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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: dmgfan19

that was amazing rida...the way you describe their emotions n temptations is just fantastic..dis part was worth all the wait..dying to read the next one..plz update fast n plz plz pm me

Thank you so much!😳😳.....glad this part was worth the wait😃...Will update soon😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: armaanaddict

amazing update!!!!! wow!!! i felt goose bumps all over me..!! precap sounds soooo awesome!!! they're staying together... wow!!!

Thankoo so much😳😳....it makes me so happy when readers can feel the emotions...it shows my scope as a writer somewhere😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: meow23

ABSOLUTE FANATASTIC... SINCE U GIVEN HALF D PRT I'M WAITNG EAGERLY 4 NXT PRT NO MORE DELAYZ..... D CHEMISTRY BTWN AR ROCKED N IT WAS AMZNG..... OMG N DAT VICKY... HOPE HE GOES SUMWHERE GUD HE DIDN'T C D DANCE...... D PRT WAS WRTH D DELAY BT LUVD IT..... D EMOTINS WHICH U XPRESSED..... GR88888888 JOBB!!!!! THNXX 4 D PM... UPDATE SOONN 👏

Thankoo so much for liking it!!😳😳 Glad that you felt all these emotions and chemistry😃😳...Will update soon!😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Richa1234

Rida Rida....I am so glad to see this ff back to its normal pace. I was actually wondering what happened to you since you hadn't updated for quite a while. Hope your finals went well. So, its party time now eh? he he

Richu Richuuu😆😆....hehe yep, it's finally back to it's normal pace😆😳...The finals were okay. Hopefully, everything will turn out right!😳....Thanks for asking🤗

Coming to the part, I was Ecstatic reading it. Every action, every emotion, every dialogue was perfect here. Armaan's excessive passion for Riddhima was displayed brilliantly. I think I have already mentioned this to you earlier that in your ff, Armaan is very passionate about what he does (well, till now his passion has been shown more related to love, but I am sure he is as passionate about his work too). And, that's the characteristic that makes him different from DMG's Armaan. And, the most important thing is that I like this Armaan more than dmg one because of this particular trait. 😉

From what I get from this long paragraph is that you love the passionate side of Armaan.😆😳😉....I want to give certain qualities to this Armaan and I hope you guys accept them.😳
My favorite pick was but ofcourse the dancing sequence. And, one specific dialogue of his that showed his nature perfectly was.....

"You look beautiful, Ridhima."

"Thank you."

"Don't say that," he hissed angrily. "I'm not passing some idle comments. This is different. It's from me. Just feel it."


This one was full of jealousy, passion, and manliness (so very typical of zealous guys). Would love to ask him out someday. 😆

Even mine too😳😳

Everything was plausible which made the characters and the situations so very natural. Absolutely stunning update.

Thankoo so much Richuu😃😳😳

Thanks for the pm hon. Hoping to read more from you soon.

Love you tons
Richa




Love you too rich...will update it soon and let you know😳😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: zgerl

wow great update seriously was waiting 4 u to update on ur next part loved ur story very different..what i expect to happen in normal filmy movies does not happen in ur FF.thats what i like ...oh gosh reading the precap already can;t wait and it seems armaan is not gonna leave his lady love ...hes is determined to make her his thats for sure... 😉 😊
zaf

That's what everyone keeps telling me from the start...that it's so not filmy😆😆...I don't know if that's good or bad😆😆

Armaan can never leave his lady, can he??😉...Will update soon jaan😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
wow i was waiting for so long for an update!! and babe it was SHORT 😡 😆 ....*sigh* but worth it...love Armaans aggression for his new found love.

Cant wait to see what happens since u posted the promo...

Love Kat 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jia..

Wow Rida, firstly am thrilled to see you back again. was wondering wer u had disappeared!! trust me am so very glad to have back with this ff back on track.

Hehe...thankoo so much for caring. I got so many pm's asking me if I was okay and where I was??😆😆

Coming the part!!!OMG wat can i say??? Never have i read emotions described with such finesse!! Ridz turmoil was wonderfully portrayed and Armaan..............well well wat can say about him????? His passion, his feelings surely gave me goosebumps!! wondering how Ridz is putting up a fite with herself!!

Thankoo jia😳😳...glad that yoy could feel all the emotions😃


"You look beautiful, Ridhima."

"Thank you."

"Don't say that," he hissed angrily. "I'm not passing some idle comments. This is different. It's from me. Just feel it."

Just cudnt help quoting this.....how on earth do u do this is a question mark Rida?? i mean its simply......outta the world!!

My favorite one too😳😳

another fabulous one.....

"Ridhima..." he said softly. "We just can't run away from each other anymore. Do you think you could escape me or my questions for the next two months?"

"We could be friends Armaan," she said quietly.

"With temptations like thede?" he asked seriously. "We both know what were feeling right now. Hell, if we weren't in such a public view, we would have been doing things more than dancing. Please stop denying it." he said."

OMG girl u surely have some magic in those hands of urs. Such killer lines!!

I love the straight-forwardness of this line😳😳


OMG u better continue it soon as u have made me very very desperate now!! specially with precap!! And a suggestion.....cant vivek just vanish???😆

I have got that suggestion a million times now😆😆

will be eagerly waiting Rida! hope ur exams went well!!

Love
Jia

They did jia....thanx for asking!😳😳....And thankoo for such a detailed comment!😳😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mar-

wooow grt part reallllly goood pls continue sooooon

Thankoo...will continue soon!😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
WOW!!!! And pre-cap's more interesting!!! Room mates???? This is going to be fun!!! Update soon!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
yayyyyy you finally updated...have been waiting soooo long!!! but its ok hun, dont worry about that 😊

awesome part n the precap sounds even more interesting 😛

n yayyy next part by this week only...woo hoo!!!

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