sitting her down "so how did it all go? Did you take pictures? I want to see them if you have"
Kripa giggled at the burst of questions and answered patiently, reddening at times. Sanya was more of a friend than a sister in law. It was so easy to talk to her.


"We were just about to head towards yours" Armaan exclaimed opening the door.
Angad grinned "well tough luck we're here now. I thought I'd empty your fridge instead of you emptying mine" he winked while Kripa frowned at him.
Armaan laughed letting them in while he yelled "Ridz, Angad and Kripa are here"
Seconds later Ridhimaa rushed out of the kitchen holding a milk bottle in her hand "it's so nice to see you" she said hugging Kripa while Kripa smiled hugging her back "we would come yesterday but Aman wouldn't stop crying" she pulled away "how are you?"
Kripa smiled widely taking Ridhimaa's arm, walking into the kitchen "I'm great. You tell me? Where's Aman? Has he grown yet?"
Ridhimaa giggled "he's asleep. And yes he's grown but not so much in a week Kripa" she placed the milk bottle on the shelf "so tell me, how was your honeymoon?"
Kripa smiled shyly "it was good. Goa's beautiful but Angad was kind of annoying. He didn't let me shop too much"
Ridhimaa chuckled "well obviously, he wanted to spend time with you not with your shopping" she winked hitting her shoulder to Kripa's playfully.
Kripa rolled her eyes "yeah, don't even ask about that. He was willing to do anything to spend time with me. He's so stubborn"
Ridhimaa laughed walking towards the cupboard "tell me about it. Armaan was no better"
Kripa laughed "men and their impatience"


Meanwhile in the living room Angad and Armaan sat in front of the television, the music blasting while they talked business "so how does it finally feel being like me?" Armaan said slapping Angad's thigh.
Angad smirked "on top of the world. God knows why so many people complain about being married. I already love it"
Armaan laughed "you're saying that because it's only the start. Once the children come, you'll know the troubles" he winked.
"Uhmm" Angad grinned "I don't know about that but I'm really happy getting married. Kripa has brought a difference to my life and I know life couldn't have been better"
Armaan wrinkled his nose "well, I hope it stays like that buddy. Since we've had Aman, life has become really busy. Ridhimaa's on her leave so I have to work at the hospital alone. She doesn't get tired with Aman at all" he sighed then grimaced when he heard his boy wail "but I'm already tired" he muttered.
"Armaan, bring Aman down?" Ridhimaa yelled from the kitchen while Angad laughed at Armaan, who rolled his eyes and skipped upstairs to come downstairs with his sulking baby.
"Come on baby, big boys don't cry" Armaan cooed trying to calm the bawling baby boy "daddy will give you lots of sweets if you stop crying"
Angad giggled walking towards the father and son "Armaan isn't he too young for sweets?"
Armaan sighed "well if he's like his father then he should understand exactly why I'm saying sweets"
"You mean he's supposed to pig out like you, huh?" Angad replied sardonically.
"I don't pig out" he said indignantly "I only get a little hungry"
Angad smiled shaking his head "admit it, you pig out"
Armaan frowned ignoring the comment and walked to the table where Aman's baby bag lay "so how's your family. It's been a while you've bought the kids down"
"Well I was busy with the wedding and all. I'll bring them down next Saturday. We can probably go to the park or something" Angad replied watching Armaan pull out a milk bottle.
"Yeah I guess" he sighed pushing the milk bottle in Aman's mouth "Ridhimaa" he yelled "come and check Aman's nappy, he seems heavy"
Seconds later Ridhimaa walked out of the kitchen glaring at Armaan "you always make me do the dirty work" she muttered while Kripa chuckled following.
Angad caught hold of Kripa's waist, snuggling as the two watched Armaan and Ridhimaa argue about doing Aman's dirty work.


Kripa nuzzle Hayaa's tummy as she giggled cutely. Hayaa was growing into a beautiful girl, still possessing the lovely dimples on her pink cheeks. Since she had started talking, Sanjeeda had a hard time controlling her because she was an absolute chatter box. Kripa smiled kissing her cheek and settled her in her lap while she blabbered on about playing with Abhi and Ayush while she was gone.
Sanjeeda sighed handling Kripa a cup of coffee while she scolded "Hayaa be quite for a few minutes at least. Kripa aunty isn't here for you only"
Hayaa pouted wounding her arms around Kripa's neck who laughed at the small possessive girl "aunty wants listen" she retorted then looked up at Kripa for approval.
Kripa smiled pressing Hayaa to herself "let her talk Sanjeeda"
Sanjeeda sighed sitting beside her while her daughter smiled widely "don't give me that look" Sanjeeda warned, Hayaa continued "ok, that's it" Sanjeeda said taking Hayaa from Kripa "if you don't start behaving then I'll tell your daddy what you've been doing"
Hayaa frowned placing her fingers to her lips while Kripa chuckled. Sanjeeda smiled sheepishly "she was so much better when she couldn't speak" Sanjeeda sighed.
Kripa smiled "but it's cute, you have to admit"
"Yeah" she agreed "so how was your honeymoon? Was it like the movie honeymoon?"
Kripa shook her head smiling "it was nice. I enjoyed it a lot"
Sanjeeda smirked "Angad must have spent his whole energy on you" she said mischievously as she watched Kripa's cheeks redden. Sanjeeda laughed letting Hayaa slide out of her lap "so where's Angad? Why didn't he come?"
Kripa smiled "he's at the office. He's had enough of a break because of the wedding and honeymoon so he went to work. He's going to come here to pick me up"
"That's cool. I miss you so much already. It's been two weeks you've gone from your apartment and it's so boring without you. A stupid old man moved in next door. He gets angry so quickly. He comes complaining of Hayaa nearly every day"
"I miss you too. It was fun keeping Hayaa half the time but we still haven't lost contact and I hope we never will as well" she pressed her hand in a friendly manner "you've been a really good neighbor Sanjeeda"
Sanjeeda smiled "and so have you. So have you seen Ridhimaa yet?"
Kripa nodded "yeah I went yesterday. In fact I was so shocked when Ridhimaa told me that Anjali has finally agreed to go out with Atul. Do you know about it?"
Sanjeeda grinned "yeah. It was shocking but Atul's really happy about it"
"Yeah" Kripa smiled softly "I hope things go well between the two"
"Yeah, hopefully. Have you seen the new movie Ghajini?"
Kripa chuckled at the sudden question "no, I haven't had time too. Is it good?"
"It's great. Oh my god. Amir Khan looks so sexy in their" she screamed excited.
Kripa chuckled watching Hayaa run up to her mother "daddy?" she asked looking here and there.
"No" Sanjeeda replied "I'm talking about Amir Khan. Remember the one in that children's film tare zameen par"
"Him!" she exclaimed "funny teacher"
"Yeah" she nodded.
"Clown Uncle?"
"Yeah"
"Picture Uncle?"
Sanjeeda sighed "I think you know who it is now?"
Hayaa frowned "no" she shook her head "question answer"
Sanjeeda grimaced "how many questions are there?"
"Ummm 2, 5, 8, 3"
Kripa looked on confused "you mean 4" Sanjeeda questioned.
"No 2, 9, 1, 7" she answered. Kripa smiled shaking her head as she watched Hayaa mess with her mother's head while she innocently counted on her fingers.


"Ayush stop jumping on the bed" Kripa said for the nth time while she ironed Angad's clothes.
Ayush continued jumping yelling "but this is fun"
Kripa frowned ironing the last of clothes. She took all the clothes placing them on the bed and took hold of Ayush, sitting him on the bed "no jumping on the bed" she warned "where's Abhi?" she asked placing the clothes on the hangers.
"He's with Mom doing his art homework" he answered playing with the end of her sari.
"Then where's your homework?"
"I'm waiting for dad to come. Its math's homework?" he grimaced
Kripa smiled "I'll help you. Go and get your books then we'll do the work together"
Ayush shook his head "dad can help me in that. Angad uncle will be back soon anyways. Can I see your pictures again?"
"You saw them just yesterday?"
"Then can I see uncle's pictures again?"
"Hmm two minutes, let me finish with this, then I'll show you" She answered hanging the clothes in the cupboard. As soon as she hung the last suit Ayush dragged her to the bed where he had placed the laptop. Kripa sighed switching the laptop on. They both went through Angad's pictures smiling and laughing at a few as they noticed how immature Aditya and Angad use to be. Soon enough Abhi and Sanya joined them looking through the entire collection again. They ended up looking at Kripa's childhood pictures along with both her and Sanya's wedding albums.
They were distracted by the sound of a honking car "that must be Aditya" Sanya said getting up "stay" she told Kripa when she stood "I'll serve them both after Angad comes, ok" Kripa nodded while Sanya walked out of the room.
Abhi and Ayush continued looking at the pictures intently "Aunty?" Abhi called aloud after a few minutes.
"Hmm"
"You and Angad are married, aren't you?" he questioned.
Ayush and Kripa looked at him curiously "of course they are duffer" Ayush answered hitting his head.
"Ayush" Kripa scolded "keep your hands in control"
Ayush grimaced while Abhi rubbed his head moving onto Kripa's lap while Kripa closed the laptop and placed it aside "so are you married to Angad uncle?" Abhi asked once again.
Kripa nodded "Yeah"
"And married people have babies as well?" he questioned.
Kripa's lips lifted into a shy smile "yeah, they do?"
"So will you and Angad uncle have babies?"
Kripa nodded bashfully "we will when god wills"
"Will your babies be taller than us?" he asked a little worried.
Kripa burst into giggles at his innocent worry "don't worry Abhi; they won't be bigger than you. Your uncles huge but he grew from a small baby to a huge man"
"Yeah but Angad uncle is so tall in his pictures, he's taller than dad even though he's smaller"
Kripa smiled at his innocence "the baby won't be taller than you because it will be tiny when it's born. You have to eat healthy if you want to grow taller" she said poking his belly.
Ayush giggled wounding his arms around her neck "when will you give us a brother or sister?" he asked.
Kripa smiled shyly with her eyes lowered while Ayush and Abhi laughed. There questioning session was interrupted with Angad walking into the room, a wide grin spread across his face "very soon Ayush" Angad answered "your dads calling you two down. Go hurry up" he hurried.
Ayush looked at him mischievously "just say you want to spend time with Kripa aunty" he teased before running out of the room with Abhi.
Angad smiled goofily passing his hand through his hair and walked to the door locking it. He ambled towards Kripa who gazed at him timidly "have you eaten?" she asked quietly
"Uhmm" he nodded "but my hungers solution is something else"
Kripa broke into a blooming smile; color fused her cheeks a shade of pink. Her eyes lowered as she hugged him shyly.
He laughed holding her back "so?" he spoke "you want a boy or a girl?"
"Girl" she whispered "I already have two boys"
Angad smiled kissing her head "me too" Kripa pulled back gawking at him curiously "What?" he asked.
"You were drinking?" she accused.
"Oh" Angad looked here and there "Armaan dropped it on my clothes"
"Angad" Kripa held his face "stop looking around. Look into my eyes and tell me that"
He sighed "I only had one glass, I swear" he said pinching his throat.
Kripa's eyes brimmed with tears "but you drank?"
Angad frowned at her tears "Kripa, no crying" he warned "it was only one glass" she sniffed looking away "oh come on Kripa" he pressed his nose to her cheek "it happens once in a while"
"But you promised not to drink?" she argued.
"I know and I'm sorry for breaking the promise but Kripa seriously, once in a while is fine. You can shout at me as much as you want if I drink too often or even excessive drinking but just a little once in a while" he looked down at Kripa "I'm sorry honey. I didn't mean to make you cry. You should be angry" he said wiping her tears "why are you crying?"
She shook her head rubbing her face "it's just the time of the month" she mumbled embracing him. Moments later she started playing with his buttons mumbling instructions "ok, I'll allow you to drink but only a little bit" she looked up "nothing more than two glasses" when he nodded she smiled leaning onto his chest "and there has to be a gap of at least two weeks. If I ever find you drunk then you can't sleep with me" she informed rolling the buttons out of there holes "and I won't talk to you"
He smiled at her way of instructing him. It was cute "ok, I promise I'll stay within that limit and will seduce you if you don't let me near you" he teased glancing at her.
She frowned hitting him on his chest "no you don't. If you try that then I won't talk to you at all. I won't let you sleep in the room till I feel like you deserve it and if you get me too angry then I'll go to stay at Rajasthan for a while" she threatened.
"You won't" Angad warned "if we go, we'll go together"
Kripa sighed fidgeting "then don't break your promise next time" she muttered.
He smiled pulling her in his lap "I won't" his hand slid into her hair as the other supported her back. He leaned down to kiss her full on her mouth but she turned her face and his lips met her soft cheek "Kripa" he groaned pressing a kiss to her jaw.
"I don't feel like it" she mumbled pushing at his chest.
"Why?" he questioned nipping at the skin of her soft cheek.
"Because I'm still angry at you for drinking"
"I thought we just made a deal" he murmured placing gentle kisses around her face "what happened to that?"
"Hmmm Angad" she hissed when his teeth dug into her neck "the deal is still on but you broke your first promise"
He pulled away frowning "that doesn't count" and with that he pounced on her possessing her soft luscious lips in a sensuous kiss.


"This is really nice of you lot" Kripa exclaimed hugging Ridhimaa. Armaan and Ridhimaa had held a small valentines gathering. Angad and Kripa had almost completed two months of their marriage whilst Armaan and Ridhimaa were heading for two years.
Angad stood behind Kripa playing with the frills of her dress, a frown pasted on his face "you could have had this gathering tomorrow" he muttered.
Kripa turned back glaring at him while Armaan laughed placing his arm around his shoulder "I got a little jealous of you" Armaan spoke "we all have kids but you don't so we thought it would be really nice if you joined us. If you're really bored I don't mind handing all the kids over to you" he winked
Kripa and Ridhimaa giggled leaving the two men to argue amongst themselves while they walked over towards the ladies. They all greeted each other, starting with chains of compliments for each other. The compliments turned into none stop chatting.
The men had gathered to a corner holding drinks in their hands as they watched their wives chat like silly teenagers "seriously Armaan, I really wanted to spend today alone with Kripa" Angad complained frowning at him.
"We all wanted to spend time with our wives alone" he reminded.
Angad rolled his eyes while the three men laughed at him "it's not fair" Angad complained "you lot probably spent the first valentine alone with your wives. Why don't I get too?"
Aditya patted him "it's ok Angad, there's many more valentines to come" he assured.
"Yea but I can't be sure that I won't have a kid till then" he blurted.
The men burst into laughter attracting the attention of the women "your eager, aren't you?" Amir teased slapping his back while he grinned shamelessly gawking at Kripa who looked on confused.
"Proud to be" he murmured before walking towards his puzzled wife. The men shook their heads while the women giggled making Kripa flush crimson. Angad went and stood beside Kripa, his hands sliding down her hip.
"Angad" Kripa muttered under her breath "take your hands off me"
"No" he answered and turned his attention towards the ladies "you know this small gathering is kind of boring"
Ridhimaa grinned knowing exactly why "only because you want to be alone" she winked.
Angad grinned pushing his hair back "I wouldn't mind" he mumbled.
"I'm staying" Kripa informed.
Angad frowned at her "be like that then" he muttered walking towards the kids.
Kripa sighed figuring his anger. He was always in a romantic mood but today he was in an unusual over romantic mood which was irritating her. She loved him a lot but not when he got to embarrassing her with his romance. It really angered her. She had argued with him before the gathering; he was moody having to go to the gathering and she had just made it worse. She continued talking to her friends but her eyes were on Angad who sat between the kids moody "I'll be back" she mumbled after watching his annoyed expression for the past ten minutes "Angad" she called kneeling in front of him. He looked away, his brows furrowed "are you angry?" she asked.
He looked at her irritated "of course I'm not" he replied coldly.
"Oh come on Angad" her hands reached to cup his face "don't get angry"
He pulled her hands off his face "I'm not angry"
"Then where's your smile?"
He smiled a fake smile "there, happy?" he retorted looking away again.
"Angad please honey" she cupped his cheeks "don't be angry. Both of us will not be able to enjoy like this"
"I'm not enjoying anyways" he muttered.
"That's because your too busy being stubborn. Forget what day it is and enjoy with friends. I Promise I'll make it up to you tonight"
He sighed "how long do we have to stay?"
"You're doing it again" she complained "I said forget what day it is. So that means we don't think about time as well"
"Hmmm ok" he mumbled "but you have to make up for it tonight"
She grinned blinking her eyes in a promise "now smile" she said cutely.
He slowly broke out into a smile taking her face and kissing her full on the mouth only to be interrupted with the howling of the men. Kripa pushed him back mortified, rushing towards the kitchen while the children around them giggled "Angad, have some shame there are kids here" Sanya scolded.
He grinned devilishly "the kids enjoyed it" he replied pulling a crawling Aman into his lap. Sanya sighed shaking her head at his shameless reply while Angad walked towards the howling men victoriously, holding Aman in his arms.


"Angad" Kripa called after moments of silence.
"Hmmm" he moaned caressing her hair as they lay listless and sated after their passionate interlude "yes?"
"Can I start working again?" she asked raising her head from his naked chest, her hands caressing.
"Of course you can but no babysitting" he answered.
She frowned complainingly "why not?"
"Because I don't want you working too much sweetheart. When you were babysitting Ayush and Abhi you had a very busy schedule, having to baby sit at unusual times. I don't want you babysitting like that"
"I wouldn't do that myself Angad but I don't want to do anything else. I want to baby sit" she moaned.
"How about continuing your education?" he asked wrapping his arms around her bare back.
"Hmm I don't know" she sighed leaning down to kiss his neck.
"What were you studying at college?" he asked arching his neck.
She scrunched her nose with a slight smile "Math's, Business and computer science"
"Math's? I've always hated maths. It's so hard"
She smiled snuggling into his chest "Math's is quite easy actually"
He rolled over looking down at her "I didn't know my wife was so clever"
She rolled her eyes "I'm not clever. I just kept maths because I passed with good grades at school"
"Still makes you clever" he winked swooping down to take her lips "hmm you taste so good" he murmured against her lips. She pulled him closer with her arms around his neck "since you're so good at math's why don't you join us at the office" he suggested nuzzling her neck.
"No Angad" she disapproved "office is boring. I like to have fun when I'm working. You do nothing except make long boring reports and meetings in offices"
"It's not that boring. We can always have fun in my cabin" he winked.
Kripa smiled coyly punching his chest "bad boy. You always have one thing on your mind"
He laughed squeezing her soft body "bro even asked Sanya a few weeks ago" he informed.
"And she refused" Kripa answered "because she knows how boring it is. She has something much more interesting to do anyways"
"Oh you already know?" he grimaced "you and Sanya know everything going on?" he complained.
She grinned "we like to tell each other stuff"
He sighed "no point arguing with you" he muttered pressing his lips to her neck "Hmmm, how about a math's teacher" he sighed watching her frown "what's wrong with that now?"
"I don't want to teach maths"
"Then business or computer science"
"I want to work with young children Angad. Big kids are harder to handle and plus I really liked working with Ayush and Abhi. I want to do something similar"
"How about you forget working?" he smiled at her pout and kissed it "I mean if you really want to work with children then forget working. You can just take every chance you have and baby sit Aman, Ayush, Abhi and Hayaa and then soon we'll have our own kids so you won't feel the need to work anyways" He laughed when she blushed and kissed her cheek soundly "Have I told you I love you?"
"Too many times" she mumbled sighing in pleasure as his lips and hands played havoc with her senses
"I love you Kripa" he murmured against her softness "I don't know what I'd do without you"
She smiled rolling on top of him "I love you too Angad" she leaned forward kissing down his torso "and life wouldn't be so perfect if you didn't have me and I didn't have you" she sighed engaging her lovely husband in a kiss of love. Life couldn't have been more perfect!


Thank you so much guys for reading this story and encouraging me with your comments. I really appreciate it. This is finally the end to the fan fiction. The perfect epilogue. Hope you all liked it. Loved all of your comments. Thanks to all readers and silent readers. You have all been an encouragement and inspiration to me See you all soon😃
Faiza
Edited by *F^a^i^z^a* - 15 years ago
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wowowow tht was cool Epilogue
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aww!!! cute epilogue..will definitely miss this fan fic! i love ak!!!
gr8 job on this! cant wait to read your next piece of work =D

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