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Shruti

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Posted: 19 years ago

#4001

well maine story post kar di hai yahoo group go and read and pls comment

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Shruti

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Posted: 19 years ago

#4002

comment jaroor karna agla part kal and goodnight and bye

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Ambarina Altaf

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Posted: 19 years ago

#4003

yaar shakti jee tho offli9 hogaye.

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Manu

@rmanu7382

Voyager

Posted: 19 years ago

#4004

next part ...Final one .....
KAHIN TO MILENGE...

Recap: Sujal Kashish Pratham n Mahek go the the snowy mountains n the ice-skating rank… they have lots of fun, but sujal n kashish end up leaving because kashish is not able to skate… Sujal and Kashish go to a mandir and ties each others name to a tree… mahek is worried for kashish n wonders what diya will do, pratham consoles her saying she wont be able to do anything. Sujal sees kashish crying and asks her y they r disturbed by a knock at the door, thinking its pratham n mahek she goes n opens the door but ends up shock…..

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It starts from kashish shocked face…
k-tum? Diya…. Yaha…..
pratham n mahek look at each other n then behind them…
m- dii hum hai….
k- nahee mahek abhi diya thi waha… main jhoot….
Sujal comes from behind n says "kya kashish mahek aur pratham hi to hai… kaha hai diya….."
They all go n sit on the sofa, and kashish closes the door… as soon as kashish closes the door, diya comes out from behind the pillar…. And gives a smile…..

Inside the room kashish is constantly saying that shes sure diya was there, but none is ready to believe… pratham n mahek think its cuz kashish is afraid that diya might take away sujal from her, that's why shes reacting that way….
k- sujal vishwaas karo mere waha diya hi thi….
s- meri jaan, dehko yaha sirf pratham, main tum aur mahek hai… (looking at pratham) lugta hai meri patni ko teri behn bahut pasand aagaai hai… ushi ko dehka jaari hai….
kashish gives up thinking its no use to explain to them, n that's shes 100% sure it was non other than diya….

Pratham n mahek ask if they're ready to go to the party… sujal says to give them just 10 mints and they'll be right back… he takes kashish into the room n tells her to change fast, she goes to the bathroom… while sujal outside is thinking what made kashish think that diya was there n the way kashish said diyas name it was as if kashish is terrified from her… that kashish… just then kashish comes out changed and tells sujal he should go change… he goes inside… kashish outside thinks she should tell sujal about what diya said to her, but then thinks sujal will be hurt on coming to know diya would do such a thing! Sujal comes out and sees kashish hasent weared anything not her jewelry nor her choodiyan… he knows by now she is hiding something, n that she is going through a lot of pain, but then thinks it might not be the right time to ask her, and that when kashish will feel comfortable she herself will come n tell him… he takes her to the dressing table and makes her where her jewelry n then her choodiyan… pratham knocks on the door saying that its getting very late n they should leave by now… sujal smiles n says to kashish "chale" she nods her head and both go out hands in hand… sujal tells pratham that he n mahek should also hold hands just incase someone thinks mahek is single n purposes her! All laugh to this n pratham holds his hand out so mahek can get she shyly holds his hand… all leave for the party….

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Manu

@rmanu7382

Voyager

Posted: 19 years ago

#4005

At the party sujal kashish pratham n mahek all r greeted by the manager n r thanked for coming to the party… sujal says it was their pleasure… they r seated n the violents r played in the background… the lights r dim… sujal sees kashish lost, he puts his hand under the table n gets her hand, she looks at him n smiles… the dinner is served… kashish really doesn't feel like eating, cuz shes very tensed…. She looks up n sees diya… she gets shocked… and while everyone is eating she excuses herself n leaves… she goes out where diya is standing n says "tum yaha kya kuri ho" diya just smiles… she sees sujal getting up, n kashish looks to see what diya is looking at n gets shocked to see its sujal, when she looks up again diya is gone… kashish runs towards where diya was standing…. And then where she could have gone, sujal follows her yelling her name… he finally gets her and says….
s- pagaal ho gaai kya kashish… kaha jaya jaari ho…
k- sujal maine diya ko dehka…
s- kashish yeh kya tumhare aur diya ke beech hai ke tum diya ko dehka jaari ho aur jab bhi uska naam lehti ho to tumhe chehra pe durr ajaa tha hai…
kashish is about to answer when she sees pratham behind sujal folding his hands not to tell sujal anything… sujal turns around to see what kashish is looking at…
s- pratham tu…
p- main to dehkna aya tha ke hua kya hai… chalo ander chale….
Sujal nods his head, n holds kashishs hand n leaves…

They get back in to the party hall… the dj announces for the couples to get together, and come to the dance floor… kashish really isn't feeling good, n wants to leave, but then knowing sujal will get upset agrees… they dance, n kashish comes really close to sujal… she just goes in his arms, n he leans his head against hers… her head is on his shoulder she looks up n again sees diya watching them… she just backs off from sujal n points towards where diya is standing… sujal turns around n sees no one… he looks at kashish n says "kashish waha koi nahee hai…." kashish looks at him, very hurt, n just runs away from there… sujal also goes behind her.. pratham n mahek also walk out n are about to go after sujal when they hear someone laughing… pratham turns around n is shocked to see diya there… mahek is also!
d- (to her friend) main kashish ko aisa hi pagaal bana ti rahungi, isi tara usse saata thi rahungi… ke aik waqt sabko lugega ke wo pagaal ho gaai hai… aur phir sujal aik pagaal patni ka kya karega…
pratham is stunned to see sujal standing behind diya… sujal turns diya around n before diya can even be shocked he slaps her three times…. His eyes r filled with anger n hatred!!!!
s- UR DISGUSTING!!!! Sick!!!!!!! Tum….. chee….. aik baaht khaan kohl ke suhnlo diya, ager tumne kashish ke kareeb aane ki koshish bhi kuri to main tumhe jaan se maar dalungi.. I WILL KILL U… (diya is stunned) tumne bahut buri galti ki hai diya, bahut buri galti.. tumne ab thak sujal garewal ka pyaar dehka tha per ab tum uski nafrat dehkogi… chee… meri suchi dosti ka yeh sila diyya tumne….
d- meri baaht suhno sujal…
s- just SHUT UP!!!!! Tum apne zubaan se mere naam bhi mat lo… main tumhare shukal thak nahee dehkna jaahta… main notice kura tha ke kashish bahut pareshaan, duhki si hai, per yeh nahee jaanta ta uski waja tum ho…. Kya, kya kurna chaari ho? Mujhe kashish se alug (he gives a sarcastic laugh) aisa to tum sapne main bhi nahee kur paaogi! Kyun ke main murte dum thak kashish ka hu aur sirf kashish ka! Mere aur kashish ka rishta bahut mazboot hai, itna ke koi humare beech apne kayalo main bhi nahee aasukta! Aaj ke baad ager tumme zada bhi sharaam baaqi hai to tum mere saamne nahee aaogi!
Saying this he give one dirty hatred look to her n leaves… pratham comes from behind n also slaps diya…
p- maine tumse kaha tha na spain wapis jaane ke liyya, to tum yaha kyun ho? Kyun? (he slaps her again) aaj tumne mujhe bhi sujal se nazre milaane ke laik nahee chora… kyun diyya tumne aisa sila kyu? Diya tumhe apne pyaar zada ehm hai, sujal ki kushi nahee… tum kehti ho tum sujal se pyaar kurti ho per yeh kaise pyaar jis main tum apne hi kushi dehkri ho… nahee tum sujal se pyaar nahee kurti, main bataa ta hu kya, tumhe yeh pyaar isliya lugta hai kyun ke tum sujal ko miss kurti ho, wo tumse us tarah ab nahee mil sukta nahii us tara baaht kur sukta hai jaise ke phela kurta ta… diya pyaar kabhi aisa nahee hota… tumne aaj…
he just stops there n goes away… mahek follows him….
Diya is left crying… she sits leaning against the pillar… remembers all the moments spend w/ sujal n curses herself, for hurting him so much! Behind all the hatred n anger in his eyes she could see the pain he had for her breaking his trust so easily! She wanted to say sorry, wanted to repent, but then the way sujal said never to face him again, she didn't know how to…

Upstairs in kashish n sujals room… kashish is crying… sujal comes over to her n hugs her…
s- mujhe maaf kardo, main tumhare is durd ko kum nahee kur suka…
k- sujal…. Main tumhe bas khone se durti hu… tumne mujhe wo pyaar diyya hai jiske bina ab mere jeena muskil hai….
s- kashish aik baaht humesha yaad ruhkna, main jab thak is duniya main, meri aakhri saas thak main sirf tumhare hu, sirf tumhare! Aur itna hi nahee murne ke baad bhi main sirf tumhare hu… koi mujhe tumse alug nahee kur sukta… uper wala humesha suche pyaar kurne waalo ke saaht hota hai, aur humara to sucha pyaar hai na… ainda se kabhi yeh durr apne mann main mat leker anaa ke koi mujhe tumse alug kur sukta hai… kashish humare pyaar itna kamzor nahee hai aur nahee humare bandhan!
Kashish looks at him n hugs him tightly… pratham n mahek smile from behind n pratham slowly says to mahek "chale mahek…." Wiping her tears mahek nods n both leave…

In the morning sujal goes to the reception w/ kashish all worried…
s- do u know where the guest in room 203 went?
The receptionist looks down at her desk n says "r u mr. Sujal garewal…." Sujal nods his head n the receptionist gives an envelope to sujal… sujal takes it from her all confused opens it up n reads it and is a lil shock… kashish very concerningly asks him what does it say…
s- dehko is ladke ko…. Main isse thori na naraaz tha… aisa chala gaya….
k- kya hua sujal?
s- pratham ka letter hai… likha hai saab ne ke wo mujhse nazre milaane ke laik nahee hai aur diya ne jo kya hai uske baad to….. (slapping the letter against his hand) yeh pratham bhi na… aisa hi chala gaya……
k- sujal… (putting her hand on his shoulder) I think usse thora waqt akela chaiyya… hum wapis shimla jaare hai na…. Thore din baad tum usse phone kurlena wurna abhi to wo tumse baaht bhi nahee kur paya ga….
Sujal nods n both go upstairs to pack their bags…. While leaving, kashish gets flashbacks of her n sujals times spend in that room… she gets happy thinking of them… sujal puts his arm around her n says "chale" she nods w/ a smile n both leave for the airport…..
They check-in and all… in the plane sujal gets flashbacks of moments spend w/ diya… tears fall from his eyes as he realizes the way he slapped her…. N the way he talked to her… he really regrets his action n thinks it would have been better if he explained to her rather than slapping her n saying all he did…. Kashish holds his hand n says
k- diya ke baare main sochre ho na?
s- (shock looks at her) umm… nahee to kashish…
k- (punching him playfully at the arm) jab jhoot bholna nahee ata to mat bholo na… sujal tumne hi kaha tha na ke tum meri aankhon main dehka sab batah sukte ho, to kya main nahee batah sukti… sujal apne kiya pe pastawa hora hai na…..
s- kashish uswaqt mere liyya yeh sab aik shock tha… mujhe kucch samaaj nahee ara tha ke kya karu…. Aur phir tumhe kisi ne duhk diya ye mujhse kaise bardasht hota… diya…. (putting his hand on his head) wo aisa kaise soch behti… kashish wo aisi kabhi nahee thi… wo meri sabse achi dost thi… main usse sab kucch batah sukta ta, wo to mujhe bahut ache se pechaan thi phir pata nahee kaise wo yeh sab soch behti…… usne aik baar nahee socha mujhe kitna durd hoga….???
k- sujal wo jisse pyaar samaaj rahi hai wo pyaar nahee hai… abhi tumne hi kaha na ke tum dono bahut ache dost the, ho sukta hai ke shaadi ke baad tumne usse itna zadaa attention na di ho yeh ho sukta hai uske liyya tumhe kisi aur ke saaht dehkna muskil ho… aaj thak tum aur wo saaht saaht raahe ho… sab kucch saaht kya hai…. sab kucch share kya hai… feelings, etc…. aaj jab tum uske saaht share nahee kurte ho yeh sab to usse acha nahee lugta hoga….
s- tum shahid sahee kehri ho kashish… per phir bhi usse yeh sab nahee kurna chahiyya tha jo usne kya….
Kashish feels dizzy n puts her hand on her head, sujal worryingly asks her what happened letting go of her head says nothing n its just a headache… sujal feels kashish is still worried….. both lay back kashish putting her head on his shoulder n him leaning his head against hers….

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nida

@karanikarock

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Posted: 19 years ago

#4006

shruti i will give comments tomrroww good night and bye 😊

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Manu

@rmanu7382

Voyager

Posted: 19 years ago

#4007

They get to Shimla… are greeted by Varun n rishi… Rishi has a bouquet in his hands n gives it to kashish… kashish looks at him…
r- im very confusing na bhabhi… kabhi aapse naraaz hota hu, kabhi bura bhala kehta hu aur kabhi puhl dehta hu… im very sorry bhabhi… main apne kya per sharminda hu… maine jo kya apne behn ki taraf se soch ker kya… main nisha ko duhki nahee dehk sukta bhabhi aur isliya….
k- koi baaht nahee… maine kucch dil pe nahee liyya… yeh soch ker sab bhulaa diya ke mere chotta bahi mujhse naraaz hai….
Rishi smiles nu hugs kashish…. Sujal is very happy to see this…. They sit in the car n all leave for home… sujal is very excited on seeing his mom dad n most of all nisha… hes hoping ke everything is fine w/ her now….

They get home n kashish is surprised to c piyush…. sujal is also… veena does the aarti n then sujal n kashish come in…. nisha runs to kashish n hugs her…
s- arre wa! Phela to humesha tu mujhse aake gaale lugti ti aur ab apni bhabhi ke…
n- bhaiyya….
She hugs him tightly also…. Lalit comes n says "behta aaj do do kush kabre hai…" sujal looks confused n lalit tells him n kashish to sit on the sofa… nisha is standing behind veena putting her chin on her moms shoulder….
s- dad kya kush kabri hai?
l- aik to tum aur kashish wapis aagaya ho… aur dusra nisha ne apni zindagi aage baara na ka faisla kya hai….
s- kya???? (very happy, loks up at nisha who puts her head down on her moms shoulder)
kiske saaht?
v- piyush ke saaht…..
kashish looks up shocked n so does sujal… theres a moment of silence… piyush thinks sujal might not be happy n says "ager tumhe yeh rishta manzoor nahee hai to… I can back off"
s- if u do I'll kill u…
piyush looks up n so does nisha…. Sujal walks to piyush…
s- meri behn ko humesha kush ruhkna… ager if u ever try to back off from ur wada I will kill u….
piyush smiles n puts his hand on sujals shoulder… kashish gets dizzy n falls to the ground… sujal n piyush both rush to her as well as the rest of the family… sujal carries her to the room while Varun goes to get a doctor…. Sujal thinks its cuz of her excitement for nisha she fainted where as veena has her doubts… the doctor comes n checks kashish… sujal is walking around all tensed while the doctor is checking kashish… when the doctor stands up sujal rushes to him n says "sab theek hai na doctor" the doctor nods n says no… sujal n everyone looks up shocked… d- mere matlub hai kehna ka ke if kashish ji apna kayaal nahee ruhkengi to sab theek nahee hoga…
sujal looks up confused….
d- ur wife is pregnant mr. Sujal
sujal just nods his head n says ok n goes back to walking… all look at him confused… after 3 rounds of back n forth sujal looks up eyes wide open n runs to the doctor… clearing his throat n trying to control himself says "kya… kya….kaha aapne?" everyone smiles as the doctor says "aap baap bane waale hai…" sujal looks down n then up n then rushes to his mom holding her shoulders "aapne suhna mamma… main baap… mama…" he hugs her tightly his happiness is just so much that he isn't able to control himself… nisha comes n hugs him as well as others… hes left covering his mouth…. Still shocked n still cant believe all this is happening… lalit says "waa! Main dada bane wala hu…" everyone laughs…. Veena sees kashish gaining consciousness so takes everyone outside leaving sujal alone w/ kashish… she closes the door behind her… sujal whose mouth is still covered by his hands looks at kashish who's trying to sit up… he goes over to her n helps her sit up… she looks at him w/ a question face like what happened, y do u seem so happy… he doesn't tell her anything… he just goes n starts walking back n forth again covering his mouth… kashish is starring at him, like as if hes gona crazy…. She manages to get up n walk to him… she tells him stop walking back n forth n tell her what happened… he holds her shoulder n trys to speak up but is just so overwhelmed ke isn't able to say a word n just shakes his head n goes back into walking… kashish just looks at him w/ a confused face… shes wishing that he stop n e moment n tell her whats wrong…. But he just doesn't…. instead he paces up… n keeps on saying oh my god! Kashish gets angry and stands in front of him… she raises her right eyebrow n says "what oh my god?" he trys to tell her again but unable to speak a word… she gets tired of him walking back n forth so she decides she'll go downstairs n ask the rest… shes about to open the door when sujal holds her hand… this time he mumbles something, which kashish is unable to understand… with mock-anger she looks at him n says "sujal zohr se aur sahee se bholo…" he takes her to the bed makes her sit n bends holding her shoulder n says "main…. Tum… hum… wo…kushi… bacha…" kashish looks confused n says "kyaaaaa sujal…."
s- kashish…. Hum…. nahee… main… nahee tum… nahee hum….
k- sujal kya kehra ho tum nahee main nahee tum kya hogaya hai tume…
sujal lets go of her n turns around covering his face w/ his hands… he then turns around again n holds her by her shoulders n this time says it " kashish tum maa bane waali ho…" kashish looks stunned… she gets up holding his shirt tightly n says "k…ky…kya kaha tumne??????" holding her tightly sujal replies saying "hum mumy papa bane wale hai…" kashish gets a huge smiles on her face n with her right hand puts her hand on her head still holding sujals shirt w/ her left hand… "sujal main maa… tum baap… hum mumy papa…." She too gets overwhelmed w/ joy n hugs him, he wraps her around w/ his arms tightly…. Constantly thanking her n saying I love u…. after awhile of hugging… both manage to control themselves… they go downstairs holding hands…. Kashish takes the blessings… everyones really happy…. They hear someone saying "congratulations…." All look up sujal n kashish r shocked…. Sujal mumbles diya… veena brings diya inside n says tum behto main kucch leker aahti hu… lalit goes to phone his friends n tell them about his about-to-being dada news…. Nisha goes up to call her friends n tell them the news… piyush goes to phone his family n rishi n varun decide to go buy some toys…. Sujal points to sofa n diya goes n sits… sujal n kashish sit on the sofa in front of diyas…diya looks up n sujal takes kashishs hand and holds it…
d- (breaking into tears) im so sorry sujal… mujhe maaf kardo… mujhe bahut bura gunaa hogaya… pata nahi sujal main aisa kaise soch behti…. Sujal main yeh sab nahee kurna jahti thi… sujal tum jaante ho maine humesha tumhare kushi chahi hai… kabhi tumhe duhk dena ka sapne main bhi nahee socha… main maanti hu maine tumhare vishwaas thora hai lekin wo sirf isliya kyun ke pheli baahr tum mujhse door gaya wo bhi kisi ladki ki waja se…. maine humesha tumhe aur kashish ko saaht dehkna chaha sujal… aur yeh baaht tum ache se jaante ho… maine hi kaha tha na tumhe ke tum kashish ko bholo ke tum usse pyaar kurte ho… sujal jab tumne kashish se apne pyaar ka izhaar kya to tum mujhe bhool gaya, bhool gaya ke main tumhare dost hu… tumhare kashish se milne se phela tum her baaht mujhe bataa te te… jis din tumne kashish se apne pyaar ka izhaar kya u forgot I even exist… tum mere saamne se chale gaya kashish ke saaht aik baar nahee batah na chaha ke diya mujhe mere pyaar mil gaya… tum door jahte we dehker mein apne feelings ko pyaar samaj behti per honestly I was jealous… jealous ke aaj thak kisi ladke ke liyya tumne mujhe undehka nahee kya per kashish ke liyya….. (she cries a lot… n covers her face w/ her hands)
tears from sujals eyes fall he leaves kashishs hand n goes over to diya… bends down uncovering her face n holds her hand "im sorry diya… kashish ko paane ki kushi main, main tumhe…. Diya per tumne kaise socha ke main tumhe bhool sukta hu… bhulte to hum dusro ko hai aur tum koi dusri thori na ho tum to meri apni ho… diya yeh dosti mere liyya bhi utne hi mayna ruhkti hai jitni tumhare liyya… per shahid yeh baaht maine tumhe dikaai nahee aur isliya tumne yeh kadum utaya…. Im sorry diya… main tumhe taper maraa itna kucch kaha…per diya kashish ko duhki dehkna mere bas main nahee hai…. uswaqt main apni dost ko nahee balke us insaan ko taper maraa tha jisne kashish ko duhki kya… I really didn't mean to hurt u… kashish mere pyaar hai diya, meri zindagi hai, mere hum safaar hai aur tum meri dost ho…. Mere zindagi ka hisa ho… im really sorry for making u feel what I did…." Diya wipes her tears n slaps him on the head "stupid… idiot…. Rote kyun ho… kashish yeh rota wa acha nahee lugta na….???" Kashish wipes her tears n nods… diya goes to kashish n says "tumhare gunegaar hu… tumhe main durd duhk diyya hai na… maafi ke laik nahee hu, kyun ke tumse tumhare pati cheena chaha… apne…"
k- diya jo hua so hua… main tumse naraaz nahee hu… tum aur sujal dost raho is main mujhe koi problem nahee hai… sujal mere pati hai, aur mujhe mere pati ki kushi dehkni hai… aur phir mujhe apne pati per vishwaas hai… aur tumper bhi…. Dost to hum bhi ban sukta hai na diya??
d- (wiping her tears….) ofcourse… (hugs her)
sujal gets up n wipes his tears… he goes over to both the girls n takes them in his arms, ofcourse hugging kashish tightly n kissing her on the head… diya separates herself n says shes going to spain to which sujal replies saying "nahee… u have to be here to see me become a papa…." Diya laughs n nods her head…. "theek hai…main yaha rahungi… cuz im sure kashish will need someone to take care of her while ur in office….." to which Rishi comes in saying "bhabhi ur lucky u have soooo many people for ur khatir daari… aik to do do devar or dost, or aik nund bhi…." Kashish smiles n just hugs sujal… piyush comes in saying "main aunty uncle ko batah diyya hai they're very eager to meet u… abhi aane waale hai…"
s- arre nahee pratham kashish ko main waha le jaaoga… kashish tum apne mumy papa se bholo hum aare hai aur tayaar ho jaao…
kashish nods n tells diya to come n help her out… Rishi n Varun go in their room planning something…. Nisha goes after diya n kashish….
Sujal asks piyush how he n nisha came close… piyush tells him that he n nisha loved each other before…. Sujal is taken aback… piyush tells him the story…. he tells them that he met nisha in greece n that time they became friends by bumping into each other… he tells him how he n nisha started spending time together, how he showed Greece to nisha n how they use to go to a site everyday in greece… after some days pratham came n he saw them hugging n mistook it all… nisha knew she loved him but never said anything cuz he never told her he loves her either, instead he went on showing her that he spended all that time just to help her around w/ a place that was unknown to her… nisha was hurt, n he heard her talking on the phone telling her mom saying she was ready to marry pratham… he knew he did something wrong but thought nisha loved pratham n as he loved her truly he wanted to c her happy… it was only till some weeks ago he came to know the truth by one of nishas friend who was also in greece w/ her…. He decided to talk to her… at first nisha didn't want to meet him but after lot of argument she agreed… when they met piyush told her everything n all the misunderstandings were cleared… sujal looks at him w/ a smile n says "mujhe nahee pata ta meri behn itni chupi rustam hogi…. Wow! Interesting love story…. lugta hai uper waale ne tum dono ko milaa hi tha, isliya to nisha aur pratham milker bhi na mil paya… per piyush aik baaht ka dihaan ruhkna nisha hum sabki jaan hai, usse humesha kush ruhkna…." Piyush nods…. Sujal stands up n c's pratham at the door… he looks down in anger na starts to go upstairs when pratham says " itna naraaz hai ke apne yaar ki taraf dehk bhi nahee raha… im sorry sujal… im very stupid I know… meri soch bhi thori kiski wi hai isliya to maine yeh kya… chal jo saza dehga manzoor hai…." sujal turns around n says "tu chacha bane wala hai…." pratham looks up shocked… he walks over to sujal n says really… sujal hugs him…. mahek comes n hugs piyush… she runs to see her sister…. Kashish gets really happy seeing mahek, mahek congratulates her n the sisters hug… kashish tells her that shes going to visit her mom n dad n that she n pratham should come along… maheks nods n says I will ask him… kashish n all come downstairs… kashish tells nisha to come along but nisha says no as she has lots to do… kashish nods n leaves with mahek but stops midway saying "diya tum to ajaao…" diya says no as she too has loads of work… kashish gives a confused smile n leaves… outside piyush, pratham n sujal are talking when kashish comes out… mahek tries to ask pratham but is unable to… he understands her n says "hum tumhare mumy papa ke ghar chalre hai mahek…" mahek looks at pratham all happy… piyush excuses himself saying he had lots of work… kashish looks at him confused n wonders y all have work… piyush says he'll sya bye to nisha, when kashish starts teasing him… he leaves shyly….

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nida

@karanikarock

Voyager

Posted: 19 years ago

#4008

nice story manu but i already read it in yahoo groups 😊

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Manu

@rmanu7382

Voyager

Posted: 19 years ago

#4009

At sinha house… kashishs mom dad both r happy… the sisters r too… they all sit for a while… at garewal house piyush, nisha, diya, Varun, Rishi r decorating the house w/ balloons n gifts n all… after 2 hours kashish comes back w/ sujal… mahek n pratham had left from there to their house as pratham had work… kashish goes towards the door but is stopped w/ loads of balloons covering the entrance… sujal comes a is also surprised… hes about to move the balloons when he reads a slip on one of it saying move it together… sujal shows her the slip n she smiles… both move it together n r so surprised seeing the house filled w/ toys n teddy bears…. Kashish just laughs, and sujal is just looking on… theres trains, teddies, dolls, ballons n what not… Rishi comes in a very funny looking dress n starts singing while Varun plays the guitar:
Dhiktana - Tiktana - Dhiktana
Dhik - Dhiktana - Tiktana - Dhiktana
Bhabhi Tum Khushiyon Ka Khazana..!
Dhiktana - Tiktana - Dhiktana..!

Pehli Kiran Jab Se Uge
Bhabhi Meri Tab Se Jage
Sabka Pura Dhyan Dhare Woh
Shaam Dhale Tak Kaam Kare
Kal Tak Raha, Is Chaon Se
Mera Bachpan Anjana
Dhiktana - Tiktana - Dhiktana..!

Hogi Meri Shaadi Kabhi
Kahte Hain Yeh Mujhse Sabhi
Khud Apni Devrani Chunna
Baat Kisi Ki Mat Sunna
Tum Dhoondh Ke, Rang Roop Mein
Apni Parchai Laana
Dhiktana - Tiktana - Dhiktana..!

Kab Tak Rahun Sabse Chota
Aaye Koi Mujhse Chota
Hansta Bolta Koi Khilona
Ab In Bahon Ko Do Na
Tumse Maange, Ghar Ka Aangan
Pyara Pyara Nazrana...
Bhabhi Tum Khushiyon Ka Khazana..!
Dhiktana- Tiktana - Dhiktana...
Dhik - Dhiktana - Tiktana - Dhiktana...
All along kashish is laughing n so is sujal… the house is filled w/ happiness n joy….

9 months later……………………………..

kashish is in the hospital sujal is sitting along with her… the nurse comes in and hands over a baby girl to sujal n kashish… both hold the baby together n lift it up a bit n both say "humari zindagi ki kushi… humari aankhon ka tara… humare pyaar ki nishaani…." Kashish puts her head on sujals shoulder saying I love u sujal… he leans his head against her saying I love u too kashish…. The end!!!!!