RUSIM FF - Ek Duuje Ke Liyee *FINAL PART* - pg 14 - Page 7

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Ok Guys here is part 9...hope u like it...

Part 9

Recap: Ruhaan and Simran go to Goa…In Goa their love blooms again…Sandya chachi again plays a game…Inder notices and keeps an eye on her…Simran wants to have a child with Ruhaan…

Back in Mumbai a car stops at an unknown place at an old building. Out of the car steps Sandya Chachi and goes inside the building and looking back to check if she is not being followed. She has a briefcase with her and goes inside the builing with it. It is dark inside. She talks to a man and hands him the briefcase

Sandya Chachi: Ye lo, tumhare paise. Ab mujhe wo file do.

The man takes the briefcase from Sandya chachi and hands her the file.

Man: Working with you was a pleasure madam. Aapsa jaisa khatarnak khiladi to maine pehli baar dekha hain. Aur main jaanta hoon ke ies briefcase mein pure 25 lakh hain.

Sandya Chahi: Teekh hain teekh hain, bhaw kaane ki zaroorat nahi hai. You also did your work great. Ies file se mujhe pata laga ke wo Suhana ke batjie ka kya huwa. Ab tum jaa sakte hoo, aggar mujhe tumhari zaroorat para to main call karlunga..

Man: teekh hain madam. Main chalta hoon.

Sandya Chachi smiles and opens the file to read it. She reads it and is shocked and smiles her evil smile and thinks

Sandya Chachi: wah Suhana yeh to sirf tumhi karsakte ho, ab to tumhe ek visit main zaroor karungi. Simran ab mazaa aayega ies baar tum kuch nahi karpawogi, waise bhi tumhara memory to tumhara saat jor diya hain, ab main apni chaal chal ke phirse tumhe pasawongi..hahaha sandy…sandy is my name....

And she quickly goes away from the building.

Sandya chachi arrives at Oberoi mansion. She hides the file behind her pallu and walks inside and wants to go to her room. She meets Arpitha on her way.

Arpitha: arre chachiji. Where were you and where are you going in such a hurry?

Sandya chachi irritated thinking: ufff isko bhi abhi aana tha..

Sandya chachi: Kuch nahi arpitha, main apni room mein jaa rahi thi, wo main abhi beauty parlour se aa rahi hoon. Aur apni saheli ko call karne jaa rahi thi

Arpitha: Ok,

Sandya Chachi smiles fakely and hurries to her room. Inder watches all this from downstairs and thinks

Inder thinking: yeh choti sasuma bahut ajeeb se behave karrahi hain. Zaroor koi baat to hai.

And he quietly follows her and opens the door of her room a little bit so he can eardrop on her.

Sandya Chachi talking to herself while reading out of the file: Mujhe pata lagana parega yeh kaun hai jo Suhana ko us clinic se le kar gayi hain. Doctors ne to kaha tha ke Suhana paralyzed hogaya hai, and in this file its written that she can recover? patta nahin kya majara hain aur kiske saath mein wo gayi hain. Jab tak main yeh baat patta nahin karti, mujhe chain nahi aayega..

She then hides the file in her wardrobe and leaves. Inder heard all what Sandya Chachi mumbled. He quickly hides when Sandya chachi comes out of her room. Inder goes in her room when the coast is clear and searches for the file that Sandya chachi hid in her wardrobe. He finds it and reads it.

Inder to himself: O my god yeh to Suhana ki medical file hai. Par ye choti sasuma ke paas..?

And he reads something in the file and looks worried. He puts the file back where it was and exits the room. Just at that moment he sees Sandya Chachi leaving the house, he follows her in his car while Sandya Chachi goes with her car. Sandya Chachi did not notice that Inder is following her. At some moment they arrive at a point and they get stuck in traffic jam. Inder's car is behind several cars from Sandya Chachi's car and suddenly the traffic moves and Inder loses Sandya Chachi's Car. He steps out of his car but cannot see her car. He slams on top of the roof of the car.

Inder irritated: Damn…yeh traffic jam ko bhi abhi hona tha..par main patta laga ke rahunga ke iska plan kya hain.

Sandya Chachi's car stops at some unknown place at some big mansion almost outside the city. She steps out of the car and rings the doorbell. A man wearing a brown kurta and white dhoti opens the door.

Man: Namasteji
Sandya Chachi: Namaste. Kya ye mrs. B. Roy ka ghar hai.

Man: Haa ye hamari malkin Royji ki ghar hain..Aap kaun?

Sandya Chachi: Kya main unse mil sakti hoon?

From behind a woman says

Woman: Kaun hai mohan?

Mohan: Malkin koi madam aaya hai..

The woman comes to the door.

Woman: Hello, aap kaun. I don't think we have met? Why do you want to meet me?

Sandya Chachi: Hi my name is Sandy, aur main aapse milna chahti thi actually mujhe Suhana se milna hai.

Mrs Roy is stunned after hearing the name Suhana and pretends she doesn't know any Suhana

Mrs. Roy: Su…Suhana..main.. main kisi Suhana ko nahi jaanti hoon? Shayad aap wrong address pe aayi hai. Yahaan koi Suhana nahi rehti hain..

And she tries to close the door but Sandya Chachi blocks the door and zabardasti goes inside.

Mrs.Roy: Yeh aap kya karrahi hain, I told you I don't know any Suhana.

Sandya Chachi: Look you don't have to play games with me. I saw your name mentioned in her medical file. You brought her from the clinic. Par inta to main jaanti hoon Suhana ka koi nahi tha aur aap uske family nahin hai. Apne patti Akaash ko to usne khud mardiya tha. Aap please mujhse natak karna bankardijiye. So please tell me who are you and what do you want with Suhana?

Mrs Roy knowing that she can't hide the truth anymore..

Mrs Roy: Ok..main aapse batawongi ke main kaun hoon, but who are you, and how do you know Suhana?
Sandya Chachi smiles. Mrs Roy invites Sandya Chachi inside as she had no other option and Sandya Chachi goes inside with her.

Back in Goa Ruhaan (wearing a white shirt with blue jeans looking mind blowing) and Simran (in a soft pink salwar kameez with silver embroidery) are at the beach. They are sitting on the beach in each other's arms, holding each other just enjoying the beautiful moment.

Simran: It's is so beautiful here na Ruhaan..

Ruhaan: Beautiful here? Achha, Mujhe to dekne ka mauka hi nahi mila, arre baba tum itna gorgeous ho ke tumhare siwa mujhe kuch dikhta hi nahi..aapke chehre se meri nazar hatta nahin to main bhala nazare kaise dekhoon.

Simran smiles and looks at him with love in her eyes..

Simran in a sweet voice: wah janaab aap to dheere dheere shayar ban rahe ho

Ruhaan smiles: yeh sab tumhara pyaar ke nashe ka kamaal hai, main kya karoon Simi jabse dekha maine tujhko, mujhko shayari bhi aagayi.

Simran smiles and sweetly gives Ruhaan a cute kiss on his cheek.

Simran: yeh ek choti si inaam aapke beautiful sher ke liye

And they both smile and gaze into each others eyes and they hug. Suddenly a girl call out Ruhaans name..

Girl: Ruhhaaan??? Tum yahaan.

Ruhaan and Simran stand up surprised and looks at the girl who called Ruhaan especially Simran is surprised and holds Ruhaans hands tightly…

Ruhaan smiles at the girl: Arre tum? How nice to see you again. Kaise ho…?

And he gives her a friendly hug while Simran gazes to her and wonders who she can be...(I know guys, i know we don't like it when Ruhaan hugs other girls, but this is a friendly hug yaar…)

Girl: And Simran how are you?

Simran confused: I'm fine... but tum..tum kaun ho..

Girl: Arre Simran tum mujhe nahi pehchana, ab main itni to nahi badalgayi last time se jab hum mile the? O my god you really don't remember me. It's me Amarpali, Ruhaan ki dost? Tum bhool gayi Simran, one year ago when you guys came here, you came looking for Ruhaan at my house..?

Simran tries to remember. And Amarpali is confused.

Ruhaan: Amarpali, Simran has memory loss. She doesn't remember you.

Amarpali: Kya…are you joking?

Ruhaan: Let's go and we all have a drink and I'll tell you what happened.

All three walk away from the beach and go to a nearby caf. Ruhaan tells Amarpali everything that happened since the last time that she had met them in Goa.

Amarpali: O my god, itna sab kuch hogaya. But I'm happy that you both are together. Aur ye sabooth hain ke tum dono ek duuje ke liye bane ho, tumdono ki jodi to rab ne banaya hai aasmano mein. Itna sab kuch hone ke bath tumdono aaj saath ho, ye to upparwala ka marzi hai, To koi Suhana bhi kya tum dono ko judaa karpaaye gi.

Simran: Achha to bataye aap kaise hain.

Amarpali: I'm the same like last time. Only now I don't live alone. Meri zindagi mein bhi koi aagaya hain. Aur hum bahut khush hain. Hey why don't you guys come over my place for dinner tomorrow?

Ruhaan: We would love to par hum kal subah hi ghar jaa rahe hain. We came by car to Goa so we'll leave in the morning.

Amarpali: Ok, no problem yaar, but next time jab tumdono aaoge to pehla visit mere yahaan hoga..ok.

Simran: Ok..Next time hum zaroor aayenge

Amarpali: Ok then. Main chalti hoon, tum dono lovebirds ke keemti waqt aur nahi zaaya karungi. Aggar tumdono ko kuch bhi zaroorat ho to Ruhaan you know my number, just call me..okay?

Ruhaan, Simran smiles, Amarpali greets them and goes away.. Ruhaan and Simran smile to each other and goes for a walk on the beach watching the sunset ek duuje ke baahon mein..

Back at Mrs Roy's mansion, Sandya chachi and Mrs Roy are having a chat. She told mrs Roy everything how she knew Suhana and why she wanted to visit her, after Sandya chachi sensed that mrs Roy also had some dushmani with Suhana of which she wanted to take revenge.

Sandya Chachi: To yeh thi meri kahaani. But I don't understand this, what is this dushmani that you have with Suhana
Aur aggar tum usse badla leena chahti ho to aap use apne saath kyon laayi hain aur uski dekh baal karrahi hai?

Mrs Roy smiles her evil smile: I am a nurse in that clinic where she was. One day this girl was admitted and the doctors gave me her responsibility. When I read her file I knew right away who she was. Suhana hi to hai jise main dhoond rahi thi, mera bhai ka khaatil. Mera bhai jisko Suhana mardaala, paise ke liye. Bablu mera bhai tha jisse Suhana milke Simran ko kidnap kiya tha, mera naam Babli Roy hain. I was a nurse before I joined bhaiyya's gang coz life was so not fair with us. I know my brother was a ghunda and he chose the wrong way to earn money, par kya kare zindagi jeene ke liyee kuch na kuch to karna parti hain aur aggar seedhi ungli si ghee nahi nakalta to ungli thera to karna parta hain na. Main bhi us gang mein shaamil hogayi thi. Kyon ki mujhe bhikari ke tarha jeena nahi pasand tha. But when bablu died our gang broke up, some of the other guys were arrested and I ran away from Mumbai and came here and got a job as a nurse in that clinic. With the money that Bablu and I had saved, I started a new life here. Maine kasam kaayi thi ke main to Suhana ko nahi chorungi, par jab wo mujhe mili to wo to ek zinda laash bangayi thi. Aur aisi halat main main use tarpa tarpa ke badla nahi le sakti thi. When doctors told the police that there is a chance for her to cure and recover totally, I made a false medical file of her that her health would improve if she stayed somewhere where she felt home. When the police studied her file they gave the clinic permission for Suhana to go outside the clinic. I talked with the doctors there and got the permission to bring her home. So I'm taking care of her and I'm waiting for her to recover and as soon she recovers then I finally can take my revenge.

Babli takes Sandya Chachi to the bedroom upstairs where Suhana is sitting in a wheelchair. She is reading a book.

Babli: Suhana ka health pehle se bahut behtar hain. She is again to her senses, she is lucky that even after a brain damage she has not full memory loss. She had told me about Ruhaan and Simran only her story is another version then yours. She doesn't know who I am. I told her that I will help her recover and then help her to get Ruhaan whom according to her Simran has stolen from her. Maine socha ke jab ye teekh hojayi ghi to jo khel Bablu ne shuru kiya to usko anjaam main dungi. Sabse pehle Simran ko kidnap karke, aisa khel khelungi ke Suhana ko lagega ke Ruhaan uska hogaya, aur tab main use lungi revenge. Ab bas intezaar hain Suhana ki legs teekh hone mein, her legs are still paralyzed. She doesn't know that Bablu was my brother aur aapke liye behter hoga aggar yeh baat aap kisise na bataye

Sandya Chachi: Look your secret is safe with me. Par uske liyee tumhe kuch karna parega mere liye. If u also clear Simran in this khel of yours to main vaada karti hoon yeh baat sirf hamare beech hi rahega, Aapko Suhana se revenge leena hai aur mujhe Simran se..

Babli: Aur aggar main aapki deal manna kardu to?

Sandya Chachi laughing: You don't want to do that? Mere se dushmani aap nahi chahti..believe me..

Babli: teekh teekh waise bhi mujhe kya leena deena aggar ye Simran ko kuch ho ya na. Teekh hai main aap ke baat maan leti hoon..

They both smile their evil smiles and shake hands.

Back in Goa Ruhaan and Simran are in their hotel room. They just returned from the beach. It's their last day in Goa and the next morning they will leave for home. Simran is in the washing room and Ruhaan, (wearing a white sleevless shirt like a tank top and blue jeans looking marvelous) tries to make a Phone call to Abhishek. Ruhaan dials but Abhishek doesn't answer his mobile..

Ruhaan: mmmm..yeh bhaiyya apna mobile kyon nahi pick up karraha hain..? I'll try once more.

He dials one more time and the mobile again is not answered. Just at that moment Simran comes out of the washing room drying her hair with a towel. She is wearing a beautiful soft light green salwar kameez with silver embroidery looking gorgeous as always. She puts her dupatta on the chair and continues drying her wet hair while talking to Ruhaan who is sitting on the bed now..

Simran: Were you able to talk to Abhishek bhaiyya. Usne mobile answer kiya?

Ruhaan: Nahi Simi, bhaiyya did not pick up his mobile. Maine use do baar already call kar chuka hoon...

Simran: Shayad wo busy hoga office ke kaam se. When you're here then the work load must be a little more there.

Ruhaan: I think your right. Main use baat mein phone karlunga..

Simran continues drying her hair and Ruhaan watches at her with a cute smile, admiring how beautiful she is and that she is his and only his wife. When Simran moves her hair from her back, Ruhaan notices that her zipper is not zipped properly. He stands up and walks towards her and stands behind her. Simran sees him standing behind her in the mirror

Simran: Kya huwa Ruhaan..?

Ruhaan smiles and slowly slides his index finger touching her naked skin, Simran close her eyes and enjoy his touch on her skin. He stops where the zipper is stopped and slowly pulls the zipper up zipping it properly. Then he holds her from behind and kisses on her neck and her cheek..Simran smiles and is all sharmelee..

Simran with a smile: Ruhaan..kya kar rahe ho aap...

Ruhaan smiles: Main apni khoobsurat biwi ko pyaar karraha hoon…aapko koi aitraaz hain? Aur yahaan pe koi nahi hai jo humein aake disturb karega..

He lets her go and turns her around. Looks with ufff so much love in his eyes at Simran and says in a sweet voice

Ruhaan: Tum jaante ho meri wife itna khoobsurat hai, itna khoobsurat hai ke kaynaat mein bhi uski jaisi koi nahin hai. Meri wife ka jawaab nahin hai. Main to totally uspe fida hoon, who to meri dil jism-o-jaan pe chaayi hai..

Simran smiles shyly. Ruhaan smiles back, slowly moves closer and with his hand gently lifts her chin and is about to kiss her, Simran smiles mischievously and puts the towel over his head before he can kiss her and tries to run away from him..Ruhaan pulls the towel from his head and puts it on the bed and runs after her. They both are laughing and enjoying. Then Ruhaan grabs her pallu and Simran stops and slowly goes backward. Ruhaan turns her and caresses her cheek and both gaze into each others eyes…

Simran: Jaante ho aap, mera husband itna achha hain ke main kehna chahoon bhi to kya kahoon.. kisi zabaan mein bhi aisa koi lafz hi nahin hain ke jin mein, wo hai kya, main bata sakoon..jaise aap apni wife pe totally fida ho waise bhi main apni husband pe totally fida hoon. Main uske bina ab ek pal nahi rehepawongi..

Ruhaan smiles: I love you Simran
Simran: I love you to Ruhaan

And they look into each others eyes and they are just about to kiss and Ruhaan's mobile rings. Ruhaan sighs and both smile. Ruhaan lets her go and picks up his mobile.

Ruhaan: Hello..? Kaun Bhaiyya..

On the other side Abhishek is smiling..

Abhishek: Haa Ruhaan it's me. I just noticed that you had called me?

Ruhaan: Haa bhaiyya maine hi aapko phone kiya tha. Wo batane ke liyee ke mera presentation went very well. The architects and the engineers they will start working on the resort very soon. Some papers should be finalized and then they can start the work

Abhishek: Ok ye to bahut achha good news hai. Main pappa ko batadunga. Aur batao tum aur Simran kaise ho..

Ruhaan goes in the balcony of their hotel room and looks at Simran from there and answer Abhisheks question

Ruhaan: Hum khush hain bhaiyya, actually hum bahut khush hai. Goa aakar humdono ke rishte ke liyaa achha tha. It's like we are knowing things about each other all over again. Main bahut khush hoon bhaiyya ke Simran meri zindagi mein wapas aagaye. Rab hi jaane main kaise uske bina jeeta, I can't even think to be a day without her..I love her so much.

Abhishek: Main bahut khush hoon tum dono ke liye mere bhai. When you both are happy I am happy. Waise Ruhaan Simran ka memory mein koi bhi farak huwa, kya use kuch yaad aaya Goa mein jaa ke..?

Ruhaan: Nahi bhaiyya aisa to kuch nahin, lekin mujhe koi farak nahi parta, main use pyaar karta hoon aur Simran mujhe pyar karti hain. I know she doesn't remember anything from our past life, but hum phirse apni zindagi banayenge bhaiyya.

Abhishek: Wo to teekh Ruhaan, par main tumse kuch poochna chahta hoon..

Ruhaan: Kya huwa bhaiyya, what is that you want to ask me..?

Abhishek: Ruhaan did you tell Simran about Suhana, and I mean everything, jo Suhana aur tumhare beech Goa mein huwa tha, did you tell her about that..?

Ruhaan: Bhaiyya wo baat…main us din jab hum dinner ke liyee gaye the to main Simran ko batane wala tha, but then she had her attack and I couldn't tell her, and the doctor also told me that I should not tell her anything stressfull, isliye maine use nahi bataya. I also want to tell her bhaiyya par main Simran ko dobaara nahi kohna chahta hoon..

Abhishek: I understand that Ruhaan. Dekho main nahi jaanta ke kya kya huwa tha new year ke us bure din ke baat jab hum sab ne us video ko dekha tha, main exactly nahi jaanta tumhare aur Simran ka rishta kaisa tha uske baat, lekin mere bhai itna to main jaanta hoon ke oes waqt Suhana tum dono ke beech mein aagayi thi aur faasle tum dono ke beech mein tha.

Main yeh tumdono ki bhala ke liye kehta hoon. Mujhe dar lakta hain aggar Simran kisi aur se yeh baat sunega to kya beetega uske dil pe..pehli baar bhi Suhana ne apni chaal chal kar wo baat saamne lee aaya tha. Bas tum use batane ki koshish karna. Aur mujhe nahi lakta ke Simran tumhe jor kar jaayegi, it's important that she knows this Ruhaan. What if her memory comes back aur use laga ke tumne uske yaadaash kohneka faida utahke ies bhaat ko chupaya hain, to kya hoga..?

Ruhaan: I understand bhaiyya, even I want to tell her about it and I will tell her. As soon as we are back home I will tell her.

Abhishek: Teekh hai..waise tumdono kab aa rahe ho

Ruhaan: We will leave here tomorrow, and I think will be in the evening there.

Abhishek: Ok I'll see you then, Simran ko mera hi kehdena, aur uska khyaal rakna Ruhaan

Ruhaan: Ok bhaiyya, I'll see you all tomorrow

Abhishek: Bye

Ruhaan: Bye

Ruhaan is a little worried and looks at the moon in the sky. Simran comes also in the balcony after noticing that Ruhaan is done talking on the phone.

Simran: Hogaya aapke baat Abhishek bhaiyya se,

Ruhaan smiles: haa hogaya..

Simran: Ok. To kya huwa, you look a little worried after the phone call. Sab teekh hain naa

Ruhaan: yes everything is ok, Simran, kuch bhi nahin huwa, bhaiyya ne tumhe hello kaha

Simran: To aap kya soch rahe the, aisa to lakta tha ke koi musibat wala baat hain jo aap soch rahe the..

Ruhaan takes a deep breath smiles and moves behind Simran and holds her closely from behind taking her hands in his. (sorry guys I know I mentioned this hug from behind several times but I love this hug, just like the way ruhaan hugged simran in the epi of 2nd oct on the terrace..i love this hug, that's why I mentioned it several times in my story and I'm sure i may mention in the other coming up parts also, if u think its too much then do tell me then I'll stop mentioning it..ok… going back to the story) Ruhaan hugs Simran from behind and is holding her closely. Simran smiles

Ruhaan: Main sochta ta ke kal hum wapas ghar ko jaa rahe hain aur..

Simran: aur..aur kya..

Ruhaan: Aur phir jab bhi main tumhe kiss wiss karna chahonga tu disturbance ka silsila shuru hojaaye ga..

Simran laughing: Ruhaan..aap bhi na..

Ruhaan: To ye musibat wali baat hain na..isliye main soch raha tha ke main aaj jee bhar ke tumhe kiss karleta hoon.
And he kisses her on her cheek. Simran smiles and turns in his arms and puts her arms around his middle and Ruhaan puts his hands on her shoulders..

Simran: To aisi baat hain. Haa yeh to bahut musibat wala baat hain

Ruhaan: To kya kehte hoon shuru hojaate hain..

Simran laughs and pushes his face: very clever

And they both laugh..

Ruhaan: Simran I love you very very much, Tum mujhe jor kar to nahi jaogi na..?

Simran: yeh kaisa sawaal aapne karliya. I love you also Ruhaan and without you my life is meaningless and uncomplete. Main aapse judaa hoke nahi jeepawongi to aapko jor ke jaana to main sapno mein bhi nahi soch sakti.

And she hugs him tightly and Ruhaan also hugs her intensly and thinks

Ruhaan thinking: He bhagwan meri Simran ko mujhse judaa kabhie nahi karna, meri Simran hamesha mere saath rahegi.

And they both close their eyes and hug each other passionately and enjoys the last night of their short holiday..

To be continued…
Edited by RuhaanSimifan - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg.. love it.. waisay .. suhana is bakc.. wah wah.. lol
aapke mein ek blooper hain
" in one of ur provious parts, u said ek saal ho geya simran ko ruhaan se judaa hue.. ek saal bard sim ru meets.. haina.. to
serial mein ruhaan simran ki shaadi ko eik saal hogeya tha.. aur aapka eik saal mila ke 2 saal.. aur aab amarpali kehti hai hum EK SAAl hua miley aur simrna mujhe bhool gayi.. 😆

wisya simran should not know about suhana..
plzz aisay mat akro..


waisay i loved the last part very much.. lvoed the hugs scene details


AAPKO EIK BADA SAA HUG
🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63
Oeps... 😳 😆 sorry for the blooper yaar i've changed it...thanks yaar.. 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wah Naz it's was mindblowing i really liked it thnx yaara thnx once it was too Romantic can't wait for the next part well done keep it up. 😛 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome writing naz!! 👏 👏 👏

Your dialogues are just excellent!! 👏 👏 👏

And RuSim watching the sunset on the beach, Ufff... totally cool!!!☺️ 😍

And the hug from behind, no, don't ever stop that... 😉 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Fantastic 👏 👏 👏

Yup, keep that peeche se hug, its very cute and reminds me of all the times Ru hugged Sim that way 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome update! 😃 I hope Simiran forgives him!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow,Naz.. 😉 😉
Fantastic... 👏
Do keep repeating the hugging scenes...I loved it too!!! 😳
Do keep writing!!! 😆 😆 😆
just wanna givve u a big big hug!!! 🤗
Edited by hadah - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG thank you so much guys for ur lovely comments..and uean i really love the peeche wala hug..i just cant get enough of it..im glad u guys also like it...

big hug for all ya guys... 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey Naz your ff is fab i like the way you have portrayed ru and sim's characters its kwl and su's entry how mindblowing keep writing coz its terrific and i luv reading ur ff as i do with San and Annie's

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Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".