Mehr......Sujal&Kashish.....last-part....8/10

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kashish

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Dear Friends,

I have some important things to decide with you. I am getting disappoint that i dont get many comments like others. I will love to have bigger comments. Just like Sun_423 and let_me_star. When i get bigger comments, it encourage me to write something very quick. I dont get that much excited from the comments.As a writer, you need excited and passion.to write something. My passion ios all of yours love and support. It comes through comments. I feel like i am not providing what you guys expected from me. There is a link between my writings and your comments. I feel like it is broken. I am trying my best to prove my self but i think i failed this time. If you want me to continue, you guys need to encourage me from your bigger comments. I always appriciate those who regularly post their comments.

Thank You

Love

Kashish

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heena mehta

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Posted: 17 years ago

#122

dee frm nxt time i gonna post big comments.....bt plz don't stop writing............i m huge fan of ur all ff stories.............they all r so nice and mindblowing 👏 ..ur write so differently. 👏 ..that now i addicted of ur ff stories........plz contiunue soon

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heena mehta

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: angel 16
dee frm nxt time i gonna post big comments.....bt plz don't stop writing............i m huge fan of ur all ff stories.............they all r so nice and mindblowing 👏 ..ur write so differently. 👏 ..that now i addicted of ur ff stories........plz contiunue soon

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samrah

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Posted: 17 years ago

#124

yaar plz don't stop writing i will post big comments...................plz plz plz don't stop i m very big fan ur fics 😭

ur al fics r superb and mindblowing 👏

plz don't stop plz plz

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sonali2027

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Posted: 17 years ago

#125

hi kashish how r u?i am really sorry for not commenting for a long time....kashish plzzzzz dont stop ur stories yaar i really love them....from now onwards i will comment regularly and also post long comments....coming to mehr its going very cooly with many leaps...i just cant wait to read wht will happen in their future and its really so nice to know tht sujal and kashish love is increasing day by day.....plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz kashish ont stop ur stories and i will be waiting for ur next update....

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#126

kashish dear from now on you will get bigger comments from me.. do continue soon.... 😊

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golu_1677

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Posted: 17 years ago

#127

hi! sorry for not commenting regularly and no big comments u r a fantastic writer pls cont. I will try and comment after every but may b not long wl try but dont promise. but will definitely comment even it is just 2 lines so pls cont its a sincere request.

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zaira

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Posted: 17 years ago

#128

where are you kashish 😭.....watting for the next part eagerly .....do continue soon plzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!

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kashish

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Part-17

Aaj sabhi bacho ki chuti ho jati hai....Kashish ke kehne pe Sujal ne sabhi bacho ko Scout Camping pe le jane ka plan kiya hai..............woh log bas nikalne hi wale hote hai jab Prachi aur Neev Aaska aur Aarav ko leke aate hai..........Kavya aur Anjali Armaan aur Aashi ko leke aate hai.........

Prachi: Mama........aap Aarav ko sambhal payegina......

Prerna: jab is shitan Ayan ko sambhal sakti hoon to yeh abhi bahot chota hai.........tu pareshan mat ho aur khushi khushi ja.........

Prachi: Thank you Mama.........

Neev: Mama aap aisa kariye......Aarav ko main lejata hoon aap Prachi ko rakh lijiye........meri trip hasi khushi se jayegi.............

Jab Kashish Neev ka kaan khichti hai.....

Kashish: yeh baat hai....khabrdar meri Prachi ko kuch kaha.........

Neev: dekha Sujaljiju .......samjaiye apni biwi ko.......meri bhi kuch izzat hai..........

Sujal; chal chal jane de.......tuje sab jante hai......bada aaya izzatwala.........

Neev: lo yaha pe to koi meri izzat hi nahi karta.........

Anjali: chal ab yeh nautaki bandh kar aur saman rakhva.........

Neev: Bhabhi aapne to muje naukar hi bana diya......

Kashish: ab tu sabse chota hai to sabse jyada kam bhi to tu hi karega.......

Kavya: hume ab nikalna chahiye......sham hone se pehle pahonchna hai........

Sujal: thik keh rahe ho.........chale........

Bacha party: Lets's Go........

Kashish: Mama.....apna aur papa ka khayal rakhna aur koi bhi kaam ho to hume phone kar dena......

Prerna: hum log bilkul thik hai.....lekin aap sab apna khayal rakhna..........

All: Bye........

Prerna: bye...........

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Sab log teen ghante ke bad Camping site pe pahunch jate hai..........

Sujal: ab yaha ka rules yeh hai ki..........Boys team apna kaam khud karegi aur Girls team apna kaam khud karegi.......

Kashish: lekin Sujal.......hamara tent.........

Sujal: woh tum jano aur tumhari team.........

Kashish: aap ghar to chale hum aapko nahi chodege......

Sujal: filhal tum apne tent ki fikar karo........

Neev: Dii.....maine suna hai yaha pe raat ko bahot machchar hote hai........agar aap apna tent nahi bandh payi to khule me sona padega aur phir machchar........

Prachi: bada aaya machchar marnewala..........khud hi sabse bada machchar hai.........aur tumhe kya lagta hai hum log ek tent nahi bandh sakte.........chaliye Bhabhi.........aaj inko bhi bata dete hai.........

Kavya: haa.......haa.......hum bhi dekh hi rahe hai.........kaisa tuta futa tent tum log bandhte ho.......

Sab log hasne lagte hai....

Anjali: ab yeh bandaro ki tarah hasna bandh karo kyunki.....muje bahot hi achchi tarah se tent bandhna aata hai kyunki main apne school ki scout team ki captain thi..........Girls follow me............

Sab ladkiyaan apna tent banane lagti hai........ladkiyan kuch pareshan si lag rahi thi kyunki ki tent kuch ban nahi raha tha aur dusri aur se ladke has rahe the........

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Sujal: Ayan......kabhi tumne bandar ko gulati marte dekha hai......

Ayan: nahi.....lekin kyun.........

Sujal: kyunki bandar chat khane ke bad bhi gulati marna bandh nahi karta......aur ab tumhari Mama ko dekho......

Ayan: waise Papa......Mama pichle ek ghante se tent bana rahi hai..........

Kashish: Papa ke bache.........tuje to main ghar chal ke dekhti hoon......bahot hasi aa rahi hai na tuje aur tere papa ko..........

Ayan: mama.........yeh main nahi Papa keh rahe hai........

Sujal: aye.....maine kuch nahi kaha Kashish......yeh muje marva raha hai......

Ayan: nahi Mama....sach me papa ne aapko bandar kaha.........

Kashish: Sujal.......

Sujal: Kashish tum bhi kya bacho ki baat man leti ho.........tum apna tent bandho..........andhera honewala hai........

Kashish: tent to banega.......

Aaska: Bua........tent banne ke baja bigadta ja raha hai........

Kashish: beta........shuru shuru me aisa hi hota hai..........bad me ban jata hai.........

Anjali: aur mere hote huye to yeh zaroor banega..........

Aashi: Mama.......main harna nahi chahti ladko se..........aapko pata hai na muje Bhaiyaa se jitne ki aadat hai......

AnjalI; beta.......tu kyun udas ho rahi hai.......jitenge to hum hi.....

Kavya: yeh dekho......jitne se pehle jitne ki khushi manane lage.......yeh rumaal lo.....kal sir chupane me kaam aayega............jab tum log har jaoge tab.....

Anjali: apna rumal apne pass rakho........kyunki jeet hamari hi hogi.......

Armaan: Papa kuch kahiye na.........jeet hamari hogi......

Neev: tere Neevuncle ke hote kuch ho sakta hai......jeet to hamari ho hogi..........aur hum log na apni party Ice-cream parlor me karenge.........

Ayan: sach Mamu........

Neev: vaada......

Prachi: aisa tum kya karnewale ho ki itna yakeen se keh rahe ho......

Neev: tum apna kaam karo..........hum jo bhi kare tumhe kya.......

Sab ladkiyaan kaam karne lagti hai jab finally tent ban jata hai.......

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Ab sab log raat ko so rahe the........

Ayan: papa.........Papa utho......

Sujal: kya hai......sone de na........

Ayan: papa.......ek kaam hai uthiye....

Sujal: bol kya hai.......

Ayan: yeh aapko jake ladkiyon ke tent me rakhna hai.......

Sujal: isme hai kya..........

Armaan: kuch nahi chachu........kuch kide makode hai.....aur ek bada sa frog hai.......

Sujal: kya.......

Armaan: chachu ple.........bahot maza aayega.......

Sujal; main nahi Neev se kaho........

Ayan: mamu ko jagaya tha lekin woh nahi uth rahe.........

Sujal: chal uthate hai.......

Sujal: bhaiyaa.......uthiye.....

Kavya: kya hua........kya hua........

Sujal; bhaiyaa abhi tak kuch nahi hua......lekin bahot jald shor machnewala hai......

Kavya: kya.....

Sujal: kuch nahi......Neev.......uth.....abe yaha kya sone aaya hai.........

Neev: sone do na......ghar pe bhi Prachi aur Aarav chain se sone nahi dete.......

Sujal: uthta hai ki Prachi ko bulau......

Neev: nahi.........use mat bulana........main uthta hoon..........ab bolo kya hai aadhi raat ko........

Ayan: Mamu.......aapko yeh bag ladkiyon ke tent me rakh ke aana hai......

Neev: main kyun jau.........tuje bada shokh hai to tu hi jake rakh aa.........

Armaan: hum nahi ja sakte..........agar Mama ko pata lagega to bahot maregi.....

kavya: aisa kya hai......

Armaan: kuch nahi papa...........kuch kide hai.....kuch makode hai.......ek bada sa frog hai aur do char chipkaliyaan.......

Kavya: kya........yeh sab kaha se mila........

Armaan: yahi bahar se........

Neev: kya bache hai........mujse bhi shaitaan........bahot khub mere bacho..........

Neev jake woh beg ladkiyon ke tent me rakh deta hai..........aur sab log tent ke bahar beth ke Ladkiyon ke tamashe ka intzaar kar rahe hote hai.....

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Kashish: Aahhhhhhhhhh.............Bhabhi.....woh chipkali...........

Prachi: Bhabhi.....yeh kide kaha se aaye........

Aashi: mama mere pair pe kide chad rahe hai.............mama...........

AnjalI: bahar niklo sab..........

sab log chilate huye bahar aate hai jab woh log dekhte hai to sabhi ladke Kan me ungli dal ke has rahe hote hai..........sabhi ladkiyon ki dimag ugal raha tha...........

Kashish: yeh kisne kiya..........kaun laya tha yeh sab........Ayan......

Ayan: main nahi.........papa..........

Kashish: Sujal........tumne......

Sujal: main nahi ...........Neev......

Prachi: neev.........aaj main tumhe nahi chodungi.......

Neev: maine kuch nahi kiya.........yeh sab Kavyabhaiyaa ki chal thi......

Anjali: kavya.......tum bache ho.......aise harkat bache karte hai......

Kavya: sahi kaha........maine nahi yeh Armaan ne kiya hai........

Armaan: mama........Papa jooth bol rahe hai........yeh sab Ayan ka idea tha......

kashish: ab aap logo me se sach batayega kisne kiya.........

Sab log ek dusre ki aur ungli karte hai.........

Anjali: Kashish.........jane de....yeh sab mile huye hai.....yeh sab milke yeh sazis kar rahe hai..........ab aap log us tent me soyenge.........hum log aaj aap ke tent me soyenge samje.........chalo ladkiyaan.....

sab ladkiyaan ladko ke tent me jake so jati hai..........

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Sujal; Ayan........tera idea teri tarah sadu hai..........ab dekha hume hi aadhi raat ko apne tent se bahar fek diya......

Ayan: to aap mama ke samne chup kyun the......

Sujal: woh main to........main to......

Ayan: aap mama se darte ho......

Sujal: main kisi se darta nahi..........ab chal saaf kar...........

Neev: Sujaljiju..........kal ki game ke bare me kuch socha hai...kaise hum jitenge.......

Sujal: maine sab soch liya hai......jeet hamari hi hogi...........

Kavya: waise kal game kya hai......

Sujal: woh aap sab ko subaah hi pata chalegi.........

Kavya: Armaan.........sab kuch bahar fek diya.......

Armaan: haa.....papa......

Sujal: ayan chalo.......so jao.......subaah bahot kaam karna hai............

Sab log so jate hai.............

Edited by goodkashish - 17 years ago