FF: 'Under The Shade Of Love':Part 8-7/5

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@-Facetious-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#21

HEY....
very nice ff......gr8 going......cont sooooooooooon....

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123abc123

@123abc123

Rocker

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Posted: 17 years ago

#22

wooow
luved it
really nce
defintly nt filmy at all
gd job
updte soon plzzz 👏

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Rida Fareed

@qazplm

Sparkler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#23

Thankoo for liking it guys!! 😃

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prerna

@prernawaghray

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#24

hey rida
just caught up with the whole ff n just loved the whole concept of them meeting at the fair 👏 👏 👏 it was wonderfully written by u n every emotion was conveyed by ur words brilliantly plz do cont. n when u update plz do pm me waitng for the next part 👏

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Rubina Baig

@sournsweet

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#25

LUVED IT!!!...GR8 GOING...keep writing...vat do u ko aybe d creatives cud make a li'l use of it...

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Mariam

@Naina123

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#26

*Reserved*

Rida im soo sorry but will comment on it later.. just have to rush somewhere!!!!

But will jus leave an emoticon as an expression of what i want think of this part!!!
👏

*Edited*

Im back with my comments finally... 😆 😆
Sorry for making you wait sooooo long...

I dont have words to describe the way u write... i loved their interaction... tooo good!!

I can actually imagine the whole scene... them walking in the fair!!! Im truly in awe with the way u write!!

I really cant wait to read more...

Luv
Nainu
xxx

Ps: I not only love ur writing.. but i also love ur name.. u have a lovely name!! (If u dont mind me asking What does it mean??? 😉 )

Edited by Naina123 - 17 years ago

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harika

@-harika-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#27

this is the first ff i m reading...well for many days i dint understand wat ff means, coz i was new..but this is truly amazing..if i m right u r trying to setup a sophisticated ambience n characters..good going!! will be waiting for ur next part.. 👏 👏 👏

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Kanchan

@kdrs

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#28

Hey, It was too cute. Plzzz continue soon, I'm liking it.

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aisha

@angelaisha

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#29

hey rida,

awesome part, esp how Armaan is soo into her since the moment he saw her, i like how your being humorous, didnt think u could pull it off other than the sarcatic comments! 😆

P.S.: you forgot to introduce names (Duhhh) J/K 😆 😳 continue soon 👏 👏 👏 This part was definitly less than 2 weeks...i like it!! 👏