Fan Fic Kumud and Garv - Page 4

stay tunned to see what happens next. where are kumud and garv? they even come home? or they just went upstairs.. lol... what will happen at dinner tonite? kali doesn't like dida nemore. wait and see...

hey a really cool part.


jyothi

i am glad u r all liking my fan fic

when r ya gonna continue...lol btw i just read the whole thing and its really really good....keep up the great work and continue soon hun 😉

great fanfic! i just read the whole thing! continue soon!
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Hera

I am updating the fan fic rite now.. how u al enjoy cheers )

In scene 8: All 8 friends finds out about garv and kumud... and kali is truly happy for her sister.

Scen 9:
Kali: Today I am soo happy..
Nakul: I can see that... for the first time I have seen true happiness from you for Kumud
Kali: I cna't believe that I was soo bad to her and even after all that she and kusum mom forgived me and lovd me and still loves me alot.
Kshitij and Nakul: We knoe, That's why we all love them very much cuz they have a very big heart
Kali: I am idiot for not realizin sooner
Nakul: but u realized and that's what matters.
Kali: I know but i hurt them soo much... while helping Mahi kapoor.
Kumud and garv heard the conversation. garv is happy that he loves a grl who is soo nice and caring
Kumud goes towrds kali and tells her that past is past and present is that we are happy and we love each other
Kali: I am sorry kumud
Kumud: are pagli... to pagal ho gayi hain... yeh khushi ke moke upar tune yeh saab yaad kardiya... and smiles
Kali and kumud hugs and watches them happily.
Kali: I can't wait to tell kusum mom that her ohter daughhter is also in love and winks at her.
Kumud smiles : Kali i wanna tell mom.
Kali: how bout we both tell mom?
Nakul and Grav: Oh god plz help us we have fallen in love with kids... and they are laughing
kali and kumud: (lookin mad) yeah we r kids how bout u guys. U shoudl see urself when u watch sports and whereever u seat u leave mess behind.
Garv: Kumud let's not talk bout messiness.. last nite I saw how "neat" (being sarcastic) ur room was... ur and kumud cuts him off..: shutup Garv it's a one time thing.
grav: sure u r bed is a mess rite now and mine is all neat
Kshitij,priya,Kali,Nakul,Harry,and Simran all r like oh god they r goona start fighting again ahnd laugh..
Kumud is leaving
Garv: Honey where you going?
Kumud: to clean my room unlike u sitting here and hints him to come up.
garv: smiles can i join you.. maybe I will learn how to clean my room instead of Kanta ben (the maid)cleaning it all the time.. and maybe I should get used to it...
Kali Simran and Priya: sorry garv grls are going and u guys can stay here... we have to talk...
Garv: (sad) ok fine go.. kumud too is a lil upset but doesn't show it... and leaves..
Kshitij to Nakul Garv and harry: u guys r in love
Nakul; don't worry bhaiya: I like priya and mom and dad does too and he laughs
Kshitij: really happy really?
Garv: kyon chupe rustam... kya baat hain... kshitij and priya
Harry: wow Bhaiay i am def gonna call uncle and anuty and tell them the news.. so shaddi bhi pakki karde.
Kshitij: harry shutup.
They are all giggling.. and the same scenerio talkes place in kumud's room but with priya..
Harry: I wonder who will get married 1st
Nakul: What?
Harry: out of us someoen will get married 1st who will it be...
Garv: Kshitij and priya..
Kshitij: (to garv) noo at rate u and kumud are goign it will be you and kumud.
Nakul and Harry starts crackin up...
Garv: i dunno what u guys talkin about
Nakul: stop acting soo innocent, one nite I love you, and one nite u kiss...
garv: so what?
Kshitij: excatly u will be married 1st
Garv: no it will be u u and priya.
Nakul: garv and kumud
Harry: me and simran
Garv, Kshitij and Nakul.. are like just ignore him and ther r arguing.. it's two against one...
Kshitij and Nakul: let's bet
Garv: we shall
Nakul: the looser gets to treat all of us to dinner and do as we say. and it oculd be anything
Garv: fine and smiles.
Kshitij: think again cuz u loose and u r owend by us until do what we tell u too
Garv: OK... bet well taken and if i win u will be owned by me till u guys do soemthing
Those 3 shae hands. and the grls come down
garv goes to kumud and says I missed you.
Kumud: i did too.
Garv: come here
Kumud: no everyone is here
Kshitij: r u sure u wanna keep u the bet... u will loose garv.
Garv: i won't
grls: what bet?
harry is about to speak and nakul comes the rescue..
Nakul: nothing we are just betting on boy thigns.. like sports and stuf...
Kali: sure whatever but I am hungry
Nakul: let's all go out.. and celebrate
Harry: celebrate what
Nakul: teri shaddi
Harry: My marriage? simran when is the date
Simran: shakes her head: harry be serious.
Harry: I am serious
Simran blushes.
Nakul: this calls for a double celebration
Garv: too bad we didn't inculde him in the bet to Nakul and Kshitij
Kshitij: I know... oh well.. Harry is always lost in his thoughts..
Garv: i know.. but oh well.
the phone rings*
Kumud: hello
Kusum: hi beta
Kumud:HI mumma
Kusum: what are you all doing tonite
Kali gets the other phone: nothing mom. why u ask
Kusum: then all of u must come over for dinner as i have invited arayaman uncle and his family as well...
Kali: oh no mom... I have to see the dadi.. she is soo mean to you. why call her
Kusum: Kali beta. it's ok no fuzz tonite ok
Kali: hesitates ok mom
Kusum: oh i forgot to tell u I have also invited esha (garv's mom) for dinner
Kumud: shcoked why them?
Kususm: we r friends with thme that's why
Kali: smiles at kumud and kumud is giving her looks..to bequiet..
Kumud: Ok mumma
Kusum: ok I wll see u all at dinner tonite bye
Kumud and kali: bye love you
Kusum: love u both too ad hangs up.
Kali: kya baat hain kumud. tumhari saas aaj raat dinner uppar...
Kumud: don't worry kali, kynki tumahre saas or sassur bhi hain waha par
Kali: haha not funny and they laugh and hug
Kshitij: what did aunty say?
Kumud: we have to go home for dinner tonite.
Nakul:all of us?
kali:yah mom has invited us and ur parents and esha aunty as well.
Nakul: oh grav baat yeh taak poch gayi already?
Grav; just smiles and looks at kumud
Kumud blushes: i am goign to get ready
Kali: Good idea let's goo
everyoen goes diff ways
Kumud is geeting ready all of the sudden someone knocks on her door. she opens is but noone is there but she looks down and finds dozen or red roses and a card that says I love you! on it... she smiles and picks it up.. and goes back in her room and closes the door. she is bout to open a card and knock knock!!! she opens the door and again noone is there but she finds a big big teddy bear that says Be mine! I love you! Kumus smiles Garv tum bhi naa... she goes back in the room this time she hides behind the door and stays there... rite then someone is about to knock and she opens the door... and catches garv... she tells him to come in...
kumud: thank you garv
Grav: no need to thank me... he closes the door.
Kumuds heart is pounding
Garv: I love you toooooooo much kumud
Kumud: I love you tooo garv...
Garv comes fwd and grabs kumud and kisses her...
kumud: pulls back.. garv plz with such a sweet smile on her face
Garv: how can i dney ur orders maam especially with a smile like that..
Kumud smiles more and she is bout to go and garv still is holding her hands... and he comes fwd.. and says Kumud i can't lie to you. \
Kumud: puzzled what u talkin bout?
Grav: when we were downstairs. we were all talkin bout a bet... i lied.
Kumud: laughs what was the bet?
garv: me kshitij and nakul have a bet to see who will get married 1st and according to them they think it wil lbe us.. but I think it will be priya and kshitij.
Kumud:
grav: Sorry kumud I lied
Kumud: idiot u ddin't lie to me... u didn't even say a word.. but I know this thign for sure and that is I know we will get married and we will always love each other and trsut each other. But at the same time what ever u do with kshitij nakul and harry u don't have to tell me everything.. U need ur space and I understand
Grav: how did i get soo lucky and ended up wiht a grl like you?
Kumud: I dunno..I feel i am lucky to be with a great guy like you... and kisses garv
she pulls back and tells him to go now she needs t get ready
Grav: do I have to?
Kumud:Yes plz leave
garv leaves and kumud gets ready. and the guys are all waiting for the grls downstairs... all screaming hurry up.. all the grls come down... and they are wearing western outfits and kshitij's eyes pop out when he sees priya in a short skirt and yet soo simple..
Garv goes and tells kumud that she is lookin marvelous.. kumud blushes and nakul is like i am telling u bhaiya... live this 2 love bids alone they will be married.. garv and kumud laugh... kali and simran and r all confused..
the guys ask garv if told kumud. and garv says yes... they all tell him that he should be be the grl in the relationship.. and thay laugh and giggle.. and go for lunch... they come back form lunch... Priya and Kshitij are fallin in love as well the our love birds garv and kumud are not to be found downstairs...

that was great...but wasnt this part posted already

Last scene: the guys had a bet to see who be married first kshitij and nakul are up for kumud and garv while garv is up for kshitij.. harry is in to his own little world. they are suppose to go for dinner at kkusum's hous tonite but b4 that they all went out for lunch, and kumud and garv are missing 😉 and kshitij and priya are falling in love
Scene 10:
Kali: where is kumud and garv?
Nakul: They were with us weren't they
Kali: I thougt that too
Kshitij: I am gonna ceck upstairs maybe they just kissing again
priya: what u mean again?
Kshitij: All they doo is kiss and kiss.. Didn't u see them at the reasturant? They were soo busy staring at each other and lost in each other's thought that they didn't bother to eat
Priya: maybe they went to eat now
Nakul: haha.. all they do is eat dessert
Kali: U r nothing less.
Nakul: we are not talkin about us rite now babes
Kali: ok fine but I wil call kumud
kali calls and keeps ringing then she tires garv and it does the same.
Finally Kumud and Garv comes home, holding hands
Priya: where were u two?
Kumud: we went to the temple we told Harry and Simran
Priya: Out of all the ppl u told them?
Garv: yeah cuz u al left and harry and sim were stil with us.
kshitij: where did they go now
Kumud: Simran's house
they all shake their heads KALI: I hope them two don't coem home with kids or something. They are talkin about marriage and all soo much.
Kumud: laughs I think they are all ready married 😆
Priya: I was gonna say the same thing baout u and garv and laughs
Nakul : (to Kumud and Garv) did u really go the temple or u guys were bz with something else
Kumud: We went to the mandir and heere is prasad. have some. they all eat Prasad and they are all joking having fun. and it's 5:30 pm
Kali: Omg!!!
Nakul: Yes Babe
Kali: i am not talkin t u I said God not Nakul
Nakul laughs : but what happend
Kali: it's 5:30 and we hae to go to mom's house
Kumud: yeah let;s go
They all leave and b4 goign in everyone tells each other make sure we don't say nehting about neone and their relationship tonnite. Nakul and Kali we are allowed to talk bout u since everyone knoes.
Kshitij: Otherwise there will be 4 wedding bells..
They all agree and go in
Kusum hugs kali and Kumud and they all hug each other and yeah the normal routines.
Esha grav's badi mom looks at garv smiling at kumud and smiles but doesn't say nething.
Kusum: Kali and Kumud how is everything
Kali and Kumud:fine and kusum looks at kumud and smiles.
Kusum: Abhay, Arayaman, Sakshi, and Esha wil u come in with me for a seecond plz
they all go and the kids are like what are they upto
Dida looks at kali and says: u know how ur kususm mom is she always likes to do tings like that so let's see her new natak
Kali:very upset how dare u talk bout my mom like this? U have no rite to do that
Dida: ok kali it;s only me u can tell me that u r fakin
Kali: nO i am not. I love kusum mom
Dida all shocked and says lagta hain ki tujme kumud ke saath rhe kar uski asar ho rahin hain. Do u know How much ur mom mahi is suffering
Kali: so what? She needs to suffer more after what she did. and leaves
Dida is shocked and wonders how am i gonna help mahi bring kkssum down w/out the help of kali I must do something
Kusum: for the first time I have seen both of my daugheters soooo happy and when I look into Kumud's eyes i see her eyes filled with love
Abhay: but who is the guy
Kusum: that I dunno but i do know that a daughter can't keep things away from her mom.
Esha: so what r u gonna do
Kusum: I am goign to ask her
Sakshi: kusum she will be emabrassed and she won't tell u but i want to knwo who the guy is
Esha: I think i doo
Abhay: Who who who
Esha: Smiles and says samdhanji when are we goin to fix theri wedding date?
Kusum and abhay are little confused and wonders what marriage and samdhanji
Esha: yeah I am talkin about my son Garv and ur daughter Kumud
Kusum: but do they love each other
Esha: I saw Grav eyes filled with love and in his eyes it was writen kumud all over
Sakshi: just like mom can tell with their daughters mon can also tell things with her sons
Kusum: I am so happy that our kids
Abhay: they fight soo much but who knew that behind that was soo much love?
They are allllllll soo happy to hear the news and they hug again.
Kusum:I can't wiat to tell my beti this
Arayaman: wait a second, they are playing with us. how bout we play with them
Sakshi: grea idea
Esha: but wat will we do
kuch hota hain music goes on in background and they all are upto something
kali: i ownder what's up with our parents
Garv: only one thing they mite be talkin bout urs and nakul's wedding
Kali: but
Garv: but what they don't know bout me and kumud or Kshitj and priya
Kali: is happy but Kumud u r suppose to get married b4 i do
garv: well it looks i it's u and nakul
Kali: well whoever it is I am sure it's good news..
Kumud: yeah
Sim: does talkin to aryaman uncle and Sakshi aunty reall take that long
Harry: I mean think logically, everyone know baout kali and nakul. and U both have everyones blessings. so this marriage talk bout u two waouldn't take that long
Nakul: good point Harry so what's goign on?
Kumud: let's wait and see..
The parents come out and they look at kumud.

what do u hink it wil be? what did the parents cook up? please post ur views