*~Kudiyaan Vs Munde~*~Part 13 updated 19.01.09~* - Page 68

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RECAP: Shamit ko pata chali sho ki real story

Wo hua very sorry

Rahul-sho-shamit ne dosti nibhane ka kiya promise

Armaan aur ridhima ko milane ki karenge wo koshish

But guys and gals I m seeing u after a long time

So here is a hi of mine!*wink* ;-)

Luv u all loads

Missed u very much

PART-13 DURIYO SE HUI NAZDIKI SI HAI??????????

~SOMEWHERE IN THE SUBURBS OF PUNJAB~

Ar: suhana safar aur yeh mausam hasi

Ri: suhana safar my foot,meri hi mat mari gayi thi jo maine tumhare saath roopnagar jaane ke liye haan kardi thi

Ar:hello miss.attitude bas haan ek to main kitni koshish kar raha hoon apna dhyaan lagane ki and u are disturbing me so plz stop squabbling ok

Ri:ok ok go on with ur suhana safar aur yeh mausam hasi (she said irritated)

Ar: waise I m afraid we are going the wrong way

Ri: huh?????????? Why fear when ridhima is here!!!

Ar: tum yahan ho isi baat ka to darr hai anyways yeh ghisi pitti lines kahin aur use karna theek hai

Ri: oh shut up

Ar:not again I told u take a snap of mine without a shirt y do again and again ask me to take my shirt-up

Ri:oh mr.gawar angrezi aati nahi bolne chale log

Ar:exactly u donno English coz it is take ur shirt-off

Ri:whatever…………………………..anyways I think we were talking abt our way

Ar: oh yes…………..ms.attitude u always distract me

Ri: wateva

Ar: so do u really think u can take me thr coz thodi der pehle car mein u told how wud I know the way

Ri: arre wo to maine aise hi keh diya tha and I m a pure Indian I know my ways ok

Ar:yeah we'll see

Ri: no sir we'll see nahi see we are here

Then they see a grand mansion less of a mansion but more of a palace

Ar:ridhima are u sure yehi hai coz hume orphanage jana tha mahal nahi ok

Ri: yeah idiot

Then they see the watchman

Ri:bhaiyaji yeh buaji kahan milengi?????????

Wa: tussi kaun ho ji

Ar: bhaiya ji asi docs from sanjeevani

Wa:acha to tussi ho hmmmmmmmmmm mujhe buaji ne bataya tha aap logon ke bare mein,lekin wo to abhi hai hi nahi wo to dukaan se saaman lene gayi hai

Ri: ok so hum andar ja sakte hain???

Wa:ji jaayiye jaayiye sab aap ka hi intezaar kar rahe hain

Ar: wow that's gr88888 so ridhima chalein

Ri:hmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Wa: lekin suniye

Ri:ji

Wa:sambhalke jayiyega

Ar:ok thanks

And they leave

Wa to himself: shukriya mat ki kijiye doctor sahib………………….lekin maza to ab aayega

Ri: Armaan

Ar: hmmm

Ri: I think thr's sumthing fishy

Ar: same here baby

Ri: what do u think kya hoga????

Ar: r u sure ridhima we are at the right place?????

Ri: ofcourse Armaan

Ar: so what do v do now

Ri: lets risk ourselves baby

Ar: lets go commando

Ri & ar: left right left

Left right left

And they go on

~@ CCD again~

Sh: so what wud be our first move

Sho: abhi tak to kuch nahi but jab wo log waapas aayenge tab v'll see wat to do

Ra: hmmmmmm…….and shamit I hope our trust wont be broken

Sh: sure dude

Ra: bas ab buddy aur bhabhi aa jayein

Sh: hmmm I m w8ing for the time

Sho: I guess v shud leave now

Sh: chalo mai tumhe bahar tak drop kar deta hun

Ra: yeah u all move I ll pay the bill and cum

Sho: hmm

Sh:shona how does Minnie look like

Sho: huh?

Sh:I mean like u or dhruv? If u don't mind me askin

Sho: hmmm vo puri dhruv ki copy hai

Sh:to tumhe use dekhar dhruv ki yaad nahi aati hai

Sho: sach batau to nahi kyunki dhruv meri zindagi ki ek bahut badi bhul haiaur minee meri sab se badi khushi and mai achi baton ko buri baton ke kaaran bhulana nahi chahti nd I luv Minnie very much so that's it

Sh: hmm shona ek baat kahun

Sho: hmm kaho

Sh: u r a brave girl Shonali

And he then hugs her

Thr are many things rolling in shonali's mind she suddenly feels a different emotion entering her body so different yet so gud…..she felt as if she didn't want to loose it she luved each nd every bit of it

Ra:uhu I left u for only 2min nd u started here only guys cumon atleast be mannerless…..sry atleast have sum manners

Sh: nahi Rahul tum galat samjh rahe ho……

Ra: chillax dude mai to bas mazaak kar raha tha

Sh: hmm mazaak

Rahul and Shonali sit in their car

Ra: chal bye dude

Sh: hmm bye

Rahul starts the car

It makes the grumpy noise then he looks at the petrol needle

Ra: oh fish

Sho: kkya hua????

Ra: no petrol baby

Sho: ab kya karenge

Ra: lemme think

Sh: I can drop u 2

Ra: yeah buh meri car

Sh: mechanic

Ra: no not at all

Sho: then

Ra: acha shamit tum Shonali ko ghar leke jao I ll cum

Sho: buh Rahul

Ra: cumon sho

Sh: buh dude ll u b able to manage all alone????

Ra: hmm I ll

Sho: pakka????

Ra: haan sho u go I ll b rite thr

Ra to himself: sho I knw shamit is the rite person for u nd I m on 2 missions now

Sh: chalein

Sho:hmm she says and lower her eyelids

Shamit opens the door for her she smiles and sits down

He smiles back at her and goes to driver's seat

He sits down and starts to drive

They both look at each other but when the other is abt to look in their direction they turn away

Suddenly it starts to rain

And both of their hands reach the music player

They both look at each other numb

And then they smile at each other still lost in each other

And the song kuch kam hai from dostana starts to play on the radio

Kuch Kum Roshan Hai Roshni, Kuch Kum Gili Hai Baarishein..Kuch Kum Lehrathi Hai Hawa, Kuch Kum Hai Dil Mein Kwahishein..Tham Sa Gaya Hai, Yeh Waqt Aise, Tere Liya Hi Tehra Ho Jaise..Mmmmm..Mmmm, Mmmmm..Mmmm Sha to himself: meri sirf ek khwaish hai shona u me nd minnie Kuch Kum Roshan Hai Roshni, Kuch Kum Gili Hai Baarishein..Kuch Kum Lehrathi Hai Hawa, Kuch Kum Hai Dil Mein Kwahishein..Tham Sa Gaya Hai, Yeh Waqt Aise, Tere Liya Hi Tehra Ho Jaise..Mmmmm..Mmmm, Mmmmm..Mmmm Shonali looks at shamit and sees the pain in his eyes and wonders wat that pain is for and y….is it because of me??????? Kyun Meri Saans Bhi, Kuch Bhiki Si HaiDooriyon Se Huyie, Nazdiki Si HaiMmm…, Kyun Meri Saans Bhi, Kuch Bhiki Si HaiDooriyon Se Huyie, Nazdiki Si HaiJaane Kya, Yeh Baath HaiHar Subha, Aab Raat Hai.. Sho to herself: shamit u r a very nice guy main bhagwan se pray karungi tumhe mujhse kai zyaada achi ladki mile Kuch Kum Roshan Hai Roshni, Kuch Kum Gili Hai Baarishein..Kuch Kum Lehrathi Hai Hawa, Kuch Kum Hai Dil Mein Kwahishein..Tham Sa Gaya Hai, Yeh Waqt Aise, Tere Liya Hi Tehra Ho JaiseMmmmm..Mmmm, Mmmmm..Mmmm Shamit looks at Shonali as the last line escapes the deck he says to himself mera waqt humesha tumhare liye hi tehrega shona Phool Mehke Nahin, Kuch Gumsum Se HaiJaise Roothe Huwe, Kuch Yeh Tumse HaiPhool Mehke Nahin, Kuch Gumsum Se HaiJaise Roothe Huwe, Kuch Yeh Tumse HaiKhusbooien Dhal Gayi, Saath Tum Aab Jo Nahin.. Sho to herself: dhruv tum mere saath nahi ho lekin mere saath miniee hai and I luv her all da bst dhruv for ur life and god shamit ki saari khwaishien puri karna nd always keep him happy Kuch Kum Roshan Hai Roshni, Kuch Kum Gili Hai Baarishein..Tham Sa Gaya Hai, Yeh Waqt Aise, Tere Liya Hi Tehra Ho Jaise..Mmmmm..Mmmm, Mmmmm..Mmmm

Sho: so tum kuch apne bare mein batao

Sh: kya bataun meri zindagi to ek khuli kitaab ki tarah hai anyways mere ek bhaiya hai ek bhabhi hai that's it……

12^th std tak yahi tha then shifted to us

Sho: tum us mein kaha the

Sh: new York aur tum

Sho: hum sab bhi new York mein hi to rehte the strange ek hi city mein rehte hue hum pehle kabhi nahi mile aur ab india mein aake mil rahe hai

Sh: shayad bhagwan humko milwana chahte the isliye kabhi saath mein new York kabhi saath mein india and finally v ve met……..tumhe kya lagta hai ki bhagwan hume kyun milwana chahte honge

Sho: pata nahi isme kuch acha hi hoga

Sh: hmmm acha hi hoga

Then the rest of journey went in full silence again looking at each other time by time

Sh: hmmm here v r

Sho: thnx shamit

Sh: strange don't u think so Rahul bohot jaldi aa gaya

Sho: hmmm I guess so I ll ask him wo itni jaldi kaise aaya anyways thanks a lot shamit

Sh: ur welcum madame

Sho: tu connaise francaise?(oh do u knw French)

Sh: oui madame j'ai alle' au France pour deux ans……(yes mam I have visited france for 2 years)

Sho: ohlala

Sh: yep how do u knw French

Sho: maine aur miniee ne saath mein sikhi thi uski summer holidays mein

Sh: impressive

Sho: acha I guess I should leave now it is very l8

Sh: hmm ok bye c ya 2mrw

Sho: yeah c ya

Rahul was watching all this frm his window

Ra to himself: I m the bst cupid eva hehehehe

Ra: Shonali itni der kaha laga di tum logon ne

Sho: infact Rahul how cum u ve reached so early

Ra: uhu acha any news frm bhai??????

Sho: nope lets go 2 sleep I m very tired now v ll talk 2 him 2mrw

Ra: k sho gn

Sho: gn

And they go to their respective rooms

~AT ANOTHER END~

Ri: Armaan lets think again are v seriously going in

Ar: Ridhima v ll ve 2 v don't ve any oder option left

Ri: cant v w8 for buaji

Ar: look Ridhima I m very tired I wanna sleep I cant w8 for her now its ur wish u wanna cum with me or not

Ri: ok ok

They think and re-think and enter the grand mansion

They open the gate it was very dark

Ridhima held armaan's hand and they kept their foot together inside the main door hand in hand….

Ri: ar…Armaan mujhe bohot darr lag raha hai

Ar: don't wry Ridhima main hun na

They start their walk again and wander in the mansion for some tym…….but there were no traces of anyone's living…

Suddenly a blanket comes over them and they both get covered

When they were trying to remove the blanket they realized that they have also been tied together with a rope

Then they hear a few ppl laughin out loud

Ri:k…k….kaun hai

A heavy voice speaks: gundey

Then suddenly there is a more laughter but wait this round of laughter was not frm adults

Ar: kids!!!!!!!!!! (Armaan whispered to Ridhima)

Ri:oh ho so lets do sumthin(she whispered back)

Ar: Ridhima pata hai maine suna hai aaj kal roopnagar mein ek gang hai gundo ka kahin yeh log wo to nahi

Ri: nahi Armaan yeh log wo kaise ho sakte hai…….

Ar: kyun??kyun nai ho sakte???

Ri: kyunki wo log bade hain aur besides wo log peeth piche waar nahi karte

Ar: haaan yeh to hai

Gappu to oder orphans: acha to yeh baat hai gang open'em

The kids open them

Gappu: abbey budhon(old ppl) bacha kisko kaha

Ar: such a mannerless kid

Gappu: kid do I look lyk a kid to u

Ri: no u look like a…..mmmmm w8 lemme think mmmmm yeah a KID

Gappu: oh is it now w8 nd watch……………guys attack

Then a few kids frm backside push Armaan and Ridhima……….both of'em fall down the kids tie them again and throw a bucket of glue at them then they take few chits and write gappu is not a kid on them and paste those chits all over Armaan and ridhima

Gappu keeps his leg on Armaan's stomach(lyk durga ma)

Ga: hahahahahaha ab bolo do I look like a kid??????

Ar: nahi mere baap!!!!!!!!

Ri: listen kiddo ooops sry listen honey plz open us u r so sweet ki…person so plzzzzzzz

Then suddenly buaji enters

Gappu: buaji buaji dekho humne gundo ko pakad liya

Buaji cums and see the 2 lying on the floor she bursts out with laughter

Bua: gappu yeh Armaan aur Ridhima hai the docs who were to meet u all for ur checkup and therapy remember I told u kids

Ga: phir bhi bada maza aaya

Bua: omg u kids are so impish……..chalo now help me open them up

Armaan and Ridhima were on their foot now

Ri: hi buaji

Ridhima jumped up with excitement and tried to hug her bua wen buaji backed away

Bua: meri dress bhi kharaab ho jaayegi

Ridhima chuckled

Ar: Namaste buaji

Armaan gave a warm smile and bent down to touch her feet

Bua: jeetey raho………alrite so whr are ur belongings???????

Ri: ummmm wo tho gaye

Bua: matlab?????

They both tell the story abt pishab singh and his gang(I hope u guys remember)

Then buaji gives a few sarees to Ridhima and manages to get few pyjama kurtas for Armaan

They get dressed up

Armaan was in awe of Ridhima she wore a beautiful plain red saree she was lookin like a bride with less things on….simple yet elegant

Ridhima could feel his gaze on her but then gappu butted in

Ga: bhaiya,di khana ready hai

Ar: hmmm

Ga: di aap bohot sundar aur sexy lag rahi ho

Ri: huh???????badmaash

They both laughed and the three of 'em went to the dining table to have dinner

At the dinner table Armaan and ridhimaa got acquainted with other kids they laughed and merrily ate their dinner thinking of what mess the kids created

Buaji showed Armaan the way to his room and asked Ridhima to sleep with her today so as to talk and knw abt her bro shashank and his whole family

~In armaan's room~

Ar: oh shit main sho aur Rahul ko to batana hi bhul gaya ki I ve reached

Armaan dialed shonali's # coz he was worried for her coz of shamit

Sho: hello Armaan howz u idiot ek phone karke bata nahi sakte kya ho gaya hai tumhe Ridhima ke saath rehkar mujhe bhul gaye ho kya

Ar: calm down sho and tum toh aise behave kar rahi ho jaise tum meri bona fide gf ho

Armaan chuckled

Sho: hahaha stupid that's not funny at all ok

Ar: ok ok so temme kya hua

Sho: kya hua matlab

Ar: stop acting as if I donno sho

Sho:pata hai to fir puchte kyun ho

Ar: sho!!!!!!!!

Sho: alrite I told him the truth

Ar: what are u crazy??????,well I thought u wud tell him sumthin else

Sho: Armaan I cudnt I donno y buh I told him

Ar: and r u sure he ll keep it a cloak-and-dagger

Sho: well certainly

Ar: gr8 then so wat nxt

Sho: I was in car with him

Ar: why??????

Armaan sounded overprotective, well actually he was since dhruv incidence

Sho:Armaan stop over reacting Rahul ki car mein petrol nahi tha

Ar:oh

Buh Armaan cudnt believe that he made a note in his mind that he ll ask Rahul abt it….well he trusted his sis but was not sure on rahul's side of story cos Rahul always travelled in a car full with petrol

Sho: Armaan I need ur help on a matter

Ar: yeah sho bolo na

Sh: Armaan I donno buh I ve got this certain feeling creepin inside me when I am in the vicinity of shamit

Ar: mmmm are u lyk sure temme what kind of emotion is it I mean how do u feel???

Sho: I donno I feel safe in his proximity……I feel I can rely on him……trust him…..and ask him any kind of favour as a true frnd and he ll definitely help me

Ar: sho are u in love with him

Sho: no Armaan I lyk just met him a few days ago

Ar: hmmm then may be he has become a very good frnd of urs a person close to ur heart….a person u can savour and infact u shud……and weneva u want u can def confide into him I m sure too that he ll help u

Sho: thanks Armaan I feel relieved, now that u ve helped thr is one more news I wanna share with u

Ar:ooooh is it temme wats that?????good or bad

Sho: well without a doubt good

Ar:so temme fast I cant w8 to hear that

Sho: hmm I ve found 2 ppl with us are in love

Ar: huh kaun??????

Sho: well u wont believe it I saw anjie and atul having an eye-lock session

Ar: what??

Armaan was shocked but somewhr he knew that this was gonna happen

Ar: well I said to Rahul they are gonna be together one day

Sho: kool na every1 in our group are gonna love each-oder………..u nd Ridhima,Anjali nd atul,may be that's a big IF Rahul nd Muskaan…and finally shamit and me

Armaan was not taken aback at sho taking her and shamit's name

Shonali didn't realize what she said

Ar: hmmm gr8

Sho: so tum batao wat all happened with u progress??????or regress

Ar: well progress

Armaan told Shonali bout all the happenings in his trip to the mansion and the happenings in the mansion

Shonali was quite happy with the progress b/w Armaan and ridhima's relationship

Ar: Rahul kahan hai is he thr

Sho: hmm well w8 I ll go to his room and give him the fone

Shonali got up frm her bed and went towards rahuls room

From the window of the porch Shonali saw atul and Anjali together sitting in the garden hand in hand talking to each oder

Sho: Armaan guess what ???????

Shonali sounded awfully cheerful

Ar: what???

Sho: atul and Anjali are sitting in the garden Anjali is resting her head over atul's shoulder

Ar:ohhhhhhhhh do one thing take a few snaps and mms them to me I ll talk to Rahul later

They both disconnected the phone and Shonali took a few snaps and immediately sent the mms to Armaan

Then she texted him

What r u gonna do

Armaan texted her back

Nothing much jst gonna make a vedio and will mms u again and kal u ll b taking it all out frm them

Sho:

But are u sure?????this is lyk interfering

Armaan:

Na sho….they ll be happy frm wat I knw coz they wont be able to put in the picture for us themselves now stop texting me I gotta do some work….gn

Sho:

Gn!!!!

Then Armaan got one more idea

Ar: Ridhima this is an opportunity to get close to you

Then Armaan texted Ridhima

Awake???????I need ur help it is urgent!!!!!!!!!!!

Ridhima saw the msg and smiled but then thought wat does he want

Well m awake buh wat kinda help??????????????

Armaan:

I ll tell u meet me in the backyard now

Ridhima:

Ok b thr in 5 min

~In the backyard~

Armaan was waiting for Ridhima

Ridhima came in a few minutes

Ri: hey

Ar: hey

Ri: kya hua y did u Call me here

Ar: well I ve a news to crack

Ri:what??????

Ar:wellllllll

Ri:Armaan ve u plznned to kill me of anticipation kya?????

Ar: acha ok be all ears

Ri:armaaaaaan

Ar: atul and Anjali love each oder

Ri:what???????

Ridhima was astounded

Ri:wait buh how do u knw

Ar: well I jst had a chat with sho bfr texting u she told me she caught them having an eye-lock session and

Ri: what???armaan bolo na

Ar: and I wanted to ve a talk with Rahul so I asked her to give the phone to him she was going to his room wen in the way she saw them sitting in the garden hand in hand

Ri:whoooooow and what do u need help abt

Ar: well then I asked sho to click a few snaps and mms me, she did nd I ve got a plan and I need u to help me with it

Ri: ooooooooook so wats the plan

Ar: a vedio

Ri: hmmmmmmm I get it I ve an idea infact better than a vedio

Ar: go ahead

Ridhima told him her plan and Armaan was reasonably happy with the plan

Armaan and Ridhima high-fived each oder

BAS NOW

PRECAP:kya karne wale hai Armaan aur Ridhima

Rahul ko bolna pada bas kar meri maa

Kisko usne bola hai yeh hum jaanenge

Par us sab se pehle kya anji aur atul sachai ko maanenge

Dekhte hai aage kya hai naya surprise

Jo bhi hai I guess hai ek joy ride

So befr u get the next part

Here is my new kick start!!!!

Hehehehe hey guyz wassup?????????????how are u all???????hope everyone is fine and lemme tell u me f9 too wellll I ve got certain things to tell u all…..

P.S:first of all I m very happy that in the mid break of the ff many readers came up and appreciated the wrk,thank u guyz

P.P.S:Secondly…..well guyz I have my result on 21^st of jan so plz wish me luck nd pray for me I hope I get thru with good grades nd now I am very happy to be bak with a new part!!!!

P.P.P.S:now ppl u gotta comment no matter what and I ll be continuing love wrecked too have started wrking upon its part

Ok guyz that's it

Love ya all

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