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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey, Thanks for the Pm, The first part was fantastic, awesome , gr8. I can't get any words for it. Update soon Plzzzz. I'll be waiting.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey that was really great... cant wait to see wat happens next...

do continue soon..... its really great.... 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#73
heyy tia di,

WOW awesome concept ......
and da 1st part was mind blowing....toooo great....
different storry.....buh i'm egerly waiting 4 da next part.....i didnt want the parts to end...

plzzzzzz continu soon....
im so sorry i couldnt comment earlier as i was tooo busy to even come onlyn....buh thnx 4 da pm

luv ridz,
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 2

Ryan...."I've waited enough.....now no one can save u Mr.mittal....apni ulti ginti ginna shuru kar do..."...he added with vengeance....

The men standing there knew very well,that they weren't to interrupt the "great Ryan",,,while he was at work.....These men weren't the close confidantes of Ryan....they were simply recruited to carry out the masterplans,extortions...so that even if they died in the encounter...it wud be no loss either to him or to the world.....as for the cops...Ryan was damn confident they cud never reach him.....not wen his abbajaan was around.....

The men didn't know why they had been told to eliminate Mr.Mittal.....neuither cud they ask any questions....they were cruel-hearted or rather heartless...wid no pity for any one ,....nor a twinge of conscience....well,conscience was actually dead in them......

Ryan paced up and down the room waiting for his phone call...after weeks of planning,the final day...the day of execution had come......they cudn't go wrong anywhere...infact he wud make sure that every single person involved in the plan died...if by any chance it backfired...But Ryan didn't belive in chance,factor,luck or destiny...these were tottal crap to him...n according to him...these words alone cud fill a garbage-bin......ONLY POWER REIGNED...and the weak...worthless...had to be eliminated...he was just doing this noble work./......and as far as MR.MITTAL was concerned...his thoughts reeled back to the information that he got a few weeks before......
((im giving a background of ryan's D-company))

"D-Company is a criminal organization headed by mafioso Ryan and his aide John.. Other prominent members of the gang include Gary KIrsten,Mushtaq Sheikh,Chhota Shakeel, Tiger Memon and Bugsy Siegel... who is now under the custody of US police. It is closely linked to a range of organized criminal and terrorist activities in South Asia, especially in Mauritius, India, and the Persian Gulf region. Several members of the gang are on the "wanted list" of Interpol and Indian police. The reference to "company" in the name of the organization does not signify that it has a separate corporate identity.
There are a number of allegations against the organization, such as that it generates billions of US dollars from illegal business activities around the globe, especially in teh middle-east. The SAARC countries also believes that John Memon and his associates fund and support terrorist activities in their countries. D-Company is also alleged to run the largest underground business in South Asia. Its operations include arms dealings, drug trafficking, hawala, organized crime and funding of terrorist organizations.
The Korean govt..and Intelligence Bureau on contacted and requested by the Govt of SAARC nations....have extended the arrest warrent of these people to their country..but till now it has failed in keeping even a single track on them...But the day to day activities and certain eveidences has proved it to them...that the head of the company..wa currently in hiding in their country...where they didn't know....!!!!!
N this is where Mr.Mittal comes into picture...Being one of the biggest business-magnates of Korea....he had formed an association of businessmen with some of his business partners..who contributd hefty amounts and newer technology gadgets-from grneades,to (legally bought)armaments,lethal weapons(meant only for govt use)....to the govt donations fund...to carry out the encounters.....Lately it had proved to be a great danger and Ryan and his abbajaan had planned to ELIMINATE all of themm.....the first on the list was Mr.Mittal...

The shrill ring of his cell-phone cut thru the silent atmosphere.....
Ryan:-"abbajaan,aapke phone ka hi intezaar tha...."

John memon:-"Bete...first of all,im extremely proud of u....ur plan is one of the best i'hv seen in recent times....its foolproof and if executed well,.....we wud be targetting the nxt on list by tomorrow...."
Ryan explained to Memon all his plans and blueprints in a synopsis.....

Ryan:-"Murder unke ghar ke bahar hi hoga.....humare aadmi,bhes badal kar poore din wahi rahenge and mujhe continuous information milti rahegi..i won't be there...unless koi bahut major prob nahin aa jaati...Jaise hi Mittal apni car se utrega...and gates ke andar jaayega...he will be hit by a trauma -pod(these r actually devices that can be hit on a person's chest from a distance..without any sound and they caue immediate cardiac arrest)......n we'll wait for sumtime...agar reactions jaldi nahin hota ..then we'll throw the grenades...n then blast...bachne ka koi chance hi nhain hai.."

Memon:-"shabash....im proud of u...."

Ryan:-"lekin abbajaan,wt abt the rest of the family members...blast mein toh oh bhi khatm ho jaayenge..."
Memon:-"yeah....waise how many members in that family..."

Ryan:-"apne sources toh mujhe yahi pata chala hai..ki apart from the usual servants and staff..only three family members..mittal,his wife and daughter....mittal ki wife par mere ek aadmi ki nazar hai...she won't be back by night....and the daughter..well,i hvn't kept a track on her..only know ki woh college jaati hai...n usi time pe aayegi jab mittal aata hai.."

Memon:-"Hmmm,...toh aisa karo..KILL THE GIRL....aisi chchoti chchoti qurbaniya toh logon ko deni hi padti hai....Just get her killed and dispose the body urself later......and mittal ki body ko bhi thikhne laga dena....police ke haath kuch nahin lagna chahiye...."

Ryan:-"Jee abbu,i''ll see to it ki everyone's keilled....."

Memon:-"ALL THE BEST,betejaan.....My wishes r wid u.."

Ryan:-"Shukriya abbu"


PRECAP:-The house is in smokes....a home shattered....police sirens cud be heard..they r coming nearer to the house.....there's no moon in the sky....A girl shrieks hysterically...her voice piercing the night-sky.....a man comes....drags her...and pins her to a nearby wall..their eyes meet for the first time.... 😉


TO BE CONTINUED....
o,guys,i know This part isn't romantic and all...but u know the backdrop of my story....CUDN'T STRT wid Romane just at the 2nd episode...though im sure by the precap u must have got sum idea......NJOY reading...and plzzz bear wid this part...i had to show alll the actual mafia stuff also....BUT PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ POST UR COMMENTS.....


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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazing a master piece i cant wait for the next part
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76
hey tia
wow dats a kool concept yaar
armi gangster hmmmmmmmmmm..... interestin very interesting
😆
cant wait 2 read more update super soooooooooonnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru
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Posted: 17 years ago
#77
heyy tia di,...

yet again another master piece ..... how do u do this?
well i guess its just TIA'S TALENT!!! hehehe 😆 😆

hawwww.....dont kill the girl....poor ridhima.....buh i have 99% faith that armaan or so-called Ryan....will save her.....cant w8 4 part 3....
continu soon

luv ridz,
.x.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#78
tia thanks for the om,was really waiting for your update dear,MASHA-ALLAH this was not good,but FANTASTIC,MINDBLOWING,BRILLIANT,AWESOME..REALLY YOU BLOW ME OFF WITH THIS FANFIC OF YOURS... 👏 too good tia just brilliant,wow ryan/armaan very heartless, 😡 poor riddhima her perfect family is broken down by him..hope she teach him a lesson,so what if he;s a terrorist.. 😡 oh my god the precap is already kiling me yaar...plzzz continue soon...its just way too good..and wow the background of the D-company no one would be so concern to give such a detailed info about it..it seems you know a lot of guns dear... 😆 ..i did not know there are guns that cause cardia arrest,wow you really help me gain knowledge by reading your FF..
lots of love
Zafirah
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Posted: 17 years ago
#79
Tia's Talent 😆 😆 😆
WOW, aweeesomee part..
but I dnt understand why Ryan's calling his father..
abba jaan? or abbu jaan... 😕 😕 😕
Jaldi jaldi update karo, you're fast!!
Not slow like me 😆 😆 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: zgerl

tia thanks for the om,was really waiting for your update dear,MASHA-ALLAH this was not good,but FANTASTIC,MINDBLOWING,BRILLIANT,AWESOME..REALLY YOU BLOW ME OFF WITH THIS FANFIC OF YOURS... 👏 too good tia just brilliant,wow ryan/armaan very heartless, 😡 poor riddhima her perfect family is broken down by him..hope she teach him a lesson,so what if he;s a terrorist.. 😡 oh my god the precap is already kiling me yaar...plzzz continue soon...its just way too good..and wow the background of the D-company no one would be so concern to give such a detailed info about it..it seems you know a lot of guns dear... 😆 ..i did not know there are guns that cause cardia arrest,wow you really help me gain knowledge by reading your FF..
lots of love
Zafirah

thanx a lott dear...A BEAR HUG TO U FRM ME🤗really thanx ...u made by night(in india it's night)...by this lovely comment...n yeah i read abt "trauma-pods",...in one of the books and thought of putting it here....😊

luv u loads,

tia

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