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Posted: 17 years ago
I feel like a doctor now!

Telling her patient,
Ab Tumhari dawai ka time ho gaya
Chalo moo kholo

Tum log apna dil kholo aur comments do,ok?

Dr.Hina is ready with the injection of questions ,here it comes,anken band nahi khol ke dekho

LOLOLOL!!!!!!!!!!
Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
😆 plzzz dr hina...we are dyin for our daily dose....jaldi do na 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
hina..

in wat vortex duz ur mind work yaar seriously

i never thought of this part tht armaan wud b sleepin in late..

from a romantic ff this is becumin a thriller...n im dieing to kno more..
so plzzzz give us more..

n a suggestion...how abt u make this ff an official one by submittin it to the media center..tht is if u wish..cuz this is goin great and it becum bigger n bigger mashallah
Edited by neha28 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Contd from Armaan's shocked waking up scene.....

Armaan beta aaj to tu nahi bachega
Riddhima tujhe kacha chaba jayegi
Uske khayalo tu me itna doob gaya ki time ka pata hi nahi chala,aur ab utha ? ,Damn!

He is talking to himself while getting ready

He says while wearing his shoes
Ab uski gaali khane ke liye tayyar hoja Armaan
Poore 2 ghante tak gaaliyo ki baarish karegi mujhpe
I hope baki sab hospital mujhse pehle na pohoch jaye

Plz God help me
Ab mai hospital ud ke to nahi jaa sakta na
Plz plz plz God help me get there before everyone else

and he's out of the door

He drives real fast and gets to the hospital

He sees Riddhima waiting for him at the hospital entrance

He quickly parks and runs to her

She goes Armaan tum kaha reh gaye they?
Tumne kaha tha na ki hum jaldi akar plan banayenge
Ab kya plan banega
Sab log abhi pohochtey hi hongey
Mai to bohot nervous ho rahi hoo Armaan

She is taking to him while walking towards the lift

She says,mai to bohot confused hoo ki mai sabke sawalo ko kaise handle karoongi

Dr.Keerti
Dr.Shubhankar
Rahul
Muskaan
Atul
Anjali di
aur lovely ji
In sab ke baare me mujhe soch soch ke bohot dar lag raha hai Armaan!
and she holds his arms in a worried state while getting into the lift

He goes Riddhima ye kya kar rahi ho
Mera hath chodo ,koi dekh lega to shak nahi karne wale bhi karengey
She quickly leaves his hand

He then goes ,
Kisne kaha tha bhang peeke itna mast honey ko?
Aur waise bhi tumne to koi bhang pi hi nahi thi
phir itna kyu paagal hue jaa rahi thi?
He says teasingly

She goes slownly wo Armaan,nana ne kaha tha aisa karne
He goes Nana!
Nana ko pata nahi kaise kaise ideas atey hai
Unki dawai badalni padegi
and they laugh at his cheesy joke

They come out of the lift and walk in a hurry to the Locker room

There is still no one there
They both say Thank God!
Abhi tak koi pohocha nahi
And they both sit on the bench to take a breather

He goes waise tumhe pata hai,while brushing her cheek with his hand
Mai late kyu hua?
She goes kyu?
Kyuki tum raat bhar mere sapne me aakar
mujhe sata ti rahi
Isliye mai itna kho gaya ki alarm ki awaz bhi nahi suni

She blushes and shys away

He goes
'Oye Hoye' !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

and then they hear Atul and Anjali faintly in the background

and Riddhima says Oh no!
Di aur Atul aa rahe hai Armaan!


Ha mujhe bhi sunayi de rahi hai unki awaz he says nodding his head in a panic

Atul and Anjali as usual are quarelling over some stupid thing and their voice is heard more closer now

Armaan gets up and quickly goes to the changing room and hides behind the curtain and makes a weird face while chewing onto the curtain

Riddhima gets all nervous and stands up to go to her locker
and looks at Armaan and gives a panic,worried look

Atul and Anjali walk into the locker room and see Ridz standing there with her face dug in her locker

They both go Ridz?

Riddhima goes oh no,they are here
ab to meri khair nahi!

and turns with a forced smile and a
funny eh he he !face
not knowing what to say

Armaan sees her funny expression and giggles...........
and goes basket ki to vaat lag gayi yaar!


Hope u all liked this part
Plz do comment and let me know if u liked it
Aur hum bohot sare replies ke baad milengey
See ya!


Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
bsket ki vaat lag gayi 🤣 n the funny face i can literally imagine his face 🤣
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Posted: 17 years ago
awsome part yaar.poor riddz.
i just read ur ff and loved it.its awesome.i hope yeh asli dmg mein bhi hota.kaash director tumhara ff padhle
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Posted: 17 years ago
awsume part..it was relly relly amazinnn!!! 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
Anybody home?

Ya tum log bhi AR ke dreams me magn hoke so gaye?

Yaar reply to karo agar padh liya update to!

Waise acha tha na?
Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey i have been silent reader and iam loving this awesome update lol 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjana shah

hey i have been silent reader and iam loving this awesome update lol 😊

Thanks silent reader,

akhir mere FF ne tumhe majboor kar diya

ke tum reply karo!

Thanks and keep replying

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