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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanks Yogitha and lovesharad M-yaar tera naam kya hai bata na

I am typin now

Coffe peeke fresh hoke agayi mai!

Its on guys!
Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: hinanaziri

Thanks Yogitha and lovesharad M-yaar tera naam kya hai bata na

I am typin now

Coffe peeke fresh hoke agayi mai!

Its on guys!

lol My name is Nina 😊sorry didn't tell you before 😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
oye hoyeee ure already doing another update for us?? dude hina you ROCK!!! 👏 😳 i await updates for your fanfic almost as much as i await real dmg episodes!! 😆 your fanfics seriously awesome!
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi..hina di.....
ur part was awsome........really good.........
keep p de good work..........!!!!!!!!
👏

pls continue soon..




lots of love
tejasvi...
Edited by ktejasvi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
finally di u started typin oks me waitin
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Posted: 17 years ago

Part 37:

Bua walks to the boys room

Dham dam Dham dham in daakoo style............

Shubh goes

Boys!

Kuch karo!

Nahi to bohot bura phasengey guys!

Atul goes

Mai to aapka naam hi loonga sir!

Dekhna!

Aur sabko bata doonga

Shubh goes Kya?

Atul does his funny action with his hands and goes

Wohi aapka raaz!

Shubh begs him not to

Keerti panics

Rahul goes to Atul

Abey chup,abhi kya karein ye soch
Baadme tere revenge ki sochna

Armaan goes

Yaar! biting his nails

Agar Shashank sir bahar hue to?

All go

Oh No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Riddhima goes

Ruko!
Hum kuch karte hai and pulls Anjali forward

and shouts

Buaa!

Bua goes

Ha aa rahi hoo Riddhima

Pehle in ladko ko to dekhloo

Atul goes
quietly

Arey ,hum to yaha hai
Waha kya dekhengi?

Rahul shuts Atul's mouth and says

Chup!
Yaar Atul ,tu marwake hi chodega

Ridz again goes

Bua!
Darwaza kholiye
Jaldi!

Plzzzzzzzzz!

Anjali joins her to shout out

Bua goes

Oho!
Tum log do minute nahi ruk saktey?

Anjali goes

Bua kholiye na door!

Bua then gives up on the idea of checking the boys first
and comes to the girls room and opens the door

The boys run behind the cupboard to hide and Atul rolls under the bed in the far corner

The girls line up at the door in fear of interrogation

The door opens

Ridz says

Good Morning Bua!

and gives the wierdest smile ever

Anjali quickly goes up and hugs Bua and
says Good Morning !

Bua gets suspicious on the hug and Riddhima's fake funny smile

Muskaan then says
Hello!
Bua!...

Keerti next goes
Namastey!
and also smiles the wierd smile

Bua looks confused as to why the girls are behaving so strange and goes

Tum log ko kya hua hai?

Itne ghabaraye hue kyu lag rahe ho?

Maine to bas billi ke dar se darwaza raat me band kar diya tha,to phir?

She looks at the funny way they are stading in a row
and says

Aur tum sab yaha line me kyu khadey ho and walks inside the room to check if anything's wrong

Atul makes a scared face from under the bed and signals Anjali to get Bua out of there

Anjali goes

Bua!

Papa uth gaye?

Aur Padma aunty aur Nani kaha hai?

Ridz then continues

Ha ! Bua!

Maa aur Nani uthey nahi abhi?

Nashtey me kya bana hai?

Mujhe bohot bhook lag rahi hai and rubs her tummy like a kid

Keerti and Muskaan go

Ha!

Hamey jaldi se fresh ho jana chahiye and smile in total panic

Bua turns back and goes

Anjali,Riddhima!

Kya baat hai bacho?

Tum aise...

Baki sab kab se uthe hue hai

Shashank aur Padma walk par gaye hai bahar

aur Nani kitchen me nashtey ki tayyari kar rahi hai

Lekin tum kyu pooch rahe ho

Aur Riddhima

Tu to kabhi nashta karti bhi nahi

Aaj kaise kya tujhe itni bhook lag rahi hai?


Armaan giggles and goes very quietly

Thak gayi hogi Bua!
Raat bhar kitna kaam kiya usne
Plz usey nashta dedo
Aur hamey nikalne do yaha se

Rahul goes

Shhhhhhhhhhhh.....

Shubh goes

with a confused ,trying to analyse look

Dr.Armaan,aapko kaise pata Riddhima ko bhook kyu laga rahi hai?
aur kya kaam kiya unhone raat me?

Rahul grins and says to cover up

Sir!aap bhi kasie sawaal kar rahe hai !
Riddheema ne sirf Bua ko room se nikaalne ke liye nashtey ka bahana banaya

Shubh as dumb as ever goes

Oh!Acha!

Lekin phir Armaan to kuch kaam ki baat kar........

Atul kicks Rahul from under the table and goes

Abey,inke breakfast menu ko chup kara yaar
Pehle Bua ko maska lagao,phir baki dekhengey

Bua starts making the beds and goes

Acha chalo!

Tum sab jaake fresh ho jao

Aur breakfast ke liye ajao

and goes out

The girls go in sync

Ha Bua, hum abhi atey hai,aap chaliye

Bua then again walks to the boys room to check them

The girls see her going that way and go

Bua!

and follow her in a queue

and stand in a row running across the hall from the boys room to theirs in order of
Ridz,Anjali,Muskaan and Keerti with Bua almost at the door of the boys room

Bua turns around to see them and goes

Arey!

Tum sab yaha kyu agayi mere peechey?

Bathroom us taraf hai ladkiyo

Pata nahi kya hua hai tum sab ko,kab se dekh rahi hoo ajeeb si shakaley bana rahi ho

They all make funny faces and just don't know what to say and look at each other in panic

Then Ridz goes

Wo Bua!

Anjali goes

Hum to..wo...

and try and give some lame reason

While at the other end of the row

Keerti and Muskaan get the boys to sneak out from behind them and run to their room,before Bua knows

They hold hands and make a wall to conceal their transit

Atul rolls out from under the bed and crawls to go out first

Shubhankar stops him and goes

Mai senior doctor hoon yaar!

Mujhe pehle jaane do!

Atul goes

Accha?

Jaiye sir ,yaha bhi nahi chodengey aap?

Keerti goes shhh..........

and orders them to move with her big scary eyes

Shubh gets scared by her evil look and starts crawling in full speed like a little toddler

The funny music starts playing

The boys just can't resist it and go a very tiny

Ishqqqqqqq haiiii!

Muskaan can't control and giggles in true Muskaan style

Keerti gives her an evil and shuts her up

Atul follows Shubh and ends up stopping behind Anjali

and starts touching her hand folded back

Rahul goes after him and is right behind Muskaan

Muskaan peeps to look who's behind her

and gives Rahul a sweet strange love glance

Rahul starts to stare at Muskaan

Armaan pushes Rahul and goes

Baadme kar lena ye sab !

Abey agey badh yaar Raoool!

Rahul says

Haaan!

and bumps his head into Atul's bottom in a haste

and Atul hits his head onto Shubh's backside

and Shubh hits his head onto the door

They look at each other and go

Oh ,crap!

silently

Ridz notices them behind her
trying to access the room,

looks back at them and quickly goes

Acha Bua!
Aap jaiye andar
Hum jaatey hai fresh honey!
Anjali gives Riddhima 'a don't say that 'look

and then looks back to see Atul waving away at her

and the boys waiting for the door to open to get in

She goes

Haan!
Bua,aap andar jaiye na
Door kholiye!

Bua goes

Haan!
Kholti hoo door
dekhti hoo ladke uthey hai ki nahi

Lekin tum log bhi jao
Aur kyu yaha ruki hui ho?

Ab jao baba!

and thinks to herself
There's something wrong with these girls today

and eventually opens the door

Shubh falls into the room with the others pushing him

Ridz turns Bua to shift her attention and let the boys run in

and the they hear a big

Good morning doctors!.......



Ok guys
I have the following part typed in half
So I will continue soon
Sorry about keeping u all waiting
The boys are in big trouble
I hope u know who it is to scare them
I 'll start typing the next update straight away
I just wanted to give u something just to keep u all going ,so posted this part
Take care
and enjoy
Love u all
plz comment on the most funny part
Hina.





Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

girls covering up for boys n making a line 😆

now i don't get one thing boys are on door so how come bua don't see them as toddlers crawling on floor when she opens the doors or is the big gud morning docs from bua only 😕

Edited by pari0706 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Preeti_285

oye hoyeee ure already doing another update for us?? dude hina you ROCK!!! 👏 😳 i await updates for your fanfic almost as much as i await real dmg episodes!! 😆 your fanfics seriously awesome!

I am truly honoured yaar,thanks!

Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey hina srry yaar got 2 go i'll comment tom.....
bt it ws soo fny yaar i ws laughng lke hell too mch....
gudnght
swtdrmz
tc
luv yachna
cya tom
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Posted: 17 years ago

😆OMG diiii....i almost fell frm my seat after this.....heheheheheh too much di...it was hillarious...i can actually imagine the weird smiles n faces....hehehehehehe n all the guys going bonkers under the bed....hehehehehehe n shub main senior doctor hoon yaar🤣loved it loved it loved it loved it......truly trult....yeh half tha toh full kya hoga😆😆...this was my laughter dose for the day😆

Edited by komalsirwani - 17 years ago

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