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Posted: 17 years ago
Heyaa...i just read ure entire fic....n lemme tell u i loved it....n more than the fic...i loved the way u write it... 👏 aise lagta hai...jaise dmg ki dialogue writer ne likha hai...i mean armi's dialogues imaginations....everythin soo natural....truly truly truly loved it frm the bottom of my heartttt.....aur haan apne boss ko dmg ke baare mein mat batana kyunki agar usne dekhna shuru kar diya ....toh AR ke jhagde ki wajah se uska bhi temper high ho jayega...hehehehe act safe...don tel him anything aur agar woh tumse gussa ho jaye...toh ek funny sa scene dkha dena...dmg ka 😆 tooo goood 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Veiledbeauty

^^^ Hehehe, the clap looks funny 😳 😆 😆

Ufff... main yaha besabri se intezaar kar rai hoon!!!!

Besabri! wow thats a heavy word,I can understand how desperate u are!

I am just waiting for my boss to go for lunch,phir mai type karna shuru karoongi na,itni awaz banata hai mera keyboard aur excitement me mai itni zor se type karti hoo na!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: komalsirwani

Heyaa...i just read ure entire fic....n lemme tell u i loved it....n more than the fic...i loved the way u write it... 👏 aise lagta hai...jaise dmg ki dialogue writer ne likha hai...i mean armi's dialogues imaginations....everythin soo natural....truly truly truly loved it frm the bottom of my heartttt.....aur haan apne boss ko dmg ke baare mein mat batana kyunki agar usne dekhna shuru kar diya ....toh AR ke jhagde ki wajah se uska bhi temper high ho jayega...hehehehe act safe...don tel him anything aur agar woh tumse gussa ho jaye...toh ek funny sa scene dkha dena...dmg ka 😆 tooo goood 👏 👏 👏

Great idea yaar,us gorey ko kya samjhne wala hai?

Lekin funny scene dekh ke has to lega atleast ha ha ha LOLOLOL!

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Posted: 17 years ago
@hina...hehehe true...hans lega...heheheh phir shayad daante bhi na... 😉
acha waise plzzz cont soon...hum sab besabri se intezaar kar rahe hai 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
😆^^^ Hehehe, the clap looks funny 😳 😆 😆

😆😆😆rryt!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: hinanaziri

Besabri! wow thats a heavy word,I can understand how desperate u are!

I am just waiting for my boss to go for lunch,phir mai type karna shuru karoongi na,itni awaz banata hai mera keyboard aur excitement me mai itni zor se type karti hoo na!



😆😆😆 Boss jiiii, jaldi jauuu mote hone ke liye 😛

Its probably like... 12 there, right??
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Posted: 17 years ago
Ha na!
mai bhi bekaraar hoo tum logo se apni feelings share karne ko
bas ab itna hi keh sakti hoo
Bekarari me bhi aye Qaraar!
Kya yehi hota hai Dmg ka pyar?
ya mere FF ka pyar?

LOL!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Yipeee!
Mera boss gaya!
Great ok guys I am starting now,I hope I don't delete anything accidently,I'll make sure I save everything I write before it vanishes!

I am so excited,here it comes
in about half hour though!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: hinanaziri

Yipeee!
Mera boss gaya!
Great ok guys I am starting now,I hope I don't delete anything accidently,I'll make sure I save everything I write before it vanishes!

I am so excited,here it comes
in about half hour though!


wow yaar thnk god ur boss hv gone now ur freely 2 cont
cont sooooooooon wth ur romantic prts.....waitng........
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Posted: 17 years ago
Ok the yummy paratha eating time now!
Chalo bacho,wash your hands and join us!.........

Armaan is constantly staring at Riddhima,
She is so engrossed in making the parathas that she does not bother with Armaan staring at her with his eyes glued to Riddhima's face,but after she's done she says

Armaan ye tum mujhe aise ghoor kyu rahe ho?

He's embarrased and looks away and says mai tumhe ghoor?
U wish PHHhew!

She goes Armaan tum mujhe abhi apni badi badi ankho se ghoor rahe they!

He says
Riddhima I know u love my eyes,thanks for the compliment! to change the topic of the stare

She goes Armaan mai na bohot thak gayi hoo tumahri ye khud ki taarif sunke!

Armaan says madam basket !,ye taarif mai nahi sari ladkiya karti hai!

I have that effect on girls u see,
that they can't forget me ever

Mujhe ek baar dekh liya to bhula nahi pati koi ladki!
and starts smiling annoyingly at Riddhima

Riddhima gets irritated and says chodo !
Tumse argue karna bekar hai!

He goes maine kaha na basket,ab tumhe bohot smart banna hoga
Tumhe meri shararat ka moo tod jawab dena padega!
Waise thats next to impossible but no harm in trying!
nai?

She gets more annoyed and says huh! Armman tum na!

He goes Riddhima tum na!

She gives up and gets the paratha to the table and says to Armaan,baitho and ye lo!

aur batao kaisa bana hai?


He goes ab great chef Dr. basket ne banaya hai to acha hi hoga shayad!

She says really?

He goes hmm,taste karta hoo!


Riddhima is very eager to know if Armaan liked the taste and is waiting for his reply

He breaks a tiny bit of paratha and takes it towards his mouth and stops

She goes jaldi khao aur batao!

Without saying anything Armaan takes his hand to Riddhima's mouth and tries to feed her first
and says tum pehle khao!

Riddhima gets all emotional with his gesture

she breaks another piece of the paratha and says

ye lo!tum bhi khao!

Armaan and Riddhima both get teary and think of the the time when Riddhima fed Armaan,at the time of Minnie's illness and both feed each other!!!!!


Then go into a starelock again for 5 mins

Both feel so loved and cared and then Armaan goes
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

She goes kya hua Armaan?

he goes paani do paani,

Itna teekha banaya hai paratha,
He drinks a whole glass full of water then says

Hmm,irada kya hai tumhara Riddhima?
Mujhe pata hai tumhari zabaan tikhi hai lekin ab paratha bhi?

She didn't like what he said about the tikhi zabaan and looks away and pours more water for him in the glass

He realises he hurt her with what he said and then goes back to being funny and says

Basket yaar joke kar raha hoo!
I was only kidding!
Bohot yummy hai paratha, like U!he says in a naughty way!

She shys away and blushes and goes tum bhi na Armaan,
dara diya mujhe,acha chalo ab nashta finish karo!


They both finsih their food now and start clearing the table

Armaan helps Riddhima wash up and says

Thank u basket for a lovely breakfast!

She says Armaan I am glad u liked it

they both smile and look at each other to thank

She goes Armaan thank u to mujhe bolna chahiye tumko

He goes kyu mujhe kyu?

She says kyuki tumne mujhe ek aur mauka diya na isliye!

He goes basket ,mai nahi chahta ke hum wohi baatein repeat karke apne aap ko hurt karein

Bas ab ye tum pe hai ki tum mere pyar ko pehchano
aur jaisa maine pehle bhi kaha hai

Only committ when u feel happy and strong enough to go ahead with this relationship

I don't want to lose u again Riddhima

U mean the world to me

And all I want is your happiness

and I only wish our bond to grow stronger with each passing day and then we take this forward from there

Both are relieved and satisfied and are thinking about the good times ahead in anticipation

and the door bangs open!

The Gupta's are back from Lonavla and Angie goes Ridzie tum kaha ho?

Nani goes Riddhi beta ,kaha hai meri bachi?

Shashank goes araam kar rahi hogi apne room me, calm down

They are walking in and Armaan and Riddhima come out of the kitchen bit and say
Hum yahaa hai!
in a very content way!


Now the family reunion part!
If U all want me to!
and also we have to find out about how everyone at Sanjeevani took Riddhima's drunken madness session
and we need to console Muskaan's aching heart too!
Rahul kaha gaya?


Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago

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