*~Kudiyaan Vs Munde~*~Part 13 updated 19.01.09~* - Page 14

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: devilofkindness

well
dark clouds of suspense suspense suspense
kar rahe hain humko bekaraar
dunno wat is gonna happen next
jo kar raha hai humko paagal
but wat to do ? LETS ALL OF US RACK OUR BRAINS 😕
KYUNKI....

kyunki sabr ka fal meetha hota hai bhai ! 😉

yup i hope so sabr ka fal meetha ho darling

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: angelnevelie

plzzz continue soon! 😳

yup yup yup yup i ll

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Posted: 17 years ago

guyz some people had queries about the intro so here it is
DR.RIDDHIMA GUPTA
dont go on the surname but she is punjabi just imagine

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DR.ARMAAN MALLIK

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HEY GUYZ.......

SORRY ABT THE PART I LL TRY AND POST IT ASAP....

Edited by magicgirlankita - 17 years ago
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RECAP:

armaan-riddhima aur rahul-muskaan ki raahein hain takra gayi…….
Riddhima ne chalaya apna formula111 armaan pe…….
Rahul ko shock laga jab muskaan usko apna bakra bana gayi……..
Armaan laga hai riddhima ke peeche chilate hue queen of hearts……
Jaane kya hoga ab age aaj…….

PART-4 MUJHE SHOCK KYUN DIYA????????
IN THE MALL

Ar:hum zaroor milenge queen of hearts
Ra:bro
Armaan gets shocked and tries to hide the paper from rahul
Ra:bro kya hua???????aap kuch chupa rahein hain kya?????????
Ar:kuch…….kuch bhi to nahi
He slides the paper in his pocket as if he just is keeping his hands in the pocket
Ar:btw….buddy tu kahan reh gaya tha
Ra:kahin nahi bro
Ar:to tu yahaan kya kar raha hai
Ra:main……main to wo bas
Ar:buddy itna nervous kyun ho raha hai
Ra:kahan bro actually I was looking for u so I came here……and aap yahaan kya kar rahein hai
Ar:main…..main bhi to bas tujhe dhoondte dhoondte aa gaya
Ra to himself:jaldi rahul topic change kar nahi to sooli pe chad jaayega
Ra:bro aapko pata hai yahaan ki ladkiyaan kitni ajeeb hai……bro jisne mujhe maara aapko uska kuch karna hoga
Ar:hmmmmmmmm dekh jahan tak hum jaante hain wo shaadi nahi karna chahti so ek kam kar call her mom and tell her we are coming in abt 1 hr ok
Ra:but
Ar:do as I say buddy
Ra:ok
***********
IN THE CAR
Muskaan is laughing like a maniac
Mu:di…..heehe….apne uske saath ice cream bhi khayi
Ri:haan muskaan aur jab kaha ki chalo to kehta hai ki meri ice cream ka kya hoga tum khilaogi itna flirt hai aur pata hai ice-cream khaane ke baad usne mujhe jab uthaya to sab ghoorne lag gaye to kehta hai aap logon ko kya problem hai nmeri patni hai
Mu:hehehehehe seriously????????????????
Ri:haan aur baaki toh tune dekh hi liya
Mu: btw di apne sach mein usko apna no.diya
Ri: nahi muskaan paagal hai kya maine to bas likha mere dad police station mein kam karte hain wahin aake mil lena
Ri:acha muskaan wo chod ab tu apne bakre ke bare mein bata
Mu:mera bakra ……wo to bakra kam darpok zyaada tha…….maine usse kaha utha nahi toabhi yahaan ke logon se pitwati hoon aur who mujhe superman ki tarah bhaag ke yahaan le aya aur jab use pata chalaki main chal sakti hoon to bechara behonsh ho gaya hoga
And muskaan's phone rings
Mu: hi mom
Pa: hi beta..shopping ho gayee
Mu: yes mom shoppingho gayi
Pa: to jaldi aa jayo
Mu: kyun koi aa raha hai kya???????
Pa: haan who armaan ka phone thaw o ek ghante mein aa raha hai
Mu: what??????????????????????
As muskaan was driving the car as she heard the news she pressed the break very tightly and the two girls got a jerk
Pa: haan chalo jaldi aao ab
Ri: kya hua muskaan itni kya shocking news hai
Mu: di wo aa raha hai
Ri: muskaan kaun aa raha hai????????
Mu: wohi nri armaan
Ri: kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa??????????????
Mu: haan ab kya karenge hum???????????
Riddhima was shocked for definitely but her brain was her brain which raced like a horse and………
Ri: idea!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Riddhima told her idea to muskaan and muskaan gave her a thumb's up 👍🏼
They drove back to the house
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At their house
The gals were on the gate they were abt to press the bell but the door was opened bye padma
Pa: aa gaye tum log
Mu: obviously ma koi aur dikh raha hai kya????????
Pa: chal pagli acha ab tu jaake isko tayyar kar main panch minute mein aa rahi hoon
As padma said this a mischievous grin spread on both of the galz faces
On their way to the room
Mu: di ek baat poochun
Ri: nahi do baat pooch
Mu: di acha apko kaise pata tha ki mom hume milne room mein zaroor aayengi???????
Ri: tujhe kya lagta hai wo humpe nazar nahi rakhengi?????????????unko humare upar har second shak rahega ki hum koi gadbad to nahi kar rahe……….
In their room
Riddhima is ready in a blue and white sari which they bought today only……she is looking like a fairy

HERE IS THE SARI LINK

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Ri: gate par nazar rakh
Mu: yeah
After 2-3 min
Mu: aa gayi
Riddhima puts glycerine in her eyes and muskaan also does that
Hogaya drama chalu
Ri: muskaan…..(sobbing)😭 tu haina mera wo bada wala bag utar de
Mu: par kyun di
Ri: dekh muskaan aaj to meri shaadi tair (fix) ho jaayegi aur phir kal meri shaadi ho jayegi to mujhe states jaana pad jayega 😭(still sobbing) aur aur kya pata wahan mere saath kya kya ho……..kya pata wo mujhe wahan jaake chod de…..kya patamere pati ki doosri patni ho aur aur wo mujhe mare peete…..mujhse din raat kam karwayege aur jab tu mujhe phone lagayegi tab main tujhse has has kar baat karoon aur phone rakhne ke baad phoont phoont ke rooun aur phir ek din khabar aayegi ki teri shaadi ho rahi hai aur meri pati ki patni ke pet mein us time uskaa teesra bacha ho aur main us se daya ki aur chutti ki bheek mangte maangte thak jaaon kya pata
Riddhima turned to look at the door secretly and there standing was padma sobbing 😭
Mu: haan di maine aisa padha hai bahut si kitaabon mein
Riddhima now finlly turns
Ri: arre mom (she wipes her tears melodramatically) aap kab aayi
Pa: aisa kuch nahi hoga
Ri: kaisa kuch nahi hoga mom??????????????
Pa:jo abhi tune kaha kyunki armaan India shift ho raha hai aur doosri baat main tum dono ki shaadi ek saath karwaungi samjhi tum aur ab yeh rona dhon band karo theek hai wo log aate hi honge
After padma left
Ri: oh no ab kya karenge???????saare plan ek ke baad ek flop hote jaa rahe hain
Mu: di don't loose hope aur ab yeh suno what say formula 17
Ri: wow muskaan!!!!!!!!17 yaine armaan ke liye khatra…….chal sab ready karke aate hain
After half an hour the guyz arrive and only rahul(fake armaan) enters in and armaan goes and hides in the garden
Ding dong!!!!!!!!!!!
Padma opens the door
Ra: pairipauna auntyji and he touches her feet
Pa: jeetey raho
Padma is impressed
Ra: pairipauna uncleji and he touches his feet too
Well shashank is not impressed yet
Pa: aao na beta andar chalo
Sha: naina ne to kaha tha ki tumhari saath tumhari bhai bhi hoga kya naam tha rahul wo nahi aaya
Ra: nahi uncle ji wo nahi aaya
Pa: acha beta kya loge????????
Ra: aunty ji jo aap pyaar se banake de………
Pa: beta tum bolo to sahi
Ra: acha aunty aap itna insist kar hi rahi hai to malai mar ke ek Punjabi kadak chai ho jaye
Pa: theek hai beta
Riddhima and muskaan were already in the kitchen(they donno how to cook)
Pa: tum dono yahaan kya kar rahi ho
Ri: hum isliye khade the taki wo aapse beer maangega aur hum leke jayenge
Pa: usne aisa kuch nahi manga
Pa: ramu kaka zara chai to banana aur riddhima tum chai lekar aogi aur muskaan tum riddhima ko lekar aogi samjhe aur haan no gadbad
Ri & mu: yup mom
Ramu kaka(rk):chalo shaitan ki sena chalu ho jao
(as I told u ramu kaka was also mixed with them in their mischieves )
riddhima put red chilli powder in armaan's tea(actually rahul) and in the cake julaab ki goliyaan
Mu: formula 17 to armaan ke liye bahut khatra paida karne wala hai
And they laughed
Riddhima took the tray and muskaan took riddhima as told by their mum
They came out rahul was shocked to see muskaan over there
Ra to himself: mujhe pehle hi samajh jana chahiye tha ki yeh….yeh chipkali iski behen hi hogi…….but somewhere in her heart he was attracted to muskaan
Mu: (whispering) yeh yeh yahaan kya kar raha hai ???????
Ri: (whispering) muskaan yahi to hai armaan
~ ~ GARDEN ~ ~
Ar:queen of hearts yehi riddhima hai???????????(v.shocked)yaar rahul ko bhejne se acha to main khud hi chala jata and an insect bit him and he was moving from here and there

~ ~INSIDE ~ ~
Pa: yeh garden se awaazien kaisi aa rahi hain
To escape from what she did she said:main dekh kar ati hoon na
Ri to rahul: armaan ji yeh lijiye malai maarke kadak Punjabi chai and she winks her right eye at him
Pa: beta kisne banai hai bahut achi bani hai
Ri: wo maa maine
Ra: aapne banai hai to bahut achi hogi main to puri piyunga
Ri: haan pijiye to sahi
Rahul sips the tea he gets surprised that mirchi
Pa: achi bani hai an beta
Ra:haan ps ps kuch zyaada hi
Sha: kya hua beta achi nahi lagi
Ra: **cough** nahi uncle bahut achi hai**cough** pani milega
Pa: beta pani to main dedeti hoon lekin chai ke upar pani nahi peete tabaiyat kharaab ho jati hai
Ra: nahi koi baat nahi aunty
Ra to himself:brooooooooo kahan fasa diya aapne
~ ~ GARDEN ~ ~
MU: kya karoon di ko phone lagati hoon nahi
She hers some more noise so she goes further and she bangs into a person well known to him
Mu: tum??????
Ar: haan main……..
Mu: tum to armaan ho…..armaan to wo jo andar hai wo kaun hai
Ar: ssssssssshhhhhhhhhhhhhh wo mera bhai hai rahul
Mu: kya
Ar:haan main abhi shaadi nahi karna chahta tha to maine apne bhai ko bhej diya tha station armaan banake……lekin kya pata tha mera dil queen of hearts le jaayegi
Mu: what
Ar:kuch nahi
Mu: main abhi di ko batake aati hoon
Ar: nahi abhi nahi
Mu: abhi nahi to kabhi nahi tum khud hi dekhlena
Ar:ek baat batao yeh itna khans kyun raha hai chai peete waqt

Mu: **cough** yoon hi
Ar: kuch to hai batao warna main tumhari wo station wali baat tumhari mummy ko bata doonga
Mu: tumhe kaise pata ki humne mom ko nahi batayi yeh baat
Ar: matlab nahi batayi hai ab tum mujhe batao ki yeh khans kyun raha hai aur mera moonh ekdum lock rahega
Mu: wow o actually na
Ar: kya
Mu: wo actually humne uski chai main mirchgi mila di thi(she said it very fastly)
Ar: kya????? Bechara buddy aur kya kya kiya hai tumne
Mu: zyaada kuch nahi bas uske cake main julaab ki goliyaan daal di hai
Ar: u mean loose motion
Mu: yup
And they see through the window that padma is forcing rahul to eat the cake
Ar: nahi
And they both run inside
~ ~ INSIDE ~ ~
Ra: hmmmmmmmm aunty main cake nahi khata
Ri: plzzzzzzzzzz kha lijiye
And we see armaan comes in shouting: nahi buddy cake mat khana
Ri to ar: tum
Ra to ar: aap
Pa: yeh kya chal raha hai koi hume batayega
Ri to ra: app cake khaiye na
Ar: nahi buddy
Mu: di koi farq nahi padta yeh armaan nahi hai
Ri: what?????
Pa: exactly, what?????????Muskaan riddhima tumne fir gadbad ki
Ar: nahi aunty actually the thing is jo armaan hai wo armaan nahi hai aur jo armaan nahi hai wo armaan hai…..so the thing s armaan is armaan
Pa: kya????????mujhe samajh mein nahi aaya
Mu: main samjhati hoon jo aapke saamne di ko dekhne aaya tha wo armaan nahi hai wo rahul hai inka bhai aur yeh hai the real armaan,actually yeh shaadi nahi karna chahte the to inhone station pe rahul ko bhej diya, and suddenly muskaan realized that she did not had to say abt the station now she is dead
Pa: station???????
Rk(ramu kaka): main batata hoon
Pa: aap bhi ramu kaka
Ramu kaka tell her abt the morning and then armaan tell her abt the mall and now everything is clear
Pa: beta magar tumhe shaadi karni hi nahi thi to tumne mana kyun nahi kiya
Ar: actually aunty mom main apni mom se bahut pyaar kart hoon aur unhe dukhi nahi dekh sakta isliye
Pa: aur cake kyun nahi
Ri:wo maine chai main mirchi aur cake mein julaab ki goliyaan mila di thi
Now padma was laughing like hell
Shashank who was not at all listening anything was busy in something else: hmmmmmmmm the cake was tasty
Sha: aur hai kya riddhima
Muskaan turned around: dad apne saara cake kha liay
Sha:haan
Mu: rahul wala bhi
Sha: saara matlab saara aur yeh rahul kaun hai
Suddenly he holds his stomach and says sorry excuse-me
The 4 youngsters started laughing and padma:oh god yeh bhi na sorry bachon u chat I ll see him and come
Ar: so queen of herats tumhari pata to main dhoonda hi liya
Ri: whatever and plzzzzzzzzzz call me riddhima that's my name ok!!
Ra: hey chipkali bada maza aaya hoga meri godh mein
Mu: bla bla bla cut the crap btw I m muskaan u better call me that ok
Ar: well jane ka man to nahi kar raha par hume chalna chahiye bye queen of hearts
Ra: yup bye chipkali
And they go back home BUT EVERYONE THERE HAS SOMETHING IN THEIR MINDS MUJHE SHOCK KYUN DIYA???????

RIDDHIMA AND MUSKAAN TO KNOW ABT REAL ARMAAN AND RAHUL

ARMAAN TO KNOW THAT HE MISSED SUCH A WONDERFUL GAL

RAHUL THAT HE DRANK CHILLI CHAI AND WAS GOING TO EAT THE JULAAB WALA CAKE

SHASHANK THAT HE ATE THE CAKE AND SUFFERED LOOSE MOTIONS

AND PADMA FOR EVERYTHING
HEY GUYZZZZZZZZ HOWZZAT PLZZZZZZ GIVE UR FRANK COMMENTS

LUV U

@NKIT@





Edited by magicgirlankita - 17 years ago
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really nice....I was not following ur ff ..it is d 12st time...but now i think i really have 2 read all d parts...its really nice...!!! 👏
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Originally posted by: ksdbstjodi

really nice....I was not following ur ff ..it is d 12st time...but now i think i really have 2 read all d parts...its really nice...!!! 👏

THANK U DARLING I HOPE U KEEP READING AND ENJOYING

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Originally posted by: ash_rajat00

👏 awsome part ankita

THANK U ASH

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OMG soooo nice ankita
lovely this part wonderfull 👏

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