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Eid Mubarak To all of u....Eid ki khushi main plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz koi to likhoo........
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amby y don't u cont ur story........
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no wayyyyyy itne jaldi aur main NEVER!!!! haan agar contd ek shart pe karungi temme where i stopped it phir karungi
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ok guys no one is continuing soo i am continuing
it is a silly part but still u can enjoy it
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WELL GUYS CONTINUING 'A LOVE STORY'
RECAP:everything begins to settle down
kashish and sujal come back to their senses and look at akshat
S-woh main abhi aaya and runs outside
VARUN-arre sujal kahan bhaag gaye kashish ko akela chod ke kahin phir se suicide naa kar le
everyone had a laugh
veena comes and sits besides kashish.......kashish's eyes were downwards
VEE-beta plz forgive.............kashish interupts
K-naihn mama sujal ki maafi sun kar pehle hi main guilty feel kar rahi hoon......aap mujhse bari hain plz maafi na maangiye
veena smiles and charu moves forward
CH-lekin dii main toh aap se choti hoon naa aur plz mujhe maafi maangne dijiye.......in sab ko aapse mile toh kuch hi mahine hue hain par maine toh aapka chera 20 saal se dekha......(kashish looks at her with surprise and charu notices it) theek hai theek hai meri umar 21 saal hai.......lekin dii now something serious.........dii the biggest culprit is me if i am not eligible to understand my sister i dont think so that i am eligible to understand anything........dii plz forgive me plz
kashish smiles and says
K-1st of all i looked at u in amazment as i wasnt able to believe that u r talking to me after soo many days.......not that u said your age incorrect and 2nd thing bacha...yeh sorry and thankz bahut formal hain.......and it is seeming that u are not my charu as my charu dont ask for forgiveness she orders the other person to forgive her.........kyon am i rite
charu smiles
nurse comes
N-well plz ab aap sab bahar jayiye patient ke kuch test karne hain and raat mein sirf ek hi yahan rukega aap sab nahin aur visiting time khatam ho jaane wala hai
CG-no doubt ki sujal hi yahan rahega
LA-yes cg chalo i think now we shud leave
everyone says goodbye to kashish and when everybody leaves sujal enters
K-well wonderful mujhe akela kyon chod gaye the
S-bas aise hi mujhe tumare saath akela rahene hi pasand hai dont u know
kashish smiles
S-acha kashish!!!!!!!!tell me dr ne kuch bataya ki tum kab discharge ho sakti ho
K-haan woh keh rahe hain ki kaafi jaldi recovery ho rahi hai isiliye 6th feb yaani parson main discharge ho sakti hoon
S-(gets up in excitement)yes !!!!!!!!!!!thats very good arre meri toh problem aasaan ho gayi
K-problem!!!!!!!!!!
S-nahin aise hi muhe laga ki woh tumhe bahut dino tak rakheige...........
K-ohh it means that u want me here to stay how unromantic
S-no yaar acha plz now stop being a chatterbox and go to sleep
K-well tum sofe pe adjust ho jana
S-hmm........as if i didnt know
K-well goood night
S-good night jaanu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NEXT MORNING........THEN NEXT NIGHT THEN NEXT MORNING DAYS PASSED AND THE DAY OF DISCHARGING KASHISH CAME
the whole family was there
DR-well kashish ready to go back to the house
S-ofcourse doc yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai
K-shut up sujal.........
she is out of the hospital and now in sujal's house and in his room (yaar mujhse drame nhain hue logic hai ki ab toh woh apne pati ke ghar jayegi hi
1 WEEK PAASED AWAY
kashish was sitting on the bed....and seeing sujal who was combing his hair
sujal sees her and asks
S-kya dekh rahi hoo itni gum ho kar
kahsish gets up and goes towards sujal
K-kuch nahin
S-kashish acha batao................................interupeted by veena
VEE-bete tum dono ab tak tayaar nahin hue
K-mama kis baat ke liye infact meri toh aaj koi meeting bhi nahin hai
S-kashish meetings ke alaawa bhi kuch hota hai
VEE-arre sujal tumne ise batayaa nahin
S-oops mama bhool gaya........lekin main batadoonga
VEE-nahin...nahin ab main hi bata deti hoon.......kashish beta sujal ne tumare liye valentine's day ki party throw ki hai.....
kashish taken aback
K-wat??????????lekin aaj toh 13th hai
S-haan kash but party raat ke baarah baje shuru hogi.........meanwhile veena was called by rishi and she goes
K-lekin sujal.........raat ke 12 baje
S-haan aur dumbo plz.......western pehna na i have been dying to see u in some hot clothes lekin tum toh female devdaas banke raheti thi kurta and jeans...yuck
K-very very funny sujal theek hai.....main kya pehnu tum hi bataoo
S-well aise hi kuch nahin dress code hai...boys have to wear something in blue and gals have to wear anything in pink
K-PINKKKKKKKKK
S-haan koi problem
K-nahin kuch yaaad aagaya
S-aacha newayz...tum jeans aur pink top pehnloo ok
K-theek hai and u
S-me toh ready how do i look
K-lovely acha give me 10 min i am going to change
S-jaldi karna 11 baj gaye hain
K-yeah
after 15 mins she comes out and goes to the party thrown by sujal in his farmhouse....it was lively party and every couple no matter wat age came and yes sujal's whole family was there
party mein ek surprise bhi tha and a good one ab woh kya surprise hai woh toh agle part mein pata chalega ok..........

GUYS PLZ PLZ COMMENT PLZZZZZZZZZ COMMENT--SURBHI
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Posted: 19 years ago
😆 sur ka prise batana zaroor.... 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
nice part...Surbhi.... 👏 gud someone continued....
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Posted: 19 years ago
well aapka silly part bhi kafi achha tha.... 👏
thanks for continuing....
baki sab plz cont kardo...
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KAISAY KAHOON

Recap:Kashish has heated argument wid her dad(Cg) n Rajeev is bac.....Swayam promise Tusshar tat Kashish will b his n Akshat argue to Swayam abt this.....

GEREWAL HOUSE
Itz 9 am n all r getting ready to go to their respective destinations....all r enjoying...there breakfast just Rajeev is missing...Veena goes to his room call 2 him...Rajeev mobile is ringing 4rm last 5 mins but he taking bath....
Veena:beta tera phone itni dayer say baj raha hai....
Rajeev:mumma app uthhalooo....
Veena:acha tu jaldi nikal...nashta thanda horaha hai...
Rajeev:mumma bus aaraha hoon...
Veena recieves da call.....itz Pratham(Rajeev old friend)
Veena:helloo.!!!!!!
Pratham:hello Aunty mein Pratham bola raha hoon
Veena:Pratham beta kaisay hoo
Pratham:aunty mein teq hoon Rajeev kahan hai
Veena:haan..mein boltaii hoon....
Rajeev cums out....drying his hair....n asks....
Rajeev:mumma kiska phona hai
Veena:yeh Pratham ka phone hai handsover da phone..n leaves
Rajeev:are Pratham tu kahan tha intay saal...jab say Shimla say Delhi shift howa...koi khabar hii nahi
Pratham:haan yaaar...bus life hii itni busy hogayi thi k time hii nahi mila....
Rajeev:haan haan dosto ko bhul gaya...tu kasia hai....
Pratham:abhi tak tu teq tha...
tu suna aur woh hitlar kaisi hai
Rajeev:hahahahahha Hitlar Kashish...haan woh teq hai...
Pratham:haan yaar Kashish kisi hitlar say kam thora na hai...lagata tha k is mein kisi teacher ka bhoot ghussa tha eek period bhi bunk nahi karnay deti thi.....
Rajeev:nahi bus woh bhoot nikal agaya hai...aur suna
Pratham:kuch nahi yaar shaddi kar raha hoon...
Rajeev:are tu bhi..aaj kal sab shaadi karnay k mood mein hai...
Pratham:bhi matlab...
Rajeev:woh Piyush ki shaddi bhi next week hai
Pratham:are Wah!!!!!!!
Rajeev:wah wah chor u hav to cum......
Pratham:yaar mainay tujay apni shaddi par invite karnay k liye phone kiya tha...
Rajeev:haan baba...kab hai yeh to bol....
Pratham:parsooo....aur kal sangeet hai
Rajeev:u r kidding rite.....
Pratham:nahi yaar....tujay ana hai.....
Rajeev:kal sangeet hai aur mujay aaj bata raha hai....tat not done yaar....
Pratham:tum logo ko connect karnay ka koi no. hi nahi tha....
Rajeev:hmmmm..chal i will cum....
Pratham:Kashish koo bhi bol day warna uska ghussa tu tujay mamloom hai......Plz
Rajeev:acha teq hai boldoongaa
Pratham:tum dono ko ana hai...ok bye c u then
Rajeev:chal bye n disconnects
Rajeev(shouts):mumma.........mumma....
Veena:haan bol kyun chala raha hai
Rajeev:mumma woh Pratham ki shadi hai....mujay aur Kashish kojana hai
Veena:haan tu dorsoo ki shadiyain hi attend karta raha kar..apni k baray mein tu sochta hii nahi...
Rajeev:oooo mumma i promise atay hii mein aapko bata doongaa
Veena(surprsied):oooo tu tumnay larki passand kar lii
Rajeev:haan yehi samjh looo....
Veena:kon hai bata na...
Rajeev:mumma abhi nahi akar....chalooo meri packing kardoo plzzzzzz..mein Kashish ko bol kar ata hoon.....
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Now Kashish n Rajeev r in plane to Delhi.....n Kashish is constanty speaking.....
Kashish:ajeeb insan hai Pratham.....itnay saaloo say na koi khabar aur aaj phone bhi aya tu shaadi k liye invite karnay k liye.... aur woh bhi itnay kam notice pay kal shaadi hai aur humein aaj bata raha hai....tumhein tu usnay invite bhi kar liya....mujay tu phone bhi nahi kiya..jaa kar dekh loo giii usay....aur tum nay mujay shopping bhi nahi karni di.....
(Rajeev is busy in ready mangzine)heloooo Rajeev tumsay baat kar rahi hoon mein....Rajeev..she shakes him....
Rajeev:haan kya howa
Kashish:kahan gum hoo mein tab say tumsay baat kar rahi hoon aur tum jawaab hii nahi say rahay meray sab dost asay hii hain kisi ko meri parwa nahi phelay Pratham aur ab tum....
Rajeev:wait a sec...(he put da mangzine down n takes out bud cotton 4rm his ears)
Rajeev:haan ab bolo kya keha rahi hooo
Kashish(boiling wid anger):tab say mein pagaloo ki tarah boli jaa rahi hoon aur tum sun nahi rahay.....
Rajeev:hey Kashish.....tum fazool mein becharay ghussa kar rahi hooo...atleast usnay invite tu kiya....aur jahan tak in budz ka sawaal hai....u hav been speaking 4rm da time i told u abt Pratham's wedding...kitna bolo giii yaar.....
Kashish:jayoo mujay tumsay baat nahi karni....
Rajeev:Kashish did i told u tum ghussay mein aur bhi khubsorrat lagti hooo.....
Kashish:haan haan ab maska marnay ki zaroorat nahi hai..
Rajeev:nahi waki u look terrific.....
Kashish:kitna tease kartay hoo mujay
Rajeev:ab tumhein tease nahi karoongaa tu kisko karoongaa....
Kashish:i won't leave...u dekhloongiii
Rajeev(mischeivous):abhi dekh loo phir time milay naa milay
Kashish(griting her teeths):Rajeev......
Rajeev(cutely):bolo Kashish...
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PRATHAM HOUSE
Pratham:Ramu kaka....guest house saaf karwa diya......hai naa...
Ramu:haan baba...sab tayaarian hogayi hain....
Pratham:kahan kaka abhi tu itnay kaam paray hain.....shaadi bhi meri hai aur kaam bhi mujay hi karna par raha hai...
Just then Rajeev & Kashish enters.....
Rajeev:yaar ab hum aagay hai sab hum sambhal lay gay...
Pratham:are yaar tera intezaar tha...
They both hug...n Kashish is standing at distance...
Pratham:Hii..Kashish....
Kashish(annoyed):Hiii
Pratham(surpised):aree isay kya howa....don't tell me tum phir laray...
Rajeev:haan woh....
Kashish:tum chup rahooo..mera aur Rajeev ka tu chalta retha hai par..ghussay tu mein tumsay hoooshaadi karnay ka fasla kar liya aur itni late bata rahay hooo...
Pratham:yaar..sab kuch itni jaldi mein howa k....bus...sorry
Kashish:itz ok (they both share a friendly hug....)
Rajeev:ab tum dono ka hogaya hoo tu ab yeh bata larki kon hai jis ko meri bhabhi bana raha hai
Pratham:Priya tu mila howa hai us say...
Kashish:yeh collage wali Priya to nahi
Pratham:haan...wohi
Rajeev:yaar tu bada chupa rustam nikala..chal teri love story kisi fariq time mein sunoogaa..
Pratham:tum dono thak gay hogay....jayoo thodi rest karloo..shaam ko sangeet mein miltay hain....
Kashish:ok..chalooo...
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Itz evening they r getting ready Sangeet Function n Rajeev just came out 4rm bathrrom after taking bath n he is towel...just then Kashish enter....
Kashish:opps sorry....
(Kashish turns around seeing him n starting laughing.....)
Rajeev:Kashish tum.....yahan aur knock tu karna chaiye tha
Kashish:tumhein kis nay kaha k towel mein yun ghumoo
Rajeev:jahan tak mujay yaad hai yeh room mera hai....so mein yahan jis tarah marzi rahooooo
Kashish is laughing like hell.....
Rajeev:eek tu beghair knock keye andar agayii aur ab hasi jaa rahi hooo
Kashish:woh mein yeh batanay ayi thi k aaj k function ka dress cord pure indain hai so u hav to wear dhoti hahahhahahhahhahaahha
Rajeev:pagal hogayi hoooo..dhoti aur mein...
Kashish(giggling):tumhari mazari hehehhehehehe
Rajeev:tum yeh hasna band karooo
Kashish:acha jaldi tayar hojayoooo...aur darwaza band karloooo
Rajeev:kyun tumhein dobara ana hai...
Kashish(mischeivouly):haan..shayad mood ban jaye....
Rajeev:acha suno
Kashish:hmmmmmm
Rajeev(makes a puppy face):mujay dhoti bandani nahi ati...Pratham ko bolo k meri help karay...
Kashish burst out laughing....acha mein bolti hoon
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SANGEET CEREMONY
Rajeev is wearing a black shoti wid a black kurta..wid silver emibrodery....is looking dam cute...n Kashish is wearing.....shocking pink dress (like da one she wore on her wid Akshat) n is looking ravishing.....
Pratham & Rajeev enters...da grand function...
Rajeev:mera bhai....yeh indain theme kyun rakhi hai...agr meri dhoti.....
Pratham(smiles):yaar tu bahut acha lag raha hai don't worry kuch nahi hoga...
Rajeev:paaka....
Pratham:haan baba paka.....ab dhoti chor apni...
Rajeev:hmmmmmm.....Kashish nazar nahi aarahi.....
Pratham:uskoo Priya say milnay ki bahut jaldi thi isliye woh usk pass hoogiii...
Rajeev:hmmmmmm...
Kashish cums Rajeev is totally astonised by her beauty he is unable utter a word........
Kashish:Hii Guyz....
Pratham:haye haye......Kashish mein tu soch raha hooo Priya ko chor kar tumsay engagement karloooo
Kashish:oooo Priya koo bolo...
Pratham:areee nahi...
The Sangeet Ceremony takes place n Rajeev wants to talk to Kaashish but everytime he goes sumone interups in btw...they r just staring at eachother...n Rajeev is all lost in Kashish beauty..........
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Ankhion ki ghustakhiyan maaf hooo
Ekk took tumhein dekhti hai
Jo baat kehna chaye zubaan
Tumsay yeh woh kehti hain

Kajal ka ek til tumhray laboo pay laga doo
Chanda aur Suraj ki nazaron say tumko bacha loon
Palkon ki chilman mein ayo mein tumko chupa loon
Khyalion ki yeh shukyain maaf hoon
Har dum tumhein sochti hain
Jab hosh mein hota hai jahan
Madhoosh yeh karti hain

Yeh zindagi aapki hii amnat rahay giii
Dil mein sada aapki hi mobahat rahay gii
In saanson ko apki hi zaroorat rahay giii
Is dil ki nadaaniyain maaf hoon
Yeh meri kahan sunti hai
Yeh pal pal jo hoti beytal sanam
Tu sapnay naye bhonti hain


Ankhion ki sharmo haya maaf hoo
Tumhein dekh kar jhukti hain
Uthi ankhien jo baat naa keha saki
Jhuki ankhien woh kehti hain

Da Ceremony is over.....n all go home n to their respective rooms......Kashish is busy in thinking abt 2day events wen there a knock on da door...she thinks who tat in these late hours...she goes n opens.....itz Rajeev......
Kashish:Rajeev tum....
Rajeev:mujay neend nahi aarahi thi....tu mainay socha tumhein bhi nahi arahi hoo hogii aur agr nahi arahi hoo gii tu meray barya mein hi soch rahi hogi....tu mainay socha meray baray mein sochany say acha hai meray say baat hii karloo...
Kashish:ohhh...yeh baat hai
Rajeev:jee jee bilkul
They talk to eachother 4 a long time....n they see da sunrise 2gether....itz 6 in morning.....n there a knock at da door..itz Pratham....
Knock Knock Knock
Rajeev:yeh itni subah subah kisko tumhari yaad aagayiii
Pratham:Kashish.....
Kashish:God...yeh tu Pratham ki awaaaz hai...
Rajeev:kya...(he get up 4rm sofa n starts moving here n there)
Kashish:kya kar rahay hoooo
Rajeev:tum jayoo darwaaza kholo n don't tell him mean yahan hoon...
Kashish goes n opens da door.....
Pratham:sorry tumhein itni subah subah distrub kiya...
Kashish:nahi...itz ok....
Pratham tries to peep in da room wen Kashish blocks his veiw n asks....
Kashish:kuch kaam tha....
Pratham:haan woh Rajeev apnay room mein nahi hai...mein joking par jaa raha tha soo thought usko bhi layjayoo but....tumhein kuch pata hai
Kashish(confused):nahi pata..nahi......
Pratham:ok sorry tum soo jayooo Bye...
Kashish:Bye.....
Just then Rajeev sneezes....n Pratham truns around.....
Kashish:shit.....
Pratham:yeh kon tha....
Kashish:woh....... mein..
Pratham:tum......Kashish yahan aur bhi hai mujay dekhna hai....
Kashish:koi nahi hai Pratham......
Pratham enters da room n sees Rajeev behind da door...
Pratham:Rajeev tu........
They alal sit 2gether n Rajeev tells his n Kashish love story....Pratham is very happy know all this.....n they both attendz his wedding n returns bac to Shimla here Veena is all set 4 Rajeev marriage.....
Gerewals r getting ready to go to Rajheas House......
Veena goes to Rajeev room.........
Rajeev:mumma app...kuch kaam tha tu mujay bula leti
Veena:Rajeev tumnay kaha tha k tum akar Kashish k baray mein fasla loogay tu tumnay kya socha.....
Rajeev(surprised):haan...par...
Veena:aaj mein Cg bhai saab say...Akshat aur Varun ki baat karnay jaa rahii hoon...
Lalit:Veena chaloo bhi ab late horahay hai...Rajeev ko Kashish nahi achi lagti tu kya kar saktay hai
Veena:haan chalooo.....
Rajeev(confused):mumma sunay to sahi.....Kashish achi hai
Veena:sirf achi.....
Lalit:beta tu achi tarah soch koi jaldi nahi hai akhir zindagi ka mamla hai
Rajeev:nahi papa bahut achi hai.......
Veena(smiles):tu phir mein baat karoon
Lailt:mein abhi keha raha....hoon
Rajeev:nahi..papa....mujay Kashish bahut passand hai
Lailt:hmmmmmmmmm
Rajeev:i mean ab mumma itna keha rahi thi tu mein kaha k baat maan leni chaiye
Veena:acha...sahi....hai...
Rajeev(blushes):mummmaa
Veena:chal bus....teq hai mein baat karti hoon.....
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Here da part endz hope u like it
I didn't check it again so sorry 4 spelling mistakes
EID MUBARAK U ALL
Plz Do comment
SAWERA
Edited by Kash_Sujal - 19 years ago
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Gr8 part sawera 👏 👏 👏
Surbhi u rocks yar 2 good.

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