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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: hinanaziri

Hey thanks for choosing my FF ,now I'll make sure I cheer u up with every update and hope u have super speedy recovery and I wish the very best of everything for u,Can u tell me your name if its not a problem

heyy...dat was sweet of u! i am anushree, u can call me anu, m 20, n doin my graduation...n i'll call u hina di, as everyone else does..dat was a gr8 update..continue soon dear!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: lookwhoshere

heyy...dat was sweet of u! i am anushree, u can call me anu, m 20, n doin my graduation...n i'll call u hina di, as everyone else does..dat was a gr8 update..continue soon dear!!

Hey Anushree,

Sure u can call me di ya aunty woteva I don't mind

Hope u do well with yor graduation,I love my uni days,they were the best,how I wish i cud b at uni again,are u in the uk?

Anyays,I'll be updating,its just that I'm stuck on the promo and have lost all the thoughts I had for an update,I'm trying hard to recollect but its just not happening

Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey di superb update
well i am exited to knw what the guys will do now
gals better watch out 😆
sayli
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Posted: 17 years ago

Part 35:

The boys gather and make a foolproof plan to horrify the girls with their prank

They put pillows on their bed to make sure no one knows they'r not really there

Then they creep slowly into the girls room opposite to theirs in utter silence

They go in and check around to see whose sleeping where

Find their other half and then go into a dream each watching their partners sleep like angels

Rahul goes close to Muskaan's bed and adores her sweet and gorgeous face,while she snores away like a whistle

Atul blinks his eyes away , looks at Anjali and says

Anjali!
Tum to neend me bhi itni mindblowing lagti ho
Checks her out from top to bottom and goes
Lagta hai mujhe ek lamba sa bed order karna padega hamarey liye and shys!

All go
Abey chup!
Jaag gayi to,bohot maregi usi lambe bed se baand ke tujhe!

Atul goes quiet and keeps staring at Anjali

Keerti looks sexy in her yellow nighty
Shubh is again spellbound and imagines Keerti sleeping in his arms
and makes extra weird faces in enjoyment

The boys signal each other at Shubh and giggle

Rahul goes

Ye to phir se apne rangeely ,mastane mood me chale gaye yaar!
Inko jaldi se wapis laa Atul!

Isse pehle ki Keerti ma'm inko .............

Armaan says with a funny face
Kya hoga inka yaar!

and then suddenly his eyes turn to Riddhima sleeping on the bed next to the window with a breeze soothing her to sleep so peacefully

Riddhima looks adorable like a cute baby
Armaan gets all tempted to go and cuddle his baby but holds back

The wind from the window blows Riddhima's hair onto her face and she gets disturbed

Armaan get an urge go and tuck her hair and to plant a passionate kiss on her beautiful face

So,he then gives up and starts walking towards her

Atul and Rahul are shaking Shubhankar to get him out of
'Drooling over Keerti' state

They then see Armaan walk towards Riddhima and Atul shouts

Abey! Tu ridz ke paas kyu jaa raha hai?

Armaan goes in a very sexy way!

Usey Pyaar karney!

Rahul and Atul go
Kya?

Then they go all mute when a cat drops something in the kitchen and makes a loud noise to wake Bua up

They drop down and quickly roll under the beds to hide

Bua goes into the kitchen to shoo the cat away and comes to check if the girls are alright

The boys squeeze under the beds to stay unnoticed and go all silent

Bua goes
Darwaza bahar se band kar deti hoo
Warna ye ladkiya phir se billi ke shor se jaag jayengi

Shubh goes quietly

Arey hum yaha hai!
Ye to humey yaha band kar rahi hai ,

Boys kuch karo!

Atul shuts his mouth and
Rahul says
Sir Plz!

Aap marwaogey!

Bua closes the door from outside and leaves

The boys come out from under the beds
Sit in a row facing the girls and go!

Yaar!
Ye prank to mehnga pad gaya
Leney ke deney ho gaye!
Ab poori raat yahi bitani padegi

Atul goes with full zest

Koi baat nahi! Yaar!

Chal in logo ko utha dete hai
Phir raat bhar pyar aur masti karengey!

Shubh gets all excited with this thought and goes

Ha chalo chalo!

Armaan goes

Nahi yaar!

Tu paagal ho gaya hai kya?

Aur Shubhankar sir,aap bhi

Shashank sir yehi hai
Unko pata chal gaya to ,maar dalengey!

I think hamey chup chaap yehi baithna hoga
Rahul says sadly

Shubh goes hesistantly

Acha?
Tum log baitho yahi
Mai zara.....
and goes and sits next to Keerti on the edge of her bed and enters fantasy land again

Atul and Rahul go

Chalo!
Ye senior doctor to haath se gaye!
Then Atul goes

Arey haan,yaad aya!
holds Armaan collar and goes

with funny music in the background

Abey Armaan,tu Jab kya bol raha tha
Pyaar karney jaa raha hoo!
Tu Ridz se pyar karta hai?
Ye sab kya chal raha hai mujhe bhi bata ,mai tera best friend hoo yaar!

Armaan goes
What? and goes to himself,mar gaye!
Pyaar karney?
Mai?
Basket ko? and pretends very innocent

Champ!Tu paagal ho gaya hai
Tujhe Anjali ne jabse accept kiya hai na,tab se tu ajeeb ajeeb baatein sonchne aur sunney laga hai
Tu aisa soch bhi kaise sakta hai yaar!

and says to convince Atul

Mai koi pyar wyaar nahi karta kisi se
Aur wo bhi Riddhima se?
No way!

Atul gets seriously thinking that its not quite possible
Armaan aur Riddhima ? Nai,nai!

Rahul goes to Armaan quietly

Tu Atul ko bewakoof bana sakta hai Armaan,mujhe nahi!
Mujhe sab pata hai tuney kya kaha aur kyu kaha

Armaan goes

Aey Raooool!
Tu kuch nahi jaanta !

and says in a funny way

Aur tu mujhe kya bol raha hai bey?
Tera aur Muskaan ka kya chal raha hai ye bol?

Rahul for the first time goes in a very friendly way

Haan!
Mai Muskaan se pyaar karta hoo
Aur wo mujhse!

Armaan feels the seriousness in his tone and respects the way he confided in him and says

Really?
Good!

I am very happy for you two!
They share a friendly look and Armaan says

To phir kab jaa raha hai Patiala?
Uske Pappaji aur mummyji se milne? and smiles

Rahul smiles back and says
Jab Muskaan kahe!

Aur Armaan ,waise bhi waha jaake mujhe
teri bohot sari burai karni padegi
Tera asar un sab pe chada hua hai
Mujhe unhe apne rang me wapis rangna hoga
Aur batana hoga ki,tu acha ladka nahi nikla!

Armaan laughs and goes

Sure!
Meri jitni burai karni hai karley
Meri taraf se tujhe poori choot hai

Rahul goes
Thanks!

They again give ecah other a friendly look

and turn to see Atul
crawling upto Anjali's bed

Atul sits on the floor next to Anjali's head and talks to her sweetly and very quietly without disturbing her beauty sleep

Rahul goes to Armaan

Jaa!
Riddhima ko pyaar nahi karna tujhe?

Armaan goes Hmmm ! smiles and says

Muskaan udhar soyi hai
and points to Muskaan's bed

They both wink at each other and get up to go

All four sit near their lovers and admire them till late and fall asleep near them holding their hands and imagining love and love and more love forever...........



Hope u all liked this part people
I will continue soon
We now have to deal with the after effects of the sleepover
The journey back to Mumbai is on the cards too
Plz reply with your comments on this part
Love u all
Take care
Hina

p.s:I might not be online for a while now after the epi today
It will take me time to come back to my senses,u get me





Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow amazing part di 👏
the boys r so cute 😳 😳
hope no one scolds them after seeing them there 😕
waiting eagerly for the next part
plz update soon
love heena 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago

Sorry guys
I forgot to update the page no. on the title,lhad to leave work in a rush

Only Heena checks this post often I think,so she got there first

Thanks My Heenu for commenting straight away

So,
Its updated people! Read and
Lemme know what u think
The next part is real cute too
I'll try and update tonite if I'm feeling strong enough after the weakening effect promo
😉

Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Amazing part, Hina di...very cute...loved the conversation of Rahul & Arman....so natural... 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey hin ayaar its okkkkkkk
yaar it ws abulous prt realy enjoyd it
wow unka prank unhi par bhari pad gaya wonderful nd shub omgg wo or itna romance omggggg
sachi wo to gaya hath se nd rahooool nd armaan wow jitni burai karni hai karle no worries
grttttttttt friendly look hmmmmmm
armaan keep admirng her beauty wow how cuteeeeee..
nd thy fall asleep neer thm
wow cnt wait fr d nxt prt
atul to angie o dekhta hi rehgaya......
cont sooooooooon
luv yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks for the update its really a nice one

Khwahishein hain bahut magar
Tumse main kya kahoon
Hadh se aage guzar ke bhi
Ab mohabbat karoon

Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey di
awwwwwwwwwwwwww..............
dat relllllllyyyyyyyyyy cho cho sweeettttttttt n cuteeeeeeeeee 😳
juz luved it 👏
cont super soooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru

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