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Posted: 17 years ago
kya race thi di 👏
bechare sab ke goodluck charms to dusre ke saath hai 😆 😆 😆
can't wait to know who wins
plz update soon
love heena 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
"Addictive" as title is just perfect! Because this FF is truly addictive. 😃

The car racing scenes hav been too good. I feel like i'm in the car with them all.......willing Armaan to win ofcourse! 😉

I can understand the state of Insomnia.....i've had the same over the long bank holiday weekend. Its too much fun catching up with the old episodes.

Just wanted to say thanks to you Hina, for taking out so much time, to give us such fab updates. Weekend kaise guzar jahta hai, tumharay FF ke saath, pata he nahin chal tah.......ab dekoh Monday aah bhi gaya! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
another great update hina

yaar AR to din ba din naughty hote ja rahe hain.
koi mauqa nahi chorte romance ka

but i see uve got a thriller side to ur story
wonder race kon jeete ga
but i was soo thrilled to see a RACE happen..

give us more..more thrills n chills n ofcourse more car to car romance 😆 😆 😆

again i say hina
great update!
luv it
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Posted: 17 years ago
great part
your shashank is better than the real one in dmg 😆 yours likes armaan 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
Woow...what an intense part...I wonder why Shashank slowed down...Plz continue soon!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was awsommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm plezzzzzzzzzzz do continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Part 41:

Shashank leads and

Armaan tries his best to catch up with him

Shashank after a short dictance turns in right

Armaan wonders why?

The boys are confused of why and where Shashank's turned into

Armaan turns into the same direction to find out

Shashank get into a service station

Armaan pulls up on the side

comes out of his car to find out whats wrong

He goes upto Shashank's car and asks
and discovers that he had run out of fuel

He then says

Congratulations sir!

while Shashank and the rest are still in the car

Shashank smiles and says

Abhi race khatam kaha hui hai Dr.Armaan

I was running low on fuel isliye mujhe gaadi rokni padi

Armaan says

Lekin agey to aap hi they na sir!

Riddhima smiles at his modesty and gives him a sweet look

Armaan looks at her secretly from the corner of his eye

Shashank disagrees with Armaan and says

Ha Armaan!
Lead to hum kar rahe they ,Lekin u never know

Ho sakta hai agey jaakey aap mujhe bohot peeche chod detey,its quite possible ,so I wouldn't call this a fair win yet

Lets see!
Abhi kuch raasta baaki hai decide karne ko

Anjali buts in and says

Dad!

We have won this race

Ab aap kyu ye game agey tak kheechna chahtey hai?

Its over now and we are the winners simple!

and to irritate Armaan says

And Armaan is a looser!

Kyu Armaan?

Armaan gets anything but irritated

He looks at Riddima and says while Shashank pays for the fuel

Haar kar bhi jeetney wale ko Baazigar kehtey hai!

Riddhima laughs at his fimli dialogue!

Armaan laughs with her

Then Shashank goes upto Padma to talk about something

Armaan and Riddhima flirt with their eyes

Anjali annoys Atul with a thumbs down

Atul gets all upset with Anjali and looks away

Muskaan makes funny faces and calls Rahul a looser

Rahul gets annoyed and teases her back

Shubh and Keerti in their own world

away from the race and all other odds,look away at each other in a daze

Shashank says to Paddy

Padma,tum aur Shubhankar meri gaadi me ajao

Humko seedhey hospital jaana hai na?

Aur kisi do ladkiyo ko waha se bhej detey hai!

Anjali to shayad ayegi nahi,

Wo race ke beech apni party nahi badlegi

So,Riddhima aur Muskaan ko bhejdeta hoo yaha,thik hai?

Padma goes

Jee and gets happy on Armaan's good luck returning to him

Shubh gets super excited to hear this

and runs with his bags before Shashank could even inform him of the move

He runs to Keerti

and says to Riddhima huffin and puffin

Dr.Riddhima!

Aap us gaadi me jayengi ab!

Armaan gets all happy and confused and says

Sir!

Ye aap kya kar rahe hai?

Takes him to a corner and says

Dr.Shashank aur sister Padma ke saamne to apni feelings ko control kijiye sir!

Plzz!

Shubh makes a confused face and goes

Aap ye kya keh rahe hai Dr.Armaan?

Aap mujhe aise kaise?

and turns to go back to Keerti and says

Arey Dr.Shashank ne khud mujhe Keerti ke sath

Mera matlab hai Unke sath is gaadi me baithne ko kaha hai

Wo kya hai na ,hum senior doctors seedhey Sanjeevani jaane waley hai islye

and asks Riddhima to come out

Riddhima jumps out without saying a word

and grabs her bags before anyone changes the plan

Armaan loves her excitement and smiles

Padma and Shashank come and ask Muskaan sweetly if she could be kind enough to go and sit in the other car

Muskaan says

Ok sir!

She was kinda liking the race thingy too,

but then thinks,

she'd rather be with Rahul and does'nt mind it anymore

Armaan gets into his car and whistles to show Riddhima her seat next to him

Riddhima smiles and starts walking to the other side

Atul gets out of the car and goes to Ridz and Muskaan

Arey,tum dono yaha agayi?

Aur Anjali ?

Anjali,nahi ayi?

Wahi reh gayi?

Kyu?

and goes

Acha thik hai! and gets upset with Anjali's race craze

The says

Ao Muskaan tum Rahul ke sath baith jao aur Ridz tum uske bagal me

Mai agey Armaan ke sath baithkar is race ka ab poora maza loonga

Anjali,tum ne is race ko mujhsee se zyada importance di?

Ab mai bhi Armaan ko ye race jitwake hi rahoonga and
gets into the front seat

Armaan gets annoyed with Atul ,

but calms down

when he sees Riddhima smile in the mirror

Shubh sits next to Keerti behind Anjali

and Shashank adjusts his mirror for Padma

Anjali notices him eyeing Paddy and goes

Ahem hmmmm!

Shubh and Keerti smile at Anjali and again the

Race continues

Vrooooooooooooom!

Both cars go in jet speed

Armaan is definite of his win

Now that his good luck is with him

Padma looks at the two pf them and smiles in content

Keerti accidently crushes Shubh when the car takes a sharp bend

Shubh just loves it and pulls Keerti more onto him

Padma looks at them and just can't help laughing

Shashank sees her laugh and smiles

Anjali goes

Dad!

Please!

Ab aapka concentration Armaan ki tarah race par nahi hai

C'mon dad please,I have to win this!

Shashank gets all embarassed and focuses on the driving again

Atul screams and shouts to cheer Armaan and gives Anjali a very cross look

Anjali gives him evils too and gets so into the winning spirit

Rahul and Muskaan are cut off from the world and just stare at each other throughout the race
and explore their new love

Riddhima quietly enjoys looking at Armaan and feeling him close is like a treat to her

Armaan knows she's constantly looking at him and keeps giving her winks and kisses secretly as and when he can

They are now approaching the fiinsihing point and

both drivers speed like crazy to beat each other

with Anjali and Atul being the only ones interested

and

after all the thrill and excitement

The race comes to an end

and

Armaan crosses the finishing line first

leaving a very disappointed Anjali almost in tears

and a triumphant Atul loving her defeat intially but then

Gets all upset for her

Shashank turns the Sanjeevani way after

Congratulating Armaan on his much deserved win

Armaan is ecstatic with his win

especially after Riddhima joined him

And is now convinced that he can beat anyone and anything with Riddhima on his side

Love can conquer all !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



How was that?
Good/bad or okay/so so?
Plz lemme know with all your lovely comments
Love u all and
Thanks for the love u give me
Hope I made u smile
Take care
Hina


So 'Addictive' it is!

Guys,
I will start that post tomorrow and take it from there
I'll leave u all with a promo teaser here!
to make the new post all the more fun and addictive!
Thanks for making this part of the FF loved so much and appreciated so well.
Can't thank u all enough!




Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
woohooo!!!! armi won the race!!!
that was such an awesome part hina di!!! i luv how u write the thrills and the AR moments!!!!

can't wait for addictive now!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
its lovely hina..the message that u want to give.........with ur love beside u....u can aim for anything and will definitely get it....

all the best for the next FF......... and pll PM

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Posted: 17 years ago
it was awesomee hunnnnn i loved it pleasee pm mee when u open the new thread

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