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i imagined this scene... my first ever.... so plz.... can u read and comment
after reading so many ffs in this forum..
aftr seein so many talented ff writers in dmg forum.. i thot of writing one...
so.. thanks a lot for readin,,,
i would really appreciate if u cud kindly comment after readin the ff... the comments are very very valuable to me.. thanks a lot😳😳...
note---- if anyone wants me to write a particular scene between AR or sum thin else in this ff... then plzzz PM me... ill add the scene.... plus for any suggestions plz plz PM me.... since i want to be aware of my mistakes... thank u so much😳😳
K-DR KEERTI
A-ARMAAN
R-RIDHZ
AT-ATUL
MUS-MUSKAAN
RAHUL-RAHUL
AJ-ANJALI
part 1
everybody is( except armaan) waiting for dr keerti for duties
K- dr armaan kaha hain😡😡
AT-patah nahi, (everybody confused)
K-aakj sanjeevani delhi se docs aane wale hain aur dr armaan ka hona bahut zaroori hain😡😡 dr ridhima....
R- ji dr keerti
K- aap dr armaan ke ghar jaakar usse issi waqt yaha lee aaiye
R- par... dr kee
K- its an order😡😡😡 dr ridhima
(ridhima takes address from atul and leaves)
(IN FRONT OF ARMAANZ HOUSE)
(RIDHZ KNOCKING- no body replies... ridhz pushes the door and the door OPENS)
(armaanz sleeping -ridhz goes closer)
R- armaaan, armaaan utho
A- ( ummm)
R- dr armaan,,,
A-(in sleep) ridhima... ri-dh-im-a
then ridhz sees that armaan was holding (TIGHTLY) ridhz earing
( ISHQ LETA HAIN PLAYS)
(armaan opens his eyes)
(they both stare at each other)
and they keeeep staring ... armaan sits up and ridhz doesnt move,... armaan moves closer to ridhz... ridhz doesnt move... AND THEN!!!!!!
THATS it,,,😭😭😭 plz i know that its not good.. but atleast my first attempt
plz comment and tell me... if sumone wants me to continue😊😊
well here it is
part 2
R- Armaan... tum
A- shhhh
R- nahi armaan.... yeh theek nahi hain
A-kya ridhima
R-dr keerti tumhe issi waqt bulla rahi hain.. bahut gusse me thi... main tumhare liye bahar wait kar rahi hoon
A- TUM dr keerti ke liye aaye ho😭😭
R- yes...
A- fine... main aa raha hoon(armaan goes to the toilet)
ridhima is alone in armaans room... so she opens the drawer next to armaans bed... she sees/// te comic books that ridhz gave... (ISHQ LETA HAIN PLAYS)
armaan cums out she quickly closes the drawer and acts normal
A- challe
R- tum jaao... main aa jaungi
A- ek colleague ke hasiyat se tumhe le jaa raha hun😭😭
R- thee--eeke
they leave
(in hospital locker room)(ridhz thinking abt armaanz happy moments)😳😳😳
A- dr ridhima...
R- KYA?
A- agar tumhare dil me mere liye KUCH BHI HAIN to aaj raat 9 baje... terrace me aana....
R- main NAHI AANE WALLI
A- ILL BE WAITIN.....
thats it
how was it?? my second attempt
well... here it goes
part 3
armaan waiting for ridhima in the terrace from 5 30pm
6 -no ridhima
7 -no ridhima
8- no ridhima
9 -no ridhima
10- no ridhima
11- no ridhima
11 45..... armaan gets a warm feeling... someones coming.... he stares at the entrance andddddd....
ridhima enters.....
*ishq leta hain plays*
ridhz goes closer to armaan...
R- kya hua
A- tum aa hi gayyi
R- kya hua bolo... mere paas time nahi hain
A- tum aa hi gayyi
R- armaaaan
A- hmm'
R- uh-h
*they both stare
R- tum mujse abhi bhi
A- abhi bhi kya ridhima
R- pyaa-aar karte ho?
A- KOI SHAK... aur tum?
(ridhzi starts crying)
A- KYA HUA...
R-IM sorrry.... 😭 im really sorry
A- kya hua??
plzzz comment and tell me whether i shul continue
part 4
R- im sorry armaan.. maine tumhe bahut dard pahuch aaya hain na??
A- nahi... ridh-i-maaa
R- NAHI ARMAAN!!main tumhe kabhi samaj hi nahi payee.. main subhe se soch rahi thi ki tumhe milne aau ya nahi.... par ab mujhe ye ehsaas hua... ki mujhe tumhari zaroorat hai
A- hmm...
R- IM SORRY ARMAAN...
A- ridhima...
R- I love u armaan,,, i love u....
A- I love u too
( and they hug each other -tightly... ishq leta hain plays_
ridhzis eyes were full of tears... armaan kissed in ridhzis eyes and ridhz started smiling
night... ridhima alone... in her house... gets a CALL frm armaan
A-hmmm... mere yaad me ho
R- tum bhi na
A- aacha suno, mujhe pata hain aaj tumhare ghar me koi nahi hai... so dinner??
R- armaan...!!!
A- chalo na... im waiting neeche( hangs up)
ridhz rushes towards the window... and seez armaan waitin.....RIDHZ tells armaan that shez cumin...
(in the car)
R- kaha jaa rahe hain??
A- bas challo
they cum in the sea side and ridhz sees a small but LUXURIOUS yacht
A- yaha ... humari dinner hogi... samudr ki khoobsurati ke beech... main aur tum... bas
R- arm-aa-an
A- after u ma'am
(they both enter
ridhz sees a table arranged for two... candle lite ... with an exotic variety of food
R- yeh sab...
A- aaj mere liye bahut imp day hain... tum thodi hee der main jaan jaogi
(they bith sit)
A- ridhima
R- bolo armaan
A- main... main tumhe dobara khona nahi chahata hoon. tumhare bina main ek zinda laash hoon... i love u and cant imagine my life without u
R- ( eyes are full of tears)
Armaan falls on his knees..... TAKES OUT A DIAMOND RING AND SAYS.....
"WILL YOU MARRY ME???""
R- *shocked*
R- LEKIN,,,
A- haan ya naa?
R- H-a-a-a
(aasmaani rang ho plays) ridhz wears the ring and they both stare at each other... armaan cums closer to ridhz.... then ridhz cums to her senses....
R- lekin...
A- lekin kya ridhima...??
R- anjali di mere see bari hain aur main kaise... nahi armaan... yeh theek nahi hain... aur yeh shaadi humre career ke beech aa sakti hain..
.
A- ridhima... ridhima... maine sirf kaha hain ki main tumhe khone nahi chahata... iss shaadi se... mujhe yeh tassali ho jaegi ki tum sirf meri ho... nahi to... ek darr... hamesha mere saath rehta hain...
R- matlab
A- matlab....- HUM YEH SHAADI CHUPKE SEE... KISSI KO BINA BATAKAR KARENGE
R- *OMG,,,, SHOCKED*
part 5
well.... here it is...
R- main,... uh
A- kya hua ridhima... bolo na please
R- mujhe sochne ke liye waqt chahiye
A- what!!! tumhe humare pyaar par abhi bhi shaa--k hain??
R-(interrupts) nahi nahi armaan... but yeh meri zindagi ka sabse bada faisla hoga.. so thoda sa samay...
A- thee-eeke... bara(12) ghante.... bara ghante hain tumhare paas.... mujhe tumhra jawab kal raat 12 bajhe.... chahiye... basket ball court.... agar haan hai to tum waha aa jana... agar na hain.... to mat aana... main samaj jaunga
R- itni jaldbaazi kyun armaan>
A-( armaan slowly holds ridhimas haand... tightly.... then goes closer to ridhima.... and closer.... and then says
because i love u😳.....
*ISHQ LETA HAIN PLAYS*
and then armaan kisses ridhima in her cheek and ridhima... keeps her eyes closed....
.....and the night passes😳😳😳
(next day... hospital)
at 7 pm
AJ- yawn... aaj pura din humne bahut kaam kiya hain... kyun na hum sab aaj coffee house chale?? 9 baje..." a late nite party for sanjeevani interns"??
AT- WOW.. gr8 idea
MUS- haa.... chalo chalo chalo chalo
RAHUL- oye chup kar muskaan.... haan anjali... idea bura nahi hain!
A&R-😕aaaj??????😕
AJ- arrey tum dono ko kya ho gaya hain?
A- nahi... main aur ridhima.. nahi aa sakte,,, we have some work
AJ- what work?
A- personal?!
AJ/AT/MUS/RAHUL- personal???
R- uh-uh... dr armaan ka yeh matlab hain ki dr keerti ne personally aakar humhe extra duties ke liye kaha hain...and humhe night shift bhi karni hogi... so we're sorry...
AJ- oh...ok..! fine then... enjoy ur work... buy... chalo atul, mskaan aur rahul... hum chalte
A- tata!!1😃
A- hmm... to.. basket ab mere liye jhoot bhi bolne lagi hain... not bad.... lagta hain ki jodi jamme gi
R-tch... tum bhi na...
A- thee-ke ...
then armaan pushes ridhima in the changing room and holds her hand tightly.... then pushes her against the wall....
R- kya karr rahe ho ...koi dekh lega...
A- shh.... (goes closer to ridhima... and closer and then whispers....
sirf 5 ghante baaki hain ridhima... sirf paach.... and then leaves
in basket ball court... armaan waiting for ridhima... 11 45 pm....
WELL im still ritin.,... plzz read and comment ... ill updatethe nxt part( ridhzs decision) realllllly soon
PART 6-RIDHZIS DECISION
at 12am.... whooooooosh... wind blows across armaanz face..... *ishq leta hain plays* armaan seez....
ridhima...... in a beautiful saree walkin towards him..... wearin the diamond ring that armaan had given him.....
ridhima goes closer to armaan...
R- armaan...
A- (quiet)
R- main tumse bahut pyaar karti hun....
A-(QUIET)
R- i will..... i will marry you
*aasmaniii rang hoo.... plays....*
armaans eyes are full of tears,,, and this time ridhima kisses armaanz eyes and they keep starin and keep starin... ......
R- lekin.... promise karo... ki kissi ko is baat ki koi khabar nahi hogi
A- main... armaan malik.. kasam khata hoon ki kissi ko bhi iss baat ki koi khabar nahi hogi....... i promise u....
IT STARTS RAININ.... ARMAAN PROTECTS RIDHIMA BY HOLDIN HER TIGHTLY IN HIS ARMS
.... ... ....
(NEXT DAY HOSPITAL)
MUS- aah... kal bahut maaza aayaa tha na!!
ANJ- ya guys... armaan and ridhima really missed it!!!
R- koi baat nahi... uh
A- duty come first😉😉😉
sister lovely enters the locker room...
lovely- oh jee,... dr armaan, muskaan and anjali ko dr keeryi issi waqt baula rahi hain....
A- cool... HUM aa rahe hain...
(every one leaves... ridhz alone in the locker room... she opens her locker and finds a letter.... a letter from armaan.... it was a follows)
29march08
dear basket....
hmmm.... tumahre bina har ek pal pahar ke tarah bhaari hain(main kaafi romantic hoon na>>??)... omg i love u ssooooo much....
achha suno... AAJ RAAT 8 baje mere ghar aa jana... mere ghar ke paas ek mandir hain aur aaj hi hum shaadi kar lenge... kissi ko koi shak nahi hoga.... in fact maine dr shashank se yeh already keh diya hain ki after duties tum mere ghar aaogi... to discuss our common cases ..
tumhe yeh na lage ki yeh jaldbaazi hain... no... i love u... and u love me...and i dont believe in wastin time😳😳😳
ill be waitin for u
bye...and love u once again
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armaan
R- *SHOCKED*
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part 7
RIDHZI WAS SHOCKED and was holdin the letter in her hand and jus then muskaan entered...
MUS- kya hua?? itni tension me??
R- huh...huh... nai nahi kuch nahi...( ridhz kept the letter in her locker and left)
(dr rahul and dr keerti in front of OT)
K- kya hua aapko mujse kuch baat karni thi?
RAHUL- ji dr keerti... main soch raha that agar aap chahe to aap mujhe BHI extra duties ... mera matlab hain extra hours kaam karne ke liye de sakte hain
K- "bhi "ka kya matlab hain?
RAHUL- i mean aapne dr ridhima aur armaan ko bhi extra duties die the na ... kal...
K- kya bakwas kar rahe ho dr rahul... kal dr ridhima aur armaan ke duties 8 baje hi khatam ho gaye the....
theeke... zaroorat pade,.. then ill call u,... back to work
RAHUL- *SHOCKED* ( thinking- armaan aur ridhima.... ne jhoot bola!!! par kyun..😕😕😕???)
(IN FRONT OF GAPPU)
R- armaan.... bp check kar liya
A- yupi dupi dup
GAPPU- wow.. armaan aaj bahut khush lag rahe ho
A- haa. woh kya hain na... ki😛😛
R-( interrupts) uh--uh... dr armaan mujhe aapse bahut zaroori baat karni hain... issi waqt....
A- okie...dokie/😆😆//...kaha
R- fire exit stairs....
A- okie dokie pokie...😆
(fire exit stairs)
A- kya hua meri FUTURE DHARAM PATNI..?😳😳
R- armaa-aan... hum... hum jaldbaazi.. to nahi ....
A-( armaanz eyes full of tears) kya?
R-nahi... mera matllab hain ki... mummy papa se chupakar..
A- RIDHIMA! u trust me na?
R- (ridhima looks deeps into armaanz eye... full of tears...)*ishq leta hain plays*
R- ha-a... main aaj aa jaungi.... 8 baje
A- thank u ridhima .... i love u
( then armaan kisses ridhz in her cheek ... ridhz blushes and for the first time... ridhz kisses armaan in his cheek.....)
A- hmm.. oyyye hoyyyyee!!😳😳😳
ridhz feels shy and leaves
ARMAAN THINKIN ABT RIDHIMA... IN HIS HOUSE......AT 6 30 PM ... SOMEONE KNOCKS THE DOOR... ARMAAN IS SURPRISED AND
THINKS- UH... RIDHIMA ITNI JALDI??
HE OPENS THE DOOR AND FINDS
RAHUL!!!!
A- uh... tu yaha kya kar raha hain?
RAHUL- tune humse jhoot kyun bola?
A- wat?
RAHUL- personal work!! remenber?? tu aur ridhima?
A- *shocked*wo-wo
RAHUL- ya... im listnin!!
A- mujhe aur ridhz ko mun nahi tha so issiliye humne jhoot bola
RAHUL- ya rite... u think im stupid??
A- bhar me ja na/!!! tera kya hain main kya karu ya na karu?
RAHUL- fine!! main abhi to jaa raha hoon par... agar tu-ne ridhima k saath kuch ulta seedha kiya na to tu to gaya!!
A- blah blah blah!!! will u go now!!!???
RAHUL LEAVES AND IN FRNT OF ARMAANS DOOR HE THINKS...
" kuch to gadbad hain mujhe pata lagana hi hoga" and then leaves...
ARMAAN.. msges to ridhima
ridhima... rahul ko pata chal gaya hain ki humne jhoot bola tha kal... be very careful.... but main yeh promie karta hoon ki usse iss baat par koi shak nahi hogi.... u trust me na?? haan ya na???
RIDHIMA- haan... ill meet u in an hour
ARMAAN-(relieved) i love u 😳😳😳
RIDHIMA- i love u too😳
8 O CLOCK-------------- ARMAAN WAITIN FOR RIDHIMA!!!!!
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PART 8- ARMAAN AUR RIDHIMA KI SECRET SHAADI
Armaanz waitin for ridhima in his house... wearin a white kurta and at 8:05pm..... knock knock... sumone knocks at the door.... armaanz runs and opens and he seez..... ridhima ... in a red saree.... wearin the diamond ring, the gold kada, and the payal.....😊😊😊
A- oye hoyeeee.... to... tumne kada aur payal ko phir se jod hee diya...
R- woh humari pyaar ki nihani thi armaan... judna to tha hi...*ishq leta hain plays*.....😳
and then they leave .. in 15 min... they reach -a temple ... near armaanz house and before enterin ....
A- yaha ek pandit hain,... jisse main bachpan se jaanta hoon .... so..... woh humari shaadi karwarenge...
R- hmm..
THEY ENTER... THE TEMPLE...
they see the pandit waitin for them... and they see the fire in between... and the marriage procedures begins.....
mangalam bhagawan vishnu..... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... and then.....
armaan puts the sindoor .... and the mangal sootr...... 😳😳😳
ridhima cudnt see into armaanz eyes... she was feelin really shy...😳😳😳
A- oye hoyyee.😳😳😳.
then armaan kisses ridhima AND then ridhima ridhima slowly raises her eyes... and seez armaan and says-... thank u *ishq leta hain plays* with armaan and ridhima starin at each other.........
then...
A- mujhe tumse kuch zaroori baat karni hain...
R- kya... hua?
A- umm... ek to yeh hain ki....tum yeh mangal sootr aur sindoor to roz nahi pehen sakti... issiliye... main yeh chahata hoon ki tum agle ppach(5) din yeh sindoor aur mangal sootr pehen kar rakho...
R- lekin kissi ko pata chal jaaega...
A- PLZZ we'll be very careful tum yeh sindoor upne baal se chupa dena aur mangal sootr ko aapne... dupatte se....
R- uh-uh nah---
A- plzzz.. plzz. ridhima....
R- thee-ke
A- aur,,... we also need to do register this marriage....
R- lekin... lekin armaan'
A- haa ridhima.... please...
R- lekin armaan... do(2) witnesses ki zaroorat hogi... aur hum iss shaadi ke baare mein kissi ko nahi baata sakte...
A- ek to woh.... register marriage ke officer hi ban jaaega... aur doosraa,,,,,...
DOOSRA MAIN BANOONGA.....
they turn around and see.....
RAHUL!!!!!!!!!!😊
PART 9
RAHUL-hmmm interestin na??
A&R-*SHOCKED*
RAHUL- chillllaxxxx.... well armaan ko milne ke baad... maine socha ki jaane se pehle...bhagawan ka darshan kiya jayee.. soo... coincidentally--- main iss mandir me aaya... aur pandit ko baatien karte hue sun liye ki ARMAAN aur RIDHIMA namak do vyakti aa rahe the ... shaadi karne ke liye......
mujhe tab story dheere dheere samaj me aaya... aur socha ki kyun na tum dono ko congratulate karoo... so i waited...
ridhima was shocked and extremely tensed,,... she had tears in her eyes.... armaan was speechless
RAHUL went closer to them and then he whispers...
CONGRATS,... shaadi mubarako... I guess,,, u both are made for each other...
A- kya..?? tu--- tu/??
RAHUL- nahi yaar,... main tujse jitna bhi nafrat karu... aaj maine tere aakhon mein PEHLI BAAR... ridhima ke liye sachaa pyaar aur vishwaas dekha hain.... dont worry im with u guys>....
A- thanksss... man!!!!
(armaan and rahul huggg each other tightly)
RAHUL-- WELLLL.... i guess tum dono ki suhaag raat tooo nahi hoga😭... but... ummm... ill leave u guys alone for the time being... kal milte hain...
then rahul leaves
armaan and ridhima ---nite 9 30 pm... in front of the mandir
R- armaan... mujhe jaana chahiye..
A- hmm//
R- bye
A-why?
R- huh?? di meri intazaar kar rahi hogi...
A- mat jaooo .....
*ishq leta hain plays*
armaan and ridhima stare at each other.... armaan goes closer to ridhima.... and whispers...
A- Dr ridhima armaan malik...... i love u.... and then he kisses on her sindoor......... .... .... ... ... 😳
(in ridhimaz house... ridhima enters her room)
AJ-HEY ridhz...!!
R- hi...
AJ- saree??? aur tum???
R- uh--uh... woh... aise hee,,, man kar raha tha..
AJ- tum bhi na,... ajeeb ho... fine... challo ab apni night dress pehen lo... sona hain
R- haa....(ridhima thinks... agar mein night dress pehen loo to mera mangal sootr... aur armaan chahata hain ki... 5 din...)NAHI!!!
AJ- wat??????
R- we--eell.... uh... aaj...mujhe dekhna hain...ki saree pehenkar sona kaisa hota hain!😕😕😕
AJ- ridhzi u ok?
R- ha... di... im ok
AJ- well.... tumhari marzi....
R- (relieved) goodnite...
(hospital,,,... nextday locker room)(everybody is there... armaan enters )
A- HI EVERYBODY!!!! and then he huggggggs tightly----- rahul!!!
AT- uh-- armaan?
A- yo!!
AT- kal tak to tum dono dushman the na/??
A- uh really??... so
AT- aaj itna pyaar??
A- hahaha... tu bhi na... mazaak bahut karta hain😕😕😕
atul... still confused
sister lovely enters...
SL- oh jee... muskaan, rahul,anjali aut atul ko dr shubhankar bula rahe hain....
they leave except rahul...
armaan, ridhima and rahul alone...in locker room
RAHUL- achaa meri baat dhyan se suno... aaj lunch break mein hum shaadi ko register karwa denge,,,, zyada baatien mat karo... 1230pm sharp... bye
he leaves
A- hmmm
R- armaan...
A- bolo ridhima
R- mujhe bahut darr lag raha hain...
armaan pushes ridhima in the changing room and holds her hand tightly....
A- aur ab??
R- armaann....
A- aur ab? darr hain ...??
R- nahii....😳😳
1235pm... dr keerti searchin for ridhima and armaan...
K- DR RIDHMA AUR ARMAAN KAHA HAIN... NANA... KI HALAT BAHUT BIGGAR GAYII HAIN AUR SIRF ARMAAN AUR RIDHIMA KE PAAS nana KA REPORT HAIN... WHERE THE HELL ARE THEY...??
anjali runs towards dr keerti...
AJ- ma'm ... nana... ka halat... its goin worse... ma'm...
AT- its gone worse.... HE IS IN COMA NOW!!!!!
EVERYBODY SHOCKED.... DR KEERTI FURIOUS....
at 1;15pm ,... armaan and ridhima... enter the hospital... extremely HAPPY....
K- dr ridhima aur armaan....
A- ji dr keerti😃
K- kaha the??
R- ma'm lunch break tha...
K- issiliye... ghoome challe gayye?? wah!!!
A- ji...
K- patient DESHPANDEY AB COMA MEIN HAIN//.... AUR UNKA REPORT SIRF TUM DONO KE PAAS THA!!!
A&R-*SHOCKED* ma'm///
K- YOU BOTH ARE SUSPENDED!!!!!1
dr keerti leaves and dr shashank comes and tells...)
DRSHASHANK- do u mind... dr ridhima... to meet me in my office... RIGHT NOW😡😡😡
(in dr shashanks office)
drs- i cant believe it... tum--- lunch ke samay bahar challi gayyi thi??
R- pa---r
drs- I'M extremely dissapointed... dr ridhima... how can u be so irresponsible??
R- IM sorr--
drs-i'm sorry.???. tumne mera sar sharm se jhuka diya hain dr ridhima... 😭out...
R- im...
drs- OUT...😭😭😭
(ridhima leaves dr shashanks room and goes to the terrace..... armaan follows her)
PART 10
ridhima in the terrace cryin very very loudly... armaan feelin guilty...
R- nahi... humhe yeh nahii karna chahiye tha
A- ridhima ridhima please
R- what am i gonna do now...
A- im sorry ridhima
AND then he holds ridhimas hand and hugs her tightly... a tear falls from armaanz eye
A-(thinking)maine yeh kya kar diya... oh ridhima im soo sorry....
just then sister lovely enters....
SL-oh ji... main to tum dono ko dhoond dhoond kar parishan ho gaye... dr keerti tum dono ko bula rahe hain... uske cabin mein...
ridhimas opens her eyes in shock (in hearin that dr keerti is callin her and armaan )... she holds armaans hands tightly.. then looks deep into armaans eyes... and with hope in their hearts ....they start walkin towards dr keertis cabin,....
they enter dr keertis cabin.... rahul is standin next to dr keerti... with his head down
K- dr ridhima aur armaan.... dr rahul keh rehe hain ki tum dono ne usse inform kiya tha aur deshpandey ka report bhi dr rahul ko diya tha!!
*ARMAAN AND RIDHIMA SHOCKED*
k- KYA yeh baat sach hain/??
A- ji na-h--
RAHUL-(interrupts) ji dr keerti... bilkul
K- DR RAHUL!!!!
RAHUL- sorry...
K- bolo... armaan aur ridhima
armaan looked at rahul.... who was tryin to say somethin... armaan understood and said...
A- ji... dr keerti
*RIDHIMA SHOCKED*
K- fine.... atleast tum dono ne THODI SI TO responsibility dikhayi... fine... main tum dono ka suspension order utha deti hoon😃😃.. par tum dono ko kal se night duty bhi karni padegi... JAB TAK DESHPANDEY COMA main hain....
aur rahul... tum ITNE irresponsible ??? tum bhi armaan aur ridhima ke saath .. night duty.. get it?
A,R&RAHUL- ji...
dr keeri leaves the room...
armaan looks at rahul... rahulz eyes were full of tears....
A- hey man...
RAHUL- hey... no need to say thanks... dost hote kissliye.👏👏..
(ridhima goes closer to rahul)
R- thanks rahul.... and then hugs him tightly- and for the for the first time armaan did not feel jealous.... as he now... considered "rahul" as his true friend😳😳
armaan in his house
A- (talkin to himself) oh man!!! ridhima se theek se baat bhi nahi huyi... neend bhi nahi aa rahi.. kal se to night shift... aaj bhi nahi soo sakta... oh shit!! ridhima se ek baar baat kar leta hoon.. ok... msg karta hoon...
MSG- hi!!! how r u?? sab theek thak??
<no reply> armaan tensed
MSG- arrey?? reply kyun nahi kar rahi... don worry for nana... main hoon na... din raat mehnat karenge... he'll be fine... trust me
<no reply>
armaan- AB MUJHE TENSION HO RAHI HAIN... mujhe uska ghar jaana chahiye.. raat ke 2 baje hain... umm/... who cares😉😉!!!
he leaves
in front of ridhimas house....ridhzis room is dark... armaan decides to go up with the help of the pipe.... he climbs up... and thru the window he seez ridhima.. sleepin like a doll alone... without angie...
A- waah!! mujhe dekho... aur usse dekho... pati yaha... biwi waha... angie bhi nahi... chalo... ghar ke andar guss jata hoon... aur pooch leta hoon ki mere msgs ka reply kyun nehi kar rahi.... tassali ho jaegi...
he enters...
he goes close to ridhima... *ishq leta hain plays* ..... he holds her hand.... he goes closer to her...
and then he comes to his senses... and calls ridhima by pushin her...
Ridhima wakes up suddenly and armaan covers her mouth so as to stop her frm shoutin
A- MERE MSGS KE REPLY KYUN NAHI KIYA!!!
R- mmmph...
A- oh sorry... he removes his hand...
R- arrey baba... mobile off tha... battery charge low!!!! omg di ghar par hain tum yaha
A- nahi.. hain😃😃😃
R- arrey!! pani lene gai hogi ... oh shit... tum chupo!!!!
A- kaha....??
R- omgomgomg!!! bistar ke neeche... NOW.1!!!!
jus then angie enters...
AJ- ridhz ..??tum jagi hui ho??? not sleepin?? awake!!>>??
*RIDHZ SHOCKED*
hey... im really really really for the late update... n i promise u that this wont happen again... thanks a lot
part 11
R- di tum..!!
AJ- kya ho raha hain... i mean any prob... tum aaj bhi salwar that too dupatte ke saath hi soo gayye!!! ab.. raat ke teen(3
) baje tum jagi hui ho??!! wats goin on
R- wo..wo.. kuch nahi.. salwar pehen kar sona... uh.. mann kar raha tha!!
AJ- wateva!! tumhari marzi... main lights on kar rahi hoon... neend nahi aa rahi....
R- NAHI!!!!
AJ- what??
R- i mean... uh.. mujhe bahut neend aa rahi hain plus kal meri night duty bhi shuru ho rahi hain... so please...
AJ- ohk fine...(then she goes back to sleep)
after 15 mins ... angie sleepin.. armaan comes out... and whispers to ridhima
A- main tumhare liye baahar intzaar kar raha hoon.....
and then he leaves...
armaan waitin for ridhima in front of his car... and then after 20 min.. he sees ridhima... nervous and shy... secretly comin out of her house....*ishq leta hain plays*
ridhima goes closer to armaan....
A- i ... i love u
R- armaan hum...
A- shhhhhh...... then he slowly holds ridhimas hands tightly and kisses her on the sindoor...
R- i love u too....
(it starts to rain...... Armaan hugs ridhima tightly and says..
A- thand lag rahi hain,,,
R- feels really shy.... n---a
A- oye hoyye... .. ..cum.. lets sit in the car...
R- nahi...nahi armaan... di agar udh gayye to bahut gadbad ho jaegi.... i got to go...
A- nahi... plzzz mat jao
R- kal milenge na... bye...
A- he holds ridhima... opens his jacket... and covers ridhima with it... and then goes closer to her..and says...
im always there to protect u😳😳😳....
ridhz feels shy n runs into her house...
in the hospital...locker room.. evryones there... ridhima enters with armaans jacket in hand
R- armaa.. tumhara jacket///\\
A- oh ya! thanks...
AT- uh ... ridhima... armaan ka jacket????!!!!!
(ridhima then realised that she shudnt hav given it in frnt of everY1)😕😕😕
A- chhor na champ!!! who cares??!!!
AT- (confused) uh--ok
RAHUL- guys.. duties shuru hone main abhi bhi hadha ganta bachta hain. soo... letz go n hav coffee??
AJ- cool...
THEY all leave for the cafeteria...they all sit together...
RAHUL- (in a sarcastic tone)😛😛 guyz... letz play a game..dekho we'll all get married sum day or another... sooo.... letz talk abt our future husband or wife... like woh kaisa ya kaisi hone wali hain... and by wat age...etc etc...
*ARMAAN AND RIDHIMA SHOCKED AND IRRITATED*
MUSKAAN- okokokokokokokokokok coooooooooooollllll... main first... handsome... funny... tall.... doctor.. punjabi... and i wana get married by 27... im only 21 now..
RAHUL-(thinkin)😳hmmm... im tall... kinda handsom.. funny to hoon. doctor aur punjabi.. not bad... main aur musk--- OH MY GOD!!! MAIN KYA SOCJ RAHA HOON,. SHIT😕 then he looks at muskaan... and feels reallly cold and shy😳😳😳.....
AT- mera to sabkuch ... sirf anjali.... anj--aaa-llliiii... a-n-j-a-l-i... oh meri anjali
AJ- fine fine ... well... i dont wana talk abt marriage... only after i become a very well known established doc... NO marriage b4 30..
RAHUL- hmm.. ur turn..... ARMAAN...!!!!(with a grin)
A- 😳😳(he looks deep onto ridhimas eyes n says) main.. main uss ladki se shaadi karoonga jiske sanskaar aur soch ache ho..... ek aisi ladki jo mujpar vishwas kare... har pal mere saath rahe...
a tear falls frm ridhimas eye
AJ- ridhzi u ok!!!????
R- ha.. uh... im sorry...
sister lovely comes and says.- rahul, atul, muskaan and anjali... dr shashank bula rahe hain.... they leave .... armaan n ridhima..still sittin there... armaan still starin at ridhima n then continues...
A- aur jo har pal mujhe pyaar kare....😳 main ridhima.. se shaadi kar chuka hoon .. i love u ridhima i love u sooo much....
R- armaan.... .. .. .. .. i love u too..😳😳.
They both come back to their senses n then
A- kal karvachot hain... vrat to rakhogi na???
R- of course...
A- sabse chupakar...dum hain??😊😊
R- yup... we'll seee😉😉
( n then they leave the cafeteria head towars nanas room...
.this onez not sooo good... im soooorrrrrrrry... ill try to give a better update nxt time///
part 12
same day... ridhimas house... dinner time.. ridhima havin LOTS... with 10 glasses of water...
SHASHANK- uh... he.. rid...ridhima... u ok>??😕😕 i mean maine tumhe itna khate hue kabhi nahi!?!?!?!
AJ-(jokingly) lol... u doin the vrat tom or what??😃😆
R- (tensed)huh... arrey nahi nahi... aisay hi bhook thi... ok then main abhi duty ke liye..jaa rahi hoon.. bye
AJ- hm... sumthinz strange.. wateva!/?
next day hospital locker room... Armaan n ridhima alone😳😳
A- hey dharam patni....😆😆
R- shhh... omg!! koi sun lega then ill kill u!!!
A- ek din to pata lagna hi hain😉😉
r- Tch... mat karo...
(armaan goes closer to ridhima.....*ishq leta hain playa*
A- vrat?? tum rakh rahi ho na...
R- tum??
A- main.. pati????!!! phhooossh... pagal ho kya....
(ridhima had tears in her eyes... immediately...
A- hey hey hey!!!! of course i am....
(ridhima smiles)
R- main bhi/...
*asmaani rang ho plays*./...
armaan goes closer to ridhima.... and closer and hez jus gonna kiss her... on the sindoor when../... RAHUL ENTERS...
armaan n ridhima push each other back wid an embarrassin expression on their face....
RAHUL- OOOOPS!!!!!😆 W-R-O-N-G T-I-M-E.!!!! may i???
A- whooooo!!! rahul!!!
ridhima was feelin really uneasy... and she left...
muskaan entered...
MUS- hey armaan!!!
A- hey...
RAHUL- hi muskaan...
MUS- (shocked that rahul said hi) uh..uh hi!😕😕
RAHUL- aaj karvachot hain...
MUS- ....mujhe pata hain😕😕
RAHUL- haha... uh...uh.. tu vrat??
MUS- kya??!!!
RAHUL- uh..uh nahi nahi BYE!!!
MUS-😕????*CONFUSED*
armaan n ridhima in front of nanas room....
R- bpz is stable... medicines.. bhi de di... but koi positive signs nahi...
A- its very strange seein him all quiet... don worry... he'll be back soon..😊😊
R- hope soo....
cafeteria... evrybdyz there...
MUSKAAN EATIN LIKE AN ELEPHANT AND RAHUL WAS STARIN AT HER.😉😉😉...
RAHUL- uh...uh... muskaan... tu kha rahi hain//
MUS- kyun tujhe khana hain??!!
RAHUL- sorry sorry...
MUS- (thinkin) pagal ho gaya hain kya?....
RAHUL-(sarcastically)... uhuh... ridhima... tum kyun nahi kha rahi kuch... coffee?(with a grin)
R- wo...wo... bhook nahi hain...
AJ- kal raat to bahut kaha rahi thi..??
R- haa... issiliye to nahi hain😆
RAHUL- starts laughin,,,
AJ- kya hua??
RAHUL- kuch nahi.. n then winks at ridhima with an understanding smile....
4pm... locker room...
A- aaagh!!!!! BAHUT BHOOK LAG RAHI HAIN!!!!! aur aaj ke newzpaper ke mutabik... the moonz gonna be out at 8 pm... 4 hrs to go...
ridhima enters...
R- kya hua??? my hubby is feelin hungry huh??
A- hmm... mommy!!!!!
R- arrey baba... sirf 4 ghante... ill be waitin 4 u... terrace.... ok??
armaan stands and starts walkin towards ridhima*ishq leta hain plays*.... pushes her against the lockers.... holds her hand.... goes closer... very close... .. .. .. .... .. .. very close... ki--s--
RAHUL ENTERS.....
A- arrey yaar... yeh rahul ka bachaa.....😡
RAHUL- OOOOOOPS!!!!!!!! OOOOOOO IM SORRRRRRRY!!!!😃 but.... armaan ... dr keertiz callin u.... dutiez first... sorry...
A- hmmm./.😡 jaa raha hoon😡
he leaves....
armaan with keerti in her cabin...
DRK- armaan...
A- JI...
DRK- aaj... i want u to assist me in a surgery .... ok//??
A- sure ... kab ma'm...
DRK- starts at 8pm...
A- KYA!!!!!!😕😕
DRK- ANY PROB??????😡
A- no... no ma'm😕
part 13....
meanwhile in the cafeteria... atul n anjali... anjali eating sandwich... n atul starin at anjali... with a cup of coffee in his hand....
AT- anjali.. aaj karvachot hain...
AJ- i know!!!
AT- vo kya hain na.. ki mein subhah subhah galti see dood pee liya...issiliye vrat nahi rakh saka
AJ- kiske liye...??
AT- arrey tumhare liye...
AJ- atul dont talk rubbish...😡😡 mujhe abhi jana hain n don irritate me... (and leaves)
AT- ( with tears in his eyes)(to himself) tum mere pyaar ko ek mazaak samajto ho na... theeke,... aaj ke baad me tumse kabhi baat nahi karoonga.... tab pata chalega😭
armaan lookin for ridhima everywhere.... asked rahul... lovely... muskaan.... no one knew.....
A- oh damn!!!!! abhi saat baj rahe hain... operation ka time ho raaha hain... wo to 8 baje mera intzaar karegiii... oh man!! wat am i gonna do??!!???!??!?
7 45 PM... dr keerti calls armaan...
K- hope u r ready... dr armaan...
A- ji...ji dr kheerti...
K- aacha suno... yeh ek lamba aur complicated operation hain... sooo...it can go upto 3 hrs/..
A- what???!!!
K- kya hua??
A- nahi mam... im sorry... theeke....
at 11 15...pm... armaan n keerti cum out of OT...
armaan tries to run... but keerti stops him..
K- good job armaan...
A- thank u.. thank u mam... mein jaao..
K- haan .... maine ridhima aur rahul ko aaj night duty se chutii di hain.. since aaj karvachot ka din hain... aur nanaz situation is improvin... sooo... tum bhi ghar jaa sakte ho... kal aa jana..
K- ji mam... jaau
K- go...
ARMAAN RUNS ...... *ishq leta hain plays* ,,,, HE IS RUNNING.... RUNZ THRU THE STAIRS... TRIPS N FALLS... HURTS HIS KNEES... GETS INJURED... BLOOD WAS CUMIN...<ARMAAN DIDNT CARE>.... RUSHES TOWARDS THE TERRACE DOOR... AND PUSHES THE DOOR OPEN N SHOUTS.....
RIDHIMA!!!!!
and he seez......
NO BODY.... ridhima was not there... armaan looks around... ridhima was not there,,, ridhima was not there.....
armaan cud not believe....
A-(To himself) I CANT BELIEVE i messed up my first karvachot with ridhima... omg ... meine.. ye kya kar diya... oh shit... main... main uske ghar jaat hoon right/...
11 45pm... driving .... near ridhimaz house....
A- plzzz ridhima... mat khao... mein mein...aa raha hoon... im cumin ... jus...jus 2 more minutes.... he reached,,,,
no one was there.... armaan climbed up thru the pipe for ridhima.. n he saw... angie(huggin a teddy bear tightly)... and ridhima(under the blanket with her faced covered)...
*ishq leta hain plays* armaanz eyes full of tears... he cud not believe wat he saw... ridhima... sleepin in frnt of him.... he jus... stared... and then left... without sayin a word... n without tryin to wake her up... he gave up... he left..... for his home...
he reached ... with a heavy heart..... went up the stairs... n opened the door ... (of his flat).... as he raised his head up/....
he saw
RIDHIMA!!!!😳
IN a b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l-l-l-l-l
red saree.... with her mangal sootr n sindoor... and a pooja thali in her hands *asmaani rang ho plays*...
they both stare at each other.... armaan gives a smile.
R- abhi bhi darvaaza khula chorne ki aadat ahi gayyi (part 1😉)...
A-par tum to ghar pe...
R- we--ll... tumhare saath rehekar... main bhi smart ho gayye... hoon... kuch takiya laga di... aur yaaha chali aaye.... itna to risk lehi sakti hoon....
Armaan smiles... ridhima goes close to armaan... holds his hands n pulls armaan next to the window... she first seez the moon n then armaan .... she does the aarti... armaan jus stares at ridhima...
R- ppaaaaaaniii.... pilaaaaooooo
A- oh,...ohk...
R- AB KAHANA!!
A- ye lo...
R- ab... s-ind-oo....
armaan.... puts the sindoor in ridhimaz maang.. then ridhima... touches armaanz feet...
A- owowowow!!! wow... yeh kya kar rahi hoo... chill!!
R- armaan... yeh sirf ek rasam nahi hain.. yeh mera pyaar hain... tum .... tum jaante nahi ho.. yeh mere liye kitne maine rakhti hain...main tumhara saathi saat janmo tak bana chahati... hoon.....
A- shhhh....
*ishq leta hain plays* armaan goes close to ridhima.... he holds her hands ..... goes close to her.. very close... n then whispers...
A- ridh-i-m-a... mujhe... mujhe..
R- kya armaan...
A- Mujhe bahut BHOOOK LAGI HAIN!!!!!!!!
R- oh...oh...( she feels a lil embarrassed..) yeh lo.. apne haatho se banakar lae hoon.. yeh lo... khaoo//( and ridhima feeds him) ( armaan jus stares at her.. n smiles)
after eatin....
A- aacha...
*ishq leta hain plays*he goes close to ridhima... ridhima ...unconsciously ... also goes closer to armaan.... very close... armaan then holds ridhimas hands.... n then..
ridhima cums back to her senses😡😡 n says
R- oh no!!! mujhe jaana hain... bye... 😭
A- aaaa.. plzzz///
R- agar ghar me kuch ho gaya... ill be dead...
A- okokok ill drop u..
R- ya..
( THEY LEAVE)
nxt day ... hospital... locker room.. only ridhimaz there ... standin beside her locker... studyin her file... wen.... sumone pulled her into the changin.... she seez that it was...
armaan....😳 he holds her hand n pushes her against the walls n says...
A- hum kal kaha the???😳😳😳
part 14
R- a-rma-aan.... kya....?
A- shhhh....*ishq leta hain plays*( n slowly he moves his hands upwards... n puts it across ridhimas waist)😳😳
R- ar-m-----
( armaan pulls ridhima .... they were soooo close that ridhima cud hear armaan breathin.... armaan then kissed ridhima in her cheek... ridhima kept her eyes closed and then on the sindoor....😳😳
R- arm---a
(armaan looks at ridhima--- deep in her eyes.... and goes closer n closer .....ridhima also goes closer... n they were goin to ki-s---- wen...
RAHUL- aaaaaaaaaah!!!!! ram ram ram ram ram.... yeh kya dkh raha hoon/?? ram ram ram( n he closes his eyes n walks out)
* ARMAAN N RIDHIMA embarrassed*
A- oh shit!!!!! phir se... aa gaya... kebab me haddi...
R- omg... armaan .... jaaooo...1!!!!!! usse dekho...
(Armaan goes out..)
A- hey dude!!!
RH- yaar,,,, kya kar raha ??/ kahi bhi shuru ho jata hain///???
A- chhal sorry yaar,...
RH- aaye hayye....
A- soorrrrrry bola na...
RH- accha😡😡maaf kiya
armaan n ridhima walkin towards nana;s room....
A- maine decide kar liya hain😊😊...
R- kya??
A- ANSH!!!
R- KYA???
A- humare bache ka naam!!!!😳😳
R- what!!! pagal ho gaye ho kya
A- whatever u say!!!
(they stay quiet for 2 mins)
R- waissse.... ladka kyun??
A-( armaan smiles) kyunki......... mera pyaar hamesha tumhare pyaar se zyaada raha hain....
R- (stops walkin,... looks at armaan) nahi!!!
A-oh re-aaa-llll-yyyy
R-ji haan....
A-i wonder... kaun humare pyaar me shak kar raha tha??
R-well... thats no reason!!!! woo main sirf...---
A-oh phulease!!!!
R- oh ya....!!!!
atul walks in between their fight,...
AT- arrey kya hua bhai... jhagra,,,'??
(ridhima looks at armaan n then atul....)
R- well.. atul... armaan ko keh do.. that im not talkin to her...( n sayin this .... she walks off)
AT- (lookin at armaan)/... shez not talkin to u
A- pata hain champ!!! (to himself- shit man!!!)
at 4 o clock....
ridhima still upset... in the locker room... she openz her locker n finds a letter.... and ; frm armaan...
dear ridhima,
achha baba... u love me more!!!! happy!!!!! im sooooorrrrrryyyyy.... s-o-r-r-y , s-o-r-r-y, s-o-r-r-y, s-o-r-r-y,s-o-r-r-y , s-o-r-r-y, s-o-r-r-y, s-o-r-r-y.... accha ab kaam ki baat....
nana ka situation BAHUT improve kar raha hain... i mean... agar aisa hee challe...then i think we;ll get our love gure i.e nana back soon....😉😉... sooooo... dr keerti is very very impressed aur unhone humme 7o clock se 10 o clock break diya hain!!
aur hum bahar jaa rahe hain... kissi ko kuch nahi pata... koi shak nahi hoga,, don worry....
ill be waitin for u in my car... 7 o clock... ill be waitin... agar tum aa gaye.. then... ill undrstnd ki tumne mujhe maaf kiya!!! ok!!! love u..... bbye
love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love
tumhara aur sirf tumhara
armaan
(rihima finishd readin the letter n had a smile in her face)
7 o clock..... armaan waitin for ridhima in his carr....
7:05pm.... WHOOOOOOOSHHHHH......... armaan cud feel ridhima cumin.... *ishq leta hain plays*..... n then he seez ridhima ..... tryin to hide herself with the dupatta... n then nervously .... sits in armaanz car,....
A- oyeeee...... hoyyyyyeeeeee.
R- jaldi jaldi.... koi dekh lega.....
A- oooooooooohhhhkkkk......( and they leave..)
ON THEIR WAY....
R- kaha jaa rahe hain..
A- well.. dekho... surprise...
R- o-h.... k...
A- tum tm ti tum .......
they reach...
R- YAHA!!!!!
A- yup!!!!
R- ESSAL WORLD....--- AMUSEMENT PARK!!!!!
A- letzzzzzzzzzzzz go!!!!!
they enter...
part 15---- omg!!!!
in the middle of essel world there was a huge stage set up with mike and all... but ntn was happenin
R- wo.. stage yaha par kyun set up kiya gaya hain?
A- dunno... lets play shootin game!!!!
R- shootin game???
A- ohh.. u hav to pick this gun n shoot at the balloons... thts it
R- oh thats cool... ok
ridhima picks up the gun but it nearly slips frm her hand... coz it was toooooo heavy
A- wowow.!!! ill help u...
and then... *aasmani rang ho plays* .........armaan holds the gun by both his hands......... standin behind ridhima😳......... nearly huggin her.. and then he rested his chin on her shoulder... n then kised her cheek.... ridhima blushed😳😳...
R- dhyan do!!
A- de to raha hoon...
R- mere upar nahi,... game par!!!
A- oh...okok
after the game... they were walkin around the place .... holdin hands TIGHTLY😳😳 and then ridhima says... in a naughty/with humor tone....
R- uhhuh,.. armaan ek baat bolu.....
A-hmmm...
R- tumne mujhe kabhi ... u know... grand way se... propose nahi kiya hain..
A- WHAT!!!??🤔
R- nahi nahi.. don get me... wrong... but tum mera bahut khyal rakhte ho... aur har waqt poochte ho... that mein kaisi hoon n all... but propose... u know.... I LOVE U !! kabhi grand way me nahi kiya😆😆😆( ridhima was laughin frm inside coz she was jus teasin armaan)
A- lekin... tum to nahi cha---ha--ti😭 omg...
R- haa.. lekin strangers ke saamne to kar hi sakte ho.... i mean,... maine sirf kaha tha ki "jin logo ko hum jaante hain... unko pata nahi chahiye..."
Armaan started feelin very guilty.... and was thinkin ways of... propo..sing
THEN SUDDENLY SUMONE FRM THE STAGE...
welcome ladies n gentlemen... aaj yaha aane ke liye ... thank u!!! aaj hum yaha ek game khelne wale hain.... !!!!!confession!!!!waa!!! yaha kitne couples aaate hain... kuch ne aapna pyaar ka izhaar kiya hain to kuch nahi.... to aaj hain AAPKA MAUKA... confess ur feelings for ur partner... es stage par... aur BEST COUPLE KA TAAJ JEETIYE..!!!
ridima luked at armaan n gave a wicked smile and the nxt thing armaan knew... ridhima wasnt there... armaan got really worried
EVERYBODY STARTED CLAPPIN...
EVERYTHING WENT DARK..... AND SPOTLIGHT FOCUSSED ON ridhima...... SHE WAS ON THE STAGE N SHE gav a naughty smile n startd singin.....😳
-Ridhima--
Aaj ke ladke I tell you, kitne lallu what to do - 2
Koi mujhe poochhe how are you, koi mujhe bole how do you do
Kabhi koi mujhse na kahe, oh my darling I love you
Oh my darling I love you, oh my darling I love you
then armaan... like a hero... walked into the stage
n startd singing
--Armaan--
Aaj ki ladki I tell you, nakhre waali sun le tu
Hey aaj ki ladki I tell you
--RIdhima--
(Achha?)
--Armaan--
Nakhre waali sun le tu
--Ridhima--
(Aha)
--Armaan--
Na main poochhoon how are you, na main boloon how do you do
--Ridhima--
(Oh shut up)
--Armaan--
Abhi yahin main kehta hoon, oh my darling I love you
Hey oh my darling I love you, oh my darling I love you
Ridhima broke down... and ran and hugged armaan.... in
front of the thousands of ppl in essel world who were clapping
... clappin... and clappin....😳
armaan and ridhima stayed there and waited for the reults😉😉😉 and
at 9 15.... the results were announced.... were OBVIOUSLY
armaan n ridhima WON THE BEST COUPLE AWARD👏👏👏
👏
in the car...
R- omgomgomgomgomgomg... im soooooooo happy!!!!!
A- welll....
R-well... i jus hope ki essel world ki yeh baat bahar na chale jaae...
A- ofcourse... not... it was jus a smal game... kissi ko kuch pata nahi
challega... trust me....
R- ridhima smiled....
THEY RACHED SANJEEVANI,,, they stayed there the whole nite
workin....
...
...
...
...
next day.... cafeteria... 9 am..armaan n ridhima havin coffee...
anjali, atul, muskaan, rahul walked into the cafeteria with angry
faces and anjali threw a newspaper on ridhima... ridhima was
confused by her behaviour.... and then she saw...
BOMBAY TIMES......
HEADLINES....
<ridhima hugging armaan... in the stage... pic...>
Yesterday... in essel world... the best couple competion was
organised where a young couple... dr Armaan & dr Ridhima... won
the best couple award... their confession was very unique... by singin
a song from mujhse dosti karoge... they confessed their feelings
confidently in front of thousands of ppl who were watchin
them...they loved each other dearly .... hats off to such lovers!!!!
hope they stay together forever!!!!!!!!!
*ARMAAN N RIDHIMA SHOCKED*
part 16- AR in a bad situation!!!!
AJ- yes>??? ridhima??!!!!
R- di...(tryin to maintain her cool) hahhaha!!!(startd laughin) cmon.... arrey kal mujhe aur armaan ko brk mil gayye thi and sooo... u know... we thot ki hum essel world ghoomne jaae!
A- (interrupts)ya rite... aur...aur.. waha jaker humne dekha that they had this competition goin on... so... humne participate kiya/..
RAHUL- ya... armaan sach keh raha hain... infact he called me... waha jaker...😕😕😕
AJ- oh reeeeeeeeeeeallly?? aur u know.. u hug??? SABKE SAAMNE???
A- Hey cmon anjie???!!! cant i hug A FRND???
(he stands up and hugs AJ)
A- ab bol!!😆
RAHUL- hey cmon anjie... don be sooooo narrow minded...yaar waha to sab strangers the so koi fark nah padta...
AJ- still very angry... storms out!!!
muskaan looks at AR suspiciously and then leaves with atul.... raul alone with AR...
RAUL-U GUYS??? PAGAL HO GAYYE HO KYA!!!??? MAN!!! U ALMOST EXPOSED EVERYTHIN!!!!!-----
A-lookin at the pic in the paper...-- yaar pic acchhi aayi hain na😃😃
RAHUL- YEH MAZAAK KA WAQT HAIN???
A- cmon..okok... im sorry... (turns towards ridhzi...) madam...TUMHARA IDEA THA!!!!!
R- ok fine... im sorry😊
A-by the way, pics good na??😛😉😆
then the three talk for a while n leave for their duties...
in the evenin... locker room...
ridhima there... armaan enters...
A- heya!!
R- listn tum mere saath zyada baat mat karo... nahi to sabka shak
yakeen main badal jaayega..
A- arrey??😭😭😭 main tumhare saath baat kiye bina nahi reh sakta... wai --wai wait!!!
i got an idea... sabko yeh baatien bhoolni hogi... so letz ALL go for
a movie..u know... we'll have fun and all... aur phir sab bhool jaaege!!!!
R- nahi
A- oh cmon!!!
R-NA...
A- listn late nite show... 3 hrs... and then we;ll be back to our duties
R- uhuh
A- plzzplzzplzzplzzplzzplzzplzzplzz(and then makes a puppy dog innocent expression)
R- ohohk...
A- yahhooo... ok... 10 o clock show... ONE MISSED CALL.. horroooor film
(AJ ENTERS)
A- hi anjali'
AJ- ya wateva...
A- lsiten anjie... im sorry... dekho hum masti ke liye gayye the... it was late...aur... tum sab ghar chale gayye the... THATS Y..
AJ- oh!! phulease!!!!
A- ok fine.. theeke... lets go for a... um... movi----e??
AJ- oh!! shuttttup!!!
A- yaar dont be SUCH A KKEBAB ME HADDI... sab jaa rahe hain... dekh rual aur muskaan ko koi prob nahi hain😡😡😡... so plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz(then he realised that he souted TOO much.. so he fell on his knees and folded his hands and started beggin anjie)
AJ-OK FINE!!😃
10pm... movie hall... ppl walkin in pairs....
armaan with ridhima😳
raul with muskaan 😳
atul and anjie 😳
A(to ridhima)- hey dharam patni😳😳
R- armaan!!!! ab nahi..😡😡.
A- ok... listn tum mere saath baet rahe ho...
R- pagal ho kya!!!!no way...
A- naho... ill only sit with u!!!
R- nahi...
A- hmmm... wait wait wait... i got an idea.!!! hahahahaha😈
armaan goes to the ticket counter to cut the tickets.... raul goes with him.... ridhima, anjie,atul,muskaan... witain near the entrance
near the ticket counter,,,.. armaan cuts the tickets n speaks (or nearly whispers to raul)
A- oye...
RAHUL- mil gayye tickets... chal..
A- oye sun na!!!
RAHUL- kya ??? kya hua/?(irritated)
A- dekh tujhe to pata hi hain... ki main aur ridhima ek doosre ke saath waqt bita nahi sak rahe hain.... so maine 6 tickets kaate hain/...4+2... i mean tum chaar ek saath aur do tickets separately.... jaha main aur ridhima baatenge... corner seat(and then winks)😉😉😉
RAHUL- tu pagal hain kya-- besharam😆😆???!!!!!!
A- yaar plz ... i trust u.... manage the situation...chall...
(armaan n raul with everyone..)
A- ok guys BAD NEWS!!!😆😆😆 we didnt get the tickets together... so separately hain😕😕 so... ill sit in one of the seats,.. mere saath kaun???
MUSKAAN-ok...ILL COME!!!😃😃
A-kya???!!😕😕😕
RAHUL- NAHI!!!!
MUSKAAN- uh???
RAUL- i mean... i mean... nahi yaar... tu mat jaa... i mean case discuss karni hain😕 anjie.... atul .... RIDHIMA!! tum jao/...
AJ- nahi...ridhzi will NOT sit with u...
A- wat,,, tum abh bhi naaraz ho... yaar cmon!!! don be so cheap!!!😡😡😡
AJ-(was irritated and upset)... hesitantly accepted..
(in the hall .... armaan and ridhima lastrow..(was kinda empty..)... corner two seats... the remainin 4... 5 rows in the front;.... HALL IS DARK....ppl busy watchin the movie
armaan looked at ridhima...*ishq leta hain plays* and then he slowly took out his hand and grasped ridhimaz hand....
R- amr-m-aan😳😳😳
and then he placed his palm against her's ,..and--- clenched(held each others hands TIGHTLY)😳😳😳
A- i love u... (he whispered) n then he went closer to ridhima .... they both stared at each other....deeply into each other's eyes.😳😳😳...
and then armaan kissed her... in the cheek... in the forehead.... and then...ridhima....😳😳😳
opened her eyes to see.....
*MUKAAN STARIN AT THEM WITH A SHOCKCED DISGUSTED N TERRIFIED EXPRESSION*
PART 17- Armaanz----BIGGEST TRAGEDY
M- oh...my.... god...(whispers)
armaan turns and looks at muskaan and is shocked... without wasting time he holds muskaans hand and takes her outside the hall.... ridhima is petrified... she sits in the hall only..
A- listen... ill explain..
M- wat the h-e-l??
A- ok fine... ha.. main aur ridhima ek saath hain.... hum ek doosre ko bahut bahut bahut pyaar karte hain//. infact humne sha---(decides not to tell abt marriage)
M- tumne kya?????/
A- nahi nahi... kuch nahi....
M-(looks at armaan with a disgusted expression)
A- listn plzzzzz try to understand... kissi koo kuch mat batana... plzzzz
after sum awkward silence... muskaan pulls her hand and goes back-- inside the hall.........
next day... hospital.... locker room... evrybody there...
AJ- heya armaan... thanks for the movie man... it was good...
(Armaan does not respond... he was waitin for muskaan)
AJ- ARMAAN!!!
A- huh.. huh??!! ha... rite... movie.. ya rite
muskaan enters... ridhima n armaan look at muskaan....
...
...
muskaan looked at them.. and smiled.... AR WERE RELIEVED...
M- (with a smile) well... armaan... tum dono to alag baethe hue the,... were u guys BORED???😆
AT- oye armaan... tere haath mein yeh daag kyun???
A- oh well... madam ridhima ek BILLI ke tarah mujhe... pure film me....
AJ- ya rite... issiliye main ridhima ke saath horror films me nahi jaati
R- di!!! armaan tumne mujhe BILLI kaha!!!!
A- ha to!!!😉😉😉'
R- how dare u!!
A- i did 😆😆😆
R- lek--in...
(background voice)
dr shashank ... dr ridhima ko bula rahe hain...
Ridhima leaves...
.. shashanks cabin..
DRS- ridhima tumhe lonavna jaani hogi aaj ke bus se---3pm.... ek ghante mein bus hain... jus for a check up...
R- ji sir... akele???
DRS- ya..
R-😔ohk
DRS- kyun?? kissi ke saath jaana hain.😉😉..
R- nahi nahi sir,,, thanks
ridhima leaves...
she is walkin in thecorridor... when armaan pulled her in the fire exit stairs.... and pushes her against the wall..
*ishq leta hain plays*
A- sorry...
R- kissliye...
A- subah... thoda sa zyaada hi ho
R- hmm... its ok
armaan slowly holds ridhimaz hands....😳😳😳
A- acha ek kissi do😊😊😊
R- kya//😕😉
A- hmm... do na...😳😳
R- nahi...
A- ok ... main hi de deta hoon... (and he moved closer to ridhima and kissed her on her neck ... ridhima smiled.... And... then...wen she was about to ki-s--😳😳😳
RAHUL ENTERS...
armaan pushed ridhima....
RAHUL- OMG!!! TUM LOGO SE CONTROL NAHI HOTI KYA.??? KAHI BHI SHURU HO JATE HO??????😆
A- aur tu HAMESHA wrong time mein kaise aata hain??????😡😡😡
R- ya... main to tum hogo ka peecha karta hoon... aur dekhta hoon ki kaunse samay mein interrupt karoon😆
(and then he leaves...)*ridhima startd blushin)
A- oye hoyye...
R- accha suno ... main aaj infact (looks at her watch) ABHI lonavla jaa rahi hoon...
A- WHAT!!!???
R- ya... ill be back by tom...
A- nahi...plzzzzzzzzz.
R- OK BBYE...
armaan reaches home... at 7pm ... switches on his tv.... yawning....
HEADLINES...
Aaj 3PM ka jo bus tha.... jo lonavla jaa rahi thi... wo pahar se gir gaya... pandra loogo mein... koi bach nahi saka.,...
bus ka halat dekhkar.. experts keh rehe hain ki...
koi bhi zinda nahi bach sakta!!!
THE SEARCH FOR THE DEAD BODIES HAS BEEN STARTED..
. PLZZ CONTACT (044)-2244XXXX2 for more info...
THE NAMES OF THE PPL ARE.......
Raj Sinha
Priya Gupta
Priyanka
Ranbhir
Kananya
Raima
Rahul J
Ridhima Shashank Gupta
Raghu
Jagendar
Kunita
Roopa
Rimjhi
Ishuj
Yarrun
*ARMAAN TERRIFIED*
PART 18----PG 42
PART 19----PG 46
PART 20--- PG 57
PART 21---PG72
THANKS A LOT FOR READING😳😳😳
after reading so many ffs in this forum..
aftr seein so many talented ff writers in dmg forum.. i thot of writing one...
so.. thanks a lot for readin,,,
i would really appreciate if u cud kindly comment after readin the ff... the comments are very very valuable to me.. thanks a lot😳😳...
note---- if anyone wants me to write a particular scene between AR or sum thin else in this ff... then plzzz PM me... ill add the scene.... plus for any suggestions plz plz PM me.... since i want to be aware of my mistakes... thank u so much😳😳
K-DR KEERTI
A-ARMAAN
R-RIDHZ
AT-ATUL
MUS-MUSKAAN
RAHUL-RAHUL
AJ-ANJALI
part 1
everybody is( except armaan) waiting for dr keerti for duties
K- dr armaan kaha hain😡😡
AT-patah nahi, (everybody confused)
K-aakj sanjeevani delhi se docs aane wale hain aur dr armaan ka hona bahut zaroori hain😡😡 dr ridhima....
R- ji dr keerti
K- aap dr armaan ke ghar jaakar usse issi waqt yaha lee aaiye
R- par... dr kee
K- its an order😡😡😡 dr ridhima
(ridhima takes address from atul and leaves)
(IN FRONT OF ARMAANZ HOUSE)
(RIDHZ KNOCKING- no body replies... ridhz pushes the door and the door OPENS)
(armaanz sleeping -ridhz goes closer)
R- armaaan, armaaan utho
A- ( ummm)
R- dr armaan,,,
A-(in sleep) ridhima... ri-dh-im-a
then ridhz sees that armaan was holding (TIGHTLY) ridhz earing
( ISHQ LETA HAIN PLAYS)
(armaan opens his eyes)
(they both stare at each other)
and they keeeep staring ... armaan sits up and ridhz doesnt move,... armaan moves closer to ridhz... ridhz doesnt move... AND THEN!!!!!!
THATS it,,,😭😭😭 plz i know that its not good.. but atleast my first attempt
plz comment and tell me... if sumone wants me to continue😊😊
well here it is
part 2
R- Armaan... tum
A- shhhh
R- nahi armaan.... yeh theek nahi hain
A-kya ridhima
R-dr keerti tumhe issi waqt bulla rahi hain.. bahut gusse me thi... main tumhare liye bahar wait kar rahi hoon
A- TUM dr keerti ke liye aaye ho😭😭
R- yes...
A- fine... main aa raha hoon(armaan goes to the toilet)
ridhima is alone in armaans room... so she opens the drawer next to armaans bed... she sees/// te comic books that ridhz gave... (ISHQ LETA HAIN PLAYS)
armaan cums out she quickly closes the drawer and acts normal
A- challe
R- tum jaao... main aa jaungi
A- ek colleague ke hasiyat se tumhe le jaa raha hun😭😭
R- thee--eeke
they leave
(in hospital locker room)(ridhz thinking abt armaanz happy moments)😳😳😳
A- dr ridhima...
R- KYA?
A- agar tumhare dil me mere liye KUCH BHI HAIN to aaj raat 9 baje... terrace me aana....
R- main NAHI AANE WALLI
A- ILL BE WAITIN.....
thats it
how was it?? my second attempt
well... here it goes
part 3
armaan waiting for ridhima in the terrace from 5 30pm
6 -no ridhima
7 -no ridhima
8- no ridhima
9 -no ridhima
10- no ridhima
11- no ridhima
11 45..... armaan gets a warm feeling... someones coming.... he stares at the entrance andddddd....
ridhima enters.....
*ishq leta hain plays*
ridhz goes closer to armaan...
R- kya hua
A- tum aa hi gayyi
R- kya hua bolo... mere paas time nahi hain
A- tum aa hi gayyi
R- armaaaan
A- hmm'
R- uh-h
*they both stare
R- tum mujse abhi bhi
A- abhi bhi kya ridhima
R- pyaa-aar karte ho?
A- KOI SHAK... aur tum?
(ridhzi starts crying)
A- KYA HUA...
R-IM sorrry.... 😭 im really sorry
A- kya hua??
plzzz comment and tell me whether i shul continue
part 4
R- im sorry armaan.. maine tumhe bahut dard pahuch aaya hain na??
A- nahi... ridh-i-maaa
R- NAHI ARMAAN!!main tumhe kabhi samaj hi nahi payee.. main subhe se soch rahi thi ki tumhe milne aau ya nahi.... par ab mujhe ye ehsaas hua... ki mujhe tumhari zaroorat hai
A- hmm...
R- IM SORRY ARMAAN...
A- ridhima...
R- I love u armaan,,, i love u....
A- I love u too
( and they hug each other -tightly... ishq leta hain plays_
ridhzis eyes were full of tears... armaan kissed in ridhzis eyes and ridhz started smiling
night... ridhima alone... in her house... gets a CALL frm armaan
A-hmmm... mere yaad me ho
R- tum bhi na
A- aacha suno, mujhe pata hain aaj tumhare ghar me koi nahi hai... so dinner??
R- armaan...!!!
A- chalo na... im waiting neeche( hangs up)
ridhz rushes towards the window... and seez armaan waitin.....RIDHZ tells armaan that shez cumin...
(in the car)
R- kaha jaa rahe hain??
A- bas challo
they cum in the sea side and ridhz sees a small but LUXURIOUS yacht
A- yaha ... humari dinner hogi... samudr ki khoobsurati ke beech... main aur tum... bas
R- arm-aa-an
A- after u ma'am
(they both enter
ridhz sees a table arranged for two... candle lite ... with an exotic variety of food
R- yeh sab...
A- aaj mere liye bahut imp day hain... tum thodi hee der main jaan jaogi
(they bith sit)
A- ridhima
R- bolo armaan
A- main... main tumhe dobara khona nahi chahata hoon. tumhare bina main ek zinda laash hoon... i love u and cant imagine my life without u
R- ( eyes are full of tears)
Armaan falls on his knees..... TAKES OUT A DIAMOND RING AND SAYS.....
"WILL YOU MARRY ME???""
R- *shocked*
R- LEKIN,,,
A- haan ya naa?
R- H-a-a-a
(aasmaani rang ho plays) ridhz wears the ring and they both stare at each other... armaan cums closer to ridhz.... then ridhz cums to her senses....
R- lekin...
A- lekin kya ridhima...??
R- anjali di mere see bari hain aur main kaise... nahi armaan... yeh theek nahi hain... aur yeh shaadi humre career ke beech aa sakti hain..
.
A- ridhima... ridhima... maine sirf kaha hain ki main tumhe khone nahi chahata... iss shaadi se... mujhe yeh tassali ho jaegi ki tum sirf meri ho... nahi to... ek darr... hamesha mere saath rehta hain...
R- matlab
A- matlab....- HUM YEH SHAADI CHUPKE SEE... KISSI KO BINA BATAKAR KARENGE
R- *OMG,,,, SHOCKED*
part 5
well.... here it is...
R- main,... uh
A- kya hua ridhima... bolo na please
R- mujhe sochne ke liye waqt chahiye
A- what!!! tumhe humare pyaar par abhi bhi shaa--k hain??
R-(interrupts) nahi nahi armaan... but yeh meri zindagi ka sabse bada faisla hoga.. so thoda sa samay...
A- thee-eeke... bara(12) ghante.... bara ghante hain tumhare paas.... mujhe tumhra jawab kal raat 12 bajhe.... chahiye... basket ball court.... agar haan hai to tum waha aa jana... agar na hain.... to mat aana... main samaj jaunga
R- itni jaldbaazi kyun armaan>
A-( armaan slowly holds ridhimas haand... tightly.... then goes closer to ridhima.... and closer.... and then says
because i love u😳.....
*ISHQ LETA HAIN PLAYS*
and then armaan kisses ridhima in her cheek and ridhima... keeps her eyes closed....
.....and the night passes😳😳😳
(next day... hospital)
at 7 pm
AJ- yawn... aaj pura din humne bahut kaam kiya hain... kyun na hum sab aaj coffee house chale?? 9 baje..." a late nite party for sanjeevani interns"??
AT- WOW.. gr8 idea
MUS- haa.... chalo chalo chalo chalo
RAHUL- oye chup kar muskaan.... haan anjali... idea bura nahi hain!
A&R-😕aaaj??????😕
AJ- arrey tum dono ko kya ho gaya hain?
A- nahi... main aur ridhima.. nahi aa sakte,,, we have some work
AJ- what work?
A- personal?!
AJ/AT/MUS/RAHUL- personal???
R- uh-uh... dr armaan ka yeh matlab hain ki dr keerti ne personally aakar humhe extra duties ke liye kaha hain...and humhe night shift bhi karni hogi... so we're sorry...
AJ- oh...ok..! fine then... enjoy ur work... buy... chalo atul, mskaan aur rahul... hum chalte
A- tata!!1😃
A- hmm... to.. basket ab mere liye jhoot bhi bolne lagi hain... not bad.... lagta hain ki jodi jamme gi
R-tch... tum bhi na...
A- thee-ke ...
then armaan pushes ridhima in the changing room and holds her hand tightly.... then pushes her against the wall....
R- kya karr rahe ho ...koi dekh lega...
A- shh.... (goes closer to ridhima... and closer and then whispers....
sirf 5 ghante baaki hain ridhima... sirf paach.... and then leaves
in basket ball court... armaan waiting for ridhima... 11 45 pm....
WELL im still ritin.,... plzz read and comment ... ill updatethe nxt part( ridhzs decision) realllllly soon
PART 6-RIDHZIS DECISION
at 12am.... whooooooosh... wind blows across armaanz face..... *ishq leta hain plays* armaan seez....
ridhima...... in a beautiful saree walkin towards him..... wearin the diamond ring that armaan had given him.....
ridhima goes closer to armaan...
R- armaan...
A- (quiet)
R- main tumse bahut pyaar karti hun....
A-(QUIET)
R- i will..... i will marry you
*aasmaniii rang hoo.... plays....*
armaans eyes are full of tears,,, and this time ridhima kisses armaanz eyes and they keep starin and keep starin... ......
R- lekin.... promise karo... ki kissi ko is baat ki koi khabar nahi hogi
A- main... armaan malik.. kasam khata hoon ki kissi ko bhi iss baat ki koi khabar nahi hogi....... i promise u....
IT STARTS RAININ.... ARMAAN PROTECTS RIDHIMA BY HOLDIN HER TIGHTLY IN HIS ARMS
.... ... ....
(NEXT DAY HOSPITAL)
MUS- aah... kal bahut maaza aayaa tha na!!
ANJ- ya guys... armaan and ridhima really missed it!!!
R- koi baat nahi... uh
A- duty come first😉😉😉
sister lovely enters the locker room...
lovely- oh jee,... dr armaan, muskaan and anjali ko dr keeryi issi waqt baula rahi hain....
A- cool... HUM aa rahe hain...
(every one leaves... ridhz alone in the locker room... she opens her locker and finds a letter.... a letter from armaan.... it was a follows)
29march08
dear basket....
hmmm.... tumahre bina har ek pal pahar ke tarah bhaari hain(main kaafi romantic hoon na>>??)... omg i love u ssooooo much....
achha suno... AAJ RAAT 8 baje mere ghar aa jana... mere ghar ke paas ek mandir hain aur aaj hi hum shaadi kar lenge... kissi ko koi shak nahi hoga.... in fact maine dr shashank se yeh already keh diya hain ki after duties tum mere ghar aaogi... to discuss our common cases ..
tumhe yeh na lage ki yeh jaldbaazi hain... no... i love u... and u love me...and i dont believe in wastin time😳😳😳
ill be waitin for u
bye...and love u once again
love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love
armaan
R- *SHOCKED*
plzzz read and leave ur comments... thanks a lot
part 7
RIDHZI WAS SHOCKED and was holdin the letter in her hand and jus then muskaan entered...
MUS- kya hua?? itni tension me??
R- huh...huh... nai nahi kuch nahi...( ridhz kept the letter in her locker and left)
(dr rahul and dr keerti in front of OT)
K- kya hua aapko mujse kuch baat karni thi?
RAHUL- ji dr keerti... main soch raha that agar aap chahe to aap mujhe BHI extra duties ... mera matlab hain extra hours kaam karne ke liye de sakte hain
K- "bhi "ka kya matlab hain?
RAHUL- i mean aapne dr ridhima aur armaan ko bhi extra duties die the na ... kal...
K- kya bakwas kar rahe ho dr rahul... kal dr ridhima aur armaan ke duties 8 baje hi khatam ho gaye the....
theeke... zaroorat pade,.. then ill call u,... back to work
RAHUL- *SHOCKED* ( thinking- armaan aur ridhima.... ne jhoot bola!!! par kyun..😕😕😕???)
(IN FRONT OF GAPPU)
R- armaan.... bp check kar liya
A- yupi dupi dup
GAPPU- wow.. armaan aaj bahut khush lag rahe ho
A- haa. woh kya hain na... ki😛😛
R-( interrupts) uh--uh... dr armaan mujhe aapse bahut zaroori baat karni hain... issi waqt....
A- okie...dokie/😆😆//...kaha
R- fire exit stairs....
A- okie dokie pokie...😆
(fire exit stairs)
A- kya hua meri FUTURE DHARAM PATNI..?😳😳
R- armaa-aan... hum... hum jaldbaazi.. to nahi ....
A-( armaanz eyes full of tears) kya?
R-nahi... mera matllab hain ki... mummy papa se chupakar..
A- RIDHIMA! u trust me na?
R- (ridhima looks deeps into armaanz eye... full of tears...)*ishq leta hain plays*
R- ha-a... main aaj aa jaungi.... 8 baje
A- thank u ridhima .... i love u
( then armaan kisses ridhz in her cheek ... ridhz blushes and for the first time... ridhz kisses armaan in his cheek.....)
A- hmm.. oyyye hoyyyyee!!😳😳😳
ridhz feels shy and leaves
ARMAAN THINKIN ABT RIDHIMA... IN HIS HOUSE......AT 6 30 PM ... SOMEONE KNOCKS THE DOOR... ARMAAN IS SURPRISED AND
THINKS- UH... RIDHIMA ITNI JALDI??
HE OPENS THE DOOR AND FINDS
RAHUL!!!!
A- uh... tu yaha kya kar raha hain?
RAHUL- tune humse jhoot kyun bola?
A- wat?
RAHUL- personal work!! remenber?? tu aur ridhima?
A- *shocked*wo-wo
RAHUL- ya... im listnin!!
A- mujhe aur ridhz ko mun nahi tha so issiliye humne jhoot bola
RAHUL- ya rite... u think im stupid??
A- bhar me ja na/!!! tera kya hain main kya karu ya na karu?
RAHUL- fine!! main abhi to jaa raha hoon par... agar tu-ne ridhima k saath kuch ulta seedha kiya na to tu to gaya!!
A- blah blah blah!!! will u go now!!!???
RAHUL LEAVES AND IN FRNT OF ARMAANS DOOR HE THINKS...
" kuch to gadbad hain mujhe pata lagana hi hoga" and then leaves...
ARMAAN.. msges to ridhima
ridhima... rahul ko pata chal gaya hain ki humne jhoot bola tha kal... be very careful.... but main yeh promie karta hoon ki usse iss baat par koi shak nahi hogi.... u trust me na?? haan ya na???
RIDHIMA- haan... ill meet u in an hour
ARMAAN-(relieved) i love u 😳😳😳
RIDHIMA- i love u too😳
8 O CLOCK-------------- ARMAAN WAITIN FOR RIDHIMA!!!!!
plzzz read and rite ur comments... thanks a lot lot
PART 8- ARMAAN AUR RIDHIMA KI SECRET SHAADI
Armaanz waitin for ridhima in his house... wearin a white kurta and at 8:05pm..... knock knock... sumone knocks at the door.... armaanz runs and opens and he seez..... ridhima ... in a red saree.... wearin the diamond ring, the gold kada, and the payal.....😊😊😊
A- oye hoyeeee.... to... tumne kada aur payal ko phir se jod hee diya...
R- woh humari pyaar ki nihani thi armaan... judna to tha hi...*ishq leta hain plays*.....😳
and then they leave .. in 15 min... they reach -a temple ... near armaanz house and before enterin ....
A- yaha ek pandit hain,... jisse main bachpan se jaanta hoon .... so..... woh humari shaadi karwarenge...
R- hmm..
THEY ENTER... THE TEMPLE...
they see the pandit waitin for them... and they see the fire in between... and the marriage procedures begins.....
mangalam bhagawan vishnu..... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... and then.....
armaan puts the sindoor .... and the mangal sootr...... 😳😳😳
ridhima cudnt see into armaanz eyes... she was feelin really shy...😳😳😳
A- oye hoyyee.😳😳😳.
then armaan kisses ridhima AND then ridhima ridhima slowly raises her eyes... and seez armaan and says-... thank u *ishq leta hain plays* with armaan and ridhima starin at each other.........
then...
A- mujhe tumse kuch zaroori baat karni hain...
R- kya... hua?
A- umm... ek to yeh hain ki....tum yeh mangal sootr aur sindoor to roz nahi pehen sakti... issiliye... main yeh chahata hoon ki tum agle ppach(5) din yeh sindoor aur mangal sootr pehen kar rakho...
R- lekin kissi ko pata chal jaaega...
A- PLZZ we'll be very careful tum yeh sindoor upne baal se chupa dena aur mangal sootr ko aapne... dupatte se....
R- uh-uh nah---
A- plzzz.. plzz. ridhima....
R- thee-ke
A- aur,,... we also need to do register this marriage....
R- lekin... lekin armaan'
A- haa ridhima.... please...
R- lekin armaan... do(2) witnesses ki zaroorat hogi... aur hum iss shaadi ke baare mein kissi ko nahi baata sakte...
A- ek to woh.... register marriage ke officer hi ban jaaega... aur doosraa,,,,,...
DOOSRA MAIN BANOONGA.....
they turn around and see.....
RAHUL!!!!!!!!!!😊
PART 9
RAHUL-hmmm interestin na??
A&R-*SHOCKED*
RAHUL- chillllaxxxx.... well armaan ko milne ke baad... maine socha ki jaane se pehle...bhagawan ka darshan kiya jayee.. soo... coincidentally--- main iss mandir me aaya... aur pandit ko baatien karte hue sun liye ki ARMAAN aur RIDHIMA namak do vyakti aa rahe the ... shaadi karne ke liye......
mujhe tab story dheere dheere samaj me aaya... aur socha ki kyun na tum dono ko congratulate karoo... so i waited...
ridhima was shocked and extremely tensed,,... she had tears in her eyes.... armaan was speechless
RAHUL went closer to them and then he whispers...
CONGRATS,... shaadi mubarako... I guess,,, u both are made for each other...
A- kya..?? tu--- tu/??
RAHUL- nahi yaar,... main tujse jitna bhi nafrat karu... aaj maine tere aakhon mein PEHLI BAAR... ridhima ke liye sachaa pyaar aur vishwaas dekha hain.... dont worry im with u guys>....
A- thanksss... man!!!!
(armaan and rahul huggg each other tightly)
RAHUL-- WELLLL.... i guess tum dono ki suhaag raat tooo nahi hoga😭... but... ummm... ill leave u guys alone for the time being... kal milte hain...
then rahul leaves
armaan and ridhima ---nite 9 30 pm... in front of the mandir
R- armaan... mujhe jaana chahiye..
A- hmm//
R- bye
A-why?
R- huh?? di meri intazaar kar rahi hogi...
A- mat jaooo .....
*ishq leta hain plays*
armaan and ridhima stare at each other.... armaan goes closer to ridhima.... and whispers...
A- Dr ridhima armaan malik...... i love u.... and then he kisses on her sindoor......... .... .... ... ... 😳
(in ridhimaz house... ridhima enters her room)
AJ-HEY ridhz...!!
R- hi...
AJ- saree??? aur tum???
R- uh--uh... woh... aise hee,,, man kar raha tha..
AJ- tum bhi na,... ajeeb ho... fine... challo ab apni night dress pehen lo... sona hain
R- haa....(ridhima thinks... agar mein night dress pehen loo to mera mangal sootr... aur armaan chahata hain ki... 5 din...)NAHI!!!
AJ- wat??????
R- we--eell.... uh... aaj...mujhe dekhna hain...ki saree pehenkar sona kaisa hota hain!😕😕😕
AJ- ridhzi u ok?
R- ha... di... im ok
AJ- well.... tumhari marzi....
R- (relieved) goodnite...
(hospital,,,... nextday locker room)(everybody is there... armaan enters )
A- HI EVERYBODY!!!! and then he huggggggs tightly----- rahul!!!
AT- uh-- armaan?
A- yo!!
AT- kal tak to tum dono dushman the na/??
A- uh really??... so
AT- aaj itna pyaar??
A- hahaha... tu bhi na... mazaak bahut karta hain😕😕😕
atul... still confused
sister lovely enters...
SL- oh jee... muskaan, rahul,anjali aut atul ko dr shubhankar bula rahe hain....
they leave except rahul...
armaan, ridhima and rahul alone...in locker room
RAHUL- achaa meri baat dhyan se suno... aaj lunch break mein hum shaadi ko register karwa denge,,,, zyada baatien mat karo... 1230pm sharp... bye
he leaves
A- hmmm
R- armaan...
A- bolo ridhima
R- mujhe bahut darr lag raha hain...
armaan pushes ridhima in the changing room and holds her hand tightly....
A- aur ab??
R- armaann....
A- aur ab? darr hain ...??
R- nahii....😳😳
1235pm... dr keerti searchin for ridhima and armaan...
K- DR RIDHMA AUR ARMAAN KAHA HAIN... NANA... KI HALAT BAHUT BIGGAR GAYII HAIN AUR SIRF ARMAAN AUR RIDHIMA KE PAAS nana KA REPORT HAIN... WHERE THE HELL ARE THEY...??
anjali runs towards dr keerti...
AJ- ma'm ... nana... ka halat... its goin worse... ma'm...
AT- its gone worse.... HE IS IN COMA NOW!!!!!
EVERYBODY SHOCKED.... DR KEERTI FURIOUS....
at 1;15pm ,... armaan and ridhima... enter the hospital... extremely HAPPY....
K- dr ridhima aur armaan....
A- ji dr keerti😃
K- kaha the??
R- ma'm lunch break tha...
K- issiliye... ghoome challe gayye?? wah!!!
A- ji...
K- patient DESHPANDEY AB COMA MEIN HAIN//.... AUR UNKA REPORT SIRF TUM DONO KE PAAS THA!!!
A&R-*SHOCKED* ma'm///
K- YOU BOTH ARE SUSPENDED!!!!!1
dr keerti leaves and dr shashank comes and tells...)
DRSHASHANK- do u mind... dr ridhima... to meet me in my office... RIGHT NOW😡😡😡
(in dr shashanks office)
drs- i cant believe it... tum--- lunch ke samay bahar challi gayyi thi??
R- pa---r
drs- I'M extremely dissapointed... dr ridhima... how can u be so irresponsible??
R- IM sorr--
drs-i'm sorry.???. tumne mera sar sharm se jhuka diya hain dr ridhima... 😭out...
R- im...
drs- OUT...😭😭😭
(ridhima leaves dr shashanks room and goes to the terrace..... armaan follows her)
PART 10
ridhima in the terrace cryin very very loudly... armaan feelin guilty...
R- nahi... humhe yeh nahii karna chahiye tha
A- ridhima ridhima please
R- what am i gonna do now...
A- im sorry ridhima
AND then he holds ridhimas hand and hugs her tightly... a tear falls from armaanz eye
A-(thinking)maine yeh kya kar diya... oh ridhima im soo sorry....
just then sister lovely enters....
SL-oh ji... main to tum dono ko dhoond dhoond kar parishan ho gaye... dr keerti tum dono ko bula rahe hain... uske cabin mein...
ridhimas opens her eyes in shock (in hearin that dr keerti is callin her and armaan )... she holds armaans hands tightly.. then looks deep into armaans eyes... and with hope in their hearts ....they start walkin towards dr keertis cabin,....
they enter dr keertis cabin.... rahul is standin next to dr keerti... with his head down
K- dr ridhima aur armaan.... dr rahul keh rehe hain ki tum dono ne usse inform kiya tha aur deshpandey ka report bhi dr rahul ko diya tha!!
*ARMAAN AND RIDHIMA SHOCKED*
k- KYA yeh baat sach hain/??
A- ji na-h--
RAHUL-(interrupts) ji dr keerti... bilkul
K- DR RAHUL!!!!
RAHUL- sorry...
K- bolo... armaan aur ridhima
armaan looked at rahul.... who was tryin to say somethin... armaan understood and said...
A- ji... dr keerti
*RIDHIMA SHOCKED*
K- fine.... atleast tum dono ne THODI SI TO responsibility dikhayi... fine... main tum dono ka suspension order utha deti hoon😃😃.. par tum dono ko kal se night duty bhi karni padegi... JAB TAK DESHPANDEY COMA main hain....
aur rahul... tum ITNE irresponsible ??? tum bhi armaan aur ridhima ke saath .. night duty.. get it?
A,R&RAHUL- ji...
dr keeri leaves the room...
armaan looks at rahul... rahulz eyes were full of tears....
A- hey man...
RAHUL- hey... no need to say thanks... dost hote kissliye.👏👏..
(ridhima goes closer to rahul)
R- thanks rahul.... and then hugs him tightly- and for the for the first time armaan did not feel jealous.... as he now... considered "rahul" as his true friend😳😳
armaan in his house
A- (talkin to himself) oh man!!! ridhima se theek se baat bhi nahi huyi... neend bhi nahi aa rahi.. kal se to night shift... aaj bhi nahi soo sakta... oh shit!! ridhima se ek baar baat kar leta hoon.. ok... msg karta hoon...
MSG- hi!!! how r u?? sab theek thak??
<no reply> armaan tensed
MSG- arrey?? reply kyun nahi kar rahi... don worry for nana... main hoon na... din raat mehnat karenge... he'll be fine... trust me
<no reply>
armaan- AB MUJHE TENSION HO RAHI HAIN... mujhe uska ghar jaana chahiye.. raat ke 2 baje hain... umm/... who cares😉😉!!!
he leaves
in front of ridhimas house....ridhzis room is dark... armaan decides to go up with the help of the pipe.... he climbs up... and thru the window he seez ridhima.. sleepin like a doll alone... without angie...
A- waah!! mujhe dekho... aur usse dekho... pati yaha... biwi waha... angie bhi nahi... chalo... ghar ke andar guss jata hoon... aur pooch leta hoon ki mere msgs ka reply kyun nehi kar rahi.... tassali ho jaegi...
he enters...
he goes close to ridhima... *ishq leta hain plays* ..... he holds her hand.... he goes closer to her...
and then he comes to his senses... and calls ridhima by pushin her...
Ridhima wakes up suddenly and armaan covers her mouth so as to stop her frm shoutin
A- MERE MSGS KE REPLY KYUN NAHI KIYA!!!
R- mmmph...
A- oh sorry... he removes his hand...
R- arrey baba... mobile off tha... battery charge low!!!! omg di ghar par hain tum yaha
A- nahi.. hain😃😃😃
R- arrey!! pani lene gai hogi ... oh shit... tum chupo!!!!
A- kaha....??
R- omgomgomg!!! bistar ke neeche... NOW.1!!!!
jus then angie enters...
AJ- ridhz ..??tum jagi hui ho??? not sleepin?? awake!!>>??
*RIDHZ SHOCKED*
hey... im really really really for the late update... n i promise u that this wont happen again... thanks a lot
part 11
R- di tum..!!
AJ- kya ho raha hain... i mean any prob... tum aaj bhi salwar that too dupatte ke saath hi soo gayye!!! ab.. raat ke teen(3
) baje tum jagi hui ho??!! wats goin on
R- wo..wo.. kuch nahi.. salwar pehen kar sona... uh.. mann kar raha tha!!
AJ- wateva!! tumhari marzi... main lights on kar rahi hoon... neend nahi aa rahi....
R- NAHI!!!!
AJ- what??
R- i mean... uh.. mujhe bahut neend aa rahi hain plus kal meri night duty bhi shuru ho rahi hain... so please...
AJ- ohk fine...(then she goes back to sleep)
after 15 mins ... angie sleepin.. armaan comes out... and whispers to ridhima
A- main tumhare liye baahar intzaar kar raha hoon.....
and then he leaves...
armaan waitin for ridhima in front of his car... and then after 20 min.. he sees ridhima... nervous and shy... secretly comin out of her house....*ishq leta hain plays*
ridhima goes closer to armaan....
A- i ... i love u
R- armaan hum...
A- shhhhhh...... then he slowly holds ridhimas hands tightly and kisses her on the sindoor...
R- i love u too....
(it starts to rain...... Armaan hugs ridhima tightly and says..
A- thand lag rahi hain,,,
R- feels really shy.... n---a
A- oye hoyye... .. ..cum.. lets sit in the car...
R- nahi...nahi armaan... di agar udh gayye to bahut gadbad ho jaegi.... i got to go...
A- nahi... plzzz mat jao
R- kal milenge na... bye...
A- he holds ridhima... opens his jacket... and covers ridhima with it... and then goes closer to her..and says...
im always there to protect u😳😳😳....
ridhz feels shy n runs into her house...
in the hospital...locker room.. evryones there... ridhima enters with armaans jacket in hand
R- armaa.. tumhara jacket///\\
A- oh ya! thanks...
AT- uh ... ridhima... armaan ka jacket????!!!!!
(ridhima then realised that she shudnt hav given it in frnt of everY1)😕😕😕
A- chhor na champ!!! who cares??!!!
AT- (confused) uh--ok
RAHUL- guys.. duties shuru hone main abhi bhi hadha ganta bachta hain. soo... letz go n hav coffee??
AJ- cool...
THEY all leave for the cafeteria...they all sit together...
RAHUL- (in a sarcastic tone)😛😛 guyz... letz play a game..dekho we'll all get married sum day or another... sooo.... letz talk abt our future husband or wife... like woh kaisa ya kaisi hone wali hain... and by wat age...etc etc...
*ARMAAN AND RIDHIMA SHOCKED AND IRRITATED*
MUSKAAN- okokokokokokokokokok coooooooooooollllll... main first... handsome... funny... tall.... doctor.. punjabi... and i wana get married by 27... im only 21 now..
RAHUL-(thinkin)😳hmmm... im tall... kinda handsom.. funny to hoon. doctor aur punjabi.. not bad... main aur musk--- OH MY GOD!!! MAIN KYA SOCJ RAHA HOON,. SHIT😕 then he looks at muskaan... and feels reallly cold and shy😳😳😳.....
AT- mera to sabkuch ... sirf anjali.... anj--aaa-llliiii... a-n-j-a-l-i... oh meri anjali
AJ- fine fine ... well... i dont wana talk abt marriage... only after i become a very well known established doc... NO marriage b4 30..
RAHUL- hmm.. ur turn..... ARMAAN...!!!!(with a grin)
A- 😳😳(he looks deep onto ridhimas eyes n says) main.. main uss ladki se shaadi karoonga jiske sanskaar aur soch ache ho..... ek aisi ladki jo mujpar vishwas kare... har pal mere saath rahe...
a tear falls frm ridhimas eye
AJ- ridhzi u ok!!!????
R- ha.. uh... im sorry...
sister lovely comes and says.- rahul, atul, muskaan and anjali... dr shashank bula rahe hain.... they leave .... armaan n ridhima..still sittin there... armaan still starin at ridhima n then continues...
A- aur jo har pal mujhe pyaar kare....😳 main ridhima.. se shaadi kar chuka hoon .. i love u ridhima i love u sooo much....
R- armaan.... .. .. .. .. i love u too..😳😳.
They both come back to their senses n then
A- kal karvachot hain... vrat to rakhogi na???
R- of course...
A- sabse chupakar...dum hain??😊😊
R- yup... we'll seee😉😉
( n then they leave the cafeteria head towars nanas room...
.this onez not sooo good... im soooorrrrrrrry... ill try to give a better update nxt time///
part 12
same day... ridhimas house... dinner time.. ridhima havin LOTS... with 10 glasses of water...
SHASHANK- uh... he.. rid...ridhima... u ok>??😕😕 i mean maine tumhe itna khate hue kabhi nahi!?!?!?!
AJ-(jokingly) lol... u doin the vrat tom or what??😃😆
R- (tensed)huh... arrey nahi nahi... aisay hi bhook thi... ok then main abhi duty ke liye..jaa rahi hoon.. bye
AJ- hm... sumthinz strange.. wateva!/?
next day hospital locker room... Armaan n ridhima alone😳😳
A- hey dharam patni....😆😆
R- shhh... omg!! koi sun lega then ill kill u!!!
A- ek din to pata lagna hi hain😉😉
r- Tch... mat karo...
(armaan goes closer to ridhima.....*ishq leta hain playa*
A- vrat?? tum rakh rahi ho na...
R- tum??
A- main.. pati????!!! phhooossh... pagal ho kya....
(ridhima had tears in her eyes... immediately...
A- hey hey hey!!!! of course i am....
(ridhima smiles)
R- main bhi/...
*asmaani rang ho plays*./...
armaan goes closer to ridhima.... and closer and hez jus gonna kiss her... on the sindoor when../... RAHUL ENTERS...
armaan n ridhima push each other back wid an embarrassin expression on their face....
RAHUL- OOOOPS!!!!!😆 W-R-O-N-G T-I-M-E.!!!! may i???
A- whooooo!!! rahul!!!
ridhima was feelin really uneasy... and she left...
muskaan entered...
MUS- hey armaan!!!
A- hey...
RAHUL- hi muskaan...
MUS- (shocked that rahul said hi) uh..uh hi!😕😕
RAHUL- aaj karvachot hain...
MUS- ....mujhe pata hain😕😕
RAHUL- haha... uh...uh.. tu vrat??
MUS- kya??!!!
RAHUL- uh..uh nahi nahi BYE!!!
MUS-😕????*CONFUSED*
armaan n ridhima in front of nanas room....
R- bpz is stable... medicines.. bhi de di... but koi positive signs nahi...
A- its very strange seein him all quiet... don worry... he'll be back soon..😊😊
R- hope soo....
cafeteria... evrybdyz there...
MUSKAAN EATIN LIKE AN ELEPHANT AND RAHUL WAS STARIN AT HER.😉😉😉...
RAHUL- uh...uh... muskaan... tu kha rahi hain//
MUS- kyun tujhe khana hain??!!
RAHUL- sorry sorry...
MUS- (thinkin) pagal ho gaya hain kya?....
RAHUL-(sarcastically)... uhuh... ridhima... tum kyun nahi kha rahi kuch... coffee?(with a grin)
R- wo...wo... bhook nahi hain...
AJ- kal raat to bahut kaha rahi thi..??
R- haa... issiliye to nahi hain😆
RAHUL- starts laughin,,,
AJ- kya hua??
RAHUL- kuch nahi.. n then winks at ridhima with an understanding smile....
4pm... locker room...
A- aaagh!!!!! BAHUT BHOOK LAG RAHI HAIN!!!!! aur aaj ke newzpaper ke mutabik... the moonz gonna be out at 8 pm... 4 hrs to go...
ridhima enters...
R- kya hua??? my hubby is feelin hungry huh??
A- hmm... mommy!!!!!
R- arrey baba... sirf 4 ghante... ill be waitin 4 u... terrace.... ok??
armaan stands and starts walkin towards ridhima*ishq leta hain plays*.... pushes her against the lockers.... holds her hand.... goes closer... very close... .. .. .. .... .. .. very close... ki--s--
RAHUL ENTERS.....
A- arrey yaar... yeh rahul ka bachaa.....😡
RAHUL- OOOOOOPS!!!!!!!! OOOOOOO IM SORRRRRRRY!!!!😃 but.... armaan ... dr keertiz callin u.... dutiez first... sorry...
A- hmmm./.😡 jaa raha hoon😡
he leaves....
armaan with keerti in her cabin...
DRK- armaan...
A- JI...
DRK- aaj... i want u to assist me in a surgery .... ok//??
A- sure ... kab ma'm...
DRK- starts at 8pm...
A- KYA!!!!!!😕😕
DRK- ANY PROB??????😡
A- no... no ma'm😕
part 13....
meanwhile in the cafeteria... atul n anjali... anjali eating sandwich... n atul starin at anjali... with a cup of coffee in his hand....
AT- anjali.. aaj karvachot hain...
AJ- i know!!!
AT- vo kya hain na.. ki mein subhah subhah galti see dood pee liya...issiliye vrat nahi rakh saka
AJ- kiske liye...??
AT- arrey tumhare liye...
AJ- atul dont talk rubbish...😡😡 mujhe abhi jana hain n don irritate me... (and leaves)
AT- ( with tears in his eyes)(to himself) tum mere pyaar ko ek mazaak samajto ho na... theeke,... aaj ke baad me tumse kabhi baat nahi karoonga.... tab pata chalega😭
armaan lookin for ridhima everywhere.... asked rahul... lovely... muskaan.... no one knew.....
A- oh damn!!!!! abhi saat baj rahe hain... operation ka time ho raaha hain... wo to 8 baje mera intzaar karegiii... oh man!! wat am i gonna do??!!???!??!?
7 45 PM... dr keerti calls armaan...
K- hope u r ready... dr armaan...
A- ji...ji dr kheerti...
K- aacha suno... yeh ek lamba aur complicated operation hain... sooo...it can go upto 3 hrs/..
A- what???!!!
K- kya hua??
A- nahi mam... im sorry... theeke....
at 11 15...pm... armaan n keerti cum out of OT...
armaan tries to run... but keerti stops him..
K- good job armaan...
A- thank u.. thank u mam... mein jaao..
K- haan .... maine ridhima aur rahul ko aaj night duty se chutii di hain.. since aaj karvachot ka din hain... aur nanaz situation is improvin... sooo... tum bhi ghar jaa sakte ho... kal aa jana..
K- ji mam... jaau
K- go...
ARMAAN RUNS ...... *ishq leta hain plays* ,,,, HE IS RUNNING.... RUNZ THRU THE STAIRS... TRIPS N FALLS... HURTS HIS KNEES... GETS INJURED... BLOOD WAS CUMIN...<ARMAAN DIDNT CARE>.... RUSHES TOWARDS THE TERRACE DOOR... AND PUSHES THE DOOR OPEN N SHOUTS.....
RIDHIMA!!!!!
and he seez......
NO BODY.... ridhima was not there... armaan looks around... ridhima was not there,,, ridhima was not there.....
armaan cud not believe....
A-(To himself) I CANT BELIEVE i messed up my first karvachot with ridhima... omg ... meine.. ye kya kar diya... oh shit... main... main uske ghar jaat hoon right/...
11 45pm... driving .... near ridhimaz house....
A- plzzz ridhima... mat khao... mein mein...aa raha hoon... im cumin ... jus...jus 2 more minutes.... he reached,,,,
no one was there.... armaan climbed up thru the pipe for ridhima.. n he saw... angie(huggin a teddy bear tightly)... and ridhima(under the blanket with her faced covered)...
*ishq leta hain plays* armaanz eyes full of tears... he cud not believe wat he saw... ridhima... sleepin in frnt of him.... he jus... stared... and then left... without sayin a word... n without tryin to wake her up... he gave up... he left..... for his home...
he reached ... with a heavy heart..... went up the stairs... n opened the door ... (of his flat).... as he raised his head up/....
he saw
RIDHIMA!!!!😳
IN a b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l-l-l-l-l
red saree.... with her mangal sootr n sindoor... and a pooja thali in her hands *asmaani rang ho plays*...
they both stare at each other.... armaan gives a smile.
R- abhi bhi darvaaza khula chorne ki aadat ahi gayyi (part 1😉)...
A-par tum to ghar pe...
R- we--ll... tumhare saath rehekar... main bhi smart ho gayye... hoon... kuch takiya laga di... aur yaaha chali aaye.... itna to risk lehi sakti hoon....
Armaan smiles... ridhima goes close to armaan... holds his hands n pulls armaan next to the window... she first seez the moon n then armaan .... she does the aarti... armaan jus stares at ridhima...
R- ppaaaaaaniii.... pilaaaaooooo
A- oh,...ohk...
R- AB KAHANA!!
A- ye lo...
R- ab... s-ind-oo....
armaan.... puts the sindoor in ridhimaz maang.. then ridhima... touches armaanz feet...
A- owowowow!!! wow... yeh kya kar rahi hoo... chill!!
R- armaan... yeh sirf ek rasam nahi hain.. yeh mera pyaar hain... tum .... tum jaante nahi ho.. yeh mere liye kitne maine rakhti hain...main tumhara saathi saat janmo tak bana chahati... hoon.....
A- shhhh....
*ishq leta hain plays* armaan goes close to ridhima.... he holds her hands ..... goes close to her.. very close... n then whispers...
A- ridh-i-m-a... mujhe... mujhe..
R- kya armaan...
A- Mujhe bahut BHOOOK LAGI HAIN!!!!!!!!
R- oh...oh...( she feels a lil embarrassed..) yeh lo.. apne haatho se banakar lae hoon.. yeh lo... khaoo//( and ridhima feeds him) ( armaan jus stares at her.. n smiles)
after eatin....
A- aacha...
*ishq leta hain plays*he goes close to ridhima... ridhima ...unconsciously ... also goes closer to armaan.... very close... armaan then holds ridhimas hands.... n then..
ridhima cums back to her senses😡😡 n says
R- oh no!!! mujhe jaana hain... bye... 😭
A- aaaa.. plzzz///
R- agar ghar me kuch ho gaya... ill be dead...
A- okokok ill drop u..
R- ya..
( THEY LEAVE)
nxt day ... hospital... locker room.. only ridhimaz there ... standin beside her locker... studyin her file... wen.... sumone pulled her into the changin.... she seez that it was...
armaan....😳 he holds her hand n pushes her against the walls n says...
A- hum kal kaha the???😳😳😳
part 14
R- a-rma-aan.... kya....?
A- shhhh....*ishq leta hain plays*( n slowly he moves his hands upwards... n puts it across ridhimas waist)😳😳
R- ar-m-----
( armaan pulls ridhima .... they were soooo close that ridhima cud hear armaan breathin.... armaan then kissed ridhima in her cheek... ridhima kept her eyes closed and then on the sindoor....😳😳
R- arm---a
(armaan looks at ridhima--- deep in her eyes.... and goes closer n closer .....ridhima also goes closer... n they were goin to ki-s---- wen...
RAHUL- aaaaaaaaaah!!!!! ram ram ram ram ram.... yeh kya dkh raha hoon/?? ram ram ram( n he closes his eyes n walks out)
* ARMAAN N RIDHIMA embarrassed*
A- oh shit!!!!! phir se... aa gaya... kebab me haddi...
R- omg... armaan .... jaaooo...1!!!!!! usse dekho...
(Armaan goes out..)
A- hey dude!!!
RH- yaar,,,, kya kar raha ??/ kahi bhi shuru ho jata hain///???
A- chhal sorry yaar,...
RH- aaye hayye....
A- soorrrrrry bola na...
RH- accha😡😡maaf kiya
armaan n ridhima walkin towards nana;s room....
A- maine decide kar liya hain😊😊...
R- kya??
A- ANSH!!!
R- KYA???
A- humare bache ka naam!!!!😳😳
R- what!!! pagal ho gaye ho kya
A- whatever u say!!!
(they stay quiet for 2 mins)
R- waissse.... ladka kyun??
A-( armaan smiles) kyunki......... mera pyaar hamesha tumhare pyaar se zyaada raha hain....
R- (stops walkin,... looks at armaan) nahi!!!
A-oh re-aaa-llll-yyyy
R-ji haan....
A-i wonder... kaun humare pyaar me shak kar raha tha??
R-well... thats no reason!!!! woo main sirf...---
A-oh phulease!!!!
R- oh ya....!!!!
atul walks in between their fight,...
AT- arrey kya hua bhai... jhagra,,,'??
(ridhima looks at armaan n then atul....)
R- well.. atul... armaan ko keh do.. that im not talkin to her...( n sayin this .... she walks off)
AT- (lookin at armaan)/... shez not talkin to u
A- pata hain champ!!! (to himself- shit man!!!)
at 4 o clock....
ridhima still upset... in the locker room... she openz her locker n finds a letter.... and ; frm armaan...
dear ridhima,
achha baba... u love me more!!!! happy!!!!! im sooooorrrrrryyyyy.... s-o-r-r-y , s-o-r-r-y, s-o-r-r-y, s-o-r-r-y,s-o-r-r-y , s-o-r-r-y, s-o-r-r-y, s-o-r-r-y.... accha ab kaam ki baat....
nana ka situation BAHUT improve kar raha hain... i mean... agar aisa hee challe...then i think we;ll get our love gure i.e nana back soon....😉😉... sooooo... dr keerti is very very impressed aur unhone humme 7o clock se 10 o clock break diya hain!!
aur hum bahar jaa rahe hain... kissi ko kuch nahi pata... koi shak nahi hoga,, don worry....
ill be waitin for u in my car... 7 o clock... ill be waitin... agar tum aa gaye.. then... ill undrstnd ki tumne mujhe maaf kiya!!! ok!!! love u..... bbye
love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love
tumhara aur sirf tumhara
armaan
(rihima finishd readin the letter n had a smile in her face)
7 o clock..... armaan waitin for ridhima in his carr....
7:05pm.... WHOOOOOOOSHHHHH......... armaan cud feel ridhima cumin.... *ishq leta hain plays*..... n then he seez ridhima ..... tryin to hide herself with the dupatta... n then nervously .... sits in armaanz car,....
A- oyeeee...... hoyyyyyeeeeee.
R- jaldi jaldi.... koi dekh lega.....
A- oooooooooohhhhkkkk......( and they leave..)
ON THEIR WAY....
R- kaha jaa rahe hain..
A- well.. dekho... surprise...
R- o-h.... k...
A- tum tm ti tum .......
they reach...
R- YAHA!!!!!
A- yup!!!!
R- ESSAL WORLD....--- AMUSEMENT PARK!!!!!
A- letzzzzzzzzzzzz go!!!!!
they enter...
part 15---- omg!!!!
in the middle of essel world there was a huge stage set up with mike and all... but ntn was happenin
R- wo.. stage yaha par kyun set up kiya gaya hain?
A- dunno... lets play shootin game!!!!
R- shootin game???
A- ohh.. u hav to pick this gun n shoot at the balloons... thts it
R- oh thats cool... ok
ridhima picks up the gun but it nearly slips frm her hand... coz it was toooooo heavy
A- wowow.!!! ill help u...
and then... *aasmani rang ho plays* .........armaan holds the gun by both his hands......... standin behind ridhima😳......... nearly huggin her.. and then he rested his chin on her shoulder... n then kised her cheek.... ridhima blushed😳😳...
R- dhyan do!!
A- de to raha hoon...
R- mere upar nahi,... game par!!!
A- oh...okok
after the game... they were walkin around the place .... holdin hands TIGHTLY😳😳 and then ridhima says... in a naughty/with humor tone....
R- uhhuh,.. armaan ek baat bolu.....
A-hmmm...
R- tumne mujhe kabhi ... u know... grand way se... propose nahi kiya hain..
A- WHAT!!!??🤔
R- nahi nahi.. don get me... wrong... but tum mera bahut khyal rakhte ho... aur har waqt poochte ho... that mein kaisi hoon n all... but propose... u know.... I LOVE U !! kabhi grand way me nahi kiya😆😆😆( ridhima was laughin frm inside coz she was jus teasin armaan)
A- lekin... tum to nahi cha---ha--ti😭 omg...
R- haa.. lekin strangers ke saamne to kar hi sakte ho.... i mean,... maine sirf kaha tha ki "jin logo ko hum jaante hain... unko pata nahi chahiye..."
Armaan started feelin very guilty.... and was thinkin ways of... propo..sing
THEN SUDDENLY SUMONE FRM THE STAGE...
welcome ladies n gentlemen... aaj yaha aane ke liye ... thank u!!! aaj hum yaha ek game khelne wale hain.... !!!!!confession!!!!waa!!! yaha kitne couples aaate hain... kuch ne aapna pyaar ka izhaar kiya hain to kuch nahi.... to aaj hain AAPKA MAUKA... confess ur feelings for ur partner... es stage par... aur BEST COUPLE KA TAAJ JEETIYE..!!!
ridima luked at armaan n gave a wicked smile and the nxt thing armaan knew... ridhima wasnt there... armaan got really worried
EVERYBODY STARTED CLAPPIN...
EVERYTHING WENT DARK..... AND SPOTLIGHT FOCUSSED ON ridhima...... SHE WAS ON THE STAGE N SHE gav a naughty smile n startd singin.....😳
-Ridhima--
Aaj ke ladke I tell you, kitne lallu what to do - 2
Koi mujhe poochhe how are you, koi mujhe bole how do you do
Kabhi koi mujhse na kahe, oh my darling I love you
Oh my darling I love you, oh my darling I love you
then armaan... like a hero... walked into the stage
n startd singing
--Armaan--
Aaj ki ladki I tell you, nakhre waali sun le tu
Hey aaj ki ladki I tell you
--RIdhima--
(Achha?)
--Armaan--
Nakhre waali sun le tu
--Ridhima--
(Aha)
--Armaan--
Na main poochhoon how are you, na main boloon how do you do
--Ridhima--
(Oh shut up)
--Armaan--
Abhi yahin main kehta hoon, oh my darling I love you
Hey oh my darling I love you, oh my darling I love you
Ridhima broke down... and ran and hugged armaan.... in
front of the thousands of ppl in essel world who were clapping
... clappin... and clappin....😳
armaan and ridhima stayed there and waited for the reults😉😉😉 and
at 9 15.... the results were announced.... were OBVIOUSLY
armaan n ridhima WON THE BEST COUPLE AWARD👏👏👏
👏
in the car...
R- omgomgomgomgomgomg... im soooooooo happy!!!!!
A- welll....
R-well... i jus hope ki essel world ki yeh baat bahar na chale jaae...
A- ofcourse... not... it was jus a smal game... kissi ko kuch pata nahi
challega... trust me....
R- ridhima smiled....
THEY RACHED SANJEEVANI,,, they stayed there the whole nite
workin....
...
...
...
...
next day.... cafeteria... 9 am..armaan n ridhima havin coffee...
anjali, atul, muskaan, rahul walked into the cafeteria with angry
faces and anjali threw a newspaper on ridhima... ridhima was
confused by her behaviour.... and then she saw...
BOMBAY TIMES......
HEADLINES....
<ridhima hugging armaan... in the stage... pic...>
Yesterday... in essel world... the best couple competion was
organised where a young couple... dr Armaan & dr Ridhima... won
the best couple award... their confession was very unique... by singin
a song from mujhse dosti karoge... they confessed their feelings
confidently in front of thousands of ppl who were watchin
them...they loved each other dearly .... hats off to such lovers!!!!
hope they stay together forever!!!!!!!!!
*ARMAAN N RIDHIMA SHOCKED*
part 16- AR in a bad situation!!!!
AJ- yes>??? ridhima??!!!!
R- di...(tryin to maintain her cool) hahhaha!!!(startd laughin) cmon.... arrey kal mujhe aur armaan ko brk mil gayye thi and sooo... u know... we thot ki hum essel world ghoomne jaae!
A- (interrupts)ya rite... aur...aur.. waha jaker humne dekha that they had this competition goin on... so... humne participate kiya/..
RAHUL- ya... armaan sach keh raha hain... infact he called me... waha jaker...😕😕😕
AJ- oh reeeeeeeeeeeallly?? aur u know.. u hug??? SABKE SAAMNE???
A- Hey cmon anjie???!!! cant i hug A FRND???
(he stands up and hugs AJ)
A- ab bol!!😆
RAHUL- hey cmon anjie... don be sooooo narrow minded...yaar waha to sab strangers the so koi fark nah padta...
AJ- still very angry... storms out!!!
muskaan looks at AR suspiciously and then leaves with atul.... raul alone with AR...
RAUL-U GUYS??? PAGAL HO GAYYE HO KYA!!!??? MAN!!! U ALMOST EXPOSED EVERYTHIN!!!!!-----
A-lookin at the pic in the paper...-- yaar pic acchhi aayi hain na😃😃
RAHUL- YEH MAZAAK KA WAQT HAIN???
A- cmon..okok... im sorry... (turns towards ridhzi...) madam...TUMHARA IDEA THA!!!!!
R- ok fine... im sorry😊
A-by the way, pics good na??😛😉😆
then the three talk for a while n leave for their duties...
in the evenin... locker room...
ridhima there... armaan enters...
A- heya!!
R- listn tum mere saath zyada baat mat karo... nahi to sabka shak
yakeen main badal jaayega..
A- arrey??😭😭😭 main tumhare saath baat kiye bina nahi reh sakta... wai --wai wait!!!
i got an idea... sabko yeh baatien bhoolni hogi... so letz ALL go for
a movie..u know... we'll have fun and all... aur phir sab bhool jaaege!!!!
R- nahi
A- oh cmon!!!
R-NA...
A- listn late nite show... 3 hrs... and then we;ll be back to our duties
R- uhuh
A- plzzplzzplzzplzzplzzplzzplzzplzz(and then makes a puppy dog innocent expression)
R- ohohk...
A- yahhooo... ok... 10 o clock show... ONE MISSED CALL.. horroooor film
(AJ ENTERS)
A- hi anjali'
AJ- ya wateva...
A- lsiten anjie... im sorry... dekho hum masti ke liye gayye the... it was late...aur... tum sab ghar chale gayye the... THATS Y..
AJ- oh!! phulease!!!!
A- ok fine.. theeke... lets go for a... um... movi----e??
AJ- oh!! shuttttup!!!
A- yaar dont be SUCH A KKEBAB ME HADDI... sab jaa rahe hain... dekh rual aur muskaan ko koi prob nahi hain😡😡😡... so plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz(then he realised that he souted TOO much.. so he fell on his knees and folded his hands and started beggin anjie)
AJ-OK FINE!!😃
10pm... movie hall... ppl walkin in pairs....
armaan with ridhima😳
raul with muskaan 😳
atul and anjie 😳
A(to ridhima)- hey dharam patni😳😳
R- armaan!!!! ab nahi..😡😡.
A- ok... listn tum mere saath baet rahe ho...
R- pagal ho kya!!!!no way...
A- naho... ill only sit with u!!!
R- nahi...
A- hmmm... wait wait wait... i got an idea.!!! hahahahaha😈
armaan goes to the ticket counter to cut the tickets.... raul goes with him.... ridhima, anjie,atul,muskaan... witain near the entrance
near the ticket counter,,,.. armaan cuts the tickets n speaks (or nearly whispers to raul)
A- oye...
RAHUL- mil gayye tickets... chal..
A- oye sun na!!!
RAHUL- kya ??? kya hua/?(irritated)
A- dekh tujhe to pata hi hain... ki main aur ridhima ek doosre ke saath waqt bita nahi sak rahe hain.... so maine 6 tickets kaate hain/...4+2... i mean tum chaar ek saath aur do tickets separately.... jaha main aur ridhima baatenge... corner seat(and then winks)😉😉😉
RAHUL- tu pagal hain kya-- besharam😆😆???!!!!!!
A- yaar plz ... i trust u.... manage the situation...chall...
(armaan n raul with everyone..)
A- ok guys BAD NEWS!!!😆😆😆 we didnt get the tickets together... so separately hain😕😕 so... ill sit in one of the seats,.. mere saath kaun???
MUSKAAN-ok...ILL COME!!!😃😃
A-kya???!!😕😕😕
RAHUL- NAHI!!!!
MUSKAAN- uh???
RAUL- i mean... i mean... nahi yaar... tu mat jaa... i mean case discuss karni hain😕 anjie.... atul .... RIDHIMA!! tum jao/...
AJ- nahi...ridhzi will NOT sit with u...
A- wat,,, tum abh bhi naaraz ho... yaar cmon!!! don be so cheap!!!😡😡😡
AJ-(was irritated and upset)... hesitantly accepted..
(in the hall .... armaan and ridhima lastrow..(was kinda empty..)... corner two seats... the remainin 4... 5 rows in the front;.... HALL IS DARK....ppl busy watchin the movie
armaan looked at ridhima...*ishq leta hain plays* and then he slowly took out his hand and grasped ridhimaz hand....
R- amr-m-aan😳😳😳
and then he placed his palm against her's ,..and--- clenched(held each others hands TIGHTLY)😳😳😳
A- i love u... (he whispered) n then he went closer to ridhima .... they both stared at each other....deeply into each other's eyes.😳😳😳...
and then armaan kissed her... in the cheek... in the forehead.... and then...ridhima....😳😳😳
opened her eyes to see.....
*MUKAAN STARIN AT THEM WITH A SHOCKCED DISGUSTED N TERRIFIED EXPRESSION*
PART 17- Armaanz----BIGGEST TRAGEDY
M- oh...my.... god...(whispers)
armaan turns and looks at muskaan and is shocked... without wasting time he holds muskaans hand and takes her outside the hall.... ridhima is petrified... she sits in the hall only..
A- listen... ill explain..
M- wat the h-e-l??
A- ok fine... ha.. main aur ridhima ek saath hain.... hum ek doosre ko bahut bahut bahut pyaar karte hain//. infact humne sha---(decides not to tell abt marriage)
M- tumne kya?????/
A- nahi nahi... kuch nahi....
M-(looks at armaan with a disgusted expression)
A- listn plzzzzz try to understand... kissi koo kuch mat batana... plzzzz
after sum awkward silence... muskaan pulls her hand and goes back-- inside the hall.........
next day... hospital.... locker room... evrybody there...
AJ- heya armaan... thanks for the movie man... it was good...
(Armaan does not respond... he was waitin for muskaan)
AJ- ARMAAN!!!
A- huh.. huh??!! ha... rite... movie.. ya rite
muskaan enters... ridhima n armaan look at muskaan....
...
...
muskaan looked at them.. and smiled.... AR WERE RELIEVED...
M- (with a smile) well... armaan... tum dono to alag baethe hue the,... were u guys BORED???😆
AT- oye armaan... tere haath mein yeh daag kyun???
A- oh well... madam ridhima ek BILLI ke tarah mujhe... pure film me....
AJ- ya rite... issiliye main ridhima ke saath horror films me nahi jaati
R- di!!! armaan tumne mujhe BILLI kaha!!!!
A- ha to!!!😉😉😉'
R- how dare u!!
A- i did 😆😆😆
R- lek--in...
(background voice)
dr shashank ... dr ridhima ko bula rahe hain...
Ridhima leaves...
.. shashanks cabin..
DRS- ridhima tumhe lonavna jaani hogi aaj ke bus se---3pm.... ek ghante mein bus hain... jus for a check up...
R- ji sir... akele???
DRS- ya..
R-😔ohk
DRS- kyun?? kissi ke saath jaana hain.😉😉..
R- nahi nahi sir,,, thanks
ridhima leaves...
she is walkin in thecorridor... when armaan pulled her in the fire exit stairs.... and pushes her against the wall..
*ishq leta hain plays*
A- sorry...
R- kissliye...
A- subah... thoda sa zyaada hi ho
R- hmm... its ok
armaan slowly holds ridhimaz hands....😳😳😳
A- acha ek kissi do😊😊😊
R- kya//😕😉
A- hmm... do na...😳😳
R- nahi...
A- ok ... main hi de deta hoon... (and he moved closer to ridhima and kissed her on her neck ... ridhima smiled.... And... then...wen she was about to ki-s--😳😳😳
RAHUL ENTERS...
armaan pushed ridhima....
RAHUL- OMG!!! TUM LOGO SE CONTROL NAHI HOTI KYA.??? KAHI BHI SHURU HO JATE HO??????😆
A- aur tu HAMESHA wrong time mein kaise aata hain??????😡😡😡
R- ya... main to tum hogo ka peecha karta hoon... aur dekhta hoon ki kaunse samay mein interrupt karoon😆
(and then he leaves...)*ridhima startd blushin)
A- oye hoyye...
R- accha suno ... main aaj infact (looks at her watch) ABHI lonavla jaa rahi hoon...
A- WHAT!!!???
R- ya... ill be back by tom...
A- nahi...plzzzzzzzzz.
R- OK BBYE...
armaan reaches home... at 7pm ... switches on his tv.... yawning....
HEADLINES...
Aaj 3PM ka jo bus tha.... jo lonavla jaa rahi thi... wo pahar se gir gaya... pandra loogo mein... koi bach nahi saka.,...
bus ka halat dekhkar.. experts keh rehe hain ki...
koi bhi zinda nahi bach sakta!!!
THE SEARCH FOR THE DEAD BODIES HAS BEEN STARTED..
. PLZZ CONTACT (044)-2244XXXX2 for more info...
THE NAMES OF THE PPL ARE.......
Raj Sinha
Priya Gupta
Priyanka
Ranbhir
Kananya
Raima
Rahul J
Ridhima Shashank Gupta
Raghu
Jagendar
Kunita
Roopa
Rimjhi
Ishuj
Yarrun
*ARMAAN TERRIFIED*
PART 18----PG 42
PART 19----PG 46
PART 20--- PG 57
PART 21---PG72
THANKS A LOT FOR READING😳😳😳
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