meri kahani,my FF,updated.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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let me take u all to a place called aryanagar,where my story starts .this is a fine morning,sun is about to rise birds & breeze r playing a wonderfull morning song.

a cold breeze reaches through the window to a charming rajkumar fast asleep.his eyes open to the melodius morning songs,he reaches the window & feels the fresh morning.

suddenly he hears "veer.......veer still not ready,come on hurry up" he is rajkumar dhram. veer replies "yes dharam,just be ready in a sec".

these are rajkumar dhram & veer.

intelligent,smart,charming but only one problem as people of aryanagar say "pata nahi ye dharam veer kab sudhrenge,aryanagar ka bhavishya inke hato me hai,bhagwan aryanagar ko bacha lena.

chapter 2

the arya family consist of the maharaj aryavardhan,wife chandramukhi &thier sons dharam & veer.also aryavardhans younger bro jayavardhan,wife anugamini & daughter rashmi(nickname -rashi,on rashi di's request).

everyone was on dinning table waiting for dv.they were running as fast as they could,suddenly calmed,tried to control breath near to dinning hall.

" come come sit,we hv been waiting for u'll,where were u;ll?" questioned maharaj."sorry pitaji had some important work" said dharam. "ok,lets start" said jayavardhan."pitaji,why did u called us early today?" questioned veer. "the thing is beta,we hv to go to kalanagar tommorrow for wedding of daughter of maharaj kishan" said chandramukhi.

after the lunch,dharam,veer & rashmi were sitting in common hall & talking with each other.rashi said "u know i bought a new dress for the wedding" "ya...ya,toh nacho?" said dharam.what dv "i dont get why u dont like weddings,we'll meet friends,relatives &......" "& on &on,pls stop the story now"interrupted veer.

"u do whatever u wanna do ,i'm gonna njoy & u know there's gonna b a rajvidya competition there"said rashi."rajvidya competition!" xclaimed dharam & veer.

"yep"said rashi"rajvidya competiton where all the rajkumars will participate to prove thier wit,intelligence & power to b best from the rest.pata nahi tum dono ka kya hoga,tum log to waha jakar wahi karoge jo tum bahut acche se karte ho"."woh kya?" asked dhram & veer."kuch bhi nahi!"said rashi.

so this is the second chapter,hope u'll like it,so b ready for the next part,rajvidya competition,what's gonna happen.will dv prove thier will or prove that they are dv-kabhi nahi sudhrenge!😊 pls do comment.

so name for story should it b 'dharam veer 'or'talwar aur dhal' or something else.

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Poonamjayaswal thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lovely!!!!!!!!! 😛 plz continue!!!!!!!!!!! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Poonamjayaswal

lovely!!!!!!!!! 😛 plz continue!!!!!!!!!!! 😊

thanks.😊

please suggest me name for story.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: pragy

thanks.😊

please suggest me name for story.

I think it should be Dharam Veer.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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very cute beginning... 😃 👏
do continue.. i wud love to see how u move this story forward... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: kunataanya

very cute beginning... 😃 👏
do continue.. i wud love to see how u move this story forward... 😊

will continue soon.i promise to make it as good as possible.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: pragy

will continue soon.i promise to make it as good as possible.

Ya!!!!!!all the best to u!!!!!!!!!!👍🏼

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Posted: 17 years ago
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WOW! 😳 Sledid start! 😳

Simple...yet beutifull strtin! 😳

Name...ahem!!..lemme think!!....

Mohabath of Two Brother's 😆 😆

Hey..itss good!...get going!!.... 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: minz~12

WOW! 😳 Sledid start! 😳

Simple...yet beutifull strtin! 😳

Name...ahem!!..lemme think!!....

Mohabath of Two Brother's 😆 😆

Hey..itss good!...get going!!.... 😃

😆😆😆really minx... 😆

how about..

do tan hai par ek hi jaan hai...

or

talwar aur dhal...

sorry i know they are not original.. 😕

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Talwar or Dhal!!..yes..tatss perfect!!!.... 😛 Kukrookoo m for this title!!... 😆

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