RN FANFICTION - Page 2

hey too good

pl continue that to with a long update

hiya can you please add your link on to the fanfic link as well so it will be aeier to search your ff in the future 😃

ok guys here i


n-thik hai ma


naina goes to meet capt rajveer




n- may i come in sir



capt r - naina tummmmmm



n- mujhe aap se baat karne hai



capt r- sure .



naina enter



n- sir ma ka phone aaya tha .mere baba ko heart atack aaya hai




capt r- kyaaaaaaaaa




n- baba aap se milna chahatte hai

capt r- mujh se kyun




n- mujhe nahin pata



capt r- thik hai




n- thanks


next day



morning




n- pooja main neeche jaa rahe hu



p- par aaj toh humare class 6 00 hrs pe hai naa




n- ha par main aaj class attend nahin karunge



p- kyun


n- kal ma ka phone aaya tha baba ko heart atack aaya hai




p- kya abhi uncle kaise hai



n- abhi better hai



p- thk hai tu jaa



n- bye pooja


p- bye


naina comes down to take premsson from BC



n- may i come in sir




BC- yes



bc- cadet singh kya huya



n- sir kal mere ghar se phone aaya tha ki mere baba ko heart atack aaya hai



bc- kya


n- kya main aaj unse mlne jaa sakte hu




bc- ok




n- thank u sir


capt r- may i come in sir



bc- are capt aayo



capt r- sir mujhe aaj chutti chaheye


bc- kyun capt


capt r- sir aaj mera ek imp meeting hai


bc- thk hai


naina is standing infront of the gate waiting for capt r


capt r- chale



n- hmm



capt r /n took the bus for ambala




after some time they reach ambla


n- taxi



taxwala- jee



n- city hosptal chalo


taxiw-hmm




n/capt r sat in the taxi


after some time they reach the hospital




receptionist- yes mam



n- can u plz tell me the room no of mr nischay alluwalia


rec- room no 89



n-thanks




naina enter the room



n- baba



baba- naina



n- eyes full wth tears
kaise hai aap




b- thk hu beta




b-are capt r aap aaye hai


capt r- jee


b- mujhe aap se bohot imp baat karne hai



capt r- jee boleye



b- beta maine toh aapna bata kho diya hai par ab man naina ko nahin kho sakte



n- baba


b- beta main jante hu ke tum mere beti ke mentor ho ,uske saath hamesha rahete ho




capt r - woh toh mere farz hai




b- beta main chahatte hu ke tum mere beti zindigi bhar saath doo




capt r- jee


b-naina idher aao


n comes




b-shaadi karlo




nana is full shocked



n- yeh aap kya kehe rahe hai
main unse shaadi nahn kar sakte


b- kyun beta



n-kyunki .she stops



naina goes out from the room

ok guys i have up my ff plz comment and thanks for likng it

thanx 4 the update

superb continuation

waiting 4 next part

Very nice!!Too good!!!But I want bigger updates!!!
Waise Raj ke jeep mein jate toh accha hota!!!


And you must have forgotten toh just to remind you Naina's mom's name is Mira!!!

ok here i



after naina goes out

baba- beta kya huya n ko



capt r- main dekh ti hu


capt r see that naina is sitting in a bench


capt r - naina


n- main aap se shaadi nahin kAR SAKTE .main baba ko bata dungi




capt r was silient




naina started going towards the room suddenly some 1 calls her from back


person- miss alluwalia


naina turns



n-yes


person - hi i am dr salve .i wan to talk about ur father 's health


n- hmm




dr s- plz sit




n- how is he




dr s- he is ok but u have keep him away from any tention
bcoz it can be harmful for his health




n- hmm




naina goes out from the dr's cabin

n- n her mind- agar main baba ko rajveer sir ke bare baata dete hu toh unhe bohot bura lage ga but if i dont then i have to marry capt r.main ka karu bhaiya mujhe samaj main nahin aaraha hain.


n sits in the floor crying )-MAIN KYA KARU BHAIYA


AFTER SOMETME N CAME BACK TO HER SENSES



N GOES TO CAPT R WHO WAS STANDING OUT THE HOSPTAL


N- SIR




CAPT R TURNS HEARNG N'S VOICE




CAPT R- kya baat han n




n-KYA AAP MUJH SE SHAADI KARENGE




CAPT R cant believe his ear



capt r kya


n- hannnnnn




capt r- par



n- man baba ko aap ke bare main baata nahin sakte kyunki agar maine aisa kia toh mere baba mar jayenge.main shaadi toh rahe hu par sirf aap ne baba k leye .humare contract marrage hogi jab baba ki tabiyat thik ho jayege tab main baba ko bata dunge ki hum ek saath nahn raha sakte .




capt r - hmm




naina/capt r goes to baba's room


baba- kya huya n


n- main shaadi ke leye taiyar hu


baba- kya .beta i am very happy




baba hugs naina / capt r




baba- tum dono ki shaadi kal hee hogi


n- par baba aapni tabiyat




baba- main thik hu




ok guys i up my ff plz gve ur comments .

hey soooooooo superb dear 👏 👏 ,
u hav simply written sumtin different dear,
gud so marraige ah simply superb but marriage shld realy happen dear 😊

but excelent dear, 👏 All the very best,


Aarthi

Great!!!Too good!!!

But yeh baat toh academy mein chupani padegi!!!

Yaar shaadi...Whoopi!!!

Lekin yaar itna gap gap mein kyon likhti ho aur thoda detail mein likho!!!