Fan fiction for the week 12th-19th sep - Page 543

plz post all ur stories asap 😊

ok guys here's the 5th part of LAMHE 😊
recap:kashish and sujal fight on their way to india. intro of sujal's family.
The whole family after the aarti turns around and all are startled to see (aur kaun apna) SUJAL .Veena is having the aarti ki thali in her hand and she is walking forward with a beautiful smile on her face. Veena is come face to face with sujal with sujal now.Sujal bends down to take her aashirwaad.
Veena(giving him aashirwaad):aa gaya tu.kitna intezaar karwaya.ghar kii yaad nahiin aati thi kya???
Sujal:aati to thi maa bahut yaad aati thi par kyaa karoon padhai bhi to poori karni thi na.
Veena:haan vo to hai.
Lalit:tum maa bete hi baat karte rahoge kya.arre bhai hum sab bhi khade hain yahan.
Sujal(going towards him):dad aap se kaise nahiin milta aap to daaaddd hain na(n he bens down to touch his feet)
Lalit:chal badmaash bohot masti karta hai
Sujal:aap hii ka beta hoon(now he goes to sumit n kumkum)
Sumeet:kaise ho Sujal
Sujal:bikul theek bhai(n he hugs him)
Kumkum:arre devar jii bhabhi bhi yahiin hai
Sujal:arre pyaari si bhabhiji aap to sabse important hai
Kumkum:hmmmm yeh hui na devar waali baat.kaise ho
Sujal:bas hatta katta hoon
Tia:big b sab ho gaye par aap kii yeh choti sii behen abhi bachi hai
Sujal:arre meri princess tumhe kaise bhul sakta hoon.kaisi ho
Tia:bilkul fit n fine
Veena:chalo sujal beta ab sab se mil liya aaram karlo shaam ko party bhi hai fir tumhare aane kii khushi mein
Sujal:wow mom gr8 main abhi zaib ko phone kar deta hoon vo bhi aa jayega
Lalit:accha theek hai par pehle aaram karlo
Sujal was about to go to his room wen suddenly he came to where kumkum n sumeet were standing
Sujal:arre main ek insaan se to milna hii bhool gaya
Sumeet:kisse
Sujal:apne bhatije se kyun bhabhi kaisa hai aapka chutkoo
Kumkum:vo bilkul theek hai
(Actually guys this bhatija is the hone wala baby of kumkum n summet.)
now in viraani's house
kashish reaches home
Tulsi:aa gaye tu itne din laga diye tujhe pata hai na ghar tere bina kitna soona soona lagta hai
Kashish:kyaa mumma ek hi toh hafta hua hai
Tulsi:EK HAFTA
Kashish:aaap abhi se aisa karenge to meri shaadi ke baad kyaa hoga
Tulsi:us waqt dekha jayega
Prerna:arre aagayi tum how was ur trip?mazaa aaya
Kashish:hi bhabs my trip was awesome aur bahut bahut mazaa aaya.
Anurag:hi bacha kaisi ho safar kaisa thaa???
Kashish:bhaiya phir se baccha bhabhi bolo naa bhaiya ko
Prerna:mujhe nahiin padna tum dono ke beech mein bhi tum jaano tumhaare bhaiya jaane
Mihir:hi kashish laut aayi itna time laga diya
Kashish:kyaa papa aap bhi mama kii tarah
Tulsi:acha acha chalo baatein baad mein hoti rahegi ab tum jaao thoda aaram karlo phir humein shaam mein party mein bhi jaana hai.
Kashish:kaunsi party mama
Tulsi:arre wo Veena aur Lalit kaa beta wapis aa gaya hai naa to unhone us ke liye ek party rakhi hai
Kashish:wow mom veena aunty ka beta wapis aagaya bohot suna uske baare mein chalo aaj mil bhi loon gi.main kripa ko phone kar ke keh deti hoon ki vo bhi chale
Tulsi:haan beta par thoda aaram karlo tum thak gayi hogi
Kashish:haan mumma(n she goes away to her room)
its 8 in the evening.The garewal house is fully decorated n guests start arriving.lets see whats happening in sujal's room.sujal is selecting clothes for himself wen zaib enters.
Zaib:hi
Sujal:hiiii acha hua tu aa gaya yaar mujhe to kuch samaj hii nahiin aa raha kya pehnoo
Zaib:tu bhi na aise keh raha hai jaise teri shaadi hai chill yaar its just a party
Sujal:haan yaar i knoe ke its a party par yeh party mere honour mein hai to i hav to luk good u see
Zaib:ok yaar chal yeh pehen le
Sujal:not bad yaar.main abhi change karta hoon
Now our swetoo is ready.he's wearing a nice black jacket(something like wat varun badola wore in nach baliye yesterday) n he's looking too kool.he comes down n is recieved by everyone.
ok guys 5th part end.plzzzzzz comment guys. 😛

chimppooo too good luvlyyyyy 👏 👏 👏
waise kal varun badole ne to light colour ke clothes pehne the...i guess 😕 😃 but the story's concept....mmmm...i just love it!!

gud job Komal....fantastic... 👏

wonderful part kimmmy just keep it upp

I'M NOT GONNA POST ANY MORE PARTS OF SWEETY GALOSHIN'S STORY LOVE ME NOT IN INDIA FORUMS BECAUSE SHE DOES NOT WANT THE STORY TO BE POSTED HERE THOSE WHO WANNA READ IT GO AND JOIN RK GROUP AND READ THERE

lamhe was lovely komal, the other writers...plss post ur stories soon.

ok harpy i know wat happened 😃

hey sweets why dont u start ur own plzz 😃

me n write a story...not possible rajeevac... i am no kind of a writer!!