Kismat Ka Karishma( new ff)*pt 8 pg 38* - Page 8

Originally posted by: Natalienaz

wow Muskaan and Sakshi
lovely start
i loved the intro and wow we have rohan kiddo
i like the concept a lot
Armaan is chachu so sweet
chalo i will read the update when in school 😆 😆 😆
LOve u loadz
NAtty

thanx natty for these wonderfull comments!!!!!!!!!
I really like the kid he is very sweet na!!!!!!!!!!

we r trying r best n most probaly update next part by tommorrow!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: yamnovbloom

i think the characters sumwhat match to vivaah charcters but in whole good story and attempt continue soon. 😳

thanx a lot we'll continue as soon as possible!!!!!!!!!

loved it. it was great. please continue soon

Thank you very much eevryone for your lovely comments we really appreciate them and we hope we can continue to please you 😳
Silent readers please comment all feedback is welcome 😃

GUYS ILL UPDATE NEW PART IN HLF N HOUR IF THEIR IS POWER SHEDDING & I CAN DO THEN IM REALLY SORRY!!!!!!!!!!

😳 PART - 2 😳
PRECAP:Introduction of everyone!!!
K(keerti),ar(armaan),s(shubhankar),m(muski),r(ridz),a(angi)& amp; amp; amp; sh(shashank),ra(rahul)

K:Armaan(no reply)
aramaan(again no reply)Armaan jaldi karo hum late ho rahe hai hume rohan ko skool choodna hai(but no reply). (now she was agitated) armaan tum niche aate ho ya mein upar aao.(now decides to go to his room)
AS she entered the room she was shcked to see it:
poora kamra bikhra hua tha, socka kahi, aur joothe bed ke niche, aadhe kapde bed paar aur adhe zameen par & armaan was entangeled in it!!! 😆
K:YEh saab kya hai armaan???????? tum bache ho kya. itna ganda kaamra toh rohan ka bhi nahi hota.

A:woh...woh bhabhi, mein select nahi kar paa rah tha kya pehno .(in tensed tone)(he saw the nager on her face

A:acha meri pyaari bhabhi mujhe maaf kar do plzz(making a puppy face )& he caught her in his arms n swayed around

K:(hit him playfully)chaod baadmaash niche uthar jaldi se

A:pehle bolo apne mujhe maaf kiya

K:haan baaba maaf kiya aab niche uttar (ar placed her on floor)

K:kya karo mein is ghar ka ek taraf yeh hai aur doosri taraf iske bhaiya. uff........mera bacha bigaad jayega inki sangati mein.

K:aab toh ek hi insaan sudhar sakta hai inhe !

A:aur woh kaun bhabhi(selecting his clothes)

K:meri dewrani(holding his ears n teasing him)

A:bhabhi....

K: acha chal aab jaldi se tayar hokar niche aa ja breakfast karne

AT RIDZ PLACE:

angali was waiting outside the bathroom waiting for her di to come

A:di jaldi bahr aao, sara din andar rahe ka irada hai kya.

R:(from inside the bathroom)aa rahe hoon bab bas 2 min

after 2min she came out. ridz was looking gorgeous

Her hair were open, she was wearing maroonish colour suit, she was wearing bangels in one hand & was wearing payal in feet aur woh soni joti toh mashallah. bilkul pari laag rahi thi.

R:aab chale warna late ho jayege

AN:haan di chalo.

AR,SH,K&ROHAN were sitting in the car and shub was driving!

They dropped rohan at his skool

K:rohan no saytani in skool, ache se parayi karna n maama will come to pic u up!!!!!(sh & k kised him n wished him all the best for test). armi to wished him n kissed.

R:thanx ma& pa n chachu best of luck to u !!!!

now they dropped armaan at his collage

K&SH:all the best armaan haame pata ha tumhara addmission sanjeevani mein ho jayega

AR:Thanx bro n bhabhi

armi goes inside the collage & meets his friends who were busy chatting

hey dude kaise ho(one of his friends asked)

AR:theek hoon sameer tu bata kaisa hai???????

S:baas theek hi hoon tujhe lagta hai tera addmission ho payega sanjeevani mein.

AR:dont know lets see!!!

RESULTS WERE OUT:

Armaan Malik has scored the highest marks & has been selected as intern in sanjeevani

P:Here is your letter n congratulations!!!!!u hav to join sanjeevani next month!!!!!!

AR: thank u sir

ON THE OTHER HAND OF STORY:

ridz n angi reach the collage n they were late.

R:aab hum mare

A:saab tumhari wajha se hua hai di

R:angi baad mein ladlena abhi chalo (they ran fast)

ridz duppta got stuck on the enterance

A: aab jaldi cahlo n di

R:mera duppata atack gaya hai n trys to take it out.

A:uff......roko mein nikalti hoon (she takes it out)&says ab chalo

Professer is abt to aanounce

"And the student who is selected for sanjeevani with full scholarship is....."

RIDZ N ANGI TOGETHER:may we come in sir

P:(ittle angry)late kyon ho gaye

Ridz try to say something but angi hold her hand n says

A:woh sir auto nahi mill raha tha

P:acha chalo aab ander aao

Aur woh naam hai"Miss ridhima gupta"

P:handsover the letter, congrats her n tells she has to join next month

angi is happy but at the moment sad to because her sister is going away

R:pagali!!!toh roh kyun rahi hai. hamesha ke liye thodi na ja rahi hoon ek saal baad tu bhi aa saksti hai

A:haan di par ill miss u!!!!!!11(n she hugs her tightly)

R: chal aab khushi-khushi ghar jate hai aur sabko yeh bat batate hai

AT SANJEEVANI:

K TO SH:yeh muskaan aur rahul ko kya ho gaya hai jo itni late ho gaye hai

S:mayebe traffic mein phaas gaye honge waise bhi woh aaj shaddi ke 2 hafte baad join kar rahe hai toh just realx!!!!
K:par shubhanker phir bahi

AS she said this a beautiful couple came holding each others hand.

Keerti n Shubhanker were shocked to se muskaan

aisa kya hua ki woh shock ho gaye??????wait for next update n kep guessing!!!!!!

plzzzzzzzzz comment!!!!!specially silent readers ur comments matters us!

great part do countinue do pm me when posted

Originally posted by: dmg-gurl

great part do countinue do pm me when posted

thx a lot for your comments we will surely pm you 😃

Guys we really need your comments the part b will be updated later on this evening. 😃

Originally posted by: dmg-gurl

beautiful 👏 👏 luved it.

THANX DEAR!!!!