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Posted: 19 years ago
GUYS CONTINUING 'A LOVE STORY'
RECAP:sujal gives divorce papers to kash
sujal exits and kash collapses and faints both akshat and mehak realize it and mehak shuts her cell and was happy from the recording but rushed to kash
A-kashish ise kya hua mehak we have to....take her to the hospital and hurry
M-lets go
they reach ekta memorial hospital(sorry guys it is just a pj) akshat and mehak are waiting ansiously for the doc to cum out an dhe cums out
A-docter woh theek toh hai
D-relax she is fine well there is a gud news that she is pregnent and plus one thing that khoon jyada beh gaya tha isliye she will feel fatigue and she shud take care of her self you can meet her
both a n m are left confused as to how they shud react they shud be happy that a new member is cuming or they shud cry on kash's unluck as 2day sujal gave the divorce papers and 2day they got this news
both hesitated for a while and then looked at each other with helplessness and decide to go in
they enter and see kash lying on the bed with an expression of grief,anguish and hate but not for sujal but for herself
M-kashish (kash looks at her)there is a gud news
K-(gets up with pain)kya sujal aaya hai
M-(face becums pale but manages)nahin well u....u...r pregnent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
K-(slight happiness cums on her face but it also vanishes as if happiness is angry with her )wat!!!! kya !!!!!!!!!! i !!!!!!!!! am........pregnent
(she smiles and then)sujal ko pata hai woh idhar aaya tha plz tell
A-kashish kya faida woh kahin woh tum par koi aur ilzaam na laga de try and understand now u have double responsibility plz take care and stop thinking about such stupid things
K-stupid things akshat that human completes me he is my life this not a silly thing
A-ok!!!!ok!!!!!!! now lets go home and then u decide ok
they reach her house and mehak says- kashish well i shud leave i have a imp work to do bye
A & K-bye take care
she leaves and kash enters the house and all her happiness ends when she sees the divorce papers lying on the floor she goes there and picks them and sees sujal's sign and tears roll down from her innocent eyes
A-kashish controlmyourself plz remember wat i told you
K-akshat i shud talk to him i will talk to him no matter wat happens
A-ok as u wish bye plz take care hugs her and leaves
kashish lying on her bed unable to justify wat or rather how shud she feel..........
mehak while driving thinking-god is gr8 now i think tat every thing will cum to normal sujal is becuming dad and i chachi well i am so so so happy i think now i dont think that i need this mms clip but still i think that i shud make a cd to play it safe and smiles and reaches home
on the other hand swayam is thinking--kya itna kafi hai sujal kashish ko alag karne ke liye mujhe toh kuch samajh nahin aa raha ek taraf meri behan aur doosri taraf meri dost gosh wat to do i think i shud talk to kash or rather akshat yes akshat will be better he calls him and then
SW-hey akki hows life maine toh kash aur tujhse 2 haftoon se baat hi nahin ki kaisa hai
A-i am fine but.......but.....kashish she is not fine
SW-(with a sense of victory)kya hua plz akki tell me
A-with a sigh tells him the whole thing
SW-(clenches her fist to know that kash is pregnent but but manages)yaar yeh kaise ho gaya
A-(he gets so broken after recalling the incident that he says)yaar i will call u later bye
SW-bye
swayam is in a fix thinking-life bhi kyakya dikhati hai i am so helpless
just then archie cums running and hugs him and says-bhai !!!!!god i am so so so happy that i cant!!!!!! tell u ! u!!!!!! r !!!!!!!!!! a genious guess wat sujal has given divorse to her and now bhai that day is not far when i'll get married to sujal thanks bhai but plz tell how u did this u havnt told me yet plz
SW-ok!!!!!!!ok!!!!!!!! listen and then he tells the whole thing
A-bhai you r a wat a gr8 plan
SW-arru i can do anything for u and turns and finds kash standing at teh door with anguish in her eyes and anger and dismay on her face swayam realizes that she has listened everything an dhe bows his head but kash cums 2wards him and and SLAPS REALLY VERY HARD and then pulls his collar and says with pain in her voice-why why u did this !!!!!!!u moron u evil person!!!!!!! yeh sab tumne kiya omg i i cant imagine that the person i look upto will do this why damit i hate u or rather i just want to kill u shot me on my back u!!!!!!!! mere saath saath toh chale but ek khanjar lekar ki jab tume mauka mile tum mujhe maar do kyon kiya tumne aisa kyon (not a single tear was there in her eyes )sujal ki baatien sunkar main aapneaap se itni nafrat karne lagi thi i hated myself so much that i just wanted to kill myself aur yeh sab tumne kiya u i hate you i just hate(pauses and moves back and says with an evil smile)no!!! no i dont hate u (swayam looks at her with an eye of guilt and hope )rather u arent capable of recieving my hatred also but now u are no body to me u r a stranger nothing more and goes out leaving swayam helpless......

WELL GUYS THIS IS IT FOR NOW BUT TO KNOW MORE STAY TUNED BUT PLZZZZZZ COMMENT --NIDHI(LKLK)
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Posted: 19 years ago
well plz yaar koi to apni story continue karo 😭 --nidhi(lklk)
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Posted: 19 years ago
yo fizzza.....ok that would be done.....piyush ki to ab waat lage gi......give me a few hours raat ko likhon gi πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ ...and thanx for the suggestion....aur kuch ho to batana 😳 .........and great stuff mar.....really cool....whener i read farida ...muje lagta hai keh mera naam likha hai...lol......pata nahi kyun πŸ˜• πŸ˜†
lklk..... 😭 😭 ...par phir bhi bahut acha tha πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: ambarinaaltaf

Saweraaa my exams r finishing tomm.i will contd tomm may b in evening.yaar tum rote howe achi nahi lagthi ho so stop only suits KASHISH BEHNJI and BKWL gang members.by the way in which gang u r❓

thanx...i will wait 4 it...n i am i BKWL does tat mean...now crying suits...me lolz..πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†anwayz...write soon

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Posted: 19 years ago

welcum back Maira...n thanx 4 a fab part...n Nidhi gr8 part..... πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

sumone contiue their story...where sum writers just vanish....

Armaan..n Mere Darkon ka Qarar....where r there storiesπŸ˜•

Edited by Kash_Sujal - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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"Lamhon ki Guzarish"
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Recap:Sujal c**t believe he was seeing Kashish after 7 yrs.She dint recognise him as she was busy taking care of her dad who was ill.Sujal took dem to hospital.he was abt to go n talk wid her wen he remmebered dat she was married.....

Kashish on d other hand was praying to God n thinking abt d incident.
They were heading back from Chandigarh...n suddenly unki gadi ke saath koi problem ho gayi....n to add to her misery papa ki tabiyet bhi kharab ho gayi....kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha kya karein...she told driver to ask for help n he went...n den everything was so confusing...one sec she is inside d car pacifying papa n another second she is out asking for lift....n more on it dis terrible weather...she was all drenched n was just prayng to god to help her and dats wen she saw a car slowing down towards her n stopping finally....she saw someone lowering down d window pane but she was already helping her papa to sit in d unknown car...she dint had time to know or care who was on d driver seat...finally she managed to make her papa sit in d car n wen she sat in...she observed some man on d driver seat...she had only one thing in mind to get to d hospital as quickly as possible n so she dint bother abt nething n just asked d person to start d car....after dat she was in daze....pacifying papa...n praying to God dat he shud be fine...den as soon as she reached d hospital...she dint even wait to thank d person n rushed in...n after doctors took papa in she came here n sat...n den it struck her to thank dat person atleast...she had felt some familiar vibes but cudnt relate it...or had no time to think abt it....she was getting up to thank dat man wen her cell rang n she stopped....
Sujal was walking towards d exit wen he heard her voice again.n wat he heard made him stand still.he turned back n saw dat she was talking on phone.dat was all he cud bear n he left wid brisk steps towards d car without even giving a backward glance.
He started his car n remembered wat Kashish had said. had Kashish:Piyush........rest he dint hear but dat was more den enuf reason for him to hate her.
But den he corrected himself:i dont hate her.i dont love her either.i dont have ne feelings for her.Kashish is over for me.n dats d only truth.
he turned on d radio loud to filter away today's incident n tried to concentrate on his upcoming meeting........

Kashish picked up d phone.

Kashish:Piyush???

Piyush:Haan mein...aise chowk kyun rahi ho???tumhara pati bol raha hu koi ajnabee nahi

Kashish(disgustingly):mere paas faltu baaton ke liye time nahi hai..papa ki tabiyet fir se kharab ho gayi hai aur mein City hospital mein hu

Piyush(screaming):toh tumne papa ko bata diya huh????...mein jaanta tha...tum zarur aisa hi kuch karogi...meine tumhe warn kiya tha Kashish...par tum nahi mani...to theek hai...ab mein...

Kashish(cut him in b/w):maine papa ko kuch nahi bataya hai....aur mujhe sab yaad hai....ke tum kis hudd tak jaa sakte ho...fikar mat karo...agar tum mujhe warn na kartee na toh bhi mein nahi batati....tumhe nahi hai par mujhe papa ki chinta hai...mein jaanti hu ke tum sirf dikhawa karte ho papa ki chinta karne ka...tumhe pata hai ke mein papa ko kuch hone nahi dungi....aur isiliye mein chup hu...

Piyush:kafi achche se samajh chuki ho mujhe tum in 7 saalon mein....

Kashish:kaash maine tumhe 7 saal pehle hi samajh liya hota....

Piyush:apni bakwas band karo...maine sirf yeh batane k liye phone kiya hai ke mein 10 din k liye bahar ja raha hu...

Kashish:kahan???

Piyush:tumhe jaan ne ki koi zarurat nahi hai...

Kashish:aur mujhe shok bhi nahi hai...mein toh papa ke liye puch rahi thi...unko kya bolu...aur kya tum unse milne nahi aaoge...????

Piyush:tumhe kaha na apne kaam se matlab rakho...mein papa se apne aap baat kar lunga...n he disconnectedd phone.

oks...dats it for today n i can hear everyone shotuing y Piyush...???...hehehe....just thought he needed some bashing again...neways dont forget to give in ur response.....

Writren By:Tamanna
Edited By:Sawera
Edited by Kash_Sujal - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
soo guyz congrats as we complete 300 pages...n i am the 1st one to post on it......... πŸ˜‰ just keep on writig n we wud complete lotz more.........
Edited by Kash_Sujal - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
congrats to you too kash_sujal 300 is a gud manzil to reach 😊 anyways yaar plz tell me your real name plz tell and wat a story fab kash_sujal cool πŸ‘ --nidhi(lklk)
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Posted: 19 years ago
hi guys,
i wasnt there for a long time πŸ˜‰ so now i hav to congratulate πŸ˜ƒ every1 for their wonderful stories. 😳
1st my favourite story tere liye is going gr88 πŸ‘ the car part was just 2 gud kiran πŸ‘ πŸ‘ .i dunno how u manage 2 write 3 stories newayz keep going. πŸ˜›
next rajeev ac thanx so much for writing dkr πŸ˜† πŸ˜† but now write the nxt part soon 😳 aur ab kash aur sujal ko milao bhi. πŸ˜›
then amna di u're story is also 2 gud.keep writing. πŸ‘ πŸ‘
virgo i lovedeast or west pyar is da best.plzzzzzz continue. πŸ‘ πŸ‘
manu ur new story is gr888888. 😳 😳
nidhi u're stories r also 2 gud.i loved the 1st part of k2h2.it was funny πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
sawera ksakk is going gr88888 πŸ˜ƒ .i loved the part in wich sujal beat piyush. πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
harpy love me not is da best story of all 😳 .i've read it n i hope all here will like it πŸ˜‰ .keep it up. πŸ‘.
farah i just loved pyar keh rang πŸ‘ πŸ‘ but now plzzz dont bring piyush between kash n sujal ok. 🀒
cool_sk keep it going was also very nice. πŸ‘ πŸ‘
if i had missed neone sorry πŸ˜ƒ n all the fan fic writers r gr88888888 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ .three cheers for all of u.
HIP HIP HURRAY
HIP HIP HURRAY n finally
HIP HIP HURRAY. πŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
all stories r grt sawera plz post kaahin sujal kashish kii soon and Lamhon ki Guzarish" is also very nice story i read this in yahoo groups 😊 and congrats to all of we completed 300 pages wow.... 😊

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